(完整版)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作句式變化：短句變長(zhǎng)句

1、英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作句式變化：短句變長(zhǎng)句有很多同學(xué)都相當(dāng)困惑，究竟什么樣口味的句子才是 ETS 閱卷官們喜歡的呢？其實(shí)，在新 托福寫(xiě)作中，終極口味為 “具體具體再具體 ”，You cannot be more specific. 這也意味著，句 子越細(xì)節(jié)， 你的得分越高， 但絕不是生搬硬套東拉西扯。 所以本次講解的核心技能就是擴(kuò)充 句子，使其獲得由短變長(zhǎng)的飛躍。究竟怎樣擴(kuò)充句子呢？有如下方式：1. 增加并列成分；2. 增加修飾成分；3. 增加從句；4. 增加連詞；如以下例句：They grow long hair. 這個(gè)句子沒(méi)有任何閃光點(diǎn)，我們利用以上擴(kuò)充方法來(lái)修改這句話(huà)，變成了如下的句子： They g

2、row long hair, regardless of the gender, usually part of which is dyed in gold. 這句話(huà)就相當(dāng)璀璨奪目，有修飾成分，也有從句。同理，做以下的三個(gè)練習(xí)：1. They wear jeans.They wear jeans in each and every season, commonly knees of which are deliberate torn.2. Boys wear earrings.Boys are keen on earrings and other weird ornaments.3. Girl

3、s smoke.Girls are fond of Marlboros or some odd bad words.以下為一組多個(gè)句子組成的一段話(huà)。Energy is much needed now. And nuclear plants are clean and economical. They can produce vast amounts of energy. But people, especially local residents are very concerned about safety. They hold a strong negative attitude towa

4、rd them.這幾個(gè)句子都是簡(jiǎn)單句，雖然表達(dá)的意思很清楚，但是明顯沒(méi)有滿(mǎn)足 ETS 的口味偏好，下 面我們將上述句子搭配成完整的復(fù)雜句。 合并句子的準(zhǔn)則為： 同一個(gè)詞匯可以合并， 變成從 句或修飾成分，例如 “ energy、”“ people 。”修改后的句子為：Nuclear plants are a clean and economical way of producing vast amounts of much-needed energy; however people, especially local residents, who are very concerned abou

5、t safety, hold a strong negative attitude toward them.同理，做兩個(gè)練習(xí)：修改前： Some people succeed. Other people fail. The difference is not the number of opportunities. It is whether they can take advantage of opportunities. Opportunities will arise in the course of one s life, though they are rare.修改后： One e

6、ssential difference between those who succeed and those who fail is theextent to which they take advantage of opportunities rather than the number of opportunities, which will inevitably arise, if rarely, in the course of one s life.修改前： College students now are primarily interested in grades and ec

7、onomic success.They are expected to cheat more frequently. They are unlike those graduated ten yearsago. They are only interested in their own personal future and consider little the problemof society.修改后： College students, primarily interested in grades and economic success, are expected to cheat more frequently than those who graduated ten years ago and are far less concerned with the problem of society than with their own