小升初小學(xué)英語作文指導(dǎo)與欣賞興趣愛好習(xí)慣篇

1、小 升 初 英 語 作 文小學(xué)英語作文指導(dǎo)與欣賞-興趣愛好習(xí)慣篇hobbieshi, i am amy. i am a student. i like plying football and reading books. i also like listening to music. mike and tim are my friends. mike likes playing the pipa. he alsolikes reading books. tim likes reading books, too. he also likes doing chinese kung fu. we a

2、re good friends.i like zhongshan parki often go to zhongshan park. in the park you can see many trees and flowers.some flowers are red, and some are purple. the trees are big and tall. you can see ahill in the park, too. at the foot of the hill, there are several paths. a lot of people in thecity li

3、ke going to the park. some young people like taking a walk there. some old peoplelike singing there. some children like dancing or playing games there. zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation.生單詞：1. several:幾個(gè)2. relaxation:放松點(diǎn)評：這篇作文簡單明了。首先，作者向大家簡單地描繪出了公園的風(fēng)景：有山有水有花。然后，作者寫了人們在公園里的活動：青年人在公

4、園里散步，老年人在公園里唱歌，小孩子在公園里玩游戲，多么快樂的一組畫面?。∽詈螅髡咦?出總結(jié)：中山公園真的是一個(gè)放松心情的好地方！1小 升 初 英 語 作 文li ying s hobbyli ying likes english very much. she works hard at it. she reads english everymorning. she likes speaking english. she often listens to the radio. she watches tvonly on saturday evening.does she like danci

5、ng? no, she doesnt. but she likes drawingand singing. her parents love her. and all the teachers and her friends like her, too. she says her hobbies make her happy.【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】這一篇寫愛好的文章，小作者的寫作思路很值得我們學(xué)習(xí)，他沒有具體寫到劉瑩的某一種愛好，而是從學(xué)習(xí)到課余的多種愛好入手，對劉瑩的各種愛好進(jìn)行了粗線條地勾畫。從“ 愛好”這個(gè)角度來看劉瑩的話，我們會覺得這個(gè)形象很飽滿。小朋友們寫這種 “敘事寫人”作文時(shí)，可以從兩個(gè)角

6、度下手：一是具體地描繪；二是和范文一樣，粗線條地勾畫，二者各有所長，另外在行文中使用一些問句，使用一些轉(zhuǎn)述的話，可以使作文更有靈氣，避免了平鋪直敘的缺點(diǎn)。比如上文的 “do es she like dancing? no, she doesnt.” 和“she says her hobbies make her ha ppy.” 就是十分不錯 的句子，使讀者眼前為之一亮。my favourite animalmy favourite animal is rabbit. its name is sweet. sweet has long ears. its verysmall. its whit

7、e. it has a short tail. it has red eyes. it likes eating carrots. it likes jumping.it goes jumping three times a day. i like it very much. its lovely. its my best friend. i like the rabbit.2小 升 初 英 語 作 文my favourite seasonmy favourite season is summer. its hot in summer. there is a summer vacation i

8、nsummer. i dont go to school. i think many children like this season, because they caneat ice cream and go swimming. i can go swimming. sometimes i go to the beach withmy parents. sometimes i go to the swimming pool with my friends. i usually visit many places in summer vacation.my favourite fooddo

9、you know what this is? guess! its colour is yellow. its long and thin. it lookslike a small boat. oh, it is a banana. do you know what that is? guess again! its colouris orange. its round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern. oh, it is an orange.i like the m a lot. i like ice creams. i li

10、ke to chew ing gum. chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very much. how about you? whats your favourite food?【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】my favourite food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己最喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地 進(jìn)行介紹。整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。my hobbymy hobby is collecting stamps. there are many stamps in

11、 my room. i like stampsvery much. there are many things on the stamps. they are colorful and beautiful. after3小 升 初 英 語 作 文school i usually go to the post office and there are many people there. i learn a lot from collecting stamps. i like collecting stamps very much.my hobbyi am cindy. i am in no.1 primary school. i am in class 9, grade 6. i am tall andthin. i live in dali. i have many good friends. i often play with them. i have manyhobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading b