【公開課課件】高中英語讀后續(xù)寫公開課優(yōu)質(zhì)課件（母愛）

1、Continuation writing Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished fo

2、r something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh,yes.but I dont h

3、ave money on me,” she replied. “Thats nothing. Ill treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!”

4、said Jenny. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you

5、 thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered Mothers familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think o

6、f that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep br

7、eath._ Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._ Task : a continuation(續(xù)寫) of the story what happened _in_ the story what happened _ the story Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind ba

8、ck._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ after Step 1 Reading Task 1 Read for information content content whowho whenwhen wherwher e e whatwhat whywhy Jenny mother seller that afternoon the house, in the street ran out of the house had a quarrel with her mother Task 2 Read for plot ParaEvent (動詞動詞)Jennys Feeling(

9、形容形容) Para 1 Para 2-9 The seller _Jenny _, and Jenny _ the seller a lot. The seller _ her how many times her mother _ for her and if she _ her mother. Para 10- 11 She _ there,_Mothers familiar face and weathered hands. Realizing her mistakes, she _ to go home to _ her mother. Jenny _ her mother, _ho

10、me and a few hours later,felt a little _. quarreled with left hungry brought a bowl of noodles thanked asked cooked thanked sat remenbering made up her mind make an apology to angry, weep sad touchedthankful/ grateful mercilesscomplain misunderstanding regretful, ashamed,guilty reading-continuation

11、Read for plot Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. quarrel, ran out of treat Jenny noodles decided to apologize ashamed, regretful angry, sad thankful, touched Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. beginning rising developmen t Climax Ending Step 2 Writin

12、g Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. _ _ _ Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Infer the contenttwo given beginnings Tips 兩段首句定一框，二框二首正能量兩段首句定一框，二框二首正能量 Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. Task 3 Outline possible plot（para.1） Re

13、asonable 動作，心理，情感，環(huán)境動作，心理，情感，環(huán)境/情景情景 1）_ , she found her mother was not in. 2) _ , she wondered, _ 3) Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind._ _ 4)_, she failed to control her tears. Paragraph 1: Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she pushed the door open and entered t

14、he house, she found her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sank down onto the sofa.“Where could my mother be?” she wondered.“Was she still angry with me?”Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mothe

15、r was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks. Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Task 3 Outline possible plot（para.2） Reasonable 動作，心理動作，心理/對話，情感，環(huán)境對話，情感，環(huán)境 Paragraph 2: A gentle touch o

16、n her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come! Ive been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms.“Mum, Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed

17、 her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently. With a bright light streaming through the window, flooding the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling, they hugged together and too thrilled to say anything. Song of the Parting Son From the threads a mothers hands weaves, A gown for parting son is made. Sewn stitch by stitch before he leaves, For