非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用

1、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Non- finite Verbs in Writing非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 1) It is a popular reality show (真人秀真人秀) in China. 2) Five Star-dads take their young children on an overnight trip without the company of moms. 3) It has won high ratings (收視收視) since it was broadcast on Oct 11.Sharing & Gue

2、ssingDo you know what it is?非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Watching this TV show, we had a lot of fun. How many actors are there in the show?Who are they?非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用爸爸爸爸: 郭濤郭濤兒子兒子: 郭子睿郭子睿 (石頭石頭)爸爸爸爸: 田亮田亮女兒女兒:田雨橙田雨橙 (Cindy)爸爸爸爸: 王岳倫王岳倫女兒女兒: 王詩(shī)齡王詩(shī)齡 (Angela)爸爸爸爸: 張亮張亮兒子兒子: 張悅軒張悅軒 (天天天天)爸爸爸爸: 林志穎林志穎兒子兒子: 小小志小小志(Kimi)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞

3、在寫作中運(yùn)用 REC Do you remember some unforgettable moments?非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用1) Seeing Xiao Huang taken away, Kimi felt heartbroken. 1) Kimi, see Xiao Huang taken away, feel heart-broken非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用2) Given more chances, children can perform better.2) If they are given more chances children can perfor

4、m better非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用1) Being such a brave girl, Cindy is my favorite kid among them five.1) Cindy, is such a brave girl, is my favorite kid among them five. 3. doing 和和done作原因狀語(yǔ)作原因狀語(yǔ)2) Cindy, encourage, by her father, decide to slide on sand herself.2) Encouraged by her father, Cindy decided to slide

5、 on sand herself.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用1) Standing in front of the bed, Angela was having lunch. 1) Angela, stand in front of the bed, have lunch. 2) Angela, comfort, by her father, stop crying. 2) Comforted by her father, Angela stopped crying. 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 1) Tian Tian showed his love for his mother, sending

6、her a flower. 2) Guided by his father, Tian Tian slided on sand. 1) Tian Tian, show his love for his mom, send her a flower2) Tian Tian, guide, by his father, slide on sand非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用1) Shi Tou broke his arm, causing him to use only one hand. 2) Shi Tou hurried to the kitchen, only to find there is

7、no water for cooking. 1) Shi Tou, break his arm, cause him to use only one hand. 2) Shi Tou, hurry to the kitchen, find there is no water for cooking.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 To build up a better relationship with their kids, five star-daddies decided to join the TV show. five star-daddies， build up a better rel

8、ationship with their kids, decide to join the TV show 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 Yishang mingtian shang ke yong非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 When they had a birthday part for Kimi, kids are happy and excited. _, kids are happy and excited. Having a birthday part for Kimi非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 As long as she saw a camel, Angela woul

9、d touch it immediately . _, Angela would touch it immediately. Seeing a camel非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Tian Tian was criticized by his father. So he looked unhappy. _, Tian Tian looked unhappy. Criticized by his father非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Kimi held chopsticks and a plate in the hands. He was running. _, Kimi was running. Ho

10、lding chopsticks and a plate in the hands非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 They got some food for dinner by catching fish in the lake. _, they got some food for dinner. Catching fish in the lake非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Lin Zhiying broke the egg,_. Lin Zhiying broke the egg and made Cindy cry. making Cindy cry非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用_, Kimi asked A

11、ngela to help him take care of his sheep._, Kimi asked Angela to help him take care of his sheep. Kimi hoped to play with Cindy, so Kimi asked Angela to help him take care of his sheep.Hoping to play with CindyTo play with Cindy非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Group work and Sharing: Share what you have learned with othe

12、rs, and try to make a summary. 1) When can we use non-finite verbs? 2) What kind of non-finite verbs can we use to make sentences?Simple：寫作時(shí)，需要表示寫作時(shí)，需要表示時(shí)間時(shí)間關(guān)系關(guān)系，可以用，可以用v-ing (主主動(dòng)動(dòng))和和done (被動(dòng)被動(dòng)) 作時(shí)作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。間狀語(yǔ)。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Writing task: 爸爸去哪兒爸爸去哪兒（Dad，Where Are We Going)這個(gè)電視節(jié)目廣受歡迎。這個(gè)節(jié)目走紅有以下這個(gè)電

13、視節(jié)目廣受歡迎。這個(gè)節(jié)目走紅有以下幾個(gè)原因：幾個(gè)原因：1. 因?yàn)槲鍌€(gè)孩子很可愛，所以招人因?yàn)槲鍌€(gè)孩子很可愛，所以招人喜愛。喜愛。2.為了讓孩子成長(zhǎng)、發(fā)展，節(jié)目組為他為了讓孩子成長(zhǎng)、發(fā)展，節(jié)目組為他們提供了許多探索的機(jī)會(huì)們提供了許多探索的機(jī)會(huì) 。3.通過(guò)溝通，父親通過(guò)溝通，父親和孩子們建立了親密關(guān)系，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。和孩子們建立了親密關(guān)系，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。4. 與唱歌類的選秀比賽相比，這種親情類節(jié)目反與唱歌類的選秀比賽相比，這種親情類節(jié)目反而更受關(guān)注和喜愛。而更受關(guān)注和喜愛。寫作要求：非謂語(yǔ)寫作要求：非謂語(yǔ)doing ， done， to do 至少各一個(gè)。至少各一個(gè)。 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用要點(diǎn)要

14、點(diǎn)1. 因?yàn)槲鍌€(gè)孩子很可愛，所以他們招因?yàn)槲鍌€(gè)孩子很可愛，所以他們招人喜愛。人喜愛。_, the five kids are admired by many people. 要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn) 2.為了讓孩子成長(zhǎng)、發(fā)展，節(jié)目組為為了讓孩子成長(zhǎng)、發(fā)展，節(jié)目組為他們提供了許多探索的機(jī)會(huì)他們提供了許多探索的機(jī)會(huì) 。_, the show provided them many chances to explore.Being lovelyIn order to let the kids grow and develop非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)3. 父親和孩子們通過(guò)溝通，建立了親父親和孩子們通過(guò)溝通，建立了

15、親密關(guān)系，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。密關(guān)系，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。 _, fathers and kids set up a close relationship. 要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)4. 與唱歌類的選秀比賽相比，這種親與唱歌類的選秀比賽相比，這種親情類節(jié)目反而更受關(guān)注和喜愛。情類節(jié)目反而更受關(guān)注和喜愛。_like singing competitions, this kind of show about family is more popular. Communicating with each otherCompared with other shows非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 Write a c

16、omposition and share it with others. 寫作內(nèi)容：寫作內(nèi)容：高考臨近，為了讓自己放高考臨近，為了讓自己放松，我們班決定今天去春游。一大早我們松，我們班決定今天去春游。一大早我們就出發(fā)了，由一個(gè)有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的爬山者帶領(lǐng)著。就出發(fā)了，由一個(gè)有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的爬山者帶領(lǐng)著。我們說(shuō)著笑著爬上山。當(dāng)我們到達(dá)時(shí)，我我們說(shuō)著笑著爬上山。當(dāng)我們到達(dá)時(shí)，我們就開始燒烤了。我們吃著大餐欣賞美景。們就開始燒烤了。我們吃著大餐欣賞美景。雖然累但是我們很開心。雖然累但是我們很開心。 寫作要求：寫作要求：根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，用根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，用5個(gè)句個(gè)句子寫一篇日記。題目、開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給子寫一篇日記。題目、開

17、頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。要根據(jù)實(shí)際情況多使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。出。要根據(jù)實(shí)際情況多使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 Our Spring Outing National College Entrance Examination is coming. To relax ourselves, our class decided to have a spring outing. We set off early in the morning, guided by an experienced climber. We climbed the mountain, talking and laughing .

18、 When we arrived, we began to barbecue. Having a big dinner, we enjoyed the beautiful view. We were tired but happy.One possible version非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Homework: Write a composition after class and share it with others next time. (2008年廣東省高考基礎(chǔ)寫作題年廣東省高考基礎(chǔ)寫作題) 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下中文提綱，編寫射擊項(xiàng)目的英語(yǔ)介紹：請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下中文提綱，編寫射擊項(xiàng)目的英語(yǔ)介紹：背景

19、：射擊最初只是生存工具，背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。1896：第一次成為奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目：第一次成為奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目1904：中：中斷斷1928：中斷：中斷1932：重回奧運(yùn)會(huì)：重回奧運(yùn)會(huì)1968：第一次允許婦：第一次允許婦女參加奧運(yùn)射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，女參加奧運(yùn)射擊比賽現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運(yùn)會(huì)只奧運(yùn)會(huì)只有三項(xiàng)射擊項(xiàng)目，現(xiàn)今有有三項(xiàng)射擊項(xiàng)目，現(xiàn)今有17項(xiàng)。項(xiàng)。 寫作要求：寫作要求： 1)使用使用5個(gè)句子（含至少一個(gè)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞）個(gè)句子（含至少一個(gè)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞） 2) 結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在

20、寫作中運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用寫作中復(fù)合句常見的錯(cuò)誤寫作中復(fù)合句常見的錯(cuò)誤1.1.只有從句，沒(méi)有主句只有從句，沒(méi)有主句 The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Part2.Part2.寫作中定語(yǔ)從句的主要作用：寫作中定語(yǔ)從句的主要作用：1.增加詞數(shù)Last Saturday I watched a concert.The concert was wonderful.Last Saturday I watched a co

21、ncert which was wonderful.People can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes, which are the special food for this festival. 2.可連接兩個(gè)包含同一事物的句子，避免單詞重復(fù)和句式單一3.補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)，以豐富文章內(nèi)容This is my uncle, a doctor.This is my uncle, who is a doctor. 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Fill in the blanks:去年暑假，我去鄉(xiāng)村做志愿者。在那我看到了辛勤工作的農(nóng)民和他們快樂(lè)的生活，給我留下了深刻

22、的印象。Last summer vacation, I did voluntary work in the countryside _ I saw hard-working peasants and their happy life _made a deep impression on me.正如上面所提到的，定語(yǔ)從句用處很大。_, the Attributive Clause is of great use.wherethatAs is mentioned aboveAs is known to all = As we all know眾所周知眾所周知As is often the case

23、 就跟經(jīng)常的情況一樣就跟經(jīng)常的情況一樣As is reported 正如所報(bào)道的那樣正如所報(bào)道的那樣（As引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，可放在主句前中后，引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，可放在主句前中后，“正如正如”）非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Part3.Part3.如何寫出定語(yǔ)從句如何寫出定語(yǔ)從句: :1.題干中出現(xiàn)兩句涉及同一事物的簡(jiǎn)單句Solution:11找出這兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句中都出現(xiàn)了的同一個(gè)事物找出這兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句中都出現(xiàn)了的同一個(gè)事物22將其中一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句改成從句將其中一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句改成從句, ,去修飾另外一個(gè)去修飾另外一個(gè)句子中那個(gè)相同的事物句子中那個(gè)相同的事物（注意關(guān)系詞的選用）For example:在204班

24、，我有45個(gè)朋友。其中有31個(gè)女孩和14個(gè)男孩。In Class 4，Grade 2，I have 45 friends.There are 30 girls and 15 boys.In Class 4，Grade 2，I have 45 friends, of whom there are 30 girls and 15 boys._非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Practice:我最好的朋友是Mr.Cai。他出生于1996年12月1日。My best friend is Mr. Cai.He was born on December 1st,1996.My best friend is Mr.

25、Cai who was born on December 1st,1996._非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用他也在黃岐高級(jí)中學(xué)上學(xué)。黃岐高級(jí)中學(xué)是一個(gè)美麗的地方。He also studies in Huangqi Senior High School.Huangqi Senior High School is a beautiful place.He also studies in Huangqi Senior High School which is a beautiful place. _非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用我們常常一起跑步。我不會(huì)忘記這段日子。We always run together.I

26、 will never forget the days .I will never forget the days when we always run together._非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 In Class 4，Grade 2，I have 45 friends, of whom there are 30 girls and 15 boys.My best friend is Mr. Cai who was born on December 1st,1996.He also studies in Huangqi Senior High School which is a beautif

27、ul place. I will never forget the days when we always run together.Two Attributive Clauses are enough in one composition!Part4.思辨非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Part1.Part1.高考滿分作文中的定語(yǔ)從句欣賞：高考滿分作文中的定語(yǔ)從句欣賞：1.（20132013年全國(guó)高考新課標(biāo)年全國(guó)高考新課標(biāo)I I）Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before. 你知道，我的叔叔李明

28、要去你居住的城市參加一個(gè)會(huì)議。You know, my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting._我讓叔叔帶去你想要的那幅中國(guó)畫。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用2.（20132013年廣東高考）年廣東高考）那些做普通簡(jiǎn)單工作的人也在推動(dòng)著社會(huì)的發(fā)展。Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society. 正如我們都知道的那樣，掃大街是最為困難的工作之一。

29、As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work. _非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用當(dāng)今，父母為他們的獨(dú)生子女做所有的事情，這使得這些獨(dú)生子女非常依賴于父母。Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children, which makes the children rely on their parents badly. _A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent s

30、ailor. _3.（20132013年福建高考）年福建高考）沒(méi)經(jīng)歷過(guò)暴風(fēng)雨的水手永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)成為一名優(yōu)秀的水手。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用2.2.以逗號(hào)代替句號(hào)以逗號(hào)代替句號(hào), ,把兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子把兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子 The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face. The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用漂亮的書寫是寫作得分的亮點(diǎn)影響給分的因素之一：影響給分的因素之一：作文的卷面作文的卷面非謂

31、語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用影響給分的因素之三：影響給分的因素之三：行文的流暢行文的流暢 上下貫通、一氣呵成正確而巧妙地使用好連接詞非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.1.1.表遞進(jìn)表遞進(jìn). .表轉(zhuǎn)折表轉(zhuǎn)折. .表因果表因果. .表目的表目的. .表歸納表歸納but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand. because,s

32、ince,therefore,so,hence,thus,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用如何將這幾個(gè)講述汶川地震的句子更好地連接起來(lái)，顯得如何將這幾個(gè)講述汶川地震的句子更好地連接起來(lái)，顯得更有文采，得到高分呢？更有文

33、采，得到高分呢？Many houses and schools were destroyed. More than five million people are living a hard life now. The students there need help and schools should be built. Students can return to classes soon.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Ex:按要求改寫下列句子。按要求改寫下列句子。1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are

34、written in English. (合并為并列句合并為并列句) English is widely used in the world and most business letters are written in English. 2) People thought of some ways to solve the problem. These solutions didnt work. (合并為并列句合并為并列句) People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these solutions didnt work.非謂語(yǔ)

35、動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用四、如何使文章連貫？四、如何使文章連貫？(過(guò)渡詞的使用過(guò)渡詞的使用)1) 時(shí)間：時(shí)間：soon, then, suddenly, meanwhile, before, after, earlier, in the morning, afterwards, later, immediately, next, the other day, nowadays, gradually2) 空間空間: above, below, up, down, under, near, far from, in front of, behind, beside, beyond, on the righ

36、t/left, around, inside, outside, opposite to, next to, on top of, across.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用3) 列舉：列舉：for example, such as, first(ly), second(ly), finally, besides, apart form, for one thingfor another thing 4) 比較比較: like, unlike, on the contrary, in contrast to, on the one handon the other hand, than, not s

37、oas, asas, while, similarly, the former, the latter, someothers, onethe other, compared with非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用5) 邏輯關(guān)系：邏輯關(guān)系：a. 并列：并列：and, as well as, alsob. 轉(zhuǎn)折：轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, yetc. 遞進(jìn)：遞進(jìn)：besides, apart from, in addition, whats more, furthermore, moreover, to make things worsed. 原因：原因：because, because of,

38、as, since, for that reasone. 結(jié)果：結(jié)果：so, therefore, thus, as a result f. 讓步：讓步：though, although, in spite of非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用為了增強(qiáng)短文的連貫性，使表達(dá)流暢自然，要巧用關(guān)聯(lián)為了增強(qiáng)短文的連貫性，使表達(dá)流暢自然，要巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞。請(qǐng)熟記和用好以下的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)：詞。請(qǐng)熟記和用好以下的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)： A、表并列：、表并列：besides, in addition, whats more, moreover, or, and, also, too, as well as B、表轉(zhuǎn)折：、表轉(zhuǎn)折：howev

39、er, nevertheless, yet C、表原因：、表原因：because of, thanks to, owing to, due to D、表結(jié)果：、表結(jié)果：thus, therefore, as a result E、表列舉：、表列舉：namely, for example, for instance, that is to say F、表結(jié)論：、表結(jié)論：to conclude, in a word, in brief G、表時(shí)間順序：、表時(shí)間順序：first, second, then, soon, finally, at last H、表空間順序：、表空間順序：here, th

40、ere, in front of, at the back of, next to, on one side, on the other side I、表對(duì)稱關(guān)系：、表對(duì)稱關(guān)系：for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other hand非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用四、如何使文章連貫？四、如何使文章連貫？(過(guò)渡詞的使用過(guò)渡詞的使用)1) 時(shí)間：時(shí)間：soon, then, suddenly, meanwhile, before, after, earlier, in the morning, afterwards, later,

41、 immediately, next, the other day, nowadays, gradually2) 空間空間: above, below, up, down, under, near, far from, in front of, behind, beside, beyond, on the right/left, around, inside, outside, opposite to, next to, on top of, across.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用3) 列舉：列舉：for example, such as, first(ly), second(ly), fina

42、lly, besides, apart form, for one thingfor another thing 4) 比較比較: like, unlike, on the contrary, in contrast to, on the one handon the other hand, than, not soas, asas, while, similarly, the former, the latter, someothers, onethe other, compared with非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用5) 邏輯關(guān)系：邏輯關(guān)系：a. 并列：并列：and, as well as,

43、alsob. 轉(zhuǎn)折：轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, yetc. 遞進(jìn)：遞進(jìn)：besides, apart from, in addition, whats more, furthermore, moreover, to make things worsed. 原因：原因：because, because of, as, since, for that reasone. 結(jié)果：結(jié)果：so, therefore, thus, as a result f. 讓步：讓步：though, although, in spite of非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用5. 運(yùn)用關(guān)連詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用關(guān)連詞語(yǔ)篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫是三大評(píng)

44、分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一，因此，我篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫是三大評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一，因此，我們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)，除按邏輯組合信息點(diǎn)外，還必須學(xué)們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)，除按邏輯組合信息點(diǎn)外，還必須學(xué)會(huì)靈活運(yùn)用連接性詞語(yǔ)。除上述提到的并列連詞會(huì)靈活運(yùn)用連接性詞語(yǔ)。除上述提到的并列連詞和從屬連詞之外，特別推薦使用以下連接性詞語(yǔ)：和從屬連詞之外，特別推薦使用以下連接性詞語(yǔ)：(1)表起始：表起始：first of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, as far asIm concerned, as you know等。等。(最常用最常用)(2)表遞進(jìn)：表遞進(jìn)：besides, whats m

45、ore, moreover, furthermore, whats worse = to make things worse = worse still, in addition to, still, even等。等。(最常用最常用)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用(3)表并列：表并列：also, as well (as), or, eitheror, neithernor, not onlybut also, and, and then, bothand等。等。(4)表因果：表因果：therefore, as a result (of), thanks to, due to, owing to等。等。

46、(5)表強(qiáng)調(diào)：表強(qiáng)調(diào)：above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, at least, obviously等。等。(6)表解釋：表解釋：that is to say（即即,就是就是,換句話說(shuō)換句話說(shuō),就是說(shuō)就是說(shuō);更確切地更確切地說(shuō)說(shuō)），）， in other words, believe it or not, to tell you the truth等。等。(7)表比較：表比較：just as, just like, in the same way, more or less （差不多差不多 , 幾乎幾乎） , similarly, in

47、stead等。等。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用(8)表空間：表空間：on the left/right, to the left/right of, on one side ofon the other side of, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of等。等。(9)表時(shí)間：表時(shí)間：at first, in the beginning, next, then, later, now, about two months later, after a while, soon, afterwards, since then, meanwhile

48、, in the end, at last, finally, for the first time, after that, the next moment, up to now, before long, from then on, sooner or later等。等。(10)表總結(jié)：表總結(jié)：in short, in a word, in conclusion, in general, in brief, generally speaking, on the whole, to sum up, in all等。等。(最常用最常用)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用(11)表轉(zhuǎn)折或?qū)Ρ龋罕磙D(zhuǎn)折或?qū)Ρ龋?/p>

49、yet, however, otherwise, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of, after all, in fact, as a mater of fact（事實(shí)上）等。（事實(shí)上）等。(最常最常用用)(12)表列舉或舉例：表列舉或舉例：for one thingand for another (thing); first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), finally/ last but not least (最后但同等重要的最后但同等重要的); for example/instance, takefo

50、r example, such as, that is, as follows, and so on等。等。(最常用最常用)(13)常用的放在句首，修飾整個(gè)句子的連接性副常用的放在句首，修飾整個(gè)句子的連接性副詞：詞：(un)luckily, (un)fortunately, hopefully, naturally, strangely, apparently, in this way等。等。(最常用最常用)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 before, after, when , while, as, first, later, and then,next, finally, immediately

51、, as soon as and, or, also, too, not only. but also, as well as, both. and, neither.nor but, yet, however, or, otherwise because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to., due to. so, so that, therefore, thus, as a result, as (so) long as, if, unless though, although, in spite of besides, whats m

52、ore, moreover, even, in addition 時(shí)間時(shí)間:并列并列:原因原因:條件條件:轉(zhuǎn)折轉(zhuǎn)折:遞進(jìn)遞進(jìn):結(jié)果結(jié)果:讓步讓步:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)寫作7大聚焦 4， 巧用同位語(yǔ)及分詞短語(yǔ)，讓表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔生巧用同位語(yǔ)及分詞短語(yǔ)，讓表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔生動(dòng)，順暢合并信息。動(dòng)，順暢合并信息。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用合并以下信息 時(shí)間：上周last week 事件：采訪王教授， 關(guān)注中國(guó)在校兒童近 視問(wèn)題 have an interview with; concern; the issue of short- sightedness; school children 背景：王教授是眼科醫(yī)生 e

53、ye-doctorLast week, we had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in china.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 同位成分，往往是中心強(qiáng)調(diào)的信息。 He finally gave me his present, a beautiful dress. 當(dāng)同位成分之間存在某種語(yǔ)義關(guān)系是，會(huì)見到表示該語(yǔ)義的詞語(yǔ)，如： 同等關(guān)系： that is, in other words, namely 列舉關(guān)系

54、： for example, for instance, such as, including, included. 突出或強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系： especially, particularly, mainly, mostly, in particular同位語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用Here are 3 ways to make sentences:I.巧妙運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)，寫出規(guī)范的簡(jiǎn)單句：巧妙運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)，寫出規(guī)范的簡(jiǎn)單句： 1)借助名詞短語(yǔ)做同位語(yǔ)借助名詞短語(yǔ)做同位語(yǔ) 如：李立，男，如：李立，男，19歲，歲，1986年生；年生；籍貫：廣東。籍貫：廣東。 Li Li, a boy of 19, was b

55、orn in Guangdong in 1986.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用1 1、五年的基礎(chǔ)寫作范文中都使用了非謂語(yǔ)形式。、五年的基礎(chǔ)寫作范文中都使用了非謂語(yǔ)形式。 1）Born on March7,1915, Allan Stewart(2012)2）A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother （2011）3) Around 540million people are affected,causing 100,000 deaths.(2010)4)half of the school children in our country are s

56、hortsighted, ranking the first in the world. (2009)5) Shooting, originated as a means of survival, (2008)范文解讀范文解讀非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用2 2、五年的基礎(chǔ)寫作范文中都使用了定語(yǔ)從句。、五年的基礎(chǔ)寫作范文中都使用了定語(yǔ)從句。 1） Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about . （2011 年）年） 2）There are 350 million peop

57、le smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent . （2010 年）年） 3） It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the first in the world, are short-sighted.（2009 年）年） 4）In his eighties, he decided to study law, after which he obtainedin 2006.(2012)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用3 3、五年的基礎(chǔ)寫作范文中常使用了同位語(yǔ)。、

58、五年的基礎(chǔ)寫作范文中常使用了同位語(yǔ)。 1 1） Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor a Chinese American and professor at Yaleat Yale. （2011 年）年） 2） I had an interview with ProfessorWang, an eye -doctor, concerning （2009 年）年） 3） Allan Stewart, an Australianan Australian, becomes .（2012 年）年） 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用不是人人都能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，小學(xué)生同時(shí)

59、不是人人都能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，小學(xué)生同時(shí)學(xué)漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)反而會(huì)影響漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)反而會(huì)影響漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第一步：拆分成幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句第一步：拆分成幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句不是人人都能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。不是人人都能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。小學(xué)生同時(shí)學(xué)漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)。小學(xué)生同時(shí)學(xué)漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)。這會(huì)影響漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)。這會(huì)影響漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)。第二步：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句第二步：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句 Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same

60、time. This will affect their Chinese study.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在寫作中運(yùn)用 Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chines