2021版高考英語(yǔ)一輪寫作高分進(jìn)階二高考必須掌握的3類寫作技巧2.2高考讀后續(xù)寫高分技巧學(xué)案新人教版

1、2. 高考讀后續(xù)寫高分技巧(2018浙江高考)閱讀下面材料, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段, 使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。 it was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. he decided to take me on a trip to the wild west. we took a plane to albuquerque, a big city in the state of new mexico. we reached albuquerque in

2、 the late afternoon. uncle paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in pecos. his wife tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons ryan and kyle. my dad and i spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water

3、 rolling down the river nearby. very early in the morning, uncle paul woke us up to have breakfast. “the day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. after breakfast, i went to help aunt tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with uncle paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). i was impressed to see

4、 my dad and uncle paul riding horses. they looked really cool. in the afternoon, i asked uncle paul if i could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. i wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. so, my dad and i put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and

5、headed slowly towards the mountains. “dont be late for supper, ” uncle paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“ok!”my dad cried back. after a while uncle paul and his farm house were out of sight. it was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green p

6、ine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. it looked like a beautiful woven(編織的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意: 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段, 每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _we had no idea where we were and it got dark. _練考場(chǎng)審題step 1: 精

7、準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局文體記敘文時(shí)態(tài)一般過去時(shí)原文分析第一段: 交代故事的背景。介紹了度假的原因和地點(diǎn)第二段: 簡(jiǎn)單地介紹了旅途第三段: 對(duì)在農(nóng)場(chǎng)的日?；顒?dòng)的簡(jiǎn)單介紹第四段和續(xù)寫故事的展開有很大的關(guān)系。這一段講到了如何發(fā)生了我和爸爸去騎馬的故事。而續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容就是在此基礎(chǔ)上展開寫作思路根據(jù)第一段所給首句suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 這一句是故事發(fā)展的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn), 可從rabbit出現(xiàn)后帶來的反應(yīng)擴(kuò)展開, 可以寫馬的反應(yīng), 也可以寫人的反應(yīng), 但要注意與第二段首句相呼應(yīng)第二段首句是we had no idea where w

8、e were and it got dark. 這一句呼應(yīng)前文uncle paul的叮囑不要誤了吃晚飯, 可從如何尋路返回農(nóng)場(chǎng)去寫step 2: 頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞: previous;in vain;at the point of desperation;a faint voice (2)佳句frightened as i was, i tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off . fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out o

9、f breath, and so did i. what we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. step 3: 斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1: 這個(gè)出其不意的出場(chǎng)讓我的馬瘋狂地跑起來。一般表達(dá): this unexpected appearance made my horse run wildly. 句式升級(jí)(定語(yǔ)從句)this unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. 要點(diǎn)2: 盡管我很害怕, 我努力不(讓自己)掉下馬來。

10、一般表達(dá): although i was frightened, i tried not to fall off the horse. 句式升級(jí)(倒裝句)frightened as i was, i tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off. 要點(diǎn)3: 我們只能沿著之前的路慢慢走回去。一般表達(dá): we could only go back along the previous track slowly. 句式升級(jí)(主語(yǔ)從句)我們所能做的只有沿著之前的路慢慢走回去。what we could do was to go back

11、 along the previous track slowly. step 4: 銜接過渡斐然成篇suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. this unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. i tried my best to control it, but in vain. frightened as i was, i tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling

12、 off. fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did i. at that moment, my dad also came up. seeing i was ok, he was quite relieved. but it was clear that we got lost. we had no idea where we were and it got dark. we didnt know where the farm house was. what

13、we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. but it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “it must be uncle paul, ” i said. so we cried back with excitement. finally, uncle paul safe

14、ly brought us back home. what an amazing ride! 1世紀(jì)金榜導(dǎo)學(xué)號(hào)閱讀下面材料, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段, 使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。a vacation with my motheri had an interesting childhood. it was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my motherloving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. one strange family

15、trip we took when i was eleven tells a lot about her. my two sets of grandparents lived in colorado and north dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. as the first day of our trip approached, david, my eight-year-old brother

16、, and i unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. who knew if wed ever see them again? finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. we bravely drove off again two hours later after wed re

17、turned home to get the purse and travelers checks mom had forgotten. david and i were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if mom was driving while dad slept: “you stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while i go, and ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.

18、 ” i had terrible pictures in my mind: “honey, where are the kids?” “what?! oh, gosh. . . i thought they were being awfully quiet. ” we were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances. on the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vaca

19、ncy. after driving in vain for some time, mom suddenly got a great idea: why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? david and i became nervous. to our great relief, dad turned down the idea. mom never could understand our objections(反對(duì)). if a stra

20、nge family showed up on her front doorstep, mom would have been delighted. she thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. we finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意: 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段, 每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。the next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. _we drove through several sta

21、tes and saw lots of great sights along the way. _【參考范文】the next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. we decided to camp along the river. the views there were surprisingly beautifulthe warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. we sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid na

22、ture. however, when dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. well, dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping. we drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. every time we got to a new place, mom would

23、cheer up like a child. she would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. when we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, mom wo

24、uld hug us and kiss us on our faces. how sweet she was! absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us. 2閱讀下面材料, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段, 使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。one weekend in july, jane and her husband, tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the f

25、orest. unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. by the time they reached the lake, jane was so angry that she said to tom, “im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away. with no path to follow, jane just walked on for quite a long time. af

26、ter she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. to her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. she suddenly realized that she was lost. “tom!”she cried. “help!”no reply. if only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag wit

27、h tom. jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. as night was beginning to fall, jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. lying awake in the dark, jane wanted very much to be with tom and her family. she wanted to hold him and tell him how much she love

28、d him. jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. she could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance. quickly she followed the sound to a stream. to her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. she drank and ate a few berries. never in her life had she tasted anything better. feelin

29、g stronger now, jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. as she picked her way carefully along the stream, jane heard a helicopter. is that for me?unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. a few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意: 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段, 每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。but no more helicopters came and it was getting