中考英語作文復習之地點介紹PPT課件

1、第1頁/共22頁【話題解讀】 地點介紹類的寫作對象涉及公園、博物館等具體的場所，也包括城市、國家等。對一般性的場所進行介紹，首先要注意安排好介紹順序。空間順序使用居多，常用的有：從外到內(nèi)，從左到右，由遠及近，由高到低，從整體到局部等。也可以以參觀者的行蹤為順序進行介紹。而對于城市、國家等，介紹層面通常包括位置、歷史、名勝古跡、今昔變化等。不論是哪種類型，最后在結(jié)尾處通常都需要作者發(fā)表一下個人觀點或意見。第2頁/共22頁【真題回放】 假如下圖是你學校的平面建筑示意圖。請你根據(jù)所給提示，以“My School” 為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，介紹你學校的建筑布局情況并談?wù)勀銓W校的看法。第3頁

2、/共22頁第4頁/共22頁注意：1. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的學校名稱和考生姓名；2. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。My SchoolThis is a map of my school. _(2016 山東聊城)第5頁/共22頁【真題分析】 該寫作任務(wù)要求介紹學校的建筑布局，屬于地點介紹類的說明文。寫作前先確定介紹順序，可以從校門開始，按照從前到后、從左到右的順序依次介紹。談?wù)剬W校的看法是寫作任務(wù)中明確要求的，可以表達自己的喜愛之情，也可以表達不滿或意見等。第6頁/共22頁【標準范文】My School This is a map of my school. Walking into the

3、 school gate, you can see a big playground in the middle of the school. Behind it is the teaching building. On theleft side of the playground, you can see the office building. A stadium is to the northof it. In the northwest corner is the dining hall. On the right side of the playground,there is the

4、 science building. 第7頁/共22頁And the library is located in the northeast corner. I love my school. Its the best school I have ever seen.第8頁/共22頁第9頁/共22頁【高分突破】My School This is a map of my school. The school gate faces the south. Two lines of big tall trees stand on each side of the gate, welcoming eve

5、ry student. Right in front of the gate is a big playground. It is a center for fun. Behind the playground is the teaching building where I study. On the left side of the playground, you can see the office building. And a stadium is to the north of it. In the northwest corner stands the dining hall.

6、第10頁/共22頁Now lets turn to the right side of the playground. As you can see, there are two buildings. The science building is near the school gate and the library is located in the northeast corner. I love my school. It is not only a place for learning, but also a place for fun.第11頁/共22頁【高分揭秘】1. 習作按照

7、從前到后、從左到右的順序依次介紹 了學校的建筑布局，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次合理。2. 習作中用了不同的詞語來描寫位置關(guān)系，避免 了單調(diào)和重復，如in front of, behind, to the north, in the northwest corner, near the school gate等。3. 習作不僅介紹了建筑布局，也穿插了一些個性 化的、情感化的表達，使習作生動有趣，如 welcoming every student, a center for fun等。第12頁/共22頁【素材積累】1. 詞匯位置：on the right / left, in front of, behind

8、, at the foot of, on the top of, near, next to, close to, inside, outside, across, through存在：be, lie, stand, locate特征：large, small, huge, deep, long, modern, ancient, popular, attractive第13頁/共22頁2. 句子 I like my school very much and I am proud that I belong to it. My favorite thing about my city is t

9、he fact that it has so many wonderful parks. The museum is just like a huge book to tell you the history of China. My hometown has left many soft and sweet memories in my heart. Its beauty is beyond words. I really hope you could get a chance to come and experience it for yourself.第14頁/共22頁【寫作任務(wù)】 假設(shè)

10、英語課上將以“家鄉(xiāng)的名勝”為話題展開討論，請你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹中國十大歷史文化名街之一的福州三坊七巷。第15頁/共22頁三坊七巷三坊七巷Three Lanes and Seven Alleys位置：市位置：市中心中心交通：便利交通：便利特色：特色：老式建筑，老式建筑，明清風格明清風格名人故居，名人故居，保護完好保護完好民俗展示，民俗展示，傳承文化傳承文化美食特產(chǎn)，美食特產(chǎn)，品種豐富品種豐富感想感想(寫寫1-2點點)第16頁/共22頁要求：1) 內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，語句通順，書寫規(guī) 范；2) 請不要逐字翻譯；詞數(shù)90左右，不包含已給 出的句子的詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：便利的

11、 convenient 明清風格 the style of the Ming and Qing Dynasty故居 former home 民俗 folk custom 傳承 pass on 特產(chǎn) special local product第17頁/共22頁 Three Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou is among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China. _(2014 福建福州)第18頁/共22頁【參考范文】 Three Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou i

12、s among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China. It lies in the city center and the traffic is convenient. Its famous for old buildings in the style of the Ming and Qing Dynasty. Many famous persons in history used to live here. Their former homes are well protected and attract lots of people from home and abroad. There are wonderful folk custom shows that pass on the culture of Fuzhou. 第19頁/共22頁Besides, the tourists can e