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1、作文筆記匯總句子邏輯關(guān)系：并列：and因果：because、so轉(zhuǎn)折：but遞進(jìn)：not only.but also.并列：那支黑色的鉛筆很大程度上象征著老人，1他們正經(jīng)歷著難忘的一生而且取得了很多成就。2跟年輕人比，這些人在處理一些棘手的問(wèn)題的時(shí)候更有經(jīng)驗(yàn)。3比如年輕人比較有活力而老年人在遇到風(fēng)雨的時(shí)候一般會(huì)比較鎮(zhèn)定。總之，學(xué)習(xí)和欣賞別人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中不可或缺的一部分。The black pencil, to a large extent, symbolizes the senior people who have been living a memorable life and ach

2、ieving many goals throughout all his life. Compared with the adolescent, these people are more experienced when dealing with challenges and problems. For instance, young people tend to be more energetic while the senior are likely to keep calm regardless of wind and rain; as a result, learning throu

3、gh others merits is an essential part of growing. 因果：前因后果：ensure/guarantee/lead to/result in/ contribute to/end up with前果后因：Require/need/demand/rely on/depend on/come from遇到困難，我們必須要堅(jiān)持，要有信心，這樣才能取得最后的成功。Our persistence and confidence contribute to the final accomplishment against the difficulties in o

4、ur daily practice.這是一個(gè)常見(jiàn)的現(xiàn)象，很多人在做事情的時(shí)候不注意周?chē)沫h(huán)境，選擇了錯(cuò)誤的方法，最后發(fā)現(xiàn)費(fèi)了很大力氣卻失敗了。It is a common phenomenon that the ignorance to the environment results in the choice to a wrong method, which ends up with more efforts but less effect.轉(zhuǎn)折：這個(gè)現(xiàn)象在我們生活里很常見(jiàn)，對(duì)別人不正確的態(tài)度會(huì)導(dǎo)致對(duì)自我認(rèn)識(shí)的不足，最終以失敗而告終。然而如果年輕人能對(duì)老人有合適的尊敬和謙虛的態(tài)度，他們的未來(lái)

5、一定充滿光明。The phenomenon is not uncommon in our daily practice. An incorrect attitude towards others always leads to an improper self-evaluation, which ends up with a failure in their development. However, if younger generation can possess appropriate respect and a modest attitude to the elderly people

6、, their future will be lightened.遞進(jìn)：1， 閱讀原文Away from home, eating is more than just a way to keep your stomach full. It is a language all its own. 仿寫(xiě)：志愿者活動(dòng)不僅僅是幫助別人，它更是一種社會(huì)責(zé)任感的體現(xiàn)。Volunteer is more than just a way to help people around. It exhibits our social responsibility. 助人為樂(lè)不僅僅是為了追求內(nèi)心的幸福和滿足，它更可以拉

7、近人與人之間的距離，為冰冷的社會(huì)增加些溫暖。Helping people around is more than just a way to pursue inner happiness and satisfaction. It shortens the distance among people, which brings warmth to this so-called indifferent society.2, 閱讀原文Our discomfort comes not so much from the thing itself; it comes from our unfamiliar

8、ity with it.仿寫(xiě)：失敗的原因不是困難本身， 而是由我們面對(duì)困難時(shí)的態(tài)度造成的。Our failure come not so much from the difficulty itself; it comes from our attitude towards the challenging situation. 不是只要努力就能取得我們理想中的成績(jī)，對(duì)于周?chē)闆r的正確判斷以及有效的方法發(fā)揮著更重要的作用。Our ideal success comes not so much from the effort itself; it comes from a proper judgme

9、nt to the circumstance as well as a practical and effective solution. 3原文：notbut/as well as仿寫(xiě)：決定成功與否的并不是事情本身的難度。我們選擇的方法是否靈活實(shí)際，有沒(méi)有信心堅(jiān)持下去，都是成功不可或缺的元素。Success is not determined by the difficult level of the situation itself, but by a flexible and practical method, a strong confidence and a constant per

10、sistence. 隨著年齡的增長(zhǎng)，老年人的身體變得越來(lái)越虛弱，他們發(fā)揮的作用也越來(lái)越少。但是實(shí)際情況并非如此。無(wú)論什么時(shí)候，老人們的第一手經(jīng)驗(yàn)和知識(shí)都是我們生活中不可或缺的一筆寶貴財(cái)富。The senior people are becoming less important because of their growing age and weakness. But this does not reveal the truth. Their firsthand knowledge and experience is as valuable today as it ever has been

11、. 好的書(shū)寫(xiě)不但能為我們帶來(lái)好的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)，同時(shí)也能增強(qiáng)一個(gè)人的自信。A proper handwriting helps strengthen our academic performance as well as our self-confidence. 情景作文作文：04 說(shuō)明文06應(yīng)用文主體：記敘文（15）+議論文（15）考場(chǎng)時(shí)間分配：20+10+15（看表）+25+10（看表）+15+15+10（機(jī)動(dòng)）寫(xiě)作基本原則：信：信息遣詞達(dá)：通順造句雅：高級(jí)謀篇情景作文1， 基本要求人稱：I/we時(shí)態(tài)：過(guò)去Did主體時(shí)態(tài)Was/were doing點(diǎn)綴時(shí)態(tài) 外部，內(nèi)心The sun was sh

12、ining upon the ground. I was wondering.Had done 設(shè)計(jì)山很漂亮。The hill was beautiful.The beauty of the hill was beyond my imagination. The beauty of the hill was far beyond what we had expected.段落和字?jǐn)?shù)4段，120字以上2， 中文定檔時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物等4w+1h（審題）總結(jié)圖畫(huà)的要點(diǎn)起因，經(jīng)過(guò)（外部+內(nèi)部），結(jié)果。2012朝陽(yáng)期末情景作文仿寫(xiě)2012海淀期末完形自從中學(xué)開(kāi)始，志愿者活動(dòng)就成為了我的一個(gè)夢(mèng)想。因此，當(dāng)

13、我們知道我們要參加這個(gè)活動(dòng)的時(shí)候內(nèi)心非常興奮。From the time middle school started, voluntary activity was our dream. Therefore, this explained our excitement when we won the opportunity to participate in this meaningful activity. 12月5日的一大早我們就準(zhǔn)備好我們所有的東西，手里拿著志愿者大旗出發(fā)了。在一番詳細(xì)的安排下我們就開(kāi)始干活。有人打水、有人擦窗戶、有人拖地板不管大家有多累。最后公交車(chē)煥然一新，一種成就感油

14、然而生。On the morning of Dec. 5th, we prepared what it took to clean the bus and departed with the voluntary flag flying in the sky. After careful arrangement, we had a deep breath and started our duty. Some students brought buckets of water, while others cleaned the windows and floor regardless of our

15、 tiredness. The automobile was totally new and a feeling of completeness and dignity surrounded us and lifted us up.除了清潔的工作我們還做了其他好事。在上車(chē)之前，我們讓人們排隊(duì)上車(chē)。有人還幫助老人先上車(chē)。為了紀(jì)念這次有意義的活動(dòng)，我們最后拍照留念。Apart from the cleaning, we performed other meaningful deeds in peoples favor. Before boarding the bus, we led the pas

16、sengers into a queue. Some students also offered extra concerns to the elderly people by helping them get on the bus in advance. In order to record this unforgettable experience, we took a photograph in the end. 從這次志愿者活動(dòng)中我意識(shí)到我們?nèi)〉昧撕艽蟪删透小２粌H贏得了別人的信任和尊重，而且也照亮了別人的生活。From this voluntary activity, we reali

17、zed that we had accomplished much more than we had dreamed of. Not only did we win the acceptance and respect of other people, but also we put a smile on their faces and brightened their day. 3，英文定分核心動(dòng)詞和名詞4+4+5升級(jí)句子段落結(jié)構(gòu)要點(diǎn)全面和細(xì)節(jié)展開(kāi)小注意：避免重復(fù)2012年西城期末情景作文從小開(kāi)始，助人為樂(lè)一只是我的夢(mèng)想。因此，當(dāng)我們有機(jī)會(huì)參與到“尋找雷鋒”這樣的活動(dòng)和有機(jī)會(huì)去發(fā)現(xiàn)生活中的善

18、良的時(shí)候內(nèi)心非常興奮。From the time when I was a child, voluntary service was my dream. Therefore, this explained my excitement when we finally won the opportunity to participate in such an event as “Looking For Lei Feng” and discover the kindness in our daily practice. 一大早我們就準(zhǔn)備好參加活動(dòng)的東西并且?guī)е鄼C(jī)出發(fā)了。獻(xiàn)血車(chē)是我們的第一站。我們記

19、錄了志愿者獻(xiàn)血的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴。雖然他們感覺(jué)非常害怕，但是仍然在別人的鼓勵(lì)之下深吸了一口氣并且上了獻(xiàn)血車(chē)。獻(xiàn)血后一種成就感油然而生。In the morning, we prepared what it took for the activity and took off with our cameras in experience of the gentle breeze and warm sunshine of nature. Blood donation bus was our first stop. We recorded every aspect of volunteer blood do

20、nation. Afraid as they felt at first, they still took a deep breath and boarded the bus with others encouragement. A feeling of completeness and dignity surrounded them and lifted them up.除了獻(xiàn)血，我們還記錄了其他的好人好事。一個(gè)年輕人幫助盲人下樓梯，還有小朋友給公車(chē)上的老人讓座。第二天我們舉行了個(gè)畫(huà)展來(lái)紀(jì)念這一系列助人為樂(lè)的活動(dòng)。Aside from blood donation, we also reco

21、rded other deeds in peoples favor. An adolescent helped blind people downstairs, while two pupils offered available seats to elderly people on the bus. As a consequence, the blind man and the senior people expressed their appreciation to the young people. The next day, we organized a photograph exhi

22、bition in memory of the series of voluntary activities. 從這次發(fā)現(xiàn)之旅中，我們意識(shí)到我們已經(jīng)完成了我們期待的。不僅發(fā)現(xiàn)了和諧社會(huì)的方方面面，而且也照亮了我們自己的生活。From this journey of discovery, we realized we had accomplished much more than we had expected. Not only had we discovered every aspect of harmonious society, but also we had put a smile o

23、n our faces and brightened our day. 作文：1， 任務(wù)和目的。2， 內(nèi)容和細(xì)節(jié)。3， 語(yǔ)言和句式。4， 字跡和錯(cuò)誤。5， 邏輯和段落。2012年海淀一模情景作文上周五我和我的同學(xué)非常開(kāi)心和激動(dòng)地參加了拓展訓(xùn)練。如果要不是學(xué)校給我們這次機(jī)會(huì)，我們就不會(huì)有機(jī)會(huì)參加這么有意義的活動(dòng)。Last Friday, I, together with my classmates, participated in the Outward Bound merrily and excitedly. Had we not been given the opportunity by o

24、ur mother school, we would not have had the chance to take part in the meaningful activity. 早晨我們準(zhǔn)備好了參加活動(dòng)所需的東西，并且坐校車(chē)去我們的目的地。一到那里，我們就在教練的指導(dǎo)下分成了兩隊(duì)。第一個(gè)有挑戰(zhàn)的任務(wù)就是越過(guò)一座斷橋。因?yàn)槲覀兪堑谝淮螀⒓?，所以我特別的害怕。但是，在教練和朋友的鼓勵(lì)下我最終做到了。In the morning, we prepared what it took for the activity and headed for our final destination on

25、our school bus. Upon arrival, we were divided into two groups under the guidance of our coach. The first challenging task was to conquer the broken bridge. Owing to the fact that we were new to it, I was extremely frightened. However, I took a deep breath and finally made it with the encouragement o

26、f the coach and my friends. 除了斷橋我們還進(jìn)行了其他任務(wù)。爬逃生墻的經(jīng)歷讓人印象深刻。是團(tuán)隊(duì)精神和別人的幫助讓我們最后成功了。為了記錄這難忘的一天，我們最后合影留念。優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)還被授予了團(tuán)結(jié)獎(jiǎng)和勇氣獎(jiǎng)。Apart from the “Broken Bridge”, we performed other tasks as well. The experience of climbing over the “Escaping Wall” was really impressive. It was the team spirit and the assistance of

27、 others that contributed to our final success. In order to memorize the unforgettable experience, we took a photograph in the end. The awards of “Prize for Courage” and “Prize for Cooperation” were sent to those who were excellent. 從這次活動(dòng)中我們意識(shí)到我們完成了夢(mèng)寐以求的飛躍。我們不僅贏得了別人的信任，而且還培養(yǎng)了勇氣和合作精神。From this activit

28、y, we realized that we had accomplished much more than we had dreamed of. Not only did we win the trust of others, but also we build up the courage and cooperation. 作業(yè)：2012北京卷情景作文今天早晨，我在我們小區(qū)附近的路上慢跑的時(shí)候，恰巧遇到了一對(duì)手里拿著城市地圖的外國(guó)夫婦。他們臉上滿是困惑，于是我立刻意識(shí)到他們肯定迷路了。This morning, I was jogging along the road near my ne

29、ighborhood when I came across a foreign couple with a city map. Confusion was clear on their face and immediately it dawned on me that they must have been lost. 沒(méi)有一刻猶豫，我走上前去主動(dòng)提供幫助。幸運(yùn)的是我英語(yǔ)還挺流利，能讓他們聽(tīng)懂。他們放松地笑著說(shuō)他們想去參觀天壇，但是在地圖上找不到。Without hesitation, I walked up to them and offered to help. Thankfully, m

30、y English was fluent enough to make myself understood. They smiled in relief and said they wanted to visit the Heaven Temple but failed to locate it in the map. 很快我就在地圖上把它指出來(lái)并且也給他們展示方向。擔(dān)心他們有可能再次迷路，我走著送他們到最近的車(chē)站這樣他們就會(huì)很容易到那了。Quickly, I pointed it out on the map and showed them the direction as well. Wo

31、rried by the thought that they might again get lost on their way, I walked them to a nearby bus stop so that they could arrive there without trouble. 過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，20路公交車(chē)停到站點(diǎn)了，它會(huì)帶他們?nèi)ヌ靿?。剛要離開(kāi)，這對(duì)夫婦再次熱烈的感謝了我，表達(dá)了對(duì)我?guī)椭母屑ぶ椤?After a while, the bus No.20 pulled at the stop which would take them to the Heaven Temple

32、. Upon leaving, the couple thanked me warmly again, expressing their appreciation for my kind help. 看著20路汽車(chē)消失在遠(yuǎn)處，一種成就感油然而生。給需要幫助的人幫一把手讓我特別開(kāi)心和驕傲，毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，我也給外國(guó)朋友展示了北京是個(gè)多么友好的城市。 Seeing the No. 20 Bus disappearing into the distance, a sense of delight filled my heart. It made me so happy and proud to offer

33、 others in need a helping hand, and in this case, I was also able to show foreigners how friendly the city of Beijing was. (208 words) 20分（此文為2012年北京高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文）作文基本功語(yǔ)言詞+句+段內(nèi)容全面+具體結(jié)構(gòu)情景+開(kāi)放語(yǔ)言：詞+句+段一， 詞換換詞原則：長(zhǎng)難短細(xì)長(zhǎng)詞優(yōu)先：difficultchallengingprettyattractive/charming/fascinating/appealing難詞優(yōu)先：importantvital/es

34、sential/significantsaddiscouraged/depressed/downhearted/low-spirit短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先：join/attendtake part in/participate in/be involved in/engage in小必殺：be+adj=be of+nbe important=be of great importancebe difficult=be of great difficultybe harmful=be of great harmbe valuable=be of great valuebe significant=be of g

35、reat significancebe necessary=be of great necessity細(xì)節(jié)詞優(yōu)先：rainpour/showerlearnpick up/mastera good teachera kind, patient and knowledgeable teacher練習(xí)：13年海淀期中情景作文It was raining heavily when we were going home on the school bus. Dark clouds appeared above as the bus carefully made its way along the mud

36、dy road. Suddenly, we felt the bus shake and go into a deep puddle（水坑）, and the engine stopped working. After several failed attempts to start the engine, the driver asked all of us to get off and give the bus a push. So, one by one, we got out, walking through the deep water to the back of the bus.

37、 Some of us held up umbrellas, while the others gathered in a row, hold up their sleeves（袖子） and pushed with all their might. It didn't move at first. More people joined in. We began to chant（喊口號(hào)）. We shook off（甩掉） the rain running down our faces and just kept pushing. At last, the bus sounded l

38、ike a giant behemoth（河馬） and started to move forward. As the tires surfaced（表面）, I heard the engine started. All of us held our strength and gave one last push. We made it! The bus was completely out of the water and the engine came back to life. We jumped back on the bus and cheered over our victor

39、y. We even began to enjoy the sound of the rain, like fingers tapping（敲） on the windowpane（玻璃窗）. We have accomplished a task impossible, and it was a meaningful experience.清華附海淀期中范文19分It was showering（傾盆大雨） heavily when we were heading（回家） home on the school bus. Dark inky（漆黑的） clouds loomed（隱約出現(xiàn)） a

40、bove as the bus carefully made its way along the slippery（滑的） road. Suddenly, we felt the bus tilt（傾斜） and sink（陷入） into a deep puddle（泥坑）, and the engine died out（熄火）. After several failed attempts at ignition（點(diǎn)火）, the driver asked all of us to get off and give the automobile（機(jī)動(dòng)車(chē)） a push. So, one b

41、y one, we got out, wading（涉水） through knee-deep（齊膝的） water to the rear（后面） of the bus. Some of us propped（支撐） up umbrellas, while the others gathered in a row, rolled（卷起） up their sleeves（袖子） and pushed with all their might. It didn't budge（挪動(dòng)） at first. More people joined in. We began to chant（

42、頌歌）. We shook off（甩掉） the rain trickling（向下流） down our faces and just kept pushing. At last, the bus grunted（咕嚕） like a giant behemoth（河馬） and started to inch（挪動(dòng)） forward. As the tires surfaced（表面）, I heard the engine sputter（噼里啪啦）. All of us mastered（掌握） our strength and gave one last push. We made

43、 it! The bus was completely out of the water and the engine came roaring（怒吼） back to life. We jumped back on the bus and rejoiced（慶祝） over our glory（榮譽(yù)）. We even began to enjoy the pitter-patter（噼噼啪啪） of the rain, like fingers tapping（敲） on the windowpane（玻璃窗）. We have accomplished a mission（任務(wù)） imp

44、ossible, and it was a rewarding（值得的） experience.常用部分高級(jí)詞匯替換：*chanceopportunity*take the opportunity=possess the opportunity=be in possession of the opportunity*gladpleased/delighted/have great fun/merry*I hope that=my expectation is*pay attention to*draw ones attention*The phenomenon thatdraws our at

45、tention to a large extent. 練習(xí)：有些藥物會(huì)有副作用的現(xiàn)象在很大程度上吸引了我們注意力。The phenomenon that some medicine causes side effects draws our attention to a large extent. *It is + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.重要的 important非常重要的 vital 必要的 necessary非常必要的，不可缺少的indispensable艱難的tough/painstaking有用的 useful有幫助的 helpful有益的 benefi

46、cial基本的basic / essential方便的 convenient有價(jià)值的valuable*It is + of + great + n + for sb + to do 重要 importance必要 necessity艱難 difficulty/ a great challenge有用use有幫助 help有益 benefit基本basis / essence方便 convenience有價(jià)值value*認(rèn)為Be in possession of the opinion that/insist that/possess the opinion that *越來(lái)越多a growin

47、g/an increasing number of=more and more+n*喜歡like/enjoy/favor/prefer/be keen on/be fascinated with/be immersed in/be crazy about/be addicted to*很，非常really/quite/rather/awfully*最近up to now/recently/currently/In recent years/decades/at present 練習(xí)：如今，越來(lái)越多的年輕人喜歡上網(wǎng)。*Now, more and more high school students

48、 like surfing the internet very much.*In recent decades, an increasing number of adolescents are addicted to surfing/going on the Internet .*年輕人our juniors/teenagers/Younger generation/adolescents*老年人elderly/senior people*因?yàn)閎ecause/as/since/,for/in that*所以so/thus/hence/ therefore/as a result/as a co

49、nsequence*開(kāi)心而且寶貴的pleasant and precious *健康而且開(kāi)心的healthy and happy*難忘而且有意義的memorable and rewarding*安然無(wú)恙的safe and sound*豐富多彩的colorful and wonderful*值得尊敬的respectable and honorable 總結(jié)：最好的用詞是小詞大用。秋天到了，楓葉變紅了。The autumn reds all the maple leaves.二， 句變?cè)瓌t：簡(jiǎn)單句 N + V + N+復(fù)雜句 4 + 4 + 5 修飾N（4）：形同定非*形容詞*The experi

50、ence impressed me a lot.*The meaningful, unforgettable and educational experience impressed me a lot.注意：形容詞的并列結(jié)構(gòu)受歡迎。*同位語(yǔ)或插入語(yǔ)我們高中生應(yīng)該為我們自己的未來(lái)負(fù)責(zé)任。We ，high school students， are supposed to be responsible for our own future.*常用10個(gè)插入語(yǔ)together with sb/to ones surprise/that is to say/to a certain extent/to

51、a large degree/to put it in another way/directly or indirectly/in other words/as a matter of fact/for one reason or another*定語(yǔ)從句練習(xí)：我不穿奇裝異服。*I dont wear clothes, which lead me different from others. 練習(xí)：北京的天氣太操蛋了，這讓我非常懷念我的家鄉(xiāng)。*The weather in Beijing today is awfully terrible, which makes me miss my hom

52、etown.練習(xí)：周六下午將要舉行party，這會(huì)讓我們非常放松。*The party will be held on Saturday afternoon， which can make us to have a relaxation feeling.*非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞練習(xí)：Bruce、30歲的男人、出生在鐵嶺、喜歡教學(xué)、從某某大學(xué)畢業(yè)Born in Tieling, Bruce, a 30-year-old man, is fascinated with teaching, having graduated from . 修飾V（4）：副介狀非*副詞練習(xí)：英語(yǔ)對(duì)我有幫助。*English abs

53、olutely/obviously benefits me a lot.*常見(jiàn)副詞：Undoubtedly/obviously/evidently/definitely/apparently/absolutely*介賓短語(yǔ)On arrivingUpon leaving*狀從*It was showering heavily when we were heading home on the school bus 501. Dark inky（漆黑的） clouds loomed（出現(xiàn)隱約） above as the bus carefully made its way along the sli

54、ppery road.*非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞練習(xí)：北京政府限制汽車(chē)數(shù)量，私人汽車(chē)前景不太樂(lè)觀。Limited by Beijing government for the amount, the future of private cars is challenging/ in a challenging situation. 練習(xí)：經(jīng)過(guò)熱烈討論，我們決定爬山。Having had a heated discussion, we made a decision to climb the mountain.*5大必殺結(jié)構(gòu)：平行/伴隨/強(qiáng)調(diào)/倒裝/虛擬*and 連接的平行結(jié)構(gòu)連接n練習(xí)：一個(gè)清晰的目標(biāo)和持之以

55、恒的努力有助于我們最后的成功。A clear goal and constant persistence is, to a large degree, beneficial to our final success.A clear goal and constant persistence contributes to a certain extent to our final accomplishments.連接adjmeaningful and unforgettable連接v當(dāng)兩個(gè)或以上動(dòng)作同等重要，表示先后順序用and連接*with/without伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)1,with n adj./a

56、dv./介短2,With n to do 將要 With n doing 正在/了 With n done 被動(dòng)/了練習(xí)：有小朋友引路，我們最后找到了回家的路。With the boy leading the way, we finally found our way back.練習(xí)：有小朋友引路，我們肯定會(huì)找到回家的路。With the boy to lead the way, we will find our way back.* it 引導(dǎo)的強(qiáng)調(diào)句：It is (was ) + 被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分 + that / who + 簡(jiǎn)單句其他成分例句： She met Bruce in the street last night.*倒裝：倒裝信號(hào)詞+一般疑問(wèn)句*We can achieve our dream only in this way.*Only in this way can we achieve our dream.*It is only by t