高中英語作文教學(xué)ppt課件

1、1英語寫作講解英語寫作講解2漂亮的書寫是寫作得分的亮點(diǎn)影響給分的因素之一：影響給分的因素之一：作文的卷面作文的卷面3Which composition feels more attractive, why?4影響給分的因素之二：影響給分的因素之二：文中所采用的語言材料文中所采用的語言材料人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝A. 詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝；B. 句型結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用靈活多變;5PracticeFind some similar words or phrases of the followings good2. think3.clever perfect excellent outstanding pl

2、easant wonderful favorable magnificent in ones opinion/viewhold the view that it is widely shared that wise bright smart intelligent cute6影響給分的因素之三：影響給分的因素之三：行文的流暢行文的流暢 上下貫通、一氣呵成正確而巧妙地使用好連接詞7and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.1.1.表遞進(jìn)表遞進(jìn). .表轉(zhuǎn)折表轉(zhuǎn)折. .表因果表因果.

3、 .表目的表目的. .表歸納表歸納but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand. because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in general,in brief,in

4、 short,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole.8高考作文類型：高考作文類型：A. A. 數(shù)據(jù)說明類文章數(shù)據(jù)說明類文章B. B. 提示議論文類文章提示議論文類文章C. C. 看圖說話類文章看圖說話類文章9影響高考英語書面表達(dá)得分的幾個(gè)影響高考英語書面表達(dá)得分的幾個(gè)因素因素1.語篇信息是否完整語篇信息是否完整2.行文是否連貫流暢，語言是否得體。行文是否連貫流暢，語言是否得體。3.是否使用高級(jí)詞匯是否使用高級(jí)詞匯4.是否使用復(fù)雜句是否使用復(fù)雜句5 .卷面整潔卷面整潔,書寫工整書寫工整10寫作基本步驟：寫作基本步驟：仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱。仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱。圍繞

5、要點(diǎn)，寫出句子。圍繞要點(diǎn)，寫出句子。添加過度，確保連貫。添加過度，確保連貫。先求正確，再求靈活。先求正確，再求靈活。認(rèn)真眷寫，卷面整潔。認(rèn)真眷寫，卷面整潔。11現(xiàn)在正是春暖花開的春游時(shí)節(jié)。你校學(xué)生以現(xiàn)在正是春暖花開的春游時(shí)節(jié)。你校學(xué)生以“高三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動(dòng)高三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動(dòng)”展開了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下討論結(jié)果，寫一篇短文。展開了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下討論結(jié)果，寫一篇短文。的學(xué)生認(rèn)為的學(xué)生認(rèn)為的學(xué)生認(rèn)為的學(xué)生認(rèn)為應(yīng)該春游應(yīng)該春游不應(yīng)該春游不應(yīng)該春游接觸大自然，呼吸新鮮空接觸大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣，有利健康氣，有利健康高考臨近，沒有心情玩高考臨近，沒有心情玩活動(dòng)是精神放松，大腦休活動(dòng)是精神放松

6、，大腦休息，有利于學(xué)習(xí)息，有利于學(xué)習(xí)春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí)春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí)12Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)Conclusion1314The outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph: Introduction paragraph: Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 215Key words:1.introduction(topic):高三學(xué)生（senior 3 stud

7、ents）春游(go spring outing）討論（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas): 接觸自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鮮空氣（ breathe some fresh air ）精神放松（relax themselves ）大腦休息（rest their brains ）高考臨近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）沒心情玩（dont feel like going ）耽誤學(xué)習(xí)(waste the time)3.conclusion: in my opinion16K

8、ey words:中學(xué)生middle school students身體差in a poor state of healthIn bad condition充足的睡眠enough sleep加強(qiáng)鍛煉，增加戶外活動(dòng)take more exercise and do more outdoor activities定時(shí)吃飯少吃零食have three meals regularly,eat less non-staplefood.講衛(wèi)生17Form/develop the habit of hygiene18主題句的內(nèi)容要明確具體，語言簡(jiǎn)潔，開門見山，句式力爭(zhēng)多樣性主題句的內(nèi)容要明確具體，語言簡(jiǎn)潔，

9、開門見山，句式力爭(zhēng)多樣性How will you start you passage?How will you start you passage?問句：?jiǎn)柧洌?從句：從句： Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. 19巧用過渡句，過渡詞，理順文章的邏輯關(guān)系巧用過渡句，過渡詞，理順文章的邏輯關(guān)系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions

10、are divided on the question. 20The body partPoint1: 65%的人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該春游（亮明觀點(diǎn)）的人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該春游（亮明觀點(diǎn)）Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.21Reason1Reason1：接觸大自然

11、，呼吸新鮮空氣，有利健康：接觸大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣，有利健康Sentence pattern: They think it good to do sth/ sth do good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air 22Reason 2:活動(dòng)是精神放松，大腦休息，有利于學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)是精神放松，大腦休息，有利于學(xué)習(xí) （注意：兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)之間的連接）遞進(jìn)

12、遞進(jìn)whats more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermoreEg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.23Conclusion: Conclusion: 小段總結(jié)，進(jìn)一步亮明觀點(diǎn)，前后呼應(yīng)小段總結(jié)，進(jìn)一步亮明觀點(diǎn)，前后呼應(yīng)。Eg: They think it will do good to their students.24Point 2:的學(xué)生認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該春游（亮明觀點(diǎn)）的學(xué)生認(rèn)為不

13、應(yīng)該春游（亮明觀點(diǎn)）注意：使用過渡句，自然銜接句子和段落（承上啟下）注意：使用過渡句，自然銜接句子和段落（承上啟下）Sentence pattern:However, others prefer toSome others have just the opposite opinion.On the other hand. Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.25Reason 1:Reason 1:高考臨近，沒有心情玩高考臨近，沒有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe

14、/hold the opinion that.Eg: They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. 26Reason 2:春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí)春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí) （注意：兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)之間的連接）（注意：兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)之間的連接）Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should

15、fix their attention on their studies27 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be

16、 close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance e

17、xamination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies28 表示觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類寫作套語表示觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類寫作套語A.總起總起: Opinions are divided on this question. Different p

18、eople hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question.B.表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)一表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)一: of them hold the opinion that . of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea

19、 think 29C.表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)之間的銜接表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)之間的銜接: However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think so. However, every coin has two sides. Different from those., people think . On the other hand, people think .D.結(jié)尾常用套語結(jié)尾常用套語: In my opinion/Personally,

20、 As far as Im concerned, In short/ in brief/ in a word, 30 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good fo

21、r their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that wit

22、h college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%,

23、 are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.31表列舉說明的關(guān)聯(lián)詞表列舉說明的關(guān)聯(lián)詞:Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . Secondly ThirdlyIn the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/ Last but not least/, .表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞. Besides/Apart from/ Whats more

24、/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse 32 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They

25、think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. T

26、hey say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%, are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.whats more,Besides33A A、運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯或短語、運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯或短語B B、增加形容詞或副詞、增加形容詞或副詞C C、靈活運(yùn)用各種句型、靈活運(yùn)用各種句型 亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥34 Whether or not should Senior 3 s