2016-2017學(xué)年 初三英語(yǔ)二模題型匯編--寫作優(yōu)質(zhì)范文匯編

1、2016-2017學(xué)年初三二模寫作題目匯編與范文one【虹口區(qū)】94. write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “my joy of living”（以“我的生活樂趣”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）生活有艱辛，也有樂趣，你的生活樂趣是什么？你為何覺得這是你的樂趣所在？你是怎么想的？怎么做的？【參考范文】 there is no doubt that we all have to face difficulties and stress in life, so we should develop a way of j

2、oy in our daily life. in my opinion, my joy of life is to listen to light music. whenever i am stuck in trouble or feel depressed, i will spare myself some time to listen to light music because it can help me adjust myself and make me calm down again. i think only in this way can i deal with the pro

3、blems im faced with better or treat other people more properly. above all, thats my joy of living and i think that you can have a try next time. i hope you will get benefit from it.two【黃浦區(qū)】94. in 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “ is a good habit”.（以“是好習(xí)慣”為題，寫一篇60-120個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）一個(gè)好的習(xí)慣會(huì)讓我們終身

4、受益。什么是好習(xí)慣？請(qǐng)分享你的一個(gè)好習(xí)慣，說(shuō)說(shuō)你是怎么養(yǎng)成的？它給你帶來(lái)哪些好處。請(qǐng)結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕捏w驗(yàn)或想法。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）【參考范文】saving money is a good habitspeaking of good habits, saving money is undoubtedly one of them. instead of spending tomorrows money, i prefer to save money. in order to learn to cut down unnecessary c

5、ost, i will think twice before spending money on those clothes that may not suit myself, which benefits me a lot. first of all, the sense of saving money helps me arrange my daily life properly. whats more, saving money, to a certain extent, means i can handle emergency quickly.in addition, saving m

6、oney is not only a traditional virtue but a useful strategy in life. just as the old saying, a penny saved is a penny earned, so saving money makes me feel safe about tomorrow.three【浦東新區(qū)】94. write at least 60 words about the topic “i enjoy (reading, traveling, doing sports.)” 請(qǐng)以“我喜歡做”為題目，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的

7、短文。要求內(nèi)容貼切，意思連貫。 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}紙上補(bǔ)充完整題目 （注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）use the following as your reference: what do you enjoy doing? why do you enjoy doing it? what can you get/learn from it?【參考范文】i enjoy playing basketballhobbies are important for our lives. some enjoy reading, others enjoy travelling, coll

8、ection, and so on. i enjoy playing basketball, a competitive and exciting ball game. when playing basketball, i need to keep running and jumping, so it consumes a lot of energy, and does good to my heart and lungs. besides, i need to work well with other team players in order to win the game. in thi

9、s way ive learnt how to cooperate with others and how to play by the rules. in a word, playing basketball, as an important part of my life, helps me become stronger both physically and mentally.four【長(zhǎng)寧區(qū)】94. write at least 60 words on the topic “a story about_”.(以一個(gè)關(guān)于的故事“為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)（注意：

10、 1. 在答題上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）【參考范文】a story about my fatherin daily life, my father is not only my first teacher but also one of my dearest friends. at the age of seven, i started primary school and father picked me up from school every day. once on the way home, i was knocked dow

11、n by the bike. it was so painful that i couldnt help crying loudly and blaming on the biker. my father rushed to me to check if i had been hurt immediately. luckily, i was fine. then, he asked me to stop blaming the person who bumped into me because it was also my fault -i didnt pass the street on t

12、he pavement. after the biker apologized to me, my father let me forgive him and admitted that i hadnt obeyed the traffic rules. i will never forget the saying which my father told me “think about yourself before blaming on others.” fathers words enriched my life and did a lot of good to my growth. i

13、m sure my fathers love will lead me to my success and i will love him forever!five【徐匯區(qū)】94 write a passage on the topic “a party for /to _ “ in at least 60 words. 請(qǐng)?jiān)O(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)主題派對(duì)，并以“_派對(duì)”為題介紹派對(duì)主題，對(duì)象及活動(dòng)內(nèi)容等，寫一篇至少60個(gè)字的短文，（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格子）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名，校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）the following is for reference only.1 organize2

14、 it is to 3 invite to.4 be able to【參考范文】a party for graduation hi, boys and girls! have you been tired of a huge of amount of homework recently? have you had any activity in the past few months? in order to relax yourselves and have a unforgettable memory for the rest of middle school life? a party

15、for graduation will be held from 7-9 this friday evening for students in grade 9.it will be full of various activities in which you can express yourselves. first of all, you will have a relay race with your teachers. therefore, all of you must work together to achieve the final success. second some

16、of you will be invited to show your feelings about the school life. finally some teachers will voice their best wishes for all of you. all of these sound interesting, arent they? so join us and there will be much more surprises waiting for you.six【奉賢區(qū)】94. writing at least 60 words on the topic“_ mak

17、e me a better person”(以“_ 成就更好的自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格) （注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）【參考范文】understanding other people makes me a better personas is known to all, everyone is a special unity that has his own mind and story. when facing the similar circumstances, they may make different choice

18、s. every decision we make and every action we do make us be a different person from others. so it is very important to understand others especially when we get along with other people. there are several reasons. first, understanding can avoid quarrels among people. if we put ourselves in other peopl

19、es shoes, we can understand others better, which can avoid misunderstandings that may break other peoples heart. second, understanding is also a self-cultivation. everyone has their own difficulties, which means that we cant impose our minds on other people. i always remind myself of understanding o

20、thers and from what we have discussed above, i think that understanding other people makes me a better person. seven【靜安區(qū)】94. write at least 60words about the topic “_,a new way of life!”(請(qǐng)以 “_，一種嶄新的生活方式”為題，從以下圖片中選擇其中一張圖片，舉例表述你的思考和理由，寫一篇不少于60字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）weixin mobikepoints for reference:1. which way

21、 do you choose to write about ?2. why do you think it a new way of life?3. could you give some suggestions in order to make better use of it?【參考范文】 as we all know, we are enjoying the convenience of our new ways of life, including mobike. we can easily find a public bike everywhere in shanghai now a

22、nd we never worry about where to park it. riding a bicycle does good to our health and the environment as well. however, we should use a public bike properly. we can't use it if we're younger than 12.we should take good care of it instead of damaging it. we should park it in a parking spot a

23、fter using it.public bikes bring us a lot of advantages, so we should protect them so that they can serve us longer.eight【崇明縣】94. write at least 60 words on the topic “ i am an independent boy (girl) ”（以“我是個(gè)獨(dú)立的男(女）生”為題,寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中有些學(xué)生過(guò)分依賴父母和他人，不會(huì)做任何家務(wù)，不會(huì)照顧自己的生活，學(xué)習(xí)上 缺乏自信，不能獨(dú)立做事或作出決定。請(qǐng)

24、舉例證明你在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中是個(gè)獨(dú)立的男（女）生。 give examples to prove that you are independent in several ways.(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)、.校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不與評(píng)分。）the following phrases are for reference only.(以下短語(yǔ)僅供參考）do housework take care of oneself make a decision on ones own【參考范文】i am an independent girl most of my classmates are the only

25、 child in their family, so their parents and grandparents usually arrange everything for them. but my parents always ask me to work out problems by myself in order to make me become an independent girl. i often do housework to help my mother and make pocket money at the same time. when my parents ar

26、e on business, i have to take care of myself. even though i meet with difficulties in my study, i am also able to make a decision at once. so i am confident enough to deal with problems on my own. i am an independent girl and this bring many advantages to my life.nine【普陀區(qū)】94. write at least 60 words

27、 on the topic “our last class meeting in junior high school”.(以“我們初中最后一次班會(huì)”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)情景提示：同學(xué)們即將畢業(yè)，班級(jí)將開展最后一次班會(huì)活動(dòng)，對(duì)于這次班會(huì)的主題內(nèi)容和活動(dòng)形式，班主任想聽取大家的意見。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕南敕?，并給出這樣設(shè)計(jì)的理由。（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）【參考范文】our last class meeting in junior high schoolhow time flies.we are going to leave junio

28、r high school in 2 months, our last class meeting will be held soon. here are my opinions and suggestions about our coming class meeting.to start with, i suppose we should focus on our personal academic plans in the future. everyone should deliver a speech at the class meeting about their individual

29、 plans.the reasons are following. first of all, we should know what to do after our graduation from junior high school. besides, academic plans will give our more encouragement about our coming examination. last but not least, we can learn to express ourselves more bravely in public.in a word, i rea

30、lly think it a chance to share our academic plans with the class.ten【楊浦區(qū)】94. in 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “things we can do make our city a better place”. （以“我們可以做些什么讓我們的城市更美好”為題，寫一篇60-120個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）the following is for reference only （下列單詞僅供參考）【參考范

31、文】we should make our city a better place .in our daily life ,we can do lots of things.for example ,we can take care of the old people in the home for the aged ,then they can no longer feel lonely.second,we must obey the laws. breaking rules is very dangerous and it may cause big accidents. if we obe

32、y the laws,well have a better and safer life.last but not least ,we should protect our environment. nowadays, many diseases infect through the harmful air,so we can take buses instead of driving our own cars. we can make our city a better place by ourselves.eleven【青浦區(qū)】write at least 60 words accordi

33、ng the given situation（根據(jù)所給情景寫一篇不少于60字的作文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)tom 最近很苦惱，他感到和父母存在代溝，雙方對(duì)很多問(wèn)題看法不同，自己的想法得不到他們的理解，請(qǐng)你以他的筆友的名義給他寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。words and expressions for referencegeneration gap old-fashioned complain about misunderstanding between . exchange ideas respect ones opinion (注意文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名 校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分)【參考范文

34、】dear tom i am very glad to hear from you. but from the letter, i know you are very troubled recently because of the generation gap between you and your parents. you may think that your parents are old-fashioned and they also complain about your behaviors. however, in my view, there must be some mis

35、understanding between you and your parents. therefore, it is really essential to exchange the ideas with them, which enables both of you to understand each other better. in addition, if you want to get the respect from your parents, youd better show yours to them first. these are my suggestions for

36、you. i hope they can do you a favor. i look forward to your good news.write to me soon. yours peter twelve【嘉定區(qū)】94. write at least 60 words about the topic “ i like reading english _”（以“我喜歡閱讀英語(yǔ)_”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）英語(yǔ)課外讀物是我們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好幫手（helper）。我們經(jīng)常閱讀各種英語(yǔ)讀物，如英文報(bào)刊，雜志，小說(shuō)和故事等。請(qǐng)介紹你最喜歡的一種英文讀物，并談?wù)勀阍谟⒄Z(yǔ)課外閱讀

37、中的收獲和感受。（注意：1.在答題紙上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。 2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）the following is for reference only.（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）be interested in read various books do good to learnfrom【參考范文】i like reading english books reading good english books is one of the greatest pleasures in life. from good english books, we can

38、 derive satisfaction, companionship and instruction. a good english book can increase our happiness when we are cheerful, and lesson our trouble when we are sad. whatever purpose our reading may be, our contact with good english books should never fail to give us enjoyment.  with a good english

39、 book in our hands, we never feel lonely. the people we meet in books may delight us as our companions and friends. our human friends may sometimes bore us, but good english books are always ready to give us friendship and encouragement. from good english books we can heartily enjoy the beautie

40、s of nature, the triumphs of science and technology, and the treasures of music and art. from good english books, moreover, we can still draw much instruction which few companions can offer. reading good english books can help to advance our knowledge and improve our mind so as to equip ourselv

41、es to perform our work more efficiently.thirteen【寶山區(qū)】shanghai students post is asking for the comments on “new century english” textbook. write a passage of at least 60 words for shanghai students post(上海學(xué)生英文報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征集對(duì)先行中學(xué)英語(yǔ)教材新世紀(jì)英語(yǔ)的評(píng)價(jià)和建議，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給報(bào)紙寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的小短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）評(píng)價(jià)comments1. many interesting

42、 picture to go with the texts2. the passages are up to date, related to our everyday life, they can lead us to take an active part in class3. practices our listening, speaking, reading and writing skills in an all-round way(全方位)建議和要求suggestions1. there be more interesting topics2. more passage about

43、 english and american cultures3. some english songs on the tape going with the textbook【參考范文】dear mr/mrs,i am very glad that you can give us such a good opportunity to express our opinions on “new century english” textbook. i would like to sat that the book is very interesting with so many updated p

44、assage which can give us very clear image and the information we understand to fully understand the text. furthermore , the textbook is very helpful to us in that it enables us to practice our listening、speaking、writing skills. however, i have to say that there are some points that i need to point o

45、ut such as the not so interesting topics and lack of passage about topic about american and england culture. and i would like there to be more songs related to our topic, which can make our passage more attractive.i would appreciate it very much if you can take any of my proposition into careful con

46、sideration.fourteen【閔行區(qū)】94. write a letter to your american pen-pal tony in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根據(jù)所給情景給你的美國(guó)筆友tony寫一封不少于60詞的回答。要求內(nèi)容適切，意思連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。信的開頭、結(jié)尾和署名已給，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。）假設(shè)你是小明（xiao ming），是美國(guó)中學(xué)生tony的筆友，你收到了他的來(lái)信。請(qǐng)給tony寫一封回信，回答他的問(wèn)題，介紹上海良好的公共交通服務(wù)。（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則

47、不予評(píng)分。）【參考范文】dear tony, i am glad to receive your letter and hear you are going to my city, shanghai. here id like to tell you something important about how to travel around better. as we all know, the economy and technology of shanghai develop quickly during these years, so does the public transport

48、. its very convenient for you to take a tour around the city with advanced public transport, like underground, bus, bicycle. if you travel around within a kilometer, i will suggest you take mobike, a new form of public transport. its very easy to use if you have a smart phone. what you do is to find

49、 a nearest mobike through the app, scan the qr code on the bike, and enjoy your trip. it is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. if your are busy and go on a long journey, you can take a taxi or the underground with faster speed instead, which can take you anywhere you want to go. i hope what i suggest can make your trip easy and you can totally enjoy yourself during this trip!best wishesyoursxiaoming fifteen【松江區(qū)】94. write at least 60 words on the topic “something i want to