文書語法錯誤總結0508

1、聶芳芳語法講座筆記1. 時態(tài)A. After the college entrance examination defeat, I did not abandon myself but cherish the opportunity to enter one university, which preferred to grant me, and I chose Financial Management as my major, while during my learning process, I realize accounting is quite close to our daily

2、life, and some finance terms, such as expenditure, interest rate and profit, always exist in peoples chatting.（cherished/realized)-劉子豪PSB. Therefore, I simplify the model by removing the triangle sheet and improved the restricted way of the fixed part at the same time.(過去做的事情，simplified)-朱超PS感覺時態(tài)（過去

3、、將來、現在、完成；人稱）好把握也不好把握，容易混肴，特別是在一個句子里，依具體情況而定。-雖然大家對時態(tài)把握的很好，但不知不覺中還是會犯錯誤，而且還不少。2. “I”開頭的句子過多A. I was a woman with several big rises and falls. Born in the middle of China and I went to college in the north of China-Harbin University of Science and Technology, then I worked in the south for almost 10

4、years. I majored in English when I was in college, but I came to work in a design company when I graduated. Whats more dramatic, I have changed my job three times in different companies. -唐田旭東PS“I” 字開頭的句子是最簡單、也是最直接可以表達句意的句子；但變化多端的句子可以彰顯學生的文采及英文水平。3. 句子使用過長A. By the influence of my father who is the

5、chairman of the board in Guangzhou Bingjun Investment Consulting Co.,Ltd, I was instilled the relevant financial knowledge and was cultivated the interest in financial services, financial products and financial market at a very early age,so I am not strange in terms of securities, banking, insurance

6、, trust, futures and investment at all.（一個句子一段話，最好不要超過三行）-程若塵PSB. Striving to self-improve professional knowledge in architectural design and urban planning, I started my first internship in Beijing Branch office of 5+1 Werkhart International, which is a multinational group of Architectural Design S

7、ervices and has completed more than 100 major projects of urban planning, architectural design, landscape design and other aspects of design.（進行適當的刪減）-李蘭PS句子太長會使人煩躁，并且容易使人忽略重點。可以的話，盡量縮減、換個表達法、突出句子的多樣性！4. 頭重腳輕（前面的鋪墊太長）A. As a senior in the School of Software at Beijing Institute of Technology (BIT),

8、which is one of the 35 China National Pilot Software Schools authorized by the China Ministry of Education and the China National Development and Reform Commission, I have been immersed in the study of Software Engineering for almost four years.（As后面的短語太長)-李松PSB. Because of my outstanding performanc

9、e in the research project in Program Execution Analysis Software, under the guidance of associate professor Jin Fusheng, with the purpose of numerating the function reference relationship during the process of software operation with Aspect Oriented Programming (AOP), I was allowed to participate in

10、 the research project of Professor Jin-An, Improved Algorithm of Quasi-identifier in K-anonymity, from March 2014 to October 2014.（前面短語過長）-李松PS句子前面，我們通常會用一些短語結構如介詞短語、動名詞、分詞結構短語來解釋、強調某件事情，建議簡潔表達，避免句子過長，頭重腳輕。5. 關系代詞、關系副詞濫用A. In addition, in 2014, I participated in "Quantitative Methods in Social

11、Research" hosted by Michigan University, ICPSR, in where I systematically learned the related courses and absorbed the corresponding statistical software such as R, SAS, SPSS and STATA through the training of statistics technology.(1. Where或是 in which 2. 句子使用過長）-王開元PSB. Looking back it is still

12、 hard to believe how I made through such rough period of time, but I stared at the life threat so close which taught me an invaluable lesson to be more grateful for the life and keep a positive attitude no matter what happened in my life and stimulate myself to pursue the dreams and careers I value

13、the most. （1. , which 2. 句子很長）-高升PSC. It means that the generation born and grown with the television, and influenced by the exciting TV programs. (that 去掉/ the generation was)-PSWhich前面加什么代詞及非限制性定語這兩種是我感覺不太好使用的，也是比較容易犯錯誤的！in where 一般不使用。6. 主語省略A. As soon as finishing the course of Mechanics of Comp

14、osite Materials by Pro. Qing Guanghui, who is the Director of College of Aeronautical Engineering, I participated the verification test Carbon Fiber Resin Matrix Composite Different Layer Fatigue Performance Test（as soon as引導的是時間狀語從句，后面應該接的是句子；As soon as I finished/On finishing)-朱超PS我們有時候覺得主語感覺有點累贅，

15、往往會考慮省略主語；但有時候某些連詞后面的主語是否可以省略，需要多加推敲！不僅要看連接詞如although/though/as soon as，還要注意前后主語是否一致。7. 標點A. In this respect,they all need the rigorous attitude and logical reasoning ability which I ve already gained and has been cultivated all the time. It will help me a lot in my future study. （標點與后單詞之間空一個字母、引號的方

16、向）-何俊濤PSB. In daily conversation,my supervisor often talks about how to avoid risk. Risk control is of prime importance，because the lower the risk falls,the greater the likelihood of gaining profits.(中英文標點的誤用）C. Whist I tackle with the plane thin-walled structure, there was discrepancy in the effect

17、 picture generated through modeling method including Geometry 、 Mesh 、 Properties 、BC/Loads.（英語中是沒有頓號的，用逗號）標點影響整篇文章的美觀。正確、合理的使用會給人一種舒適的感覺。推薦信8. 稱呼、人稱未保持一致A. Mr.Ma Hang is a bright and intelligent student whom I have known since her entrance into the university as my student. As her tutor, I am very

18、glad to recommend her and support her application for the program at your esteemed university. （這不是定稿版本的，是先前看文書時看到的；這是個男學生，但后面又用了女生的her）-馬航推薦信B. I got to know Mrs Luo in 2013 when he first attended my Advanced Econometrics discussion class where I was most struck by his creativity and industriousness.（這位學生也是男生，但我卻用成了Mrs)-羅崢推薦信這種錯誤其實跟我們的英語能力無關-更多的在于是否我們足夠細心，看似是個小的錯誤，但帶來的后果就不一定（滿意度下降、影響申請啊