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1、 高分作文標志高分作文標志1：高考：高考100詞左右；四級詞左右；四級120-150字；字；六級六級150180字；字；2、能否長短句交叉；、能否長短句交叉；3、用詞能否恰當，準確，籠統(tǒng)，盡量、用詞能否恰當，準確，籠統(tǒng)，盡量運用可以吸引閱卷教師眼球的閃光詞；運用可以吸引閱卷教師眼球的閃光詞；4、關(guān)鍵詞能否換用，切勿老用反復詞；、關(guān)鍵詞能否換用，切勿老用反復詞；寫好一篇作文的本卷須知 1.適當用被動替代自動，這樣能更客觀的反映現(xiàn)實適當用被動替代自動，這樣能更客觀的反映現(xiàn)實, 句子開頭不要總是用句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時不用比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay atten

2、tion to而用而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾：舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.擅長運用插入語，比如說把副詞、銜接詞等，作擅長運用插入語，比如說把副詞、銜接詞等，作插入語放在中間，普通放在主語、動詞或者助動插入語放在中間，普通

3、放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。 如如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做做插入語放在中間，普通放在動詞，助動詞后，兩插入語放在中間，普通放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。邊分別加上逗號。比如說：比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要學會換詞，換籠統(tǒng)，詳細的替代太一定要學會換詞，換籠統(tǒng)，詳細的替代太廣泛的。廣泛的。(考試中普通不要出現(xiàn)考試中普通不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,pe

4、ople, opinion 等等等等)比如上面例子中，比如上面例子中，applicable替代替代proper, approaches替代替代ways, implement替代替代carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替代替代enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物競爭力提高某物競爭力)Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday presen

5、t, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.veryexcitingsb. be interested in sth.searcha lot ofT

6、he dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large

7、measure! more and more popular“與與一致一致With development( flood into / swarm into )交換交換 enter intonowsb. be interested in sth.more and more peopleThe dawn of the new century witnessed 精彩句型，用來描精彩句型，用來描畫在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情；畫在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情；It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型說某事是毫不夸張的經(jīng)典句型說某事是毫不夸張的For a start, we can,

8、 freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering .For a start 交換交換 To begin withWe can, freely, search 用了插入

9、語的寫作手法用了插入語的寫作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩用了非常精彩的被動的被動Additionally 交換交換 In addition / BesidesDeliver 交換交換 sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing vi

10、olence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.這個句子有三個精彩之處，這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有這個句型，還有however作為插入語作為插入語 function in the disservice of 交換交換 do harm to Emerging 替代替代 appearing ( fading 替代替代 disappearing ) Net citiz

11、en 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞 As a classic proverb goes, no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.We should, therefore, take advantage

12、of 運用插入運用插入語語Fruits (而且而且fruits 用的非?；\統(tǒng)，用的非常籠統(tǒng)， merits/ virtues) 交交換換 advantage ( defects 交換交換 disadvantage )Every coin has two sidesimportant / good 等等a part ofbadeffects / influencesaspect各位同窗，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，各位同窗，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎樣會不得高分呢！作文怎樣會不得高分呢！ 1.individuals,characters, folks代代 (people ,p

13、ersons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(愉快的愉快的)，promising(有希望的有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding替代替代good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的有害的)替代替代bad 假設(shè)假設(shè)bad做表語，可以有做表語，可以有be less impressive替替代代eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance w

14、ith girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)替代替代many.注：用注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。后一定要有詞。 Eg. Many

15、 individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理同理 用用most, if not all ,替代替代most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替代替代some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替替think(由于是書面語，所以要加由于是書面語，所以要加that)Ask not wha

16、t your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country.7:affair ,business ,matter 替代替代thing8: shared 代代 common9.reap huge fruits 替代替代get much benefit )10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替代替代 in my opinion11:Increasing(ly),growing 替代替代more and more( 留留意沒有意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種方式。所以當修飾名詞時用這種

17、方式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾描畫詞，副詞用修飾描畫詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或或little or nothing替代替代hardly13.beneficial rewarding替代替代helpful be beneficial of14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替代替代

18、customer15.exceedingly,extremely 替代替代very16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable . 替代替代 necessary, evitable17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替代替代sb take interest in18.capture ones attention替代替代attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替代替代cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替替代代.reasons for sth23.desire 替代替代want.24.pour attention t