2020-2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)專題(含答案)

1、2020-2021 年中考英語書面表達(dá)專題 （含答案 ）一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1. 書面表達(dá)每個人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧！請以 “A （ n） Ihave ”為題，描述一個或一件你心愛的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊?義。要求： 1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順， 80 詞左右。A（ n） I have【答案】 A( n) toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do

2、I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It s a black toy gun and it can shot somsmall plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun.They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.When I was a little boy, I lik

3、ed watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun.One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor thenand my father didn t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. Aweek later, father put a box to me. A black to

4、y gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it,father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I willremember my father s love forever. Every time I miss him, I ll take out the toy gun and sayyou,

5、my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如 a toy gunwrapped by yellow cloth (用黃布包著的玩具槍)，這里用到了過去分詞作定語，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能( small plastic pills )，順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時態(tài)。在描述得到的經(jīng)

6、歷的時候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難，父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望( I hope I can be a soldier )，上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。2.書面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對自己未來的期待。請以 My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文 介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。注意：1.詞數(shù)9

7、0左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2 .短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順 ；3 .短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.【答案】 How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past,

8、I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn ' t do well

9、 in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn ' t havoad sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time bett

10、er. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以"My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題：結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和 一般將來時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文 意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá) 出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)齊全，語言簡練。文中 not only but also,

11、 help a lot, share happiness and sadness, do well in , give up, besides, so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj., therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密；文章 的最后 I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了 自 己愿望與想法， 使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。3.共享單車自從2016年在江陰投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到

12、人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質(zhì)的照妖鏡”，請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給 21世紀(jì)英文報寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢隨處可見，出行方便 宿益健康，減少污染 費(fèi)用不高，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題未及時歸還 占道擋路你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為參考詞匯：公共自行車public bicycles注意事項：1.短文須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2.表格中 你的觀點(diǎn)”一欄用2-3句話展開合理想象，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)在90個左右，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are becoming more a

13、nd more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have wonhigh praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can beseen everywhere so that it ' s35aByeo auound on public bicycles. Also, Riding bic

14、ycles notonly is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What' s more, using public bicyclcosts so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people cann'public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are

15、in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，要求給英文報社寫一篇投稿，介紹對共享單車看法。作文應(yīng)包括 4 個主要內(nèi)容，一個是社會現(xiàn)狀，第二個優(yōu)點(diǎn)，第三是存在的問題，最后發(fā)表個人的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要注意上下文的連貫，將這些內(nèi)容有機(jī)的連接起來，不要逐句翻譯。使用一些好的句型和短語，注意正確的時態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動詞的形式，還需要注意英語表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣

16、的不同，讓整篇短文表達(dá)流暢。4 假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教Peter 參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語：school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題： When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it

17、 going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition inYanqing.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter ，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school ga

18、te at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day.

19、 You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take somefood and drinks with you.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1 .題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)， 動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提 示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2 .例文點(diǎn)評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言

20、的表述應(yīng)該符合語法 的結(jié)構(gòu)，語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。3 .高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：school gate； invite sb. to do； a lot of； plan to do。句型：not only but also You'd better ; T'm looking forward to 。5 .書面表達(dá)中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇 游玩。請根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息，將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。BritainTimeJuly 1 - July 14Activitiesvisit the Buckingham

21、 Palace（白金漢宮）visit the British Museum （大英博物館）watch football matchesAttentionchangeable weatherCost20,000 yuanAustraliaTimeAugust 15 -August 24Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera House travel around the Gold Coast（黃金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalasAttentionwinterCost16,000 yuan要求：1 .所寫內(nèi)容必須包括某一國家的所有

22、信息及選擇的理由；2 .結(jié)合游玩國家的情況，自擬希望可以安排的活動，并提出1-2點(diǎn)出游的注意事項;3 .文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4 .語義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范；5 .不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。The summer holiday is coming. I think it' s a good idea to travel abroad.I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】 The summer holiday is coming. I think it ' s a good idea

23、 to travel abroad. I have read information about two countriesBritain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go toBritain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to

24、visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconv

25、enient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提 供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介 紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個 要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫

26、作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文 章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的 結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的 復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文 章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。6.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。 閾購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage)1.不需要出門；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累2.價格通常比較便宜3.可供選擇的范圍廣

27、，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage)1.只看到圖片， 看/、到商品本身2.容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購 shopping online; 商品 goods;導(dǎo)致 cause 注意：1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2 .文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱；3 .詞數(shù)：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】 With the development of the Inte

28、rnet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowd

29、s and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it' s very easy for youto buy goods that aren ' t like the pictures you see on the Internet

30、. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That' s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時 態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如 convenient

31、 , disadvantage, ingood quality , figure out , have the chance to do , be attacked by , of course , take care of 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符 合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給 出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹?心突出、明確的關(guān)鍵。初

32、寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確 性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還 要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合要求等。7.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容須包括：對下表中關(guān)于（ City A和City B）的全部信息進(jìn)行比較，分析利弊，確定其中一個城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 h

33、oursTemperature30 c18 cHotel Things to do Food In my opinion,is he better place to spend my summer holiday.【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as tha

34、t in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable ex

35、perience.【解析】 【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息，要求考 生對每個信息進(jìn)行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很 好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語的表達(dá) 方式。避免漢語式英語。句型不要都用簡單句。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個信 息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對于城市 A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although層管一詞輕輕帶過。對于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出，因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of。

36、在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher在說旅館時用了"less comfortable ,比較食物時，用了“asaT。在說選擇城市 A的原因時，用了 that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。8.李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說，她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華，請你給Jessica寫一封信，介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：1. 中秋節(jié)的時間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯 , 賞月 , 吃月餅等；3. 我最期待的活動。要求：1.80-100 詞開頭和結(jié)尾已給出

37、 ,不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.語句通順, 意思連貫 , 書寫工整。Dear Jessica,I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival toyou.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jessica,I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15 th of the 8th lunar mo

38、nth. It s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest.With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to ea

39、t mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious.They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表

40、達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如 get together ， enjoy the full moon ， share our stories 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。9.書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報 英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華，請根 據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫一封信，說說你的計劃?；顒赢厴I(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall9T日全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動內(nèi)容1 .邀請校長作演講；2 .互贈禮物送祝福；3 .各班表演精彩節(jié)目4 .要求：1.要點(diǎn)完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫 ；2.正確使用語態(tài)，

41、語法正確，書寫整潔。3.80詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和地名。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremonywill be held in our school ha

42、ll at 7 o' clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. Firstof all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan. Best