industrial-goods-概要寫作

1、概要寫作概要寫作Summary writingSummary writing高考新題型高考新題型Summary五步法五步法 1. 閱讀并理解大意閱讀并理解大意, 把握文章結(jié)構(gòu)把握文章結(jié)構(gòu) 2. 找出主題句，要點(diǎn)主題句，關(guān)鍵詞。找出主題句，要點(diǎn)主題句，關(guān)鍵詞。 3. 用自己的語言整合信息。用自己的語言整合信息。 4. 修飾文章使之更有連貫性。修飾文章使之更有連貫性。 5. 檢查語言，語法，和標(biāo)點(diǎn)。檢查語言，語法，和標(biāo)點(diǎn)。 Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a s

2、tove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste

3、 of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! Our industrial society has turned us into spoile

4、d children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why cant we act before this happens? Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?（例子例子-expensive）（例子

5、例子-such as used cars and the expensive packaging material ）.（信息整合（信息整合- 后果后果+ 措施）措施）Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. （例子例子-expensive）. _, industri

6、al goods were made _. And they were very expensive.And they cost a large sum of money.Some time ago; In the past; to function well for a long time; Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly t

7、o the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!

8、 Products nowadays cannot last long. _ _, _（例子例子-such as used cars and the expensive packaging material ）People perferto throw them away rather than repair themwhich is a waste of earths resourcesWhich has led to a great waste of earths resourceshas caused/ has resulted in Our industrial society has

9、 turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why cant we act before this happens? Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virt

10、ue? 1. 后果后果+ 2. 措施措施 1. This wastefulness _now because we have no resources left. has brought us great trouble 2.We should take immediate action to stop wasting resources .（信息整合）（信息整合）has caused great trouble for us step 4. 連貫性連貫性 In the past , industrial goods were In the past , industrial goods we

11、re made to function well for a long time and they were made to function well for a long time and they were very expensive. Nowadays , products cannot last very expensive. Nowadays , products cannot last long . People prefer to throw it away rather than long . People prefer to throw it away rather th

12、an repair it , which has led to a great waste of earths repair it , which has led to a great waste of earths resources .resources . This Wastefulness has caused great This Wastefulness has caused great trouble for us now because we have no resources trouble for us now because we have no resources le

13、ft. We should take immediate actions to stop left. We should take immediate actions to stop wasting resources .wasting resources .However,Therefore, Step5. Step5. 檢查檢查 In the past , industrial goods were made to function In the past , industrial goods were made to function well for a long time and t

14、hey were very expensive. well for a long time and they were very expensive. However, products Nowadays cannot last long . However, products Nowadays cannot last long . People prefer to throw it away rather than repair it , People prefer to throw it away rather than repair it , which has led to a gre

15、at waste of earths resources which has led to a great waste of earths resources . . This Wastefulness has caused great trouble for us This Wastefulness has caused great trouble for us now because we have no resources left. Therefore, now because we have no resources left. Therefore, we should take i

16、mmediate action to stop wasting we should take immediate action to stop wasting resources .resources .Decades ago, industrial goods were of high quality and cost a lot. (要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1) But this is not a good idea to manufacturers. 過渡句過渡句 They advised us to throw them away rather than repair them, which has

17、caused a great waste of the worlds resources. (要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)2) This wastefulness has brought us great trouble. Now we are running out of resources. Therefore, we should act immediately to save what we have before its too late. (要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)3) 69WModel essayWriting skillsSkill 2: Rewrite sentences. 1. Once upon a tim

18、e, industrial goods were made to last forever. Some time ago, manufacturers made industrial goods last forever.改變語態(tài)（主動(dòng)改變語態(tài)（主動(dòng)被動(dòng)）被動(dòng)）2. This wastefulness has got us into great trouble. We have got into great trouble due to this wastefulness.改變主語（人改變主語（人物）物）3. It is cheaper to throw them away than to r

19、epair them. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them. It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away. People would rather throw them away than repair them as it is cheaper to do so.改變主語（形式主語）改變主語（形式主語）正話反說、反話正說正話反說、反話正說Step 1：Step 2:Step 3:Step 4: Understand the whole passage a

20、nd grasp the key points. (Reorganize information.)Organize the key points logically. How to write a good summary?ConclusionBegin to write. Paraphrase some words or phrases. Rewrite sentences. Use the minimum of words.Read and check.Polish your writingOnce upon a time, industrial goods were made to l

21、ast forever and they were very expensive. Nowadays, however, industrial products cant last long and it is cheaper to throw them away than to repair it. This has led to a great waste of the earths resources. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in, so we should try to act immediately and build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue. (78W)Decad