基礎寫作-社會現(xiàn)象類說明文的小結剖析

1、讀寫任務點評（概要 “Summary） 說明文: 1. phenomenon I problem +reason +solution 2. introduction of an object( how it is made, how it is used, how it may change, what makes it new or significant) 3.新聞：Focus on the first paragraph and the first sentence and the last sentence of other paragraphs.find some basic ele

2、ments of the article（社會現(xiàn)象） 1.Phenomenon: 2.Reasons: 3.Positive ideas: 4.Negative ideas: 5.Solution: 6.Future/ development:廣州一模Read the passage again, and find some basic elements of the article:1.Phenomenon: overparenting2.Reasons:fewer children;future depends on one child3.Positive ideas: 4.Negativ

3、e ideas:Jless dependentIpressure; anxiety / depression6.Future/ development:5.Solution:Nowadays, parents seem to geteverything well-designed for their children. This is because the only child in the family would be paid more attention to and put more expectation on. However, L overparenting results

4、in manyB negative consequences. IBecause of having fewer children and expecting more of them, parents seem to get everything well-designed for their kids to ensure their success. However, overparenting may make them less independent and more . depressed.田卜asic elements:1 .Phenomenon： Lack of fresh w

5、ater2 .Reasons: creasing population I developing industries3 .Positive ideas:4 .Negative ideas:5.Solution:takemeasuresShare informationKeep rivers from being pollutedDig deep wells Collect rain water46.Future/ development:Suggested answer:With the increasing population and the developing industries,

6、 fresh water is in great need. Some nations are taking measures to meet people's need, like keeping rivers from being polluted, and collecting rain water.Let's look at another example!Focus on the first paragraph and the first sentence and the last i sentence of other paragraphs. '（深圳一模） Our school held a ceremony to start the Eco-school programme to educate us to improve our environment and be aware of its significance, on which we are cal