2020中考英語作文熱點素材范文06共享單車

1、熱點6共享單車熱點預(yù)測共享單車無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2020年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：共享單車?！绢A(yù)測題目】（一）假定你是紅星中學(xué)初三學(xué)生李華。你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國新近出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車"mobike"很感興趣，并請你做個簡要介紹。請你給 Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1 .這種單車的使用方法（如：APP查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等）；2 .這種單車的優(yōu)勢；3 .你對這種單車的看法。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80;2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞：智能手機smartphone, 二維碼 the QR code【參

2、考范文】Dear Jim,I m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in yourlatest letter.It s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms

3、of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Your

4、s,Li Hua（二）多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，共享單車在蘇州投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸21世紀英文報寫但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質(zhì)的u照妖鏡u ,請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給 篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢1 .隨處可見，出行方便2 .有益健康，減少污染3 .費用不高，負擔得起存在問題1 .未及時歸還2 .占道擋路你的觀點我認為參考詞匯：公共自行車 public bicycles注意事項：1.短文須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2.表格中“你的觀點”一欄用23句話展開合理想象，做適當發(fā)揮。3. 詞數(shù)在90個左右，文

5、章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【參考范文】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praisesince they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it '

6、; s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only isgood for our health but also can help reduce pollution.What' s more, using public bicycles costsso little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Somepeople can' t return public bicycles in tim

7、e. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are inour way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it' s a wayof living a green life.真題再現(xiàn)(一)作為共享經(jīng)濟的新形態(tài)，共享單車( mobikes )極大方便了人民，請你結(jié)合圖示寫篇關(guān)于共享單車的短文.20【參考范文】s lives and becomeWith the develo

8、pment of technology, Mobikes have come into people increasingly popular. It is very convenient for you to use. You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time. It has some advantages. You also can exercise by riding Mobikes. Also, there will be less pollution if people use Mobikes.Whenyou ride a Mobike,

9、 you should follow some rules. For example, you d better wear a helmet to keep safe. And you should follow the traffic rules. Whenyou are riding a Mobike, you shouldn t make a call because it can be dangerous. If you have an accident when you ride a Mobike, you must call 120 immediately and do first

10、 aid if necessary.【解析詳解】這篇作文要求我們對共享單車的流行進行介紹，題目中利用圖表的形式，展示了文章的主要內(nèi)容，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括三個方面的內(nèi)容：首先介紹人們選擇共享單車的原因，列舉了兩個；接下來介紹的是騎共享單車時應(yīng)遵循的一些規(guī)則，包括三個具體內(nèi)容；最后介紹一下如果發(fā)生了事故應(yīng)該怎么處理。學(xué)生們可以更加這一圖表的提示， 列出文章的寫作提綱， 并充實細節(jié)內(nèi)容， 組織語言， 用正確的英語表達出來。這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時或現(xiàn)在完成時， 第二人稱為主來敘述。 寫作時應(yīng)注意： 首先合理安排文章內(nèi)容，注意分清層次和結(jié)構(gòu)，主次要分明，應(yīng)有具體的細節(jié)內(nèi)容，不能寫得太籠統(tǒng)；其次應(yīng)注意

11、英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同， 不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯， 應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)， 寫完整的句子。 可使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，提升作文檔次。同時注意文章的連貫，語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者介紹了共享單車的情況。短文有如下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整、充實，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次清楚，包括了題目中所有的要點。短文主要從三個方面進行介紹：首先介紹了共享單車流行的原因；接下來介紹了騎共享單車時應(yīng)遵循的規(guī)則；最后介紹的是如果發(fā)生了事故應(yīng)該怎么辦。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。短文以簡單句為主，也使用了并

12、列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章節(jié)奏，提升了作文水平。文章中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如 With the development of technology, Mobikes have come into people s lives and become increasingly popular. 、 Also, there will be less pollution if people use Mobikes. 、 Whenyou are riding a Mobike, you shouldn t makea call because it can be dangero

13、us. 、 If you have an accident when you ride a Mobike, you must call 120 immediately and do first aid if necessary. 等。（二）你喜歡騎自行車嗎?你聽說過共享單車（shared bikes ）嗎 ? （ 共享單車 , 即有需要的人通過掃描單車二維碼，就可以租騎的一種共享自行車。 ）現(xiàn)在電臺的 "Today" 欄目就共享單車這一話題 , 向我們征集稿件。請根據(jù)以下提示，以 Shared bikes 為題 , 寫一篇短文。要點提示:在青島 , 有許多共享單車, 且越來

14、越受歡迎。原因 :1. 騎單車花錢少, 出行方便 ;2. 有更少的污染;3. 有益于健康。問題 :1. 到處停放, 難以保持城市整潔;2. 弄壞單車, 甚至偷走或帶回家。要求 :1. 內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點 , 并談?wù)勀愕目捶?2. 詞數(shù) 80-100 。Shared bikes【參考范文】Shared bikesDo you like riding bikes? Have you ever heard of shared bikes? In Qingdao, there are so many shared bikes,and they are becoming more and more p

15、opular with people.Nowmore and more people enjoy riding bikes instead of cars to make short journeys in cities.Because riding bikes is very convenient and costs less money. It can not only keep the city's environment clean, but also can be good for ourhealth. But in our life , it causes some pro

16、blemsas well, for example, some people put them everywhere and make the city in a mess. Some people break them, and even steal them away.I think if the government takes action to deal with these problems, our city will become more and more beautiful.【解析詳解】1. 題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，表達如今共享單車受歡迎的原因以及存在的問題。在寫作時，

17、注意時態(tài) 的準確運用以及不要遺漏要點。2. 例文點評：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。3. 高分亮點：單詞短語： be popular with ，比較級 and 比較級， instead of ， be good for ， in a mess， not only.but also., as well, for example。高分句型： I think if the government takes action to deal with th

18、ese problems, our city will become more and more beautiful 中 I think 后引導(dǎo)賓語從句，在賓語從句中， if 引導(dǎo)的條件句用一般現(xiàn)在時，主句用一般將來時，即“主將從現(xiàn)”原則?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用 至 U的表達， 例如 be popular with ,比較級 and 比較級，instead of, be good for , in a mess, not onlybutalso., as well, for example 等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在

19、寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（三）共享單車為人們的出行帶來了越來越多的便利，可是人們在享用的時候卻帶來了一系列的問題。比如有人把單車帶回了老家，有人使用自己的二維碼騙取使用者的錢財，有人隨意停放共享單車，有人甚至將 共享單車扔到溝里，河里請你寫一封倡議書，倡議人們熱愛公共資源，保護公共資源，合理使用公共 資源，如此，我們的生活才會因為公共設(shè)施的改善而變得更加美好。請

20、從以下三個方面去談：1 .共享單車方便了人們的出行，減少污染，有利于環(huán)境的改善。2 .列舉人們對共享單車的破壞行為。3 .合理使用共享單車，熱愛公共資源，做一個文明的深圳人。要求：1.詞數(shù)至少80詞，要包含上述三個方面的內(nèi)容，不必字字翻譯。2 .所給詞匯僅作參考，不必都用。3 .文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：QR Code （二維碼）,public resources（公共資源），cheat people of their money （騙錢）,environmentally friendly（環(huán)保的）,low-carbon life （彳氐碳生活）,civilization（明）,

21、progress（進步）Dear allRecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are makingour travelling in the city much more convenient. 【參考范文】Dear allRecently, more and more colorful shared bikes can be seen in the streets. They are makingour travelling in the city much more co

22、nvenient. People can use it anytime and anywhere. Sometimes people work so late that they don t have a car, so they can go home by share bikes. There arealso people who are usually busy with work and don t have enough time to exercise. They willshare bikes to go to work instead of driving, which can

23、 not only reduce the damage and environmental pollution but also be beneficial to physical and mental health.However, people have brought a series of problems when enjoying bicycle sharing. For example, someone brought the bike back to his hometown, someone used his own QR code to cheat the user'

24、;s money, someone parked the bike at will, some people even threw the bike into a ditch, a river and so on.I think people should love public resources and protect them, not destroy them. Only in this way our lives will be better because of the improvement of public facilities.【解析詳解】1. 題干解讀：本文是一篇議論文，

25、主要是針對共享單車給人們帶來的便利以及人們對共享單車的一些破壞行為的表述，以及提出的一些自己的看法，對帶來的便利和人們對其的破壞闡述的比較詳細，也是本文的 重點可以通過三個方面進行闡述。2. 例文點評：文章主要采取三段式，第一段主要說明共享單車給人們的生活帶來的便利好處，第二段主要寫了人們對共享單車所做的一些破壞行為，第三段主要寫了一些倡議，提倡人們熱愛公共資源。文章結(jié)構(gòu)比較緊密，語言通順，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹。3. 高分亮點：短語： be busy with ; instead of; be beneficial to； a series of； for example； not only but al

26、so。句型：sothat引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語從句；when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；I think +賓語從句。（四）共享單車(bike-sharing)被譽為中國現(xiàn)代新四大發(fā)明之一。如今廈門的大街小巷也隨處可見共享單車的身影。請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，簡要介紹共享單車的發(fā)展及使用方法，并表達一下你自己對共享單車的看法。DevelopmentFirst used in Holland,1965introduced in China in 2007been popular since 2016Instructionscan the QR code（ 二維碼）unlock the smart l

27、ockpay the billOpinionhealthy,.blocking（ 堵塞）the way,.要求：1 .必須包含所提示信息，字數(shù)100詞左右；2 .意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3 .請勿在文中使用真實姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。提示詞：shared bikes 共享的自行車【參考范文】With the development of the economy, shared bikes are seen everywhere. It was first used inHolland in 1965. It was introduced in China in 2007

28、 and it has been popular since 2016.How canwe use the shared bikes? Firstly, we need to scan the QR code if we want to use them.Secondly,when we get to our destination, we should unlock the smart lock. Finally, we need to pay the bill.Different people have different opinions about shared bikes. Some

29、people believe that ridingshared bikes is healthy. It can build up our body. However, others argues that it blocks the way. In my opinion, it is good to ride shared bikes, because it is good for our health. What' s more,we can enjoy beautiful scenery. Nevertheless, we should use them properly.【解

30、析詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)表格中所給出的內(nèi)容，簡要介紹共享單車的發(fā)展及使用方法，并表達 一下你自己對共享單車的看法。文章時態(tài)主要用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要是第一、第三人稱。 本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次 清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率； 詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要

31、點中可能要用 到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當 運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時注意語句要通順，詞 匯書寫無誤，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。常用表達1. It ' s our duty to save wate r2. As we know, water is very important to man,3. We can' t live without water.4. The amount of water which is suitable to

32、drink is less and less.5. But some people don ' t care about it.6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.our environment7. It s our duty to protect8. It is very important to take care of our environment9. We should not throw litter onto the gr

33、ound10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees11. We should plant more flowers and trees。12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.14. Trees are very helpfu

34、l and important for us.15. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.16. It ' s everyone ' s duty to love and protect the environment.寫作模板In recent days, we have to face I problem A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, （說明A的現(xiàn)狀）.Seco

35、nd, （舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀）.Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thi ng, （解決方法一）.For another （解決方法二）.Finally,（解決方法三）.Personally, I believe that （我的解決方法）好背篦文（一）Title : Are shared bikes good for our city life?你認為共享單車進入我們城市生活里，是利是弊？請表明你的態(tài)度，并詳細寫出理由。要求：

36、1.語言表達準確，短文連貫、通順；2 .短文包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；3 .詞數(shù)80左右?！緟⒖挤段摹緼re shared bikes good for our city life?The shared bikes like m obike can bring great convenience to people. You neednt lock themby simply using your smart phone. They can take you where the subway and bus don't go. And theycan be left an

37、ywhere in public for the next user. However, bad things happen.Somepeople damagethe QR code on the bike, or use their own lock, which causes trouble to other users.In my opinion, its difficult to turn these peopleideas in a short time.Therefore, bike-sharing companies like mobike need to do somethin

38、g. For example, those whodamage the bike should pay for their actions. Also, because people use their real name to register as a user, it ' s a good way to connect to one ' s personal credit.In the end, what I want to say is to take good care of public services.【名師點評】這是一篇話題作文。要表明你的態(tài)度，并詳細寫出理由

39、。（1）選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。（2）寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式、謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)。（3）表達限定的內(nèi)容有困難時，就要想到All roads lead to Rome.（條條大路通羅馬.）這句話，用變通的方法。單句寫出后，根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，重新排列組 合已寫成的句子。寫作中適當使用連詞注，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。（二）在廣州，越來越多學(xué)生騎共享單車（ the shar

40、ed bikes ）上學(xué)。如今共享單車到處都有。它給我們的 出行帶來了很多便利，但也帶來了一些問題。請你根據(jù)以下提示給學(xué)校英文報社寫一篇英文報道，談?wù)勀?對共享單車的看法。優(yōu)勢使用方便，用手機即可解鎖；便宜，半小時只需 0.5元；不良現(xiàn)象隨處亂停；有人偷車/破壞車；你的觀點?（至少一個理由）注意：1.詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。注：1.隨處亂停 park disorderly 2. 解鎖 unlockIn Guangzhou, more and more students begin to ride shared bikes t

41、o school. Wecan see those bikes everywhere.【參考范文】In Guangzhou, more and more students begin to ride the shared bikes to school. We can see those bikes everywhere. Surely, they bring us a lot of convenience while a lot of problems take place at the same time as well.Students like them because of the

42、following reasons. First,it ' s very convenient to use theshared bikes. They can unlock the shared bikes by simply using their phones. Second, it' s cheapto rent the shared bikes. It only costs 0.5 yuan for half an hour.However, there are some problems as well. Some people park the bikes dis

43、orderly. Some people break the bikes on purpose or even steal the bikes.In my opinion, people should learn how to use the shared bikes properly so that it can make our life easier and our city better.【解析詳解】本文屬于材料作文，要表達共享單車的便利和問題以及你對共享單車的看法。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成

44、了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如 surely, convenience, while, take place, as well, first, second, cost, however, on purpose 以及 in my opinion 。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)

45、容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（三）請根據(jù)以下信息，介紹你的一位朋友李明。要求如下：1 、七年級十班的一名學(xué)生，他總是遵守校規(guī)。2 、他通常騎共享單車去學(xué)校，7： 00 離開家，到達學(xué)校后吃早餐。3

46、、他每天花半小時鍛煉，看！他現(xiàn)在正在和同學(xué)們打籃球，他籃球打得好4、他想加入學(xué)?；@球俱樂部，但他媽媽不同意。共享單車agree v. 同意你認為李時該怎么辦？請你給李明提一兩點建議。提示詞：follow v. 遵守 a shared bike n.I have a good friend, Li Ming【參考范文】My good friendI have a good friend whose name is Li Ming. He is in Class 10, Grade 7. He always obeys the school rules. He usually rides a sh

47、ared bicycle to school, and leaves homeat 7:00. He has breakfast after arriving at school. He likes sports and plays basketball very well. He spends half an hour exercising every day. Look! He is playing basketball with his classmates now. He wanted to join the school basketball club, but his mother

48、 disagreed. I suggest him that he should explain the advantages of joining the basketball club to his mother, then his mother might agree to his request. Li Ming is my best friend, I like him.【解析詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如 in Class 10, Grade 7, ride a sharedbicycle , leave home, have breakfast ,

49、arrive at , like sports , play with , spend time doing , agree to 等。而并歹U句 He usually rides a shared bicycle to school, and leaves home at 7:00./ He wanted to join the school basketball club, but his mother disagreed. 和賓語從句 I suggest him that he should explain the advantages of joining the basketball club to his mother, then his mother mi