2008高三英語復(fù)習(xí)寫作講評課課件

1、高三復(fù)習(xí)寫作講評課高三復(fù)習(xí)寫作講評課Assessment & practice of WritingAssessment & practice of Writing 2008年全國高考考試大綱中，語文作文年全國高考考試大綱中，語文作文“每錯一每錯一個字扣一分，重復(fù)不計個字扣一分，重復(fù)不計”的新規(guī)，引起考生和家長的新規(guī)，引起考生和家長的極大關(guān)注。請你就以下要點給某英語報社寫一篇的極大關(guān)注。請你就以下要點給某英語報社寫一篇英語報道。英語報道。（不必翻譯新規(guī)定內(nèi)容不必翻譯新規(guī)定內(nèi)容）問題及分析問題及分析錯別字普遍（電腦普及；錯別字普遍（電腦普及；作業(yè)量大）作業(yè)量大）新規(guī)定的影響新規(guī)定的影響有助于學(xué)生

2、重視母語有助于學(xué)生重視母語;有助于學(xué)生提高母語水平有助于學(xué)生提高母語水平;你的你的建議建議 homework revisionThe computer is more and more widely used. Young people like to chat on line. When they are chatting, they dont care about their writting. There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. T

3、hey cant remember the characters. To deal with the situation, the government has carried out a new policy. It will make people pay attention to Chinese. It will help students learn Chinese well. Its high time that we took action. We dont have much time. We can develop our country by improving our mo

4、ther tongue first.How do you grade it（定檔）（定檔）?And why?homework showASSESSMENTstructureIs the article divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence?If not, come up with one.contentAre all the details stated?If not, add the missing details.Is everything to the point(切題切題)? LanguageDoes the

5、writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes?If yes, correct them.Is there any advanced vocabulary（高級詞匯）（高級詞匯）?If yes, underline them.Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?If yes, underline them.Lets improve it:ASSESSMENTstructureIs the article divided into parts? Does each part have

6、a topic sentence?If not, come up with one.Lets improve it:contentAre all the details stated?If not, add the missing details.Is everything to the point(切題切題)?Lets improve it: LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes?If yes, correct them.Is there any advanced vocabulary（高級

7、詞匯）（高級詞匯）?If yes, underline them.Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?If yes, underline them.Lets improve it:Summary:paragraphstopic sentence detailsto the pointadvanced vocabularysentence patternslinking wordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingfew mistakes目前，不少年輕人在寫作中喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。某英語雜志社就此話題邀請中學(xué)生發(fā)表看

8、法。請你參考所給要點，寫一篇英語短文。 有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：幽默；時尚；好玩有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：有錯別字，不利于語文學(xué)習(xí)；有時難以理解你的看法： Nowadays, many teenagers like to use the web language in their writing. Some students think it is humorous and cool. They use the web language. They feel its fun. Some think it is difficult. They cannot understand. When they are chat

9、ting on line, they dont care about their writing. There have some wrongly-written characters. It is bad for Chinese learning. I think we can use the web language and we can express ourselves more freely.Improve the composition. Focus ontopic sentences, advanced vocabulary & patterns and linking word

10、s. You cannot teach a man anything; you can only help him find it within himself.- Galileo GalileiHomeworkHomeworkFurther improve the writing according to the assessment form. Make your final copy as neat as possible.Lets divide it into parts:Part.1Part.2Part.3The computer remember the characters.Th

11、e government help students learn Chinese well.With limited time to go by improving our mother tongue first.Part 2:To deal with the situation, the government carry out a new policy.Part 3: As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action.Part 1: It is common that there are many wrongly-wri

12、tten characters in a students composition.Come up with the topic sentences:A topic sentence tells the reader what a certain part is about.Topic sentence for Part 2Topic sentence for Part 3Topic sentence for Part 1computerhomeworkraise the awareness ofhave a positive effect onWhich ending do you like

13、 best? Why? In my opinion, the policy is beneficial to us. It makes sense in protecting our culture. b) As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action. We should collect the mistakes and review them frequently. Only by hard working can we achieve our goal. they dont care about their wri

14、tting. There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. writingaremuch_. _, when young people chat online, they attach little importance to their writing. _, with so much homework to do, they have trouble memorizing the characters. The new policy is in

15、tended to deal with the situation. Raising the social awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning. _, its high time that we took action. _, we should refer to a dictionary for unknown characters. Second, collect the mistakes and review them frequently. In a wor

16、d, only by working hard can we achieve our goal. There are several reasons behind. B. As far as I am concerned C. For example D. Moreover. E. First of allACDBE When they are chatting, they dont care their writing. Every day, they have much homework. They are too busy to remember the characters. It w

17、ill make people pay attention to our mother tongue. It will help students learn Chinese well.Can you improve them?When they are chatting, they dont care their writing.When chatting, they dont care their writing.(Ellipsis 省略句省略句)Every day, they have much homework. They cant remember the characters.Th

18、ey have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters.(sothat; fail to do)withWith so much homework to do, they have trouble in remembering the characters.It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue. raise the awareness ofIt will raise the awareness of our mother tongue

19、. It will help students learn Chinese well. have a positive effect onIt will have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. It will have a positive effect on students Chinese learning._the awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning.(non-verbal非謂語）非謂語）(not onlybut also)It will not only raise the awareness of our mother tongue, but also have a positive effect on students Chinese lear