2020年考研英語(yǔ)高分寫作技巧-真題版

1、、真題小作文2011張劍老師文章Dear Xiao Ping,How are things with you? I watched the film“2012”n DVDyesterday and found it awonderful film. I strongly recommend it to you.The film is about an ancient prophesy which forecasts the end of theworld in the year 2012.Several ancient civilizations, such as Jewish and May

2、an, have foretold thedisaster and therefore made the story look rather believable . But the film isless an adaptation of the prophesy than a story of escape from the disaster.The film explores the complicated behaviors of people confronted withdeath and asks a soul-searching question about human nat

3、ure: Is therealtruism or complete selflessness when people face the final moment of ones life? I find the film one of thebest movies produced by Hollywood in rece nt years.I wish you would not work too hard in your study and would find time torelax and enjoyfilms from time to time.Sincerely yoursLiM

4、ing語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)1. wonderful a.精彩的2. forecast/foretold v.預(yù)言3. believable a.可信的4.less A than B不是A而是B5. adaptati on n.改編6. explore v探究7. soul-search ing a.令人深思的思路解析第一段：首先用How are things with you?寒暄，接著寫明寫信的目的：看了一部很好的電 影，推薦給對(duì)方。第二段：本段從劇情（1-2句）和電影的深刻意義即對(duì)人性的拷問（3-4句，其中第3句為過(guò)渡句）兩方面入手介紹該電影值得推薦的主要理由。最后一句對(duì)該片進(jìn)行總體評(píng)價(jià)。第三段：以學(xué)

5、業(yè)和休閑平衡為理由，建議對(duì)方觀看電影，回應(yīng)主題并且再次與對(duì)方進(jìn)行寒暄。萬(wàn)能模板Dear Xiao Ping,L_m_wr.iting .tQ.reco.mmend. you一.a. wonderful, film.“2012”w atched.lhis. film. yesterday . and. found it one of the bestmovies produced by Hollywood in recent years.This film is recommendable first because of its interesting plots. It isabout an

6、 ancient prophesy which forecasts the end of the world in the year2012. Several ancient civilizations, such as Jewish and Mayan, haveforetold the disaster and therefore made the story look rather believable.This film is appealing also because it explores the complicated behaviors ofpeople confron te

7、d with death and asks a soul-searchi ng questi on abouthuma n n ature: Is there complete selflessness when people face the finalmoment of ones life?I am sure you will love this film. Hope to discuss it with you later.Sincerely yoursLi Mi ng參考譯文親愛的小平：我寫信向你推薦一個(gè)精彩的電影一2012。我昨天看了這部電影，發(fā)現(xiàn)它是好萊塢這幾年出品的最好的電影之一

8、。這個(gè)電影值得推薦首先在于它精彩的故事情節(jié)。它關(guān)于一個(gè)古代預(yù)言， 其預(yù)見世界將于2012年毀滅。一些古代文明，比如猶太和瑪雅都預(yù)言了這場(chǎng)災(zāi)難，因此使這個(gè)故事顯得非 ?？尚?。這個(gè)電影吸引人還在于它探索了人們面對(duì)死亡的復(fù)雜行為，詢問了一個(gè)有關(guān)人性的令人深思的問題：當(dāng)人們面臨生命盡頭時(shí)，會(huì)徹底的無(wú)私嗎？我相信你會(huì)喜歡這部電影。希望今后和你討論它。誠(chéng)摯的，李明2010張劍老師文章Volu nteers for Intern ati onalConferenceThe PostgraduatesAssociistiioiviting applications from students whoare w

9、illing to be volunteers for an international conference on globalization.A group of ten volunteers will be recruited to provide secretarial support forthe conference organization. They are required to work an average of 8hours per week from 10 June to 10 October 2010. Can didates should besec on d-y

10、ear graduate stude nts of this uni versity and should speak fairlygood En glish, preferably with TEM 4 certificate. Applications, containingCVs of the applicants, should be sent to PostgraduatesAssociatio n, 15Uni versity Avenue, before 1 May 2010.PostgraduatesAssociati on語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)1.invite v.征求，邀請(qǐng)2. recr

11、uite v.招聘3. provide secretarial support提供秘書工作服務(wù)4. be required to do被要求做.5. a n average of平均思路解析整篇啟事顯得比較正式，第1句開門見山提出研究生會(huì)正在招聘國(guó)際會(huì)議志愿者；第2-3句具體介紹招聘職位相關(guān)事宜包括招聘人數(shù)、應(yīng)聘者所需從事的基本工作性質(zhì)和時(shí)間；第4句規(guī)定應(yīng)聘者的條件；第5句介紹如何應(yīng)聘。萬(wàn)能模板Recruitme nt Announ ceme ntThe Postgraduates Association is inviting applica tions from studentswho a

12、re willing to provide secretarial support for an international conferenceon globalization. Ten volunteers will be recruited and they are required towork an average of 8 hours per week from 10 June to 10 October 2010. Candidates should be sec on d-year graduate stude nts of this uni versity andshould

13、 be able to speak fairly good En glish, preferably with TEM 4certificate.Whoever is interested should send his application to PostgraduatesASsociation, 15 University Avenue, before 1 May 2010.PostgraduatesAssociati on參考譯文招聘啟事研究生會(huì)正邀請(qǐng)?jiān)敢鉃槿蚧瘒?guó)際會(huì)議提供秘書工作服務(wù)的同學(xué)進(jìn)行工作申請(qǐng)。我們將招募10名志愿者，他們將在2010年6月10日至2010年10月10日期間

14、平均每周工作8小時(shí)。申請(qǐng)人應(yīng)該是該校研究生二年級(jí)學(xué)生，且應(yīng)該能夠說(shuō)流利的英語(yǔ)，最好有專業(yè)四級(jí)證書。感興趣的人可以將申請(qǐng)于2010年5月1日前送到大學(xué)路15號(hào)研究生會(huì)。研究生會(huì)2009張劍老師文章Dear editor,The ban on the free use of plastic bags has come into effect since lastyear, but I am afraid the situati on in this city does not give us any reas on forcelebrati on . We still face a lot of

15、white pollution around the streets, in thetrees, and on the lakes. People do not seem to care whether their actionshave damaged the environment.Urgent actions should be taken to deal with this problem. I suggestthat publicity pamphlets be printed and delivered to homes in the city toraise peopleawar

16、eness of the environmental crisis. Laws should be madeto impose heavier punishment on supermarkets, departme nt stores or anybus in esses that are still offeri ng free plastic bags to customers. We canalso encourage people to use re-usable bags, such as cloth or paper bags,and subsidise the manufact

17、urers of these bags. If these actions are put intoplace , I believe we shall see enormous cha nges a year from now.YourssincerelyLiMing語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)1. the ban on對(duì).的禁令2. come into effect生效3. does not give us any reason for celebration沒有理由慶祝4. urge nt actions立即行動(dòng)5. publicity pamphlets宣傳冊(cè)6. raise peoples aware提

18、高s人的.意識(shí)7. impose heavier punishment on對(duì).實(shí)施更重的處罰8. be put into place實(shí)施思路解析第一段：第1-2句介紹限塑令不成功的客觀情形：第1句總述情形不容樂觀；第2句舉例說(shuō)明白色污染的表現(xiàn)。第3句指出限塑令不成功的主觀情形：人們似乎不在乎其行為對(duì)環(huán)境造成的危害。第二段：第1句總述，提出應(yīng)該采取措施。第2-4句提出減少塑料袋使用的具體措施：第2句提出應(yīng)該印刷、分發(fā)傳單提高人們對(duì)環(huán)境危機(jī)的意識(shí)；第3句提出應(yīng)該嚴(yán)肅懲罰免費(fèi)提供塑料袋的商家；第4句提出應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)人們使用可重復(fù)使用的袋子，并補(bǔ)助生產(chǎn)可重復(fù)使用的袋子的廠家。第5句指出建議實(shí)施的效果。萬(wàn)

19、能模板Dear editor,Im writ ing to express my deep concern about the in effective ness ofthe ban on the free use of plastic bags. Although the ban has come intoeffect since last year, serious white pollution still exists around the streets,in the trees, and on the lakes. Whats more worrisome, people do n

20、ot seemto care whether using plastic bags has damaged the environment.To deal with this problem, more actions should be taken. Publicitypamphlets should be printed and delivered to raise peoples awareness ofthis environment crisis. Laws should be made to impose heavier puni shment on supermarkets, d

21、epartme nt stores or any bus in esses that are stilloffering free plastic bags to customers. People should be encouraged touse re-usable bags, such as cloth or paper bags, and the manufacturers ofthese bags should be subsidized. If these actions are put into place, adesirable cha nge can be graduall

22、y achieved.YourssincerelyLiMing參考譯文 親愛的編輯：我寫信來(lái)傾述我對(duì)限塑令沒有取得相應(yīng)成效的擔(dān)憂。雖然從去年開始，限塑令開始實(shí)施，街道、樹木、湖面上仍然存在嚴(yán)重的白色污染。更糟糕的是，人們似乎不在意使用塑料袋是否會(huì)損害環(huán)境。解決這個(gè)問題，應(yīng)該采取更多的行動(dòng)。 應(yīng)該印刷和分發(fā)宣傳冊(cè)以提高人們的對(duì)環(huán)境危機(jī) 的意識(shí)。應(yīng)該制定法律對(duì)仍然向顧客提供免費(fèi)塑料袋的超市、商場(chǎng)和其它企業(yè)實(shí)施更重的處罰。應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)人們使用可重復(fù)利用的袋子，比如布袋或紙袋。生產(chǎn)這些袋子的廠家應(yīng)該有補(bǔ)貼。如果這些行動(dòng)能得到落實(shí)，所期望的改變會(huì)逐漸實(shí)現(xiàn)。誠(chéng)摯的，李明2008張劍老師文章Dear Bob,A

23、fter a pleasant journey I have arrived safely in Beijing. In my luggage,however, I discovered with great surprise the CD which you had kin dly lentme earlier on. I do not know how it en ded up in my bag, but it must be by amistake.I am sincerely sorry for this, but I have already put the CD into a p

24、arceland sent it back to you by registered mail. If everything goes smoothly , thepost office told me, you shall get the parcel in a weeks time.My study in Canada was a happy time and your wonderfulaccommodation added much tothe pleasure of my stay. I believe this experie nee will rema in in my memo

25、rythe rest of my life . If ever you have a cha nee to come to Chin a, I shall behere to welcome you.YourssincerelyLiMing語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)1. have arrived safely已安全抵達(dá)2. with great surprise十分驚奇3. end up最終4. everything goes smoothly事情進(jìn)展順禾U5. accommodati on n.提供食宿6. add much to the pleasure增加了愉悅之情7. rema in in my mem

26、ory the rest of my life在今后的歲月里我將一直記得思路解析第一段：第1-2句交代寫信的原因 一在抵達(dá)北京后發(fā)現(xiàn)借的CD沒有歸還；第3句提出此錯(cuò)誤是次意外。第二段：第1句表示歉意并提出彌補(bǔ)措施一已經(jīng)將CD寄回去。第2句補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明郵寄的CD的抵達(dá)日期。第三段：第1句回顧在加拿大的美好時(shí)光以及對(duì)方對(duì)自己的照顧；第2句在第1句的基礎(chǔ)上提出永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記加拿大的經(jīng)歷；第3句表示期望有機(jī)會(huì)能回報(bào)對(duì)方。萬(wàn)能模板Dear Bob,After a pleasa nt journey I have arrived safely in Beijing. As I was unpack ing my

27、 luggage, I discovered with great surprise the CD which you hadkin dly lent me. I am sorry I have forgotte n to return the CD. To make up formy carelessness, I have already mailed the CD to you by registered mail. Ifeverything goes smoothly, you will get it in a weeksetimMy study in Canada was a hap

28、py experienee and your wonderfulaccommodation added much to the pleasure of my stay. I believe thisexperie nee will remain in my memory the rest of my life and hope I will havea cha nee to repay you for your kin dly help.Yours sin cerely Li Mi ng參考譯文親愛的鮑勃：愉快的旅行之后，我已經(jīng)安全抵達(dá)北京。當(dāng)我收拾行李時(shí)，我吃驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)你好心借給我 的CD。抱

29、歉，我忘記歸還CD了。為了彌補(bǔ)我的粗心，我已經(jīng)將CD通過(guò)掛號(hào)信寄給你了。 如果事情順利，你會(huì)在一星期后收到它。在加拿大的求學(xué)是愉快的經(jīng)歷，你的熱情接待大大增加了我的愉悅之情。我相信在今后的日子里，我將一直記得這個(gè)經(jīng)歷，希望有機(jī)會(huì)回報(bào)你的好心幫助。誠(chéng)摯的，李明2007張劍老師文章Dear Sir or Madam,I am a student from Computer Scienee Department of this university. Iam a frequent user of the university library. I have benefited a great dea

30、lfrom the books which I borrow there.However, I find that we do not have many new books on ComputerScience. Especially small is the collection of books from foreign publishers.Therefore, I suggest that more recent books on Computer Scienee andmore foreign books be purchased by your library, so that

31、students like meshall be able to keep up with new developme ntsin the IT field.Thank you very much for giving attention to my letter.YourssincerelyLiMing語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)1. frequent user?？?. ben efit a great deal from受益匪淺3. collectio n n.收藏品4. purchase v.購(gòu)買5. keep up with new developments跟上.的發(fā)展思路解析第一段：第1句介紹自己的身份

32、。第2-3句開始引入主題，介紹自己與圖書館的關(guān)系，第2句說(shuō)自己是常客，第3句表明自己從借書中獲益良多。第二段：第1-2句轉(zhuǎn)折指出圖書館服務(wù)的不足：計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)領(lǐng)域新書少以及外國(guó)出版的書更少。第3句提出相應(yīng)建議（購(gòu)買計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)領(lǐng)域新書、購(gòu)買外國(guó)書籍）以及建議的積極意 義（學(xué)生能跟上IT發(fā)展）。第三段：為客套語(yǔ)，感謝對(duì)方閱讀自己的信。萬(wàn)能模板Dear Sir or Madam,I am a stude nt from Computer Scie nee Departme nt of this uni versityand also a freque nt user of the uni versit

33、y library. I have ben efited a greatdeal from the books I borrow there. To further improve the service there, Iwould like to put forward two suggestio ns.Firstly, I suggest that more recent books on Computer Science,especially foreign books, be purchased by your library, since I find that thereare f

34、ew new books on Computer Science in library and rather smallercollection of books from foreign publishers. Secondly, I hope the openingtime of the library can be adjusted, so that students can borrow books onSaturday as well.I will be appreciative, if those improvements can be achieved. Thank youver

35、y much for giving attention to my letter.Yours sin cerely Li Mi ng參考譯文親愛的先生或女士：我是本校計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)院的一名學(xué)生，同時(shí)也是大學(xué)圖書館的一名?？汀Ｎ覐膱D書館借的圖書中獲益頗多。為了進(jìn)一步改善圖書館的服務(wù)，我想提兩點(diǎn)建議。第一，我建議圖書館多買一些計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)領(lǐng)域的新書，尤其是外文圖書，因?yàn)槲野l(fā)現(xiàn)圖書館里很少計(jì)算機(jī)領(lǐng)域的新書，外國(guó)出版的新書就更少了。第二， 我希望圖書館的開放時(shí)間能做出調(diào)整，因此學(xué)生在周六也能借書。如果實(shí)現(xiàn)上述改善，我將很感激。謝謝你對(duì)來(lái)信的關(guān)注。誠(chéng)摯的，李明2006張劍老師文章Dear Sir or Mad

36、am,I am a university student from Beijing. I would like to offer my limitedfinancial help to support a school pupil in West China.Although I am not rich, I am living a better life than many children in thewest. I know some of them are dropping out of school because of financialproblems . This is mos

37、t regretful because if they grow up without education,they will have little chance of changing their life and will probably rema in inpoverty all the time.Therefore, I would like to give up some entertainment and use the 200Yuan which is saved each month to support a girl in Sichuan Province tofinis

38、h her primary school. She should be 7 or 8 years old and should be verykee n to go to school. Can you find a can didate for me?Your kind reply will be deeply appreciated.Yourssincerely,LiMing語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)1. financial help經(jīng)濟(jì)援助2. financial problems經(jīng)濟(jì)困難3. regretful a.惋惜4. give up some entertainment放棄娛樂5. be kee

39、n to do迫切想要做思路解析第一段：自我介紹并且說(shuō)明寫信的目的一愿意捐助西部小學(xué)生。第二段：論述愿意捐助的理由。第1句論述理由1:自己自身比西部人更富裕；第2-3句論述理由2:一些人因?yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)緊張而輟學(xué)， 而他們可能因缺乏教育而永遠(yuǎn)不能改變貧窮的命 運(yùn)。第三段：介紹資助具體細(xì)節(jié)。第1句介紹資助計(jì)劃，提出每個(gè)月捐助200元，以幫助完成小學(xué)學(xué)業(yè)。第2句指明受助者的條件，提出受助者年齡要7、8歲并對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)非?？释５?句回應(yīng)寫信的目的，希望對(duì)方找到合適的受助者。第四段：為客套語(yǔ)，指出對(duì)對(duì)方回復(fù)的感激。萬(wàn)能模板Dear Sir or Madam,I m writ ing to ask if you c

40、an recomme nd a child as the recipie nt of myfinan cial assista nce.I am a uni versity stude nt from Beijing and would like to finan ciallysupport a girl in Sichua n Provi nce to finish her primary school. The propercan didate should be 7 or 8 years old and should be very kee n to go toschool.I choo

41、se to help a girl, because girls are more likely to drop out ofschool because of finan cial stress. Those girls without educati on will havelittle cha nce to grow out of poverty trap. Therefore, although I am not rich, Iwould like to offer my help. I will give up some en terta inment and use the200

42、Yuan which is saved each month to pay her tuiti on.Your kind reply will be deeply appreciated.Yours sincerely, Li Mi ng參考譯文親愛的先生或女士：我寫信來(lái)詢問您是否可以推薦一個(gè)孩子作為我經(jīng)濟(jì)援助的對(duì)象。我是一名來(lái)自北京的大學(xué)生，希望資助一名四川的女孩完成小學(xué)學(xué)業(yè)。合適的人選應(yīng)該7、8歲，并且應(yīng)該很期望上學(xué)。我選擇幫助女生，是因?yàn)榕⒏锌赡芤驗(yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)壓力而退學(xué)。沒有受過(guò)教育的女生幾乎沒有機(jī)會(huì)擺脫貧困。因此，雖然我并不富裕，我仍然愿意提供我的幫助。我將放棄一些娛樂， 用每個(gè)月節(jié)省下

43、的200元錢付她的學(xué)費(fèi)。如蒙回復(fù)，不勝感激。誠(chéng)摯的， 李明2005張劍老師文章Dear Mr. Wan g,I was recruited by your magaz ine two mon ths ago. I have bee n working as an editor at the sports department. Every day I read and select thearticles which are to be used in the magazine. I have bee n work ing hard.But after two mon ths, I find

44、that I am not suitable for the job. I havetried my best to do the job well, but I cannot. While at university, I wastrained as a reporter. I was determined to be a journ alist, going around thecountry to in terview people and report even ts. But at the magaz ine I haveno chanee of realizing my dream

45、 .For this reas on, I have decided to quit. I am sorry for any troublewhich might arise because of my departure . I am sure you will find a betterperson to replace me. I wish you all well.Yourssincerely,LiMing語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)1. recruit v.招聘2. select v.選擇3. be suitable for對(duì).適合4. be trai ned as被訓(xùn)練成為5. be determin

46、ed to do決定做6. realize sbs dream實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想7. departure n.離開8. replace v.代替思路解析第一段：對(duì)自己進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單介紹。第1句說(shuō)明自己入職時(shí)間；第2-4句說(shuō)明自己工作職位、性質(zhì)和狀態(tài)。第二段：說(shuō)明自己辭職的理由。第1句總述原因：工作不適合自己；第2-4句具體說(shuō)明工作哪些方面不適合自己：第2句指出能力不足以完成工作；第3-4句指出自己理想職業(yè)與現(xiàn)實(shí)不符。第三段：第1句提出辭職。第2句對(duì)自己的行為表示歉意。第3-4句對(duì)工作單位今后的工作做出美好的展望。萬(wàn)能模板Dear Mr. Wan g,I was recruited by your magaz

47、ine two mon ths ago. I have bee n working hard as an editor at the sports department. Every day I read and selectthe articles which are to be used in the magaz in e. I am grateful for thisopport unity to work here. However, I am afraid that I have to quit my job.After two mon ths, I still find that

48、I am not suitable for the job. Firstly, Ihave tried my best to do the job well, but I cannot. In addition, I was trainedas a reporter at university, but at the magazine I have no chance of realizingmy dream to be a journalist, going around the country toin terview people and report even ts.I am sorr

49、y for any trouble which might arise because of my departure.I am sure you will find a better person to replace me. I wish you all well.Yourssincerely,LiMing參考譯文親愛的王先生：我于2個(gè)月前加入您的雜志社。我在體育部一直努力工作。每天我閱讀選擇將會(huì)被用在 雜志上的文章。我很感激能有在這工作的機(jī)會(huì)。但恐怕我不得不辭職。兩個(gè)月后，我仍然發(fā)現(xiàn)我不適合這份工作。首先，我盡力做好工作，但卻不能。其次， 我在大學(xué)被訓(xùn)練成為記者，但在這幾乎不可能實(shí)現(xiàn)我成

50、為走遍全國(guó)采訪、報(bào)道的記者的愿望。對(duì)因我的離開而可能有的問題我深表歉意。我相信您能找到個(gè)更好的人選替代我。希望您一切順利。誠(chéng)摯的，李明二、真題大作文2011張劍老師文章In the picture we see a traditional wooden boat with a boatmansteering it with a long wooden pole. In the boat, two tourists seem to beenjoying not just the cruise , but also the food they bring on the boat. One ofth

51、em throws the unwan ted left-over food and the wrapp ing paper into thelake.These two men are obviously not the first to throw food and packagesinto the lake, which has already bee n littered with a great deal of similarrubbish. From what looks now on the lake, it has already been heavilypolluted wi

52、th the garbage that tourists left behind, or what thepicture-caption calls“Leftrfv&Durism”.The picture strikes me as a thought-provokingcriticism of touristsbad habits. It forces usto review our behavior and ponder if we should only think of our ownpleasure and convenience, and ignore the order and

53、tidi ness of the placeswe visit. It forces us to recon sider our relati on ship with nature and ponderwhat we should do to make our activities friendly to the environment . I knowfrom n ews reports that, not just is such bad tourist behavior tak ing place inside our own country, but some of our coun

54、trymen are also taking their badhabits abroad. In this sense, the picture poses challe nging questi ons onthe relati on ship betwee n in dividual behavior and public interests, as wellas on our very idea of morality.Obviously, many of our coun tryme n n eed educati on, not just inenvironmen tal prot

55、ecti on, but also in moral prin ciple . Every one shouldknow that n atural beauty bel ongs to all the society. No in dividual has theright to damage or litter the beautiful environment.語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)1. traditional wooden boat傳統(tǒng)木船2. steer v .駕駛3. seem to do似乎做某事4. cruise n.乘船旅行5. u nwa nted a.不需要的6eft-over n.所

56、剩之物（近義：rubbish, garbage）7. wrapping paper包裝紙8. package n.包裝紙9. be littered with到處丟棄10. heavily pollute嚴(yán)重污染11. strike sb as給某人.印象12. thought-provoking a.令人深思13. review our behavior審視自己的行為14. pon der v.思考15. relationship with nature與自然之間的關(guān)系16. friendly to the environment對(duì)環(huán)境友好17. poses challenging ques

57、tions on提出挑戰(zhàn)性的問題18. public interests公眾利益19. moral principle道德規(guī)范思維解析第一段：以船為中心按地點(diǎn)順序展開描寫。第1句描寫船夫正在撐船；第2-3句描寫船內(nèi)兩人行為。第二段：第1句將向湖里扔垃圾的兩人的特殊行為延伸到所有旅行者的普遍性行為；第2句揭示出湖面被旅游者扔棄的垃圾污染了，點(diǎn)出圖片標(biāo)題旅游之“余”。第三段：第1句總述圖片批判了旅行者的壞行為，令人深思。第25句論述圖片帶給我們的思索，從行為T人與自然關(guān)系T道德觀，逐漸深入：第2句指出圖片讓我們思考我們是否應(yīng)該只顧自己而不顧環(huán)境；第3句指出圖片讓我們重新思考與自然的關(guān)系，思考如何才

58、能與環(huán)境保持友好關(guān)系；第4句提出游客的不良行為不僅在國(guó)內(nèi)有體現(xiàn)，甚至帶到了國(guó)外；第5句在第4句的基礎(chǔ)上提出，圖片提出事關(guān)個(gè)人行為和公眾利益的關(guān)系以及道德的問題。第三段：探討如何解決問題：第1句指出需要在保護(hù)環(huán)境，及道德規(guī)范方面教育民眾；第2-3句從正反兩個(gè)方面論述個(gè)人應(yīng)該采取的行為，第2句說(shuō)每個(gè)人應(yīng)該意識(shí)到環(huán)境屬于社會(huì)，第3句說(shuō)每個(gè)人都沒有權(quán)利破壞環(huán)境。萬(wàn)能模板In the picture we see a traditional wooden boat with a boatmansteering it with a long wooden pole. In the boat, two to

59、urists seem to beenjoying not just the cruise, but also the food they bring on the boat. One ofthem throws the unwan ted left-over food and the wrapp ing paper into thelake. These two men are obviously not the first to throw food and packagesinto the lake, since the lake has already bee n littered w

60、ith a great deal ofsimilar rubbish. It is sad that the lake has already been heavily polluted withthe garbage that tourists left behind, or what the picture-caption calls“Leftvers of Tourism”.The picture strikes me as a thought-provoking criticism of sometourists bad habits. Those immoral tourists o