2013高考英語書面表達講義及訓練（40）參考范文 書面表達精選

1、2013高考英語書面表達講義及訓練（40）及參考范文：書面表達精選仿真訓練3（做題時間：10分鐘）短文改錯Christie was one of my best friend at high school. 1. _At that time, we often spend time together. 2. _Thank to her help, I made great progress inn my 3. _study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 4. _other words, we would be separated for

2、 long time.5. _Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 6. _my best wishes to him. She said it was the beat 7. _gift she has ever had. From then on, weve 8. _kept touch with each other through e-mails. I 9. _look forward to see her again in the near future. 10. _解題技巧點評1friend friends：考查數(shù)的一致

3、性。one of + 可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)。2spend spent：考查時態(tài)的一致性。文章開頭和At that time都表明時間為過去。3Thank Thanks：慣用法thanks to sth. / sb. ：多虧了。45for a long time：考查冠詞的慣用法。6去掉off：leaving：名詞/動名詞：離開。7him her：考查人稱的一致性。通過上文多次出現(xiàn)的she或her可知Christie是個女孩。8has had：考查時態(tài)的一致性。9kept in touch：考查固定短語。10see seeing：考查非謂語動詞。look forward to + 名詞/動名詞：盼望某事

4、/做某事。仿真訓練4（做題時間：10分鐘）短文改錯After five years away in my hometown, I find that 1. the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed 2. a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop 3. across the street from our middle school were gone. 4. There exist now a park that has a small river runnin

5、g 5. through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and 6. Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports 7. center has been built in their place. The market at the comer of 8. Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to 9. a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to

6、our middle 10. school is still there.解題技巧點評1in from：此句表示離開應用from；2living live：used to do sth.表示過去常常做某事，而現(xiàn)在不在做了；3older old：這里表示“老的、舊的”，不含比較級；4were are：表示現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)不在了，應是現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；5exist exists：There be 句型中的謂語動詞應與be后面的第一個主語來決定，a park為單數(shù)，故謂語動詞也用單數(shù)；6正確；7a：根據(jù)謂語是單數(shù)，此句應是：一個體育中心建成，故sports前加不定冠詞；8their its：指代錯誤，根據(jù)句意是指這

7、個城市，應用its；9been：此句不應用被動結構，應用主動形式，故將been去掉；10Besides But：根據(jù)句意，前、后句是轉折，故將besides改為but。仿真訓練5（做題時間：10分鐘）短文改錯Hi Susan, Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your 1. _bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it 2. _back to you before four in the afternoon，and I 3. _was hold up on my way back. Just before

8、I4. _turned corner of Park Street. I happened to 5. _see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her 6. _mother needed help. So I helped them going to 7. _the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and 8. _a half hour and made sure that the girl 9. _were all right. I hope you can understand.10. _Th

9、ank you! Li Ling 解題技巧點評1去掉第二個to：考查動詞用法。return當“返還”講是及物動詞，后直接跟賓語。2mean改為meant：考查時態(tài)。meant to do sth.：本打算做某事（但沒做成）。3and改為but：考查邏輯。通過前后句可看出此處表示轉折。4hold改為held：考查語態(tài)。be held up：5turned the corner：考查冠詞。the corner of Park Street：的拐角處。6正確；7going改為go：考查非謂語動詞。help sb. (to) do sth.：不定式做賓補。8here改為there：考查邏輯。the表示

10、the nearest hospital。9hour改為hours：考查數(shù)的一致性。 10were改為was：考查主謂一致。*結束書面表達某日，你和朋友正在大街上散步。這時，一輛小車撞倒了一個騎車的女孩。女孩的腳血流不止，你用所學的急救常識為她施救你朋友給急救中心打電話。最后，女孩脫離了危險，她的父母非常感謝你們。請將你的這次經(jīng)歷寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文，寄給英文報社。思路點撥這是一篇以敘事為主的記敘文，主要講述的是my friend and I的經(jīng)歷。寫作時，必須按要求以第一人稱的口吻，先對所給出的信息要點進行加工整合，包括時間、地點、經(jīng)過、急救措施等，最后是女孩父母的感激。時態(tài)可考慮以

11、一般過去時為主。范文借鑒One day, my friend and I were walking along the street when we saw a car knocked a girl off her bicycle. We rushed to help her. We found her leg bleeding badly. I had learned some knowledge about first aid before, so I left her where she was. Quickly I found a clean handkerchief and pres

12、sed it onto the bleeding point and held it there.Meanwhile my friend went to telephone the First Aid Center. We were staying with the girl until the doctors and her parents came.Soon the girl came round. How grateful her parents to us!亮點回放此篇記敘文覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點，敘述清楚、說明簡單、達意。作者使用了一些較高級詞匯和較復雜結構，如walk along th

13、e street, knock a girl off, rush to help her, some knowledge about first aid before等；連接詞使用自然，如one day, quickly, meanwhile, soon等；使用了多種復雜句，如when和until引導的時間狀語從句，感嘆句How grateful her parents to us！等等。書面表達最近，李越被評為你們班的“每周之星”。請你根據(jù)她的事跡(在上周六下午，不顧天氣炎熱，為班級選購歌詠比賽服裝)，用英語為班級板報寫一篇100120個詞的短文。你的文章應包括下列要點：1李越的事跡及其對同

14、學的影響；2你的評論。注意：1.文章的標題和開頭已給出(不計入詞數(shù))。2參考詞匯：singing contest歌詠比賽costume 服裝Star Student of the WeekLi Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week”for what she did for our class._范文借鑒Star Student of the WeekLi Yue has been awarded the title of“Star Student of the Week”for what she did for

15、our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and s

16、electing. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.Li Yue is always warm­hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Th

17、erefore, she deserves the honor and we would learn from her.*結束書面表達假如你是David，你的朋友Linda最近很煩，因為父母對他要求很嚴格，整天讓他學習，禁止他做自己想干的事情，比如上網(wǎng)、和朋友玩等，請你給他寫封信，對他進行心理疏導，并提出一些建議。應包括以下要點：1簡述自己的類似的經(jīng)歷；2提出至少兩條建議；3詞數(shù)120左右(開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù))。Dear Linda，I can understand how you feel. When I was young，_思路點撥這是一篇應用文，要求根據(jù)提示進行寫作。寫作的

18、關鍵是介紹自己的經(jīng)歷以及提出建議。寫作時要注意格式，并適當增加細節(jié)，使文章連貫、完整。范文借鑒Dear_Linda，I_can_understand_how_you_feel._When_I_was_young,_I had the same experience with you. But after I talked to my parents, we had a better understanding of each other. So try to communicate with your parents to let them know that you are wise eno

19、ugh to manage your own business well. To understand them better, always put yourself in their position. Don't you think that all parents in the world love their children even though they are sometimes strict? If you can deal with your time and money wisely, I am sure that your parents will trust

20、 you and let you enjoy more freedom.By the way, it's understandable that your parents ask you to put your studies in the first place.I hope my advice is of some help to you.Yours，David亮點回放本文要點齊全，詞匯豐富，句式多樣。在語言的運用上，作者根據(jù)表達的需要，靈活使用了過去時、現(xiàn)在時等時態(tài)，表達準確，語言地道。此外作者還使用了一些高級的句式，如：名詞性從句“it's understandable

21、 that your parents ask you to put your studies in the first place”，狀語從句“even though they are sometimes strict”，這使文章增色不少。最后一句話“I hope my advice is of some help to you.”起到了畫龍點睛的作用。*結束仿真訓練6（做題時間：10分鐘）短文改錯假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處；每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 ()，并在其下面

22、寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃橫線，并在該下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. As the old man looked over the th

23、ing on the yard that were to be sold, he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card say: “25 cents each.” “You will never sell these for that much.” he told Nick. Convinced, Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moments delay, my neighhor picked up the box but announced: “Ill take them.” 解題技巧點評My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was a（考查冠詞。）very inte