2014上海楊浦區(qū)高考二模英語(yǔ)翻譯具體解析第1-4句Word版

1、翻譯1 ：（4分）原句： 不管你相信不相信，善于傾聽(tīng)并采納別人的意見(jiàn)是明智的。一. 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 1分1分1分Believe it or not / Whether you believe it or not, it is advisable to 1分listen to (others) (readily / willingly) / be a good listener1分and take/adopt/accept/follow their/ others advice/ suggestion(s) /idea(s) /opinions /viewpoint(s).或可以：Believe i

2、t or not, being ready/willing to listen to others and adopt their advice is advisable. 或可以：Whether you believe it or not, listening to (others) and adopting their opinion(s) (readily / willingly) are /is advisable.注意：“采納”用receive , “善于”用be good at 都扣 0.5分, 原句“善于”意為“樂(lè)于”， 漏掉it 扣0.5分二. 典型錯(cuò)誤：1. 不理解advis

3、able 的意思，把它誤認(rèn)為“傾聽(tīng)”，而把句子中的“明智的”用“sensible, wise”表示。2. “不管你相信不相信”：翻譯成：No matter whether you believe it or not, 或 Whatever you believe it or not, 3. 句型不熟練, 很多同學(xué)漏掉 it Whether you believe or not, / Believe or not4. 中文“善于”使很多同學(xué)句子出現(xiàn)偏差，原本正確的句子又改錯(cuò)。本題的得分率2.6分左右。2. 能否堅(jiān)持自己所做的事情是一個(gè)人取得成功的重要因素之一。（persevere） Whethe

4、r one can persevere in what he is doing is one of the important factors of his success.1) Whether one can persevere in-1Whether to persevere in 也對(duì)Whether 用if扣半分介詞in 漏掉或用錯(cuò)都扣半分用it 做形式主語(yǔ)扣半分多一個(gè)連詞that 扣一分語(yǔ)序錯(cuò)扣一分2) what he is doing-1what he does something he is doing /doesthe thing that he is doing/ does 都

5、算對(duì)whatever he is doing/ does除以上兩種時(shí)態(tài)外，has been doing 也算對(duì)。其他時(shí)態(tài)都扣一分the things what he is doing或what he do 都扣一分3) one of the important factors-1among the important factors/elementsone/an important factor/element 都算對(duì)factor 用錯(cuò)或該用復(fù)數(shù)而不用都扣半分important 寫(xiě)成main, major 也扣半分4) of his success-1 to （his）success lead

6、ing to/contributing to success that lead to success of (his) achieving success 都算對(duì) of his achievements of being successful for him to achieve success/succeed to achieve success /to be successful/ to succeed/ that makes him achieve success/ to achieving success /of getting success 都扣半分of whether he c

7、an achieve success 扣半分to achieve a/the success 全扣that a person can succeed/ achieve success 全扣另外前后人稱(chēng)一致不扣分，若有矛盾扣半分3. 在線預(yù)定出租車(chē)雖然很時(shí)尚，但許多相關(guān)的問(wèn)題尚待解決。 （as）FashionalbePopularIn as 1分StylishUp-to-datefashon注：as 倒裝語(yǔ)序錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分。寫(xiě)成although, 把a(bǔ)s 放到后半句中， 扣1分。booking a taxi online reseving a taxi onlinemaking a reseva

8、tion for a taxi onle is 1分online booking of a taxi注： 缺冠詞扣0.5分， 漏寫(xiě)”is “扣0.5分many related/revelant/concerning problemsmany problems related to/connected with/associated with/linked to/about/regarding/concerning it 1分注： 很多學(xué)生”relative”扣0.5分，多寫(xiě)個(gè)”but”扣0.5分， 漏寫(xiě) “it”扣0.5.remain to beare to be solved/dealt w

9、ith/resolved/ handled/ settled/coped with 1分need to beare left to beare wainting to bethere are many relevant problems to be注： 既寫(xiě)了there are有直接加remian 扣0.5， 動(dòng)詞單復(fù)數(shù)寫(xiě)錯(cuò)扣0.5. 寫(xiě)成”should be “扣0.5. 4在北京的地鐵上吃東西、抽煙或躺在座位上的人可能會(huì)被處以50-500元的罰款。The man who/ The person who/ The one who Those who/ People who/ The peop

10、le who1分eat, smoke or lie on the seat(s)/ chair(s)are eating, smoking or lying on the seat(s)/chair(s)1.5分（每個(gè)動(dòng)作0.5分，or 寫(xiě)成and 扣0.5；lie拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤較嚴(yán)重，60%以上考生寫(xiě)成lay,介詞寫(xiě)成in 扣0.5； 與主語(yǔ)單復(fù)數(shù)不一致扣0.5，不重復(fù)扣分；不少考生定語(yǔ)從句who后直接加分詞，扣1分；時(shí)態(tài)用過(guò)去時(shí)扣1分） on/ in the subway/ metro/ underground in/ of Beijingon/ in the Beijing subway/me

11、tro/underground0.5分 （“地鐵”用復(fù)數(shù)，扣0.5； 介詞用at， 扣0.5； 單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，扣0.5；這一定語(yǔ)如果置于句末成為狀語(yǔ)，扣0.5）can/ may/could/might/be likely to be finedmay/might/be likely to pay a fine/be asked to pay a fine1.5分 “可能”0.5分 “處以罰款”1分50 to 500 yuanbetween 50 to/ and 500 yuanfrom 50 to 500 yuan0.5分 （多了money 一詞，扣0.5；沒(méi)有fine這一名詞，用ranging from 50 to 500yuan， 扣0.5分）此外，用 People e