2018年廣州市中考英語作文專題復習體育與校園活動

1、2018 年廣州市中考英語作文專題復習(三)體育與校園活動一、與專題相關(guān)的話題項目學校 (school), 文娛與體育(Entertainment and sports)二、與專題相關(guān)的知識準備1、相關(guān)單元7A Unit 1 Making friends 7A Unit 2 Daily life7A Unit 7 School clubs8A Unit 5 Educational exchanges 8A Unit 7 Memory8A Unit 8 English Week9A Unit 4 Problems and advice2、相關(guān)詞匯* 高頻詞(n.) hobby, country,

2、 age, dream, flat, world, mountain, engineer, sound, table tennis, break, band, guitar, market, practice, fair, rocket, power, skill, information, headline, ant, butterfly, bee, culture, host, weekday, success,guest, corner, trouble, step, cycle, note, wallet, basket, manager, list, mile, letter, sp

3、eech, notice, competition, text, chance, topic, winner, opinion, model, diet, situation, advantage, mess, exam, comment(v.) complete, ride, ring, end, attend, teach, tour, introduce, respect, lose, improve, mention, spell, advise, communicate, hide, choose, regret, hate, suggest, fail,(adj.) daily,

4、friendly, elder, surprised, amazing, boring, recent, glad, fantastic, local, silly, worth, whole, rich, poor, shy, awful, ashamed, embarrassed, mad, annoying, careless, polite,(adv.) never, seldom, usually, together, already, yet, confidently, else,(pron.)everyone, yourself,(conj.) though* 高頻短語be go

5、od at, go to school, make friends with, take part in, have a good time, d like to, all over, onfoot, go to bed, get up, learn about, all the way, look up, so far, introduceout, pour out, to, taketreasure hunt, in public, put on, in my opinion, look out, be on a diet, laugh at, feel ashamed of, drive

6、 sb, mad. Make a mess, out of place, none of one s business, hear from* 拓展詞匯experience, disappear, attack, exchange, t acihi, chopstick, reference, application, treasure, several, suggestion, unless, whenever, request, keep in touch with, apply fomr,ake sth. A big success,advise sb. to do, give sb.

7、a chance to do sth, be worried about, regret doingiave a habit of, make up one' s mind, pay attention to,*句式句型1. My favourite subjects are2. I am good at3. I like/ enjoy4. I always have a good time at school.5. be so adj. that +A 旬6. I,m glad to do.7. Spend(in) doing.8. It ' s been a fantast

8、ic experience so far.9. We ' ve tried to10. I can ' t wait!11. I haven ' t had much success, but I ' ll keep trying.12. If you, you will13. It is adj. to do sth.14. Some students. Other students15. What should I do in this situation?16. It ' s none of my business.三、經(jīng)典例題v體育(1) 200

9、7年天津市書面表達考題日前，由教育部，國家體育總局，共青團中央聯(lián)合舉辦全國億萬少年陽光體育運動”啟動儀式，其影響巨大，意義深遠.你在本校參加了此項活動，請根據(jù)表格中所給信息寫一篇英語短文.內(nèi)容戒B1 .學校師生收看了啟動儀式(launching ceremony);2 .開展了一個小時的集體體育活動，如;跑步，做操，打 籃球等；1 .鍛煉有利于強健身體；2 .運動使人腦休息，學習效率更局.3 .每天鍛煉一小時，幸福生活一輩子.注意：1 .詞數(shù)80個左右.2 .短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù).3 .短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，但不要逐句翻譯，可適當加入細節(jié)，可適度發(fā)揮，使短文通順，連貫.4 .文

10、中不得使用真實姓名，校名.“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine“ 29u2007(Tie AeaChers andstudents in our school were organized to(2)、解題思路示范1、審題：本文共有 5 個要點時態(tài)主要采用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時人稱是 第一人稱段落第一段落寫活動情況；第二段落寫感想；2、可能用到的短語和句型詞匯 the launching ceremony©動儀式；build up one ' s body strength健體； more effecti

11、ve 效 果更好；take partin; different kinds of enjoy oneself ;be good for; have a rest; anhour a day; in one' s opiniohave ahappy life連接詞 after that; besides; also; what ' s more;句型 some。some。others ；so - that ; I think ；Doing sth. is adj.; Why not do ？； If yousure 內(nèi)容1 .學校師生收看了啟動儀式(launching cerem

12、ony);2 .開展了一個小時的集體體育活動 ，如;跑 步，做操，打籃球等；(短語：do different kinds of sports for an hour )1 .鍛煉后利于強健身體；(短語：build up our bodystrength.)2 .運動使大腦休息，學習效率更高.(短語：have a rest more effective)3 .每天鍛煉一小時，幸福生活輩了 .(短語：do sports an hour a day; have a happy life)3、學生成文：29u 2chedTheApaichers“Millions of young students n

13、ationwide sports sunshineand students in our school were organized toseea launching ceremony. After that, we did different kinds of sports for an hour.For example,running, taking exercise, playing basketball and so on.In my opinion, do sports can helpbuild up our body strength. What ' s moreettc

14、aJisdocans have a restthen our studywill more effective. I am enjoy running every day. I think running can makeme relax. So why nottake part in some exercise with me every day? As the saying goes, do sports an hour a day, have a happy face every day!點評：整篇文章對要點的把握基本到位，沒有什么單詞拼寫錯誤，而且文章最后一句寫得相當漂亮, 但是全文還

15、是存在不少語法小錯誤和用詞不當，部分句子的表達過于中式 分項分檔評分表項目要素給分表內(nèi)容6分切合題意, 體現(xiàn)要點 有所發(fā)揮65. 5654.54-3.53-2.521.510準確性6分語法詞匯機械性：大 小寫，拼寫 和格式等錯 誤6-5.554.54-3.53.53-2.521.510流暢性3分結(jié)構(gòu)3-2.52-1.5210.50000自評總分：11.54、檢查思路：完成作文自查表：1）如果沒有問題的，請在項目后打 M2）如果有問題，請在項目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改項目第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點人稱時態(tài)、主ilFTt動詞搭配、介詞搭配拼寫錯誤好詞好句5、參考例文：“ Millions

16、 of young students nationwide sports sunshine" launched on April 29, 2007.The tand students in our school were organized twatch the launching ceremony. After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball a

17、nd football, and others did some exercise. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. What a good timewe had!I think doing sports is very good for us. It helps to build up our body strengthBesides, our brains can have a good rest after doing sportso thatour study can be more effect

18、ive .So why not join us?If you can do sports an hour a day, Iyou oasurave ahealthier and better life.v校園生活(1) 2007年廣州市初中畢業(yè)生學業(yè)考試真題通知活動：學生音樂會時間：星期五下午2:30地點：玫瑰音樂廳集合時間及地點：下午1:30;學校門口出發(fā)時間：下午1:45;過時不候注意事項：1 .廳內(nèi)不準喝飲料、不準吃食物；2 .看表演過程中不得拍照、不得喧嘩；3 .看完表演后一起坐校車回校。注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右，電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計人總詞數(shù)；2、不能透露個人的任何信息

19、(例如：具體的學校和姓名等)，否則答案作廢Hi Bent at school today, IOur class is planning to go to a student concert. As you weren information.Cheers, Li Ping(2)解題思路：1 .審題：a.本文共有6個要點 (1)時間：星期五下午 2:30 (at half past two on Friday afternoon)(2)地點：玫瑰音樂廳(Rose Music Hal)(3)集合時間及地點：下午 1:30;學校門口 (school gate at half past one) 出

20、發(fā)時間：下午1:45;過時不候(4-6)注意事項：2 .廳內(nèi)不準喝飲料、不準吃食物；(No drinks or foods, be allowed )3 .看表演過程中不得拍照、不得喧嘩；(take photos, during )4 .看完表演后一起坐校車回校。(return to school, by bus)b.時態(tài)主要采用一般將來時c.人稱是5 .可能用到的短語和句型1 ).主要連接詞If, so, also,2 ).主要句型 We are going to - We will You can I think You should/shouldn '-t Remember to

21、3 .成文:In Friday afternoon, we havea students music concert .This music concert is starthalf past two p.m. And the concert will be held in The RoseConcert Hall.We will meet at the gate of school at half past one p.m. and the go 0at a quarter to two.In the concert we must in attention: First don't

22、 drinking hmkU Second we needn take ' tphotos and make noise in the show. Last, we will come back to school by school bus when we will be watchedthe concert.點評：整篇文章對要點的把握基本到位，但是拼寫和簡單的語法錯誤較多。部分句子的表達過于中式 分項分檔評分表項目要素給分表內(nèi)容6分切合題意, 體現(xiàn)要點 有所發(fā)揮65. 554.544-3.53-2.521.510語法6-5.554.54-3.53-2.521.510詞匯準確性6分機

23、械性：大 小寫，拼寫 和格式等錯 誤2流暢性3分結(jié)構(gòu)3-2.52-1.5210.50000自評總分：84 .檢查思路：完成作文自查表：如果沒有問題的，請在項目后打 0如果有問題，請在項目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改項目第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點人稱時態(tài)、主ilFTt動詞搭配、介詞搭配拼寫錯誤好詞好句5 .參考例文：Hi Ben, Our class is planning to go to a student concert. As you weren' t at school today, I 'information.The concert will be held

24、in the Rose Music Hall at half past two on Friday afternoon. You must be atthe school gate at half past one. We will leave at a quarter to two. Don' t be late. If you awon' t wait for youNo drinks or foods areallowed inside the hall. Photos may not be taken during the concert. Also, we are n

25、ot allowed to talk loudly during the show. We return to the school'by bus after the concert.Cheers, Li Ping四、練習你校正在舉行英語藝術(shù)節(jié)，請你根據(jù)下面的海報，寫一個通知，告訴你班同學關(guān)于藝術(shù)節(jié)讀 書活動的情況。G2015（ The 2015 Reading Day cf Ooi School）時間:2015年4月18日上午g：001上知地點士學校圖書僧參加人員：全校師生要求:每位同學要求忖讀一本英語讀物，并寫讀后感（aftmhCTiaa屆時向其他同學推薦（rKOfflmaLdy7所閱讀的書，活動內(nèi)容：出00生30 ：師生互薦書籍；共同分享讀書心得58:W-11:W:閱讀比褰讀書使你變得更加聰明！|J注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開頭已給出，不