短文改錯練習(xí)集錦

1、短文改錯專練（一）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。AMarch29th,DearDiary,Imwritingthisatmyroom.ItsalmostmidnightandIhavetogettingupearlytomorrow,butI

2、cantsleep.Imthinkingaboutmyfuture!Everyday,myparentsasksme,“Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrow?”Theproblemis:Idontknow!Mymomalwayssays,“Beadoctor!”Andshedoesntunderstandtobeadoctor,youhavetostudyforalong,longtimeandthatsnotherideaoffun.AlsoImreallybadatbiologyattheschool.Mydadsays,“Beapilot!”Ishecrazy?Hek

3、newIhateflying!NowImgettingtiring,soImgoingtobed.Icanthinkaboutmyfutureinbed.IgetmybestideaswhenImlaindown.BIhaveknownmyfriendRebeccaforalongtime.Wefirstlymetatafriendsbirthdaypartyfiveyearsbefore.Wefoundoutthatwebothlikedsinginganddancing,soIinvitedRebeccaovertomyplace.Welistenedtothemusictogethera

4、ndsoonbecamebestfriends.Threeyearsago,Rebeccasparentsinvitedmegoonholidaywiththem.Itisgreat.Wespentthreewonderfulweeksinalittlecottage.RebeccaandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullybeach.Wetookalotofphotosandhadalotoffuns.Lastyear,Rebeccasfatherchangedherjob,andtheymovedtoothertown.Sincethenwehaventseen

5、eachotherverymuch,butwevetalkedinthephoneandwevewrittenemailstoeachother.CDearJoe,Howareyou?ThankstoyourpostgoodtoknowwhenyoureOK.Ivegotnewstoo.ImgoingonholidaynextweekswithmybrotherandAnna,afriendfromschool.Weregoingtostayonafarmwithfourdays!Weregoingtolookaftertheanimalsanddoingsomehorse-riding.Im

6、sureIllloveit.YouknowhowcrazyIamabouttheanimals!Iwanttolearnallaboutthecowsorthehorses.IhopeIwillhavesometimestogowalkinginthehills,too.Well,rightnowImgoingtofinishhomeworklotstodobeforetheholiday!IllwritetoyouwhenIgetbacktotellingyouaboutmyholiday.Yours,NadiaDPeoplehadalwaysbeeninterestedinbees.Thi

7、sinterestmayhavebegunwiththehoneywhatbeesmake.Inthefact,ithasbeenfoundthatpeoplehavebeeneatinghoneyforthousandofyears.Inthemorerecentlypast,peoplewereinterestedinthewaybeesmadehoney.Theyadmiredthewaybeesseemedtoworkingsohard.Somelanguagesevendevelopedexpressionsaboutpeopleworkinglikebees.InEnglish,f

8、orexample,wetalkwitha“busybee”.Nowscientistshasanewreasontobeinterestedinbees.Theyhavediscoveredthatbeesabletocommunicatewitheachother.Researchhasrevealedsomesurprisedfactsaboutthis,buttherearestillmanymysteries.EYesterdayafternoon,ItooktheNo.6bustogohome.Itwascrowdedonthebus,andIhadlistenedtomusicb

9、ymyearphones.SuddenlyIsawthenameofthebusstopthatIshouldgetoff,soIgotoffthebusinhurry.WhenIarrivedhome,IrealizedthatIhadleftmybagonthebus.MyIDcardandtenbookswereinthebag.Iwasworriedandeagertofindingit,soIwenttothebuscompaniesforhelp.Fortunate,attheLostandFound,Iseemybag.Iwantedtothankthepersonwhohadf

10、oundmybag,andthestafftheresaidthepersonhadntlefthisname.Howagoodman!FIreadaninterestedpieceofnewsonanewspapertoday.AccordingtoProfessorRichardWiseman,onlylessthanaquarteroftheBritishachievedtheirNewYeargoalsbecausetheydoitinthewrongway.Hestudied700volunteerswhomadeawiderangesofNewYeargoals,including

11、quittingsmoking,losingtheweight,orgainingaqualification.Just22percentoftheparticipantsmanagedtomeetingtheirgoalsordescribedtheirprogresslike“verysuccessful.”Thereasonsomuchfailedwasthattheytookthewrongapproachandledbyself-helpbooksinthewrongway.Theytendedtospendalotoftimeonthinkingaboutthe“badthings

12、”whatwouldhappeniftheydidnotachievetheirgoalsinsteadoftakingaction.GLastweekends,Iwentshoppingbymyself.ItwasasunnydayandIfeelveryhappy.WhenIhadboughtanythingIneeded,Iwenttothebusstoptotakeabus.Unfortunately,thereweretoomuchpeopleatthebusstop.Thenitwasmyturntogeton,therewasnoroom.Ihadtowaitthenextbus

13、.Suddenly,itstartedtorain.Ihadnochoicebuttocallataxi.Halfwaythroughthejourney,thetaxiwasbrokedown.IwasfilledwithangrywhenIsawanemptierbusgoby.Finally,Idecidedtowalkhomeinarain.Whatanunluckyday!HMynameisLiHuaandIwantedtobeclassmonitor.Iamresponsible,sociable,oreasy-going.Ienjoyservingothers.Additiona

14、lly,Ihavevaryinterests.Ilovesingingandplayingthedrumsaswellsoccer.Iamalsoagoodlistenerandbealwaysopentodifferentopinions.IamconfidentthatIcandothejobgood.Beingastudentmyself,firstly,Iwillcreateanacademicatmospheresothateveryoneinourclassescanimprovetheirstudies.Forthosestudentswhoisfallingbehind,Iwi

15、llfindwaystohelpthemtocatchup.Secondly,Iwillserveasabridgeamongteachersandstudents.Finally,Iwillarrangepartiessowecanrelax.IbelieveIamtherightpersontothispost.答案1 atmyroom.2 havetogetting.3 myparentsasks.4 whenyougrow?atfingettingfgetasksfaskgrow后加up5 . And she doesn t .6 not her idea of .7 at the s

16、chool.8 . He knew I hate .9 I m getting tiring .10 I m lain down.1 . We firstly met .2 five years before.3 to the music .4 go on holiday .5 . It is great.6 beautifully beach.7 a lot of funs.8 changed her job .9 to other town.10 in the phone .1 . Thanks to your .2 to know when .3 next weeks with .4 w

17、ith four days!5 and doing some .6 about the animals!7 or the horses.8 have some times .9 finish homework .10 to telling you .And-Butherfmy去掉theknewfknowstiringftiredlainflyingBfirstlyffirstbeforefago去掉thego前加toisfwasbeautifullyfbeautifulfunsffunherfhisotherfanotherinfon/overCtofforwhenfthat或去掉whenwe

18、eksfweekwithffordoingfdo去掉theorfandtimesftimehomework前力口mytellingftell1 . People had always .2 what bees make.3 . In the fact .4 thousand of years.5 recently past .6 working so hard.7 we talk with .8 has a new reason .9 bees able to .10 surprised facts .1 I had listened .2 by my earphones.3 that I s

19、hould .4 bus in hurry.5 to finding it .6 the bus companies .7 . Fortunate, at the .8 I see my bag.9 and the staff .10 . How a good man!1 an interested piece .2 they do it in .3 a wide ranges .4 losing the weight .5 managed to meeting .6 like “very successful.hadfhavewhatfthat/which去掉thethousandfthou

20、sandsrecentlyfrecentworkingfworkwithfabouthasfhaveable前加aresurprisedfsurprisingE去掉hadbyfwiththatfwherehurry前加afindingffindcompaniesfcompanyFortunatefFortunatelyseefsawandfbutHow-WhatFinterestedfinterestingdofdidrangesfrange去掉themeetingfmeetlikefasmuch f many7somuchfailed.led 前加 wereon f in 或去掉on wha

21、t f that8 andledby.9 timeonthinking.10 whatwouldhappen.1 .Lastweekends.2 Ifeelveryhappy.3 anythingIneeded.4 toomuchpeople.5 .Thenitwasmy.6 waitthenextbus.7 wasbrokedown.8 filledwithangry.9 anemptierbus.10 inarain.1 Iwantedtobe.2 oreasy-going.3 havevaryinterests.4 aswellsoccer.5 bealwaysopen.6 dothej

22、obgood.7 inourclasses.8 whoisfalling.9 amongteachers.10 tothispost.weekendsfweekendfeel-feltanythingfeverythingmuchfmanyThen-Whenthe前加for去掉wasangryfangeremptierfemptyaftheHwantedfwantorfandvaryfvariedsoccer前加as去掉begoodfwellclassesfclassisfareamongfbetweentoffor短文改錯專練（二）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的

23、以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。ADearSarah,ImwritingbecauseIwanttoapologizetowhatIdidlastweek.Imreallysorry.Iknowwesaid8:30,andIwouldvegottenhereontimeifeverythinghadnt

24、gonewrongly.IwaslatebecausemywatchbrokeandIdidntknowwhatthetimeitwas.Soyousee,Iwouldvearrivedontimeifmywatchhadntbroken.ThenIhavetowalkbecauseIdmissedthebus.AndthenIfelloverandmytrousersgotdirty,soIhadtogohomeandgetchanging.ThenIdecidedtocatchanotherbuses,butitwastoolate.Iwouldhavephonedyouandmybrot

25、herhadtakenmymobilephone.Anyway,Ihopeyouarenttooangrierwithme.Hopetohearyousoon.Yours,JackBTodaymyclassmateandIwenttoafarmforatrip.Igetupatsixoclockandwesetoffbybus.Onthebus,someofussang,andsomeofustalked.Weallhadgoodtime.Twohourslate,wearrivedatthegateofthefarm,thatthefarmerswerewaitingtogiveusawar

26、mwelcome.Afterwewereshownaroundthebigfarm,theybegantoplanttrees.Itwasreallyagoodwaytogettingclosetonatureandprotecttheenvironmentatthesametime.Next,wehadapicnicanditwasgreatfuntoeatontheopenair.Finally,wewenthomeathalfpastfour.Althoughallofuswastired,ourtripwasreallyverymoreunforgettable.CBothmyfath

27、erandmotherhasbeenwantingmetostudyabroad.TheythinkthatitsnaturaltomasteraforeignlanguageinanEnglish-speakingcountryandthatstudyingabroadatearlyagewillenablemetobedependent.Moreover,itwillbeeasiertometogainadvancedknowledgeoftechnology,thatwillpreparemeforabrighterfuture.Moreover,mygoodfriend,ZhangHu

28、adoesntagreewiththem.HethoughtmyEnglishistoolimitedtocommunicatewithforeigners.Besides,thecostistoomuchforhisfamily.Inmyopinions,IshouldcontinuetostudyinChina.AslongasIstudyhardatnow,Illmakegreatachievementsinthefuture.DAdvertisinginformsconsumersaboutnewerproductsavailableonthemarket.Itgivesusinfor

29、mationwitheverythingfromshampoototoothpastetocomputersandcars.Butthereisoneseriousproblemswiththis.Theinformationareactuallyveryoftenmisinformation.Ittellsustheproductsbenefitsbuthidesitsthedisadvantages.Advertisingnotonlyleadsustobuyingthingsthatwedontneedandcantafford,butitconfusesoursensereality.

30、“Zoomtoothpastepreventsbadteethandgivesyouthewhiteteeth!advertisementtellsus.Anditdoesnttellusthecompletetruththatahealthdietandagoodtoothbrushwillhavethesameeffect.EMygrandfatherhadhadenoughofhiscat.Hewastiredofherscratchingallthefurnituresandmadeamess.Sohegavehertoafriend,wholivedontheothersideoft

31、own.Hetoldhisfriendsthathewasgettingsooldtolookafterher.Aweeklater,inaverycoldwinterday,mygrandfatherreturnedhomefromshoppingandsurprisedtoseethecatonhisdoorstep.Mygrandfatherwasmovedbythefactthathispethadfoundhiswaybackfromtheothersideoftowninsuchacoldweather.Hetookthecatoutsideandgaveherlotsoflovi

32、ngattention.Hedecidedhewillnevergiveherawayagain.FBedouin,theArabpeoplewholiveinthedesert,livinginatraditionalsociety.Thismeanstheyliveonmuchthesamewayastheirancestorsdid.Peoplewholiveintraditionalsocietieshasstrongtiestothepast.Customsandbeliefshavechangedveryslower.Theyfearthatwhenchangeswillmaket

33、heirlivesworseratherthanbetter.Valuesarepassingonwithlittlechangesfromonegenerationtothenext.Yetchangesdotakeplace.Allcultureschange,buttheychangemuchquicklyatsomeperiodsthanatother.Inveryrecentyears,changeshavetakenplaceveryquicklyeverywhere,includingdesertsofSouthwestAsiaandNorthAfrica.GMyuncleand

34、auntcomehomeoneeveninganddiscoveredhugeholeintheirroof.Theyalsofoundthattheirdogwasdeadandtheirfurniturewerecoveredinhorrible-smellingmatter.Upsetbywhichtheysaw,theyphonedthepolice.Afterthepolicelookedintotheproblem,theyweretoldwhathadhappenedto.Itseemedthatthecontainerholdingthewastesfromthetoilets

35、onapassingplanehadburstopenly.Thecontentsfrozeintheatmosphereasitfelltowardstheground.Thentheresultingblockoficecrashedthroughtheroofandbrokeintopiece,killingthedogaftermeltingintheirhouse.HTakingpartsinrecreationactivitieshelpuskeepfit.Therearevariouskindsofactivityinourdailylife,forexample,listeni

36、ngtomusic,watchingTV,playingchess,orgoingtocinema.ButIthinkwedbettertohavemoreoutdooractivities.Asstudents,weusuallysittoolongerintheclassroom,andasaresultoureyesandbrainsgettingtired.Butitsagoodideatoplaybasketball,football,tabletennis,goswimming,dosomerunnings,orevengoforapicnic.Ourbrainsalsoneedc

37、hangestomakeitsmartandactive.Inaword,exerciseisgoodforthehealth.答案1 apologize to what .2 gotten here on .3 gone wrongly.4 what the time .5 I have to .6 get changing.7 another buses .8 and my brother .9 too angrier with .Atofforhereftherewronglyfwrong去掉thehavefhadchangingfchangedbusesfbusandfbutangri

38、erfangryyou 前加 fromBclassmate f classmatesget gotgood 前加 alate f laterthat f wherethey f weg etting f geton f inwas f were去掉 morenewer f newwith f on / about problems -10.Hopetohearyou.1 myclassmateand.2 .Igetupat.3 hadgoodtime.4 .Twohourslate.5 thatthefarmers.6 theybegantoplant.7 togettingcloseto.8

39、 ontheopenair.9 allofuswas.10 moreunforgettable.1 motherhas.2 atearlyage.3 tobedependent.4 beeasiertome.5 thatwillprepare.6 .Moreover,mygood.7 .Hethoughtmy.8 forhisfamily.9 .Inmyopinions.10 hardatnow.1 aboutnewerproducts.2 witheverything.3 blem4 areactuallyvery.hasfhaveearly前加ande

40、pendentfindependenttofforthatfwhichMoreoverfHoweverthoughtfthinkshisfmyopinionsfopinion去掉atarefisG5 its disadvantages.6 buying things .7 sense reality.8 the white teeth!9 . And it doesn t .10 a health diet and .1 all the funitures .2 made a mess.3 . He told his friends .4 so old to look .5 in avery

41、cold .6 andsurprised to .7 found his way .8 such a cold weather.9 the cat outside .10 hewill never .1 living in a .2 live on much .3 has strong ties to .4 changed very slower.5 when changes will .6 . Values are passing .7 with little changes .8 muchquicklyat .9 than at other.10 including deserts .it

42、sftheirbuyingfbuyreality前加of去掉theAnd-ButhealthfhealthyEfurnituresffurnituremadefmakingfriendsffriendsoftooinfonsurprised前加washisfher去掉aoutsidefinsidewillfwouldFlivingfliveonfinhasfhaveslowerfslowly去掉whenpassingfpassedlittleffewmuchfmore或quickly前力口moreotherfothersdeserts前加the1 aunt come home .2 disco

43、vered huge .3 were covered .4 which they saw .5 had happened to.6 holding the wastes .7 had burst openly.8 it fell towards .9 broke into piece .10 after melting in .1 . Taking parts in .2 help us keep .3 kinds of activity .4 going to cinema.5 better to have .6 sit too longer .7 brains getting .8 . B

44、ut it s a good .9 some runnings .10 make it smart .comefcamehuge前加awerefwaswhichfwhat去掉towastesfwasteopenlyfopenitftheypiecefpiecesafterfbeforeHpartsfparthelpfhelpsactivityfactivitiescinema前加the去掉tolongerflonggettingfgetButfSorunningsfrunningitfthem短文改錯專練（三）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處

45、語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。ADearSandra,YoullneverguesswhereImwritingthisemail.Acave!YouknowwereonholidaysinSpain.Well,wespendafewdaysinBarcelonafirst.Wehadagoodtimethere,thoug

46、honedayIdidntfeelverygood.IthinkIatetoomuchicecreamthedaybefore.Anyway,whenIleftBarcelona,wecametospendafewdaysinGranada.However,wecouldntgetahoteltoomanytouristsandnotenoughbed!Thenthehotelownersaid,“Whydonttrythecavehotels?”Wethoughthewerejoking.Livingincaves?Butthereweareanditswonderful.Wereenjoy

47、ingitmuchthatwedontknowwhenweregoingtoleave.Werenevergoingtohaveenoughtimetoexploreforeverything.Takecare!BenMyunclebuysasatellitedish,whichisalargeroundpieceofmetalthatreceivessatellitetelevision.Hedecidedtosetuphimself.Heclimbeduptheladderandattachedthedishwiththesideofhishouses.Afterhefinishing,h

48、eandmyauntrelaxedfortheeveninginfrontoftheTV.Thenextdaywasverymuchhot,andtheydecidedtostayathomeandwatchTV.Thatafternoontheyheardlotsofshoutingoutside.Whentheywentoutside,theysawthatthehouseoppositewereonfire.Fortunately,thefirewasputtingout.Itturnedoutthatthefirehadstartedbecausemyunclessatellitedi

49、shhadbeenconcentratingthesunsraysonthecurtainsofherneighborshousebuthadcausedthefire.CChristmasissupposedtobeatimeexpressourloveandgoodwilltowardsothers.Itissupposedtobeatimewhichweperformactsofkindnessforpeoplelessfortunatetoourselves.ButdowethinkoftheotherpeoplewhenwesatdowntoourChristmasdinner?Of

50、coursenotweretoobusyeatingthosedeliciousfoodsrelatedwithChristmas.Wearetoobusywonderingthatthepresentswegavewereasniceorbetterthantheonewereceived.Theyforgettothinkofthesickandthehomeless.ThewholeideaofChristmashascompletechanged.Whatashame!DAthiefbrokeintoourhouseandfilledhisbagbyourpossessionswhen

51、hesuddenlyfeelingapairofeyesonhim.Lookingup,heseesaneaglestaringathimwithcold,mercilesseyes.Atfirstthemanwastoofrighteningtomove,butaftertenminutehetriedmovingquietlytowardsthedoor.Therefore,theeyesjustfollowedhimandhecouldntmove.Eventually,myparentsreturnedtoandfoundthethiefinourhouse.Whenmyfathert

52、urnedthelight,thethiefcouldseethattheeaglewasjustatoy.Butitwastoolateandshewasarrested.Myfathersaidthatthetoyeaglewerebetterthananywatchdog.Nowadaysmoreandmorestudentswerefoundcheatinginexams.Somecopyfromeachother;somecopyfromtheirtextbooks,referencebooksorpreparednote;othersusemoderncommunicationto

53、olsuchasmobilephones.Cheatinginexamswillcausesomeworseeffects.Foronething,itwillresultunfaircompetitionanddestroythecreativityofbrightstudents.Foranother,studentswhooftencheatsinexamswilldevelopbadhabitsandwontbeabletomeettheneedsofsocietyinthefuture.Sohowcancheatinginexamsbestopped?Onmyopinion,seve

54、repunishmentsshouldbeputintotheeffecttopreventstudentsfromcheating.Atthesametime,greateffortsshouldbemadetomakestudentsunderstoodwhatkindofpersonsocietyneedsortrytobuilduptheirhonesty.FDearJack,ImgladtolearnthatyouwillcomeBeijingtolearnaboutChinesecultureasanexchangestudent.Atthemoment,IamstudyingEn

55、glishinmyschoolbutIalwaysgetbettergradesinmyclass.ImgoodatthespokenEnglish,soImsureIwillcommunicatewithyoufrequent.Beside,myparentsareopenandkindandisfriendswithmanyofmyclassmates.Ibelieveyouwillbeoneoftheirfriendtoo.Therefore,IinviteyoutoliveinmyhomeduringyoustayinBeijing.ImwillingtohelpingyouasmuchasIcan.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaGMyfriendJakeiseighteenyearsoldandlivesinasmallvillage,notfarwiththecityofNottingham.Hegrewupinthisvillage,soheknowseveryonehere.Buthefeelsboringinthevillage.Atthemoment,hetravelsNottingha