深圳英語中考作文模板

1、1. 熱烈的討論/ 爭論 a heated discussion2. 就我而言/ 就個人而言Personally, in my opinion, as for me, 3. 利遠遠大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。4. 導致，引起 lead to5. 責任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement6. 做出共同努力 make great efforts7. 因特網(wǎng) the Internet (一定要有冠詞，字母I 大寫)8. 方便快捷 convenient, con

2、venient transportation/ people buy cars for convenience.9. 環(huán)保(的) environmental protection /Be environmentally friendly（形容詞）10. 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information11. 采取有效措施來 take steps, take effective measures to do sth12. 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。13. 身心兩方面 both physically an

3、d mentally14. 緩解壓力/ 減輕負擔 reduce stress/pressure15. 相反on the contrary。16. 毫無疑問There is no doubt that17. 充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of.18. 隨著時間的流逝 As time goes by,_開頭1. In recent days2. Different people have different ideas.Some people firmly believe/ think/say/ hold the opinion that _, be

4、cause_. while others strongly believe_.3. There is an old saying,” Failure is the mother of success”Today, _, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, _ Second,_. To make things better, / To make things worse,/ much worse, / even worse,_3. Nowadays，it is common for people to write

5、 microblogs. People like it because _. Besides，_. 4. With the development of science and technology/society, the greenhouse effect/ our environment has become more and more serious/ more and more popular/. We can see more and more pollution.5. Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception.It ha

6、s both advantages and disadvantages. 6. Man is /Human beings are now facing a big problem, which is becoming more and more serious. That is pollution. （which代替前面一句，逗號不可少。）同學們經(jīng)常用的是it。也可以。但標點符號不一樣。We are now facing a big problem. It is becoming7. _ has been playing an increasingly important role in ou

7、r daily life. There is no doubt that it has brought us a lot of benefits/ advantages, but meanwhile/ at the same time it has created some serious problems as well. 中間段落句 盡量使用我們熟悉的賓語從句、狀語從句1. / Most important of all, / first of all, / in the first place/ firstly/ To begin with,besides,/ moreover/ in

8、addition,/ furthermore/ also, in that case, as a result, though, However, in other words, 2.On the contrary，some people believe that _. They say_. But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve the problem. For one thing, _. For another, _.3. we should take a series of effective measures to_.

9、 on one hand, _. On the other hand, _. 4. I fully/ totally agree with the statement/ idea because_. 5. In my opinion, I think it necessary to_. The reasons are as follows. First _.Second _. Last but not least,_. 6. I often help my parents do housework， such as， washing clothes， cleaning the room and

10、 watering flowers結尾·at last/ last but not least/ all in all/ in a word/ To sum up1. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _. Only in this way can we_in the future. 2. From above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that_.We can easily draw a conclusion

11、 that _3. Personally, I believe that_. Hopefully, students at school can study and play safely in the future.4. If all of us make great efforts/ try our best to _, I am sure _5. if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution審題，書寫，無語法錯誤，語句通順最關鍵！(滿分作文標準：包含所有要點。能圍繞內容適當

12、發(fā)揮。應用了較豐富的語言結構和詞匯。用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚)檢查修改是進一步減少疏漏提高質量的最后程序，這時要對照題目要求，認真檢查以下幾點：（1）內容有無遺漏或誤詞，最好一一對應檢查。（3）句子是否有語法結構錯誤，特別要檢查句子中的冠詞、代詞、名詞復數(shù)、動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等方面是否有錯誤。（5）書寫字跡和標點符號，大小寫是否規(guī)范清晰，詞數(shù)是否基本上符合要求。經(jīng)過認真修改潤色的短文，即可認真工整地謄寫在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速讀一遍，力求完美。一篇簡潔、通順的文章，建議大部分同學模仿Nowadays, many countries in the world have f

13、ound cases of the new H1N1 flu virus. Its said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired. To prevent the virus, we can do many things. Firstly, wed better not go to places where there are many people. Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, especi

14、ally after we cough or sneeze. It's also a good habit for us to exercise regularly. It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness. And having a good sleep is important, too. People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily. And then, eat more fruit and vege

15、table to keep ourselves fit and strong. Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh. If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus. So there is no need to be worried. I believe we will win through in the end.有爭議的、正反觀點的文章，用以下的作文模板MicroblogToday, our class held a heat

16、ed discussion about whether it is good for students to use microblogs. Different people have different opinions. Some students/ most of the students hold the opinion/ agree that it brings much benefits to us and we can get a lot of knowledge from it. Firstly/ On one hand, through microblogs, we can

17、know more friends with similar interests. Secondly, it becomes possible to talk to famous people closely. Besides, it is a convenient way for us to share our joy and sorrow with our close friends. Sometimes, it can reduce our pressure in a way.However, a quarter of the students are strongly against

18、it. They think (that). and It can hardly be trusted. On the other hand, most of the young teenagers have no ability to tell the true from wrong, so they may be misled by certain false advertisements.In my opinion, the advantages of writing microblogs far outweigh the disadvantages。It can not only pr

19、actise our writing, but also express our feelings. But as a students, we shouldnt spend too much time on it. After all, study comes first./ study should be put in the first place.about holidaysSome people think . is very important. Firstly, we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after sever

20、al months of hard work. Secondly, we could spend more time staying with our family. Thirdly, we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.However, other people hold opposite/ different views. They think(that) it causes a lot of problems. For

21、 one thing, / on one hand, It may lead to traffic jams and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded. For another, / on the other hand, In my opinion, I prefer a 7-day holiday. I can not only sleep well and do exercise, but also read some interesting books. .以下的文章是h

22、ot topic，積累素材而用，有的地方還不通順。親們也許可以寫得更好！Food safetyEvery day we have to eat food and it can give us lots of energy. However, in the past two years, food safety has become a serious and important problem.Unhealthy food is harmful to us. So we must do something to make our food safe. First, we need to let

23、 all the people understand the danger of using additives, which can cause many health problems. Second, the government must make some useful laws to make sure that the food producers who use harmful materials are punished, so that they never do it again. Third, businessmen should be educated to be a

24、ware of people's health instead of being only interested in making money. Beside, as for us, we'd better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because . I sincerely hope that the whole society pay more attention to food safety.Shopping onlineNow shopping online attr

25、acts more and more people. Of course, it has a lot of advantages. First, the products on the Internet are cheaper than those in the shops. Second, we have many different kinds of products to choose on the Internet. In addition, its more convenient. We just stay at home and press the mouse instead of

26、 shopping in a crowded and noisy shopping mall. However, it has disadvantages as well. For example, the products may not be good enough. And the sellers can hardly provide good services to everyone. So be careful when you are shopping online!Some students think it's very convenient for us to go

27、shopping on the internet. Some shops on the Internet are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy what we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.However, some students disagree with them. They say they can't see the things while shopping. So they are

28、 not sure whether they are good or not. They are worried about the quality of the goods. Besides, they can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with friends.Advertisements, good or bad?When we talk about this topic, different people have different opinions/ ideas.There is no doubt that a number of

29、ads bring great benefits to us people, to some extent. Some people think they can benefit a lot from ads. To begin with, ads promote economy by encouraging people to buy more goods. Second, ads give people the latest information about products. Third, they can help people buy better and cheap goods.

30、However, on the other hand, some ads have bad effects. First, they persuade/ encourage people to buy the products they dont really need. And false ads cheat consumers. Second, a survey shows that children who watch many ads are more interested in possessions when they grow up. Besides, ads put much

31、pressure to both children and parents because it is easier for children to ask their parents for money to buy things when they find attractive things from advertisements. That is to say, children are easier to be influenced. Last but not least, paper ads are a kind of waste and damage the environmen

32、t.In fact, every coin has two sides. So what we should do is to make full use of the benefits of ads.Should students bring mobile phones to schoolNowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. Bu

33、t some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone, because students will use mobile phones to play games, send text messages, watch movies, etc , which will affect their study. In my opinion, it is necessary for us to bring mobile phones to school. I hold the o

34、pinion for the following reasons.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. /It is a fashionable and useful invention Its not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right wayKeep safe at schoolAs we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn'