英語作文課件

1、How to get high grades in the writing task?Guide for English writing英語作文寫作指導(dǎo)谷城三中 帥德勝Review of the writing task in the 2012 College Entrance Examinationv請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。文。vYou cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.v注意：注意：無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示

2、語無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語;v除詩歌外，文體不限除詩歌外，文體不限;v文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;v詞數(shù)為詞數(shù)為120左右。左右。A students writing I remember when my birthday, my mother buy me a present. It was a celphone. I was very happy, because I didnt think she would buy a celphone for me. When I was at school, I often sent messages to

3、my classmates, sometimes I play games on it. My study fell down sharply. My teacher told my mother. My mother was angry and scold me. I realize my mistake. I should not use celphone for playing. I should use it for good goal. From then on, I began to study hard. I will use the celphone well. I cant

4、choose what is given, but I will make good use of it.10Conclusion of common mistakes and problems in the writingv1.A whole passage, no paragraph dividedv2.Direct translation and Chinglish expressionv3.Verb tenses not in agreementv4.Improper sentence patternsv5.Drifting off the topic or leaving out s

5、ome required informationv6.spelling mistakes without any advanced vocabulary or sentencesEnjoy and discuss Seeing the topic, all that comes to my mind Seeing the topic, all that comes to my mind is TIME. No one can decide is TIME. No one can decide the amount of time given by God, the amount of time

6、 given by God, soso how to make use of it really makes a how to make use of it really makes a difference. Just difference. Just as the saying goesas the saying goes, time is limited and lost time is never , time is limited and lost time is never found again, found again, which evidentlywhich evident

7、ly shows us the importance of treasuring time. shows us the importance of treasuring time. HoweverHowever, I , I didnt realize it until didnt realize it until I I came acrosscame across a failure in a big exam. a failure in a big exam. It was It was in Senior 2 in Senior 2 thatthat I began to play c

8、omputer games. Soon I I began to play computer games. Soon I got so got so addicted toaddicted to them them thatthat every night I slipped out of school to play computer every night I slipped out of school to play computer games. games. As a consequenceAs a consequence, I slept in class in the dayti

9、me and my studies , I slept in class in the daytime and my studies fell sharply before I could realize my mistake. Precious time slipped away fell sharply before I could realize my mistake. Precious time slipped away in my dreams and computer games in my dreams and computer games and therefore and t

10、herefore I failed in the final exam. I failed in the final exam. Looking at the poor marksLooking at the poor marks, how I wish , how I wish I hadnt wastedI hadnt wasted so much time so much time playingplaying computer games computer games when I should have studied hardwhen I should have studied h

11、ard. . A fall into the pit, a gain in your witA fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. . Every minute countsEvery minute counts. Now I . Now I completely understand the importance of treasuring time. completely understand the importance of treasuring time. From my From my perspectiveperspective, tim

12、e means life. , time means life. Only by seizing every second, can we have a Only by seizing every second, can we have a bright future. bright future. how to get high grades?vadvanced vocabulary.vcolourful sentences,especially including some clauses(從句），從句），the inverted and emphasized (倒裝和強(qiáng)調(diào)）倒裝和強(qiáng)調(diào)）.

13、vNon-predicate verbs(非謂語動詞）非謂語動詞） .vwith structure and so on.vproper conjunction（連詞）（連詞）.vProper proverbs(諺語諺語) quoted if possible.vBeautiful handwriting.How to make these sentences attractive?1.Lisa is born into a poor family. She is my best friend. She often shares happiness and sorrow with me. 2.

14、In the picture, we can see a boy. He is reading a book.Born into a poor family, Lisa is my best friend, who often shares happiness and sorrow with me.As is shown / described/ illustrated in the picture,(As can be seen in the picture,) a boy is absorbed in reading.3.In my opinion, we need a positive

15、attitude towards life.As far as Im concerned/From my perspective, what we need is a positive towards life.4.I began to know it when I failed the final exam.It was not until I failed the final exam that I began to know it.5.We can make our bodies strong by taking excise.Only by taking excise, can we

16、build up a strong body.6.The drawing is simple, but it is meaningful.Simple as the drawing is, the implication it reveals is profound.7.The college entrance examination is drawing near, everyone is busy studying hardWith the college entrance examination drawing near, everyone is occupied in studying

17、 hard.常用的連接詞(common conjuctions)表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, , in addition,additionallyv表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系的: but, however, instead ,despite, in spite of, unlike, the formerthe latter, on the one handon the other hand, v表因果關(guān)系的: since, because (of), thanks to, therefore, as a result, so that,v

18、表?xiàng)l件關(guān)系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, v 表時(shí)間關(guān)系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, at the same time, afterward, finally,v 特定的順序關(guān)系: above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, in the end, at last, v

19、 表換一種方式表達(dá): in other words, that is to say, v 表進(jìn)行舉例說明: for instance, for example, like, such as,v 表陳述事實(shí): in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truthv 表總結(jié): on the whole, in short, all in all, , in a word, in conclusion, 實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練Look at the following drawing, describe it briefly, and

20、write out how you understand it in 120 words or so. As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over-watering, though people do it for a good purpose. Simple as it is, the picture is really thought-provoking, for it vividly describes a common phenomenon that parents nowadays care too much about their children who are just like the blooming plant. Often people do things with good intentions, but the result may be quite different from expected. Too m