高考英語作文滿分技巧記敘文

1、寫作指導(dǎo) (6) 記敘文1記敘文是以敘述人物的經(jīng)歷或事物發(fā)展變化的過程為主的一種文體。2在記敘文體的高考書面表達(dá)中，命題形式主要是提綱式或圖畫式。3通常要求考生以第一人稱或第三人稱來寫作，第一人稱主要是寫自己的經(jīng)歷，第三人稱主要是寫他人的經(jīng)歷或事跡。4由于記敘文敘述的事情通常發(fā)生在過去，因而，其時態(tài)主要用一般過去時。5記敘文通常是按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序來表達(dá)內(nèi)容的。下面四幅圖片描述的是李明和爺爺從養(yǎng)鳥到放鳥的一段經(jīng)歷。請根據(jù)圖片所提供的信息以第三人稱的口吻用英語寫一篇短文。注意：1.短文必須包括所有圖片的主要內(nèi)容，內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；2詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。案例分析由題目

2、要求可知，要求考生以記敘文的形式進(jìn)行描述，即李明的爺爺從養(yǎng)鳥到放鳥整件事情的經(jīng)過。既為經(jīng)過，說明事情已經(jīng)發(fā)生，當(dāng)然要用一般過去時，人稱要用第三人稱。至于寫作順序，從圖片的安排次序可知應(yīng)從養(yǎng)鳥到放鳥，即事情發(fā)生的先后順序來寫。另外，英語寫作也不像平常的語文寫作，詞數(shù)的要求(按100詞左右)限制了較復(fù)雜寫作手法的使用。One Sunday morning，Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage.The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water.Li Ming

3、did not know why.The next morning on his way to school，Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky.Then he thought of the lonely bird in the cage.He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free.When he got home，he said to his grandpa，“Birds also need friends！” To his delight，his grandpa agreed.

4、The bird was set free.Grandpa and the children were very happy to see the bird flying away into the sky.某英語報刊的一個欄目以“談?wù)劙l(fā)生在身邊的故事”為主題展開征文活動。你校最近舉辦了一場校運(yùn)會，請你講述在校運(yùn)會期間發(fā)生在李華同學(xué)身上的一件感人的事。根據(jù)下列圖片，描述事情的經(jīng)過并簡單發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。文章的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3參考詞匯：勇氣杯 Courage Cup。Never Give UpWhen Li Hua dec

5、ided to take part in the 3,000metre race，everyone was very surprised._【參考答案】Never Give UpWhen Li Hua decided to take part in the 3,000metre race，everyone was very surprised.One of his classmates said，“Li Hua，you are not strong enough to run the 3,000 metres.”But Li Hua said，“I dont think I will win，

6、but Im determined to finish it.”During the race，each step seemed difficult for Li Hua.Suddenly he fell，breaking his glasses and his chance of winning the race.But he didnt give up.He stood up，put on his broken glasses and kept on running.“Come on，Li Hua.You can do it！” Everyone on the sports field was cheering for him.Although Li Hua was the last one to cross the finishing line，he won the Courage Cup with honor.I was deeply touched by Li Huas great determination.In my min