英語作文環(huán)保及低碳生活

1、英語作文環(huán)保及低碳生活環(huán)保類話題寫作 青州八中 王善勤We have only one We have only one world world .寫作口訣寫作口訣一審二寫三修改，一審二寫三修改，意義原因把頭開，意義原因把頭開，正文要點(diǎn)不能少，正文要點(diǎn)不能少，觀點(diǎn)愿望末尾在。觀點(diǎn)愿望末尾在。時(shí)態(tài)一致不忘懷，時(shí)態(tài)一致不忘懷，加入名句高分來。加入名句高分來。以以“Saving waterSaving water”為題寫一篇為題寫一篇7070字左右的段文。字左右的段文。1. 1. 水在我們生活中很重要。水在我們生活中很重要。 2. 2. 有人不關(guān)心節(jié)約用水，洗完手不關(guān)水龍頭。有人不關(guān)心節(jié)約用水，洗完

2、手不關(guān)水龍頭。 3. 3. 工廠往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了工廠往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了，魚死了。，魚死了。 4. 4. 我們一定要采取措施保護(hù)水。我們一定要采取措施保護(hù)水。5 5、讓我們的河流、湖泊更干凈。、讓我們的河流、湖泊更干凈。 提示詞：提示詞：care about, tap, pour waste water care about, tap, pour waste water into, do something into, do something 文體文體要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)提示詞提示詞Water is very important in our lives. We

3、cant live without it.But some people dont care about water. They dont turn off the taps after they have washed their hands .What is worse, some factories even pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Some fishes has died.In order to make rivers and lakes cleaner,We must do something to protect water.

4、Environment protection is the duty of everybody.開頭-寫明寫什么，意義、原因。have正文-中心要點(diǎn)結(jié)束-你的愿望、觀點(diǎn)Good beginning1.1.開門見山開門見山 揭示主題。揭示主題。 Water is very important in our lives.Water is very important in our lives.2. 2. 交代人物、事情、時(shí)間開頭。交代人物、事情、時(shí)間開頭。Last week we went to the lake and Last week we went to the lake and foun

5、d that it was very dirty. found that it was very dirty. 3. 3. 回憶性的開頭。回憶性的開頭。 I still remember my first trip to I still remember my first trip to the river near my hometown.the river near my hometown.Good ending1.1.首尾呼應(yīng)。首尾呼應(yīng)。 We must do something to protect water in We must do something to protect wa

6、ter in order to make the world more beautiful.order to make the world more beautiful.2.2.重復(fù)主題句。重復(fù)主題句。I love my home town, and I love its I love my home town, and I love its people. people. 3.3.名句結(jié)尾。名句結(jié)尾。 I believe we can do better in protecting I believe we can do better in protecting our world. Whe

7、re there is a will there is our world. Where there is a will there is a way.a way.寫作常見基本問題：1、要點(diǎn)描述是否齊全。2、非語法錯(cuò)誤：拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、大小寫。3、語法錯(cuò)誤：時(shí)態(tài)、詞形變化等。4、句型多樣化：過渡句、從句的使用。5、書面整潔。vNow more and more people get to know its important to protect our living environment.As a student，its my duty to do something for the eart

8、h. From now on, Ill go to school by bike or on foot instead of in a car. Ill use fewer plastic bags 【少用塑料袋】to reduce white pollution【減少白色污染】. In order to save energy Ill plant more trees so that the air will be fresher. Ill take less lift and reuse water【循環(huán)用水】. At last l will use second-hand books【使

9、用二手書】,so we dont need to cut down more trees.v If everyone takes action, our enivronment will be better and better. Our world will be more beautiful.1.眾所周知，環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕。1)As we all know, the environment is getting worse and worse. (Zhangyuyue)2)It is well-known that the environment is getting worse and

10、 worse. 2. 環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕的原因是 The reason why the environment is getting worse and worse is that (Dangmengmeng)3.所以，必須采取有效的措施來解決那些問題。 1)So effective measures must be taken to solve those problems(Liuwenshuang) 2)So we must take effective measures to solve those problems.4.真的到了我們?cè)摿⒓床扇⌒袆?dòng)保護(hù)環(huán)境的時(shí)候了。 Its high t

11、ime that we took immediate action to protect our environment. (Lijia)1.時(shí)態(tài)問題Our environment get worse and worse.2.There be 句型There had a beautiful and clear river.3.冠詞問題The environment is a important problem.is is gettinggettingwaswas或者或者used to beused to beanan4.詞性混淆The fresh air is importance to ou

12、r health.5.時(shí)態(tài)一致問題 Not only is it harmful to our life, but also it caused6.第三人稱問題 It is well-known that the earth belong to the human beings rather than individual. causescausesbelongsbelongsimportantimportant或者或者 of importanceof importance信息信息2 2信息信息3 3信息信息4 4開頭開頭正文正文結(jié)尾結(jié)尾結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)信息信息1 1信息信息5 5水污染水污染樹木遭砍

13、伐樹木遭砍伐垃圾遍地垃圾遍地總結(jié)：人人做貢獻(xiàn)，環(huán)境越來越總結(jié)：人人做貢獻(xiàn)，環(huán)境越來越美好美好各種污染的原因各種污染的原因污染對(duì)健康有危害污染對(duì)健康有危害立即采取措施解決問題立即采取措施解決問題環(huán)境被破壞的現(xiàn)狀環(huán)境被破壞的現(xiàn)狀寫作大練兵寫作大練兵 三月本應(yīng)該是個(gè)美麗的季節(jié)，但是霧霾（三月本應(yīng)該是個(gè)美麗的季節(jié)，但是霧霾（smog）天氣）天氣持續(xù)不斷再次引起了全社會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)的關(guān)注。持續(xù)不斷再次引起了全社會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)的關(guān)注。 假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫120詞左右的演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：詞左右的演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括： 1.描述現(xiàn)象描述

14、現(xiàn)象 2.原因及危害原因及危害 3.解決措施解決措施 參考詞匯：參考詞匯：二氧化碳二氧化碳carbon dioxide 環(huán)保的環(huán)保的environmentally- friendly 注意：注意：1. 詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：120詞左右；詞左右； 2. 演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，請(qǐng)將其抄寫在答題卡上且演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，請(qǐng)將其抄寫在答題卡上且該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Good morning, everyone, My name is Lihua. Im honored to give a speech here. Thank you! 概述現(xiàn)象概述現(xiàn)象 簡述原因簡述原因 指出危害指出危

15、害 解決措施解決措施 總結(jié)展望總結(jié)展望 Good morning everyone, My name is Lihua.Im very glad to give a speech here. As we all know, March is supposed to be a beautiful month. But we are facing a big problem, smog which is becoming more and more serious. The whole society is paying attention to it. v Actually, it is still a matter of air pollution. There are so many cars giving out carbon dioxide. Air pollution does great harm to our health.