Module 4 外研版英語九（上）模塊主題寫作詳解與訓(xùn)練

1、外研版英語九（上）Module 4模塊主題寫作詳解與訓(xùn)練模塊主題寫作整體感知 話題分析本模塊以“Home alone”為話題，講述了孩子與父母的關(guān)系，以及孩子獨(dú)自在家的生活經(jīng)歷及感受，旨在強(qiáng)化學(xué)生獨(dú)立自主的意識(shí)。學(xué)習(xí)了本模塊化之后，學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)用簡單的狀語從句來描述生活費(fèi)中的一些經(jīng)歷。在命題角度上，一般提供一定的情景或喝喜酒詞匯，學(xué)生可以選擇自己記憶力深刻的經(jīng)歷，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，形成完整的文章。 常用表達(dá)1. To make a timetable is necessary. 有必要制定一個(gè)作息時(shí)間表。2. Get up on time every morning. 每天早上按時(shí)起床。3. Watc

2、h TV for less than one hour. 每天看電視不能超過一小時(shí)。4. Have three meals regularly. 三餐飯要有規(guī)律。5. Remember to lock the door when going out. 外出時(shí)記得鎖門。6. Dont open the door for strangers. 不要給陌生人開門。7. I believe I would have a wonderful/great/good. time. 我相信我會(huì)玩得很開心。實(shí)例分析 典型例題假如你的父母出差不在家，你必須一個(gè)人在家待一兩天。請根據(jù)以下提示，以“My first

3、stay at home alone”為題，用英語寫一篇介紹自己獨(dú)自在家的經(jīng)歷的短文。第一次獨(dú)自留在家里的經(jīng)歷令我難忘。在我十二歲時(shí)，有一次父母都出差了，我獨(dú)自在家生活了兩天。第一天，我在他們離開不久后就起床了。在第一個(gè)晚上，我心里有點(diǎn)害怕，所以我打開所有的燈。我的臥室里整夜通明。為了第二天早上不起床晚，我在床附近設(shè)置三個(gè)鬧鐘分別在6：00，6：10和6：15響。第二天下午，我洗衣服和做飯。我為自己感到自豪，我想我長大了。提示詞：unforgettable難忘的；on business出差；feel proud of為感到自豪。注意：1. 所提供的信息必須用上。2. 條理清楚，語意連貫，句式規(guī)

4、范，字跡工整。3. 不少于70個(gè)詞。 寫作模板開篇點(diǎn)題My first experience at home alone was unforgettable.描述過程In the morning, I got up. In the afternoon, I washed clothes. In the evening, .感受I really felt proud of myself and thought I had grown up. 思路點(diǎn)撥1. 體裁：記敘文；2. 人稱：第一人稱；3. 時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)。 連句成篇My first stay at home aloneMy first

5、experience at home alone was unforgettable. When I was twelve, once both of my parents were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights.

6、I kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. In order not to get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms at 6: 00, 6: 10, and 6: 15. In order to show that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes and cooked dinner the second afternoon, thou

7、gh I could wait for Mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I had grown up.范文欣賞（一）張勇的父母要去北京出差，他獨(dú)自在家度過兩周。張勇的父母走之前給他制定了一些規(guī)則。請依據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文（可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）。提示：1. 每天按時(shí)起床、吃三餐飯和睡覺；2. 上學(xué)不要遲到；3. 看電視不要超過一小時(shí)三餐飯；4. 認(rèn)真完成作業(yè)；5. 不要給陌生人開門，記得鎖門。My parents had to go to Beijing on business. They had to leav

8、e me alone at home for two weeks. Although they worried about me, they had no choice. Before they left, they made some rulers for me. 1. Get up, have three meals and go to bed on time every day.2. Dont be late for school.3. Dont watch TV for more than one hour.4. Finish your homework carefully.5. Do

9、nt open the door for strangers. Remember to lock the door.At first, I was happy without them. Because I would be free. But I found it hard for me to look after myself. I couldnt cook dinner or wash clothes. And I felt lonely. Later I tried to learn to do the things my self. I was worried and happy d

10、uring the two weeks.（二）由于父母的溺愛，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)。請你根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，按要求用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立性。WaysThings we can dobegin with our own thingsclean our own rooms, .help with houseworkcook, .learn activelylearn by ourselvesthink about things by ourselves.要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2. 必須包含表格中

11、所有內(nèi)容，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)70左右。（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）As middle school students, its very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent? First, lets begin with our own things. Its our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework.

12、We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Dont always

13、 depend on others. I think if we keep on doing these, well become more and more independent.（三）林飛是一哥中學(xué)生，他的父母對他要求很嚴(yán)格，經(jīng)常命令他做這做那，林飛對此感到厭倦，他希望父母能讓他一個(gè)人獨(dú)立生活。上周日，這樣的機(jī)會(huì)到了請根據(jù)以上提示，發(fā)揮你的想象，以Home alone為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹以下林飛的這次經(jīng)歷。Home aloneLin Fei is a middle school student. His parents are very strict with him. H

14、e has a lot of things to do every day. His parents also want him to take part in all kinds of out of school activities. As time goes on, Lin Fei feels bored with his parents order. How he wishes that his parents would leave him alone. Last Sunday, his wish came true. He was happy when his parents we

15、nt away on buiness, though he soon found that he couldnt do simple things. He forgot his homework. He went to school with an empty stomach. He burnt his food and broke his fathers cup. Lin Fei had to learn to do tasks like cooking and tidying up. He realized being home alone was not always perfect.自

16、我展示假如今天是10月11日，星期六，父母去上海出差，你一個(gè)人在家。請根據(jù)下面提示，以Home alone for the first time為題，寫一篇70詞左右的英文日記，記錄你今天的生活。可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。上午整理自己的房間，洗了自己的衣服中午做了一頓簡單的午餐下午做作業(yè)，看電視。 外研版英語九（上）Module 4模塊主題寫作自我展示答案Saturday, October 11 SunnyHome alone for the first timeMy parents have gone to Shanghai on business, so I stay at home alone. In the morning, I tidied up my bedroom and