寫好英語高考作文的幾點(diǎn)建議

1、授課：南昌一中授課：南昌一中 鄒鄒 艷艷制作：南昌一中制作：南昌一中 鄒鄒 艷艷 2005年年福建高考卷福建高考卷(NMET)目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對(duì)此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對(duì)此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是征文，標(biāo)題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示用英請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：主要原因主要原因考試偏多、偏難考試偏多、偏難不用功、懶惰不用功、懶惰取悅父母、老師取悅父母、老師個(gè)人看法個(gè)人看法作弊不對(duì)，違反校規(guī)作弊不對(duì)，違

2、反校規(guī)要誠實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí)要誠實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí)（其他看法）（其他看法）注意：注意：1短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：100左右。左右。 4參考詞匯：作弊參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v.） My Opinion on Cheating in ExaminationsIt is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. Tables(表格表格) 2006年年湖北高考卷湖北

3、高考卷(NMET) 受某英文報(bào)的委托，你最近對(duì)高中生的英語閱讀興趣做了一次調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，用英語受某英文報(bào)的委托，你最近對(duì)高中生的英語閱讀興趣做了一次調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，用英語為該報(bào)寫一篇為該報(bào)寫一篇100詞左右的短文。短文的標(biāo)題及首句已為你寫好。詞左右的短文。短文的標(biāo)題及首句已為你寫好。調(diào)查內(nèi)容：在新聞、故事、科普、學(xué)習(xí)方法四種英文文章中，學(xué)生最喜歡哪一種調(diào)查內(nèi)容：在新聞、故事、科普、學(xué)習(xí)方法四種英文文章中，學(xué)生最喜歡哪一種?調(diào)查范圍：湖北省的調(diào)查范圍：湖北省的10所中學(xué)所中學(xué)調(diào)查對(duì)象：高中生調(diào)查對(duì)象：高中生調(diào)查人數(shù)：調(diào)查人數(shù)：1200調(diào)查方式：訪談?wù){(diào)查方式：訪談?wù){(diào)查結(jié)果：（見下圖）

4、調(diào)查結(jié)果：（見下圖） Reading Interests of Senior Middle School StudentsRecent, survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school studentsCharts（圖表）（圖表）2004年湖南高考卷年湖南高考卷(NMET)假設(shè)你是一位生活在某城市的中學(xué)生暑假打算去鄉(xiāng)村度假請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面兩幅圖提供假設(shè)你是一位生活在某城市的中學(xué)生暑假打算去鄉(xiāng)村度假請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面兩幅圖提供的信息，寫一篇短文簡要說明城市生活環(huán)境的不足，重點(diǎn)說明你去鄉(xiāng)村度假的原因的信

5、息，寫一篇短文簡要說明城市生活環(huán)境的不足，重點(diǎn)說明你去鄉(xiāng)村度假的原因注意：注意：1短文應(yīng)包括圖中所提供的主要信息，井做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文內(nèi)容連貫、完整；短文應(yīng)包括圖中所提供的主要信息，井做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文內(nèi)容連貫、完整； 2詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)： 100左右左右Pictures2006年全國高考卷（年全國高考卷（III） 假定你是李華假定你是李華, 亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在你居住的地方舉辦亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在你居住的地方舉辦, 現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在正在招募志愿者在正在招募志愿者, 你希望成為其中一員。請(qǐng)按要求用英你希望成為其中一員。請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封申請(qǐng)信文給組委會(huì)寫一封申請(qǐng)信. 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括: 個(gè)人情況：年

6、齡、性別、學(xué)歷個(gè)人情況：年齡、性別、學(xué)歷 個(gè)人條件：英語好、愛好體育、善于交往、個(gè)人條件：英語好、愛好體育、善于交往、 樂于助人、熟悉本地情況樂于助人、熟悉本地情況 承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)承諾：提供最佳服務(wù) 注意：詞數(shù)注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好左右，開頭語已為你寫好 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 生詞：申請(qǐng)生詞：申請(qǐng)apply (v.), application (n.)； 志愿者志愿者volunteerDear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for

7、the Winter Asian Games. Outline(提綱提綱)Patterns of writing Pictures 圖畫作文圖畫作文Charts 圖表作文圖表作文Tables 表格作文表格作文Outline 提綱作文提綱作文DivideFunctionsIdeas are clearly stated;well-organizeda good composition授課形式一：只用英語授課形式一：只用英語優(yōu)點(diǎn)：有助于提高聽說能力等優(yōu)點(diǎn)：有助于提高聽說能力等缺憾：不易聽懂等缺憾：不易聽懂等結(jié)論：結(jié)論：授課形式二：英語、漢語兼用授課形式二：英語、漢語兼用優(yōu)點(diǎn)：易于理解等優(yōu)點(diǎn)：易于理

8、解等缺憾：英語氛圍不濃等缺憾：英語氛圍不濃等結(jié)論：結(jié)論： Top sentence Practice:find out the top sentence of each part 1.在英語課堂上，你喜歡你的老師授課時(shí)只用英語，還是英語、漢語兼用？某英語雜在英語課堂上，你喜歡你的老師授課時(shí)只用英語，還是英語、漢語兼用？某英語雜 志社就此話題邀請(qǐng)中學(xué)生發(fā)表看法。請(qǐng)你圍繞志社就此話題邀請(qǐng)中學(xué)生發(fā)表看法。請(qǐng)你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and C

9、hinese?”這個(gè)這個(gè) 問題，參考所給要點(diǎn)，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語短文。問題，參考所給要點(diǎn)，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語短文。 I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well. Classestaught in English provide students with such an environment. When English is the

10、 only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportu-nities to practise listening and speaking. Therefore, they will be able to learnmore quickly. However, there are also some problems with this teaching method. As we havent mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find it di

11、fficultto follow the teacher. Slow learner may even lose interest in English. Practice makes perfect. To learn English well requires a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English.注意：注意：1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100120，短文開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)），短文開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）2. 參考詞匯：參考詞匯：atmosphere 氛氛圍圍

12、Top sentence Practice: find out the top sentence of each part 2. 畢業(yè)前夕，你班決定給李老師送一份禮物，大家提出兩條建議：畢業(yè)前夕，你班決定給李老師送一份禮物，大家提出兩條建議： (1)送影集送影集(album)，里面有每個(gè)同學(xué)的照片；，里面有每個(gè)同學(xué)的照片；(2)送磁帶，錄有每個(gè)同學(xué)對(duì)老師的祝福。送磁帶，錄有每個(gè)同學(xué)對(duì)老師的祝福。 請(qǐng)以請(qǐng)以“An Album or a Tape”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。首先簡述以上兩條建議，然后為題，用英語寫一篇短文。首先簡述以上兩條建議，然后 表明你同意其中哪一條并說明理由。表明你同意其中哪一

13、條并說明理由。 a短文必須以第一人稱書寫。短文必須以第一人稱書寫。 b詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：100詞左右。詞左右。 An Album or A tape How time flies! Well soon graduate and say goodbye to our dear teachers and classmates. To show our thanks to Miss Li, we have made a decision to send her a present. Will an album or a tape do? Some of us prefer an album with ev

14、eryones photo inside. After graduation, there will be few chances to meet again. With an album Miss Li can see us at any time. While others think a tape will be more meaningful, on which our wishes are recorded. Each time Miss Li plays the tape, our voices will remind her of the pleasant days we hav

15、e had together. In my opinion, an album is the best choice. Once Miss Li opens the album and looks at the photos one by one, the good old days are to arise in her mind. On the other hand, compared with a tape, an album will last longer. Top sentence Practice:write down the top sentence of each part

16、(answers may vary)1. 假設(shè)你是李華，加拿大一所學(xué)校將于今年暑假組織學(xué)生來你校訪問。其間，假設(shè)你是李華，加拿大一所學(xué)校將于今年暑假組織學(xué)生來你校訪問。其間，Andy Smith將將 借住你家。請(qǐng)你代表全家寫信給借住你家。請(qǐng)你代表全家寫信給Andy，歡迎他的到來，并告知有關(guān)事宜。信的要點(diǎn)如下：，歡迎他的到來，并告知有關(guān)事宜。信的要點(diǎn)如下： 上午：學(xué)?；顒?dòng)上午：學(xué)校活動(dòng) 下午：游覽市區(qū)下午：游覽市區(qū) 晚上：看電視，玩游戲，聊天晚上：看電視，玩游戲，聊天 注意：注意： 1)詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：100左右左右 2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3)參考詞匯：安排參

17、考詞匯：安排arrange Dear Andy, _ _.I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, Ill show you around and take you to some places of interest. Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. Im sure well have a wo

18、nderful time and enjoy each others company. _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Top sentence Practice: write down the top sentence of each part(answers may vary) 2. 根據(jù)以下圖畫，寫一篇英語短文，描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生根據(jù)以下圖畫，寫一篇英語短文，描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生 活帶來的影響。注意：活帶來的影響。注意：1）詞數(shù)：）詞數(shù)：100左右左右2）生詞：通訊：）生詞：通訊：communication n _ _

19、 _.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. Whats more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whe- never they like. With these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more eff

20、icient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. _ _ _As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, after hardstudy , music can bring us relaxation , which reduces the tiredness

21、.This can help usmake full preparations for the next class .Listening to music also makes us feel happy . _In their opinion , they cant get the expected effect from playing music , for the class break time is too short .What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by

22、 music . _In this way students can enjoy music as well ashave a good rest .Besides ,I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students. Top sentence Practice: write down the top sentence of each part (answers may vary) 3.隨著科技的進(jìn)步，多媒體已走進(jìn)很多學(xué)校的課堂。課間休息時(shí)，有些學(xué)校利用它來播隨著科技的進(jìn)步，多媒體已走進(jìn)很多學(xué)校的

23、課堂。課間休息時(shí)，有些學(xué)校利用它來播 放音樂。你班就放音樂。你班就“課間是否要播放音樂課間是否要播放音樂”展開討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息用英語展開討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息用英語 寫一篇短文，陳述討論結(jié)果及你個(gè)人的看法、建議寫一篇短文，陳述討論結(jié)果及你個(gè)人的看法、建議 。（字?jǐn)?shù)。（字?jǐn)?shù) 120 詞左右）詞左右）大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為 部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為個(gè)人看法個(gè)人看法能活躍氣氛能活躍氣氛 ；能使大腦得到放松，減輕學(xué)習(xí)的疲勞，使大家在快能使大腦得到放松，減輕學(xué)習(xí)的疲勞，使大家在快樂的氛圍中做好下一堂課的準(zhǔn)備樂的氛圍中做好下一堂課的準(zhǔn)備 ；能給大家?guī)砜鞓纺芙o大家?guī)砜鞓氛n間時(shí)

24、間太短課間時(shí)間太短 ，播放音，播放音樂達(dá)不到預(yù)期的效果；樂達(dá)不到預(yù)期的效果；課間需要的是安靜而不是課間需要的是安靜而不是嘈雜的聲音嘈雜的聲音 ?？忌愂隹忌愂鯩aking compositions look better (形式形式)fluent expression;good mastery of sentence structure;coherent(連貫連貫)a good composition：Find out all the conjunctions in the passage Homework (1)2005年年福建高考卷福建高考卷(NMET)目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象

25、。某英文雜志社擬對(duì)此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對(duì)此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是征文，標(biāo)題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示用英請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下： Coherence（連貫性）（連貫性）主要原因主要原因考試偏多、偏難考試偏多、偏難不用功、懶惰不用功、懶惰取悅父母、老師取悅父母、老師個(gè)人看法個(gè)人看法作弊不對(duì)，違反校規(guī)作弊不對(duì)，違反校規(guī)要誠實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí)要誠實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí)（其他看法）（其他看法）注意：注意：1短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；短文必

26、須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：100左右。左右。 4參考詞匯：作弊參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v.） My Opinion on Cheating in ExaminationsIt is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用（使用V-ing形式）形式）2. To his surprise, the li

27、ttle girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）（使用名詞性從句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句使用倒裝句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 5.As a result, the plan was a failure.On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is

28、that the little girl knows so many things.Appreciate the following sentencesWeak as I am, Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. The plan turned out to be a failure. rewrite the following sentences6.She walked out of the lab and man

29、y students followed her. (使用過去使用過去分詞分詞)7.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用使用V-ing形式形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語從句）（使用狀語從句） 9.We all think he is a great man.10. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Followed by man

30、y students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. We all think highly of him . ExcellentExcellentIdeas are clearly stated/supported; to the point; well-organized;fluent expression; good mastery of sentence structure ;coherent

31、(連貫連貫)2125GoodGoodcover all the information given in the outline; smooth ; no major mistakes in sentence structure1620FairFairloosely organized but main ideas are clear; occasional errors of word/idiom1115PoorPoorlimited or no knowledge about the subject; ideas are confused ;lack logical order610Fai

32、lFailno knowledge about the subject05英語高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)20012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。 I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was v

33、ery tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspap-ers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.1717分分2001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Bef

34、ore that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit