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1、寫作點撥系列:看圖作文看圖進行書面表達的基本要求是:認真審圖,確立主題,提煉要點,展開聯(lián)想,變點為句,連句成篇。要達到這些要求,我們就必須認真審圖,善于利用圖中人物間的關(guān)系、人物的對話、人物的活動及所處場所,以及圖中的文字說明和標(biāo)識來提煉要點;要圍繞主題展開合理的想象切忌游離于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想。高考看圖作文技巧/ 方法指導(dǎo)五步法:1.仔細審題:包括文體,人稱,時態(tài). / 理解到位:整體把握一組圖的連貫性理解及題目要求。2.歸納要點:保證文章內(nèi)容的完整. / 基礎(chǔ)到位:用簡單句寫出每幅圖的主題句。3.擴展成句:注意英語表達的習(xí)慣,根據(jù)提綱擴展句子. / 細節(jié)到位:注意每幅圖的次要內(nèi)容(時間
2、,地點,方式,原因等)4.連句成篇:利用一些表示轉(zhuǎn)折,因果,選擇等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞和過渡句,把句子連接起來. / 表達到位:按情節(jié)發(fā)展先后,承上啟下整理成文。5.全面檢查:格式文體,要點,語法,字?jǐn)?shù)等. / 檢查到位:對照各幅圖檢查全文定稿。高考看圖作文的體裁:記敘文:要抓住記敘文的六要素:when, where, who, what, why, how. 即五個“W”和一個“H”。要注意人物與空間的關(guān)系,畫面與畫面的關(guān)系,要點與發(fā)揮的關(guān)系。說明文:(另見圖表式作文)議論文:(見漫畫作文)記敘類例題展示1:下列四幅圖描述了李華一家某一天的經(jīng)歷。請根據(jù)畫面及圖中的有關(guān)提示,寫一篇120字左右的短文。
3、注意:可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),并展開合理的想象,使使故事完整連貫。 第一步:認真看圖,確立主題 結(jié)合文字和圖畫,確立所要表達的主題是什么。根據(jù)“四幅圖描述了李華一家某一天的經(jīng)歷”一段文字提示,結(jié)合第一幅圖中的日歷上所表示的時間( 3月8日) ,我們可以確立本篇書面表達的主題是:李華要做些家務(wù)事來為他的媽媽慶祝“3.8”婦女節(jié)。第二步:圍繞主題,提煉要點第一幅圖:李華把他的主意告訴父親 第二幅圖:李華掃地、父親洗衣服 第三幅圖:李華和父親下廚房做菜 第四幅圖:餐桌上有花瓶、飲料、魚、肉等等第三步:合理想象,補出要點第一幅圖:李華為什么要把他的主意告訴父親? 求得父親的幫助或配合第二幅圖:李華和父親為什
4、么要選擇做家務(wù)?這些家務(wù)平時都是由母親做的第三幅圖:可想象他們做了除圖畫表現(xiàn)出的 fish, pork外,還有沒有其它菜 。比如: chicken, soup and other delicious dishes.第四幅圖中沒有一個人出現(xiàn),為什么,留給考生進行合理的想象:李華和父親是不是藏起來了?其目的是什么 :可能是等母親回家時以給她一個驚喜。第四步:確定時態(tài),譯出要點 確定表達時所用的正確時態(tài),將圍繞主題初選出的要點和經(jīng)過合理想象補出的要點翻譯出來。本篇敘述的是李華一家過去某一天(“3.8”婦女節(jié))所發(fā)生的事,應(yīng)該用過去時來表達。寫作題綱:1、體裁: 2、主要時態(tài):本篇敘述的是李華一家過去
5、某一天(“3.8”婦女節(jié))所發(fā)生的事,應(yīng)該用 。3、人稱: 4、要點: 第一幅圖 On March the eighth, Womens Day, LiHua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him.第二幅圖 They decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. LiHua cleaned the house
6、completely. His father did some washing.第三幅圖 They made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes.第四幅圖 LiHua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. They hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother. They wanted to give her
7、a happy surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very curious and happy. 第五步:連句成篇,過渡自然 對譯出的要點通過合理的組合,加上必要的連接詞或詞語以及照顧到文章的首尾呼應(yīng),再加上必要的結(jié)束語。學(xué)以致用:運用以上方法把下面這篇文章寫出來1.(2012·陜西高考) 假定你是李華。下面的圖畫描述了教師節(jié)那天你們班組織的一次活動,請根據(jù)寫作要點并參考圖畫內(nèi)容,為??坝⒄Z角”版面寫一篇短文。 寫作要點:1.
8、活動的策劃;2. 教室的布置; 3. 活動的內(nèi)容;4. 你的感想。 Ms. Li, our English teacher, did not receive a single greeting card from us students early on Teachers Day. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. _項 目結(jié) 論體 裁_話 題_時 態(tài)_人 稱_【定點把握要點,遣詞造句】第1段:點明話題令人吃驚的教師節(jié)(已給出)第2段:教師節(jié)準(zhǔn)備【信息】圖畫描述了教師節(jié)那天你們班組織的一次
9、活動【點撥】轉(zhuǎn)化人稱,分析圖畫,結(jié)合提示確定活動內(nèi)容【運用】(1)隨著教師節(jié)的來臨,作為今年的一次改變, 我們班決定舉辦一場晚會來慶祝這個重要的日子。一般表達:Teachers Day was approaching. Our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. 高級表達:(用連詞合并句子)_, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this y
10、ear. (2)9月10號的那天下午,我們中的一些同學(xué)用紙花和氣球來裝飾教室,其他同學(xué)去買蛋糕、飲料和水果。On the afternoon of September 10,_, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. (3)黑板上裝飾有漂亮的字,上面寫著“教師節(jié)快樂”。The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, 第3段:活動的內(nèi)容【信息】分析圖畫中的內(nèi)容:女教師、學(xué)生站隊、鮮花等【點撥】適度發(fā)揮,切合圖畫內(nèi)容即可【運用】(4)走進教室,李老師吃驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)我們正列隊等候,拍著手大聲
11、地說“教師節(jié)快樂”。_, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, _ and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day! ”(5)我們班的班長王華把準(zhǔn)備好的花送給了她。Wang Hua, our monitor, _(6)一些女生為李老師唱起了歌,三位男生表演了功夫。Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, _第4段:你的感想【信息】緊扣教師節(jié),表達對老師的感謝【點撥】感想符合教師節(jié)話題內(nèi)容即可【運用】(7)李老師與我們一起愉快地度過了教師節(jié),但我們知道她的辛
12、勤勞動和對我們的指導(dǎo)我們再怎么表達感謝也不為過。Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, _. 2.假設(shè)你是一位生活在某城市的中學(xué)生,暑假打算去鄉(xiāng)村度假。請根據(jù)下面兩幅圖提供的信息,寫一篇短文。簡要說明城市生活的不足,重點說明你去鄉(xiāng)村度假的原因。注意:1短文應(yīng)包括圖中所提供的主要信息,并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文內(nèi)容連貫、完整; 2詞數(shù):100左右。 命題目的與解題技巧:本題考查圖表作文?!窘馕觥?此書面表達有圖畫兼文字提示,因此考生在動筆前先要審閱提示。如:文章的體裁為說明文,說明要去鄉(xiāng)村度假的原因。寫作提綱 1.人稱: 。2.體裁: 3.時態(tài):以 主。陳述城鄉(xiāng)環(huán)
13、境差別時可用 4.寫作要點: (1“我”要去鄉(xiāng)下度假的打算。 (2城市化所存在的問題(擁擠、嗓音、空氣污染)。 (3鄉(xiāng)下的環(huán)境(空氣、山、水、樹木、鳥兒等)。 關(guān)聯(lián)詞:although,still,so,whats more,besides,also,above a11等。 3.假設(shè)你參加所在年級的英文寫作比賽,請按如下要求完成一篇短文:(1.簡要描述下圖內(nèi)容,并點名主題;(2.聯(lián)系實際,表達該圖帶給你的啟示 注意:A.詞數(shù)不少于120個; B不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱 寫作提綱 1.人稱: 2.體裁: 3.時態(tài): 4.寫作要點:第一段描寫:海洋由水滴組成、森林由樹木組成、社會有個人組成三幅圖
14、畫;最后一句點明主題“積少成多”,第一段就輕松拿下。第二段:文章的主體段:分析圖畫的深層含義,在提綱中也已經(jīng)有規(guī)定“聯(lián)系實際”。找準(zhǔn)文章的主題“積少成多”,聯(lián)系同學(xué)們的校園生活就不會“無言以對”。 比如Unity is strength.(團結(jié)就是力量)A little progress a day makes you a big success(每天進步一點點,點點積累成大器)第三段:結(jié)尾段的個人總結(jié)將第一段提到的“積少成多”的圖畫主題重聲,并給出一個較為深刻的思想,比如we should work together harmoniously and try our best to make
15、 a contribution to human society.(我們應(yīng)該一起和諧地工作并盡我們最大的努力來為社會作貢獻)。Nobody can be great successful just overnight. 任何人都不可能一夜之間獲得巨大的成功結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、邏輯明確的“三段式”寫法永遠是高考英語寫作的“不二法寶”,基礎(chǔ)詞匯和表達的平時積累定能為你的高分作文保駕護航。范文欣賞:1. It was March the eighth that day, Womens Day. LiHua had a good idea and told his father that he was goin
16、g to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. LiHua cleaned the house completely while his father did some washing. Then they made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicio
17、us dishes. LiHua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. After that they hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother so as to give her a happy surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very surprised and ha
18、ppy. LiHua thought it was an unforgettable and meaningful day, because he did something for his mother.2. Ms. Li, our English teacher, did not receive a single greeting card from us students early on Teachers Day. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.As Teachers Day w
19、as approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon of September 10,some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful w
20、ords, which read “Happy Teachers Day!”Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day!” Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys showed t
21、heir kung fu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li. Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.3. I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenient, ther
22、e are still some problems, such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life. There, the air is fresh and the water is clean; trees are green and birds are singing. I can also go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. What's more, I can
23、 climb the hills. All these will be interesting and good for my health. Above all, I can learn more about nature. So I want to go to the countryside for a change. I'm looking forward to the coming of my summer holiday. 4 Unity is powerMany drops of water can make up a sea. Many trees can turn in
24、to a forest. And society consists of individuals and individuals live in society. The picture is simple but very instructive. It tells us a truth that unity is power. Life is full of ups and downs and there are always many difficulties lying on the road that leads to success. When we come across som
25、e difficulties, what should we do to solve the problems? Of course unity can help us a lot.For example, on 5th December,2008, a terrible earthquake happened in Sichuan province. Many people were injured and lots of people died but those who were still alive didnt lose confidence , because not only t
26、he whole nation were united and went there to help them out but also some individuals and organizations abroad gave their hands to the area. With all the help, Sichuan has been rebuilt well now.Unity is power. It makes us walk together and live better. Im sure that with the help of unity we can overcome any difficulty. As the picture shows, only when the drops of water come together can they become a wide sea; only when t
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