實(shí)例講解托福高分作文的寫(xiě)作技巧.doc

1、實(shí)例講解托福高分作文的寫(xiě)作技巧言簡(jiǎn)樸實(shí)原那么是行文主張不寫(xiě)啰嗦或絢麗的字眼(flowery or wordy)，一句能用兩個(gè)字，絕不多加一個(gè)。例如：At this point in time, we should pull together for our goal.(如今我們應(yīng)該為我們的目的團(tuán)結(jié)一致)這句話中At this point in time表示如今，我們完全可以用now來(lái)代替。Despite the fact that my English is not very good, I am not discouraged.(雖然我的英語(yǔ)不好，但我不灰心。)這句話中despite the

2、 fact tha t= although = though, 因此我們完全可以改成Although my English is not very good, I am not discouraged.In the majority of cases, he likes to ride bike to the offe.(他通常喜歡騎單車(chē)到辦公室)。很簡(jiǎn)單的一句話，完全可以寫(xiě)成 He usually likes to ride bike to the offe.平時(shí)我們所說(shuō)的用詞多樣化和地道并不是表達(dá)在這些時(shí)間副詞或者是完全可以簡(jiǎn)化的啰嗦句型上，而是指實(shí)用性極強(qiáng)的詞如動(dòng)詞和形容詞，比方：Ori

3、nal: Solving trivial problems in the dorm will add your social eperience and help you to understand other peoples feelings and learn to be kind.Revised: Solving trivial problems in the dorm will enrh your social eperience and help you to understand other peoples feelings and learn to be considerate.

4、add,kind表達(dá)的含義都比擬廣泛。add可以指數(shù)量上的增加，也可以指程度的加強(qiáng)，對(duì)于豐富經(jīng)歷、增加知識(shí)這個(gè)意思，用enrh會(huì)使表達(dá)更準(zhǔn)確。kind從字面意義上講是好的、仁慈的，用kind來(lái)形容人無(wú)法詳細(xì)地表現(xiàn)出一個(gè)人的性格特征到底怎樣，原句中是想表達(dá)考慮周到、體貼入微的特點(diǎn)，要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)這個(gè)含義應(yīng)選擇considerate。另外，我們常見(jiàn)的一些負(fù)擔(dān)用詞表如今句意的理解上，比方：He has had many years of (actual) eperience in business.(他有多年經(jīng)商的經(jīng)歷) actual是多余的，因?yàn)閑perience已經(jīng)有actual的意味了。We as

5、sembled (together) all the parts for our radio.(我們裝好收音機(jī)的零件)assemble本身就有together的意思，因此together是多余的。此外還有，in reference to=about; draw to close=end; at an early date=soon等?？偸牵谕懈５膶?xiě)作過(guò)程中，大家始終明確準(zhǔn)確不代表負(fù)擔(dān)，能吸引閱卷人注意的內(nèi)容，不一定是冗長(zhǎng)的句子和高難的詞匯。托福寫(xiě)作要防止9種開(kāi)頭方式本文為大家整理了托福寫(xiě)作備考之需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式，便于考生托福備考。1、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式廢話連篇典型失敗案例： 1-

6、Should college students beallowed to get marriedThis is very interesting.Im very interestedin talking about this .Because Im also a collegestudent and Im not married2、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式中式英文典型失敗案例：1-The hiest moment in your lifeIn our life, there are always some moments whh make your heart flower opened

7、angrily2- The population problemThe population problem is a very big problem.For ele, in the city centers ofShanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.3、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式觀點(diǎn)模糊典型失敗案例： -Should college students be allowed to get marriedI think this is very hard to say.Because I am still v

8、ery little, only 17, and not married,so this is very diffult for me4、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式偏離主題典型失敗案例：-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifations andquality essential to success through university education.To what etent do you agree ordisagree with the statementI think to success, we mus

9、t have a lot of important qualities.To have these importantqualities, we must learn a lot of things, for ele, English, mus tools, and etc.We can learnthese qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books.All in all, we can learn from manyplaces.5、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤典型失敗案例：-If children behave

10、badly, should their parents accept responsibility andalso be punishedAbout this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right.Because teach child is parents responsibility.So we also punish parents too besides children isalso should.6、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單典型失敗案例：-The importa

11、nce of environmental protectionThis issue is surely very important, lets talk about it!7、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式意思重復(fù)典型失敗案例：-Your opinion on DINK familiesMy opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing.And it is a bad thing.It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes ha

12、rmful to our society.8、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式胡亂翻譯典型失敗案例： 1-Is it good to have a large familyI think it is good to have a large family.Because we Chinese believe a sentence: Manysons, many lucks9、托福作文中需要防止的開(kāi)頭方式觀點(diǎn)武斷典型失敗案例：1-The importance of confidenceIn my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person.All the successfulpeople in the world are full of confidence.While those people who dont have confidence,they all have failed.2 - The solution to the traff problem