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1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)（一）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining heavily that afternoon and there were few people in

2、the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to stand up. At that time, he found it was a dead man and there was

3、much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him. The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours?” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(膽怯地). “Have you killed the man?

4、” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man?” “At about seven last night.” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet?” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat(打) him up and

5、sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap(設(shè)陷阱) the farmer into the confession(供認(rèn)), but the farmer didnt admit he was the murderer(謀殺犯).注意：1. 所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2. 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1: The officer was so angry that he asked the polic

6、eman to beat him up again. The farmer was lucky .A few days later, Possible answer:Paragraph 1The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he was innocent. He must tell peop

7、le the truth, but no one could hear his voice. He hoped that someone could come and save him.Paragraph 2The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow!

8、 He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. He was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent in

9、to prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.簡評(píng)：1. The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people.這一句可以改為形容詞作狀語的懸垂結(jié)構(gòu)：Afraid / Frightened, the farmer thought he would be sen

10、tenced to death by killing people.2. He hoped that someone could come and save him.可改成感嘆句，語氣更加強(qiáng)烈：How he hoped that someone could come and save him!3. .a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. 后半部分詞作狀語，構(gòu)成懸垂結(jié)構(gòu)。saying可以換成declaring 宣布; saw可換成witn

11、essed,目擊。4. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! 強(qiáng)調(diào)句，高級(jí)。強(qiáng)調(diào)部分還可以加上否定內(nèi)容使語意更加完整。此處可以用到It was not. but. that .或者It was . rather than.that .即：It was not the farmer but the police officer that killed the man on the snow! 或者It was the police officer rather than the farmer that killed t

12、he man on the snow!5. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. 中took the great courage to 鼓起極大勇氣做某事。6. After the investigation, the young man was right. 建議改為：After investigation,the police found what the young man had said was the truth. 7. The police officer was sent into prison an

13、d the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.最后一句可以適當(dāng)加上副詞。Immediately, the police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired. Eventually,the poor farmer was released and the brave young man wa

14、s regarded as the hero by the villagers.讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)（二）I was responding to a call from a small brick flat(用磚做的公寓) in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was being sent to pick up some party-goers，or someone who had just had a fight with a lover，or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the i

15、ndustrial part of town.When I arrived at 2：30 a.m.， the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances， many drivers just honk（按喇叭） once or twice，wait a minute，then drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only mea

16、ns of transportation.Unless a situation smelled of danger，I always went to the door.This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance，I reasoned to myself. So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute，” answered a frail，elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floo

17、r. After a long pause，the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat ，like somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon suitcase.The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with

18、 sheets. There were no clocks on the walls， no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.“Would you carry my bag out to the car？” she said. I took the suitcase to the cab，then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm，and we walked slowly towar

19、d the cab.She kept thanking me for my kindness. “Its nothing,” I told her. “I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated.”注意：1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1: Having given me an address, a hospice , she a

20、sked. “Could you drive through downtown?” Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it Paragraph 1: Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown?” Asked why we didnt take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last ch

21、ance for her to visit the city. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. Besides, she asked me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At last, she said she was tired and wanted to go to the hospice.Pa

22、ragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it was a low building,where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up. I opened the trunk and took the suitcase to the door and the woman w

23、as already seated in a wheelchair. When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her a bug . It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.簡評(píng)：1. Asked why we didnt take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance fo

24、r her to visit the city. 這一句句式靈活，asked分詞作狀語,why引導(dǎo)一個(gè)賓語從句，后面主語部分也有一個(gè)賓語從句。2. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. 定語從句，由where引導(dǎo)。3. and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. 現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。4. a low building,where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two

25、 nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up.兩個(gè)定語從句。5. When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her a bug .時(shí)間狀語從句。6. It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.強(qiáng)調(diào)句。讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)（三） A friend of mi

26、ne, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office, a street urchin(頑童), called Tom, was walking around the shining car. “Is this your car, sir?” Tom asked. “Yes, my brother gave it to me for Christmas.” Jack answered.

27、 Tom was surprised. “You mean your brother gave it to you and it cost you nothing? Sir, I wish” He hesitated(猶豫).Jack thought of course(路線), he knew what Tom wanted, but what Tom said surprised him greatly. “I wish,” Tom went on, “that I could be a brother like that.” Jack looked at Tom in surprise,

28、 and then he said again, “Would you like to take a ride(搭車) in my car?” “Oh yes, Idlove to,” Tom answered.After a short ride, Tom turned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my house?” Jack smiled a little. He thought he knew what Tom wanted. He wanted to show hi

29、s neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong again. “Will you stop where those two steps(臺(tái)階) are?” Tom asked.注意：1所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1He got out and ran up to the steps. Paragraph 2Jack got out and lif

30、ted the boy to the front seat of his car. Paragraph 1He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard Tom coming back, but he was not coming fast. Tom was carrying his little crippled(殘疾的) brother. He sat down on the step and pointed to the car. “There he is, Buddy, just like I t

31、old you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didnt cost him a cent. And some day Im going to give you one just like itthen you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas windows that Ive been trying to tell you about”Paragraph 2Jack got out and lifted the boy to t

32、he front seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday ride., looking at all those beautiful things. That Christmas Eve, Jack learned the real meaning of the words: “Its more blessed to give than to receive.” He also learned what i

33、t means to be “an elder brother like that.”讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)（四）Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living. One night I went to pick up a passenger at 2:30 a. m. When I arrived to collect, I found the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. I walked to the door and knocked, Just

34、 a minute, answered a weak, elderly voice. After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her eighties stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase. I took the suitcase to the car, and then returned to help the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly towards the car. She kept thanking

35、 me for my kindness. Its nothing, I told her. I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated. Oh, youre such a good man. She said. When we got into the taxi, she gave me an address, and then asked, Could you drive through downtown? Its not the shortest way, I answered quick

36、ly. Oh, Im in no hurry, she said. Im on my way to a hospice (臨終醫(yī)院). I dont have any family left. The doctor says I dont have very long. I quietly reached over and shut off the meter (計(jì)價(jià)器). For the next two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked, the ne

37、ighborhood where she had lived, and the furniture shop that had once been a ballroom where she had gone dancing as a girl. Sometimes shed ask me to slow down in front of a particular building and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At dawn, she suddenly said, Im tired. Lets go now.

38、We drove in silence Lo the address she had given me. How much do I owe you? she asked. Nothing. I said. You have to make a living, she answered. Oh, there are other passengers, I answered. She said thanks to me, but she looked so sad.注意：1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫

39、好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1 Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. Paragraph 2 I was on my way to visit her. Possible answer:Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly. Before the woman left , I said to her, “My mother treated everyone kindly,

40、 she is a great person, but she passed away years ago. you are like my mother,” the woman said, “ thank you. If you want to visit me,Ill tell you my story.” Then the woman left. After a long pause, I drove the taxi to go home.Paragraph 2 The next day, I was on my way to visit her. The old woman told

41、 me that she used to be a millionaire. She became immersed in making money. She was the owner of a particular building we saw last night. But she neglected her family. her only son died one year ago because of cancer. She sold everything to save him, but failed. How sad！ At last, the old woman said

42、to me, “Life is short, but please be in no hurry. Though everyone has to earn money to make a living, always remember that family is the most important thing to you,” I said nothing but nodded hard.讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)（六）Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my par

43、ents home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station(加油站)about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款臺(tái)), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas. I took off, but had gone only

44、a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friends .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the h

45、usband gave me his business card. I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful. Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the mornin

46、g. In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that Id left the lights on all day, and the battery(電池)was dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.注意：1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下

47、劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1 I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. Paragraph 2 After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. Possible answer:Paragraph 1 I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. I re

48、cognized him at once. the two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership. “ Hey, its you! you ever helped me, remember?” I said to them excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people. you know, it makes our life so mean

49、ingful!”Paragraph 2 After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. they solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. they told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you,

50、 but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy about.讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)（七）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 Jack, a clerk at the local bank, was wandering alone on the street. It was a cold, silent winter night. His mind was on his wife Linda, who had been in a car a

51、ccident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed, waiting for more money for her operation. Jack had sold everything he had, and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could. But the real world is cruel. A large amount of money was still needed. To Jack, it

52、would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help. “I have only one option left,” Jack said to himself. Then he went the bank, his workplace, again. For several days, he observed the bank and planned a theft. The next day, he went to work as usual. Everything seemed normal: he joked with his workmates and h