【英語學(xué)習(xí)】TOEFL Writing

1、TOEFL Writing整理課件FC: recommendationo 1.把“不擇手段背單詞”導(dǎo)入金山詞霸o Insouciant o Pout o Putrefaction o 2. 下載Merriam-Webster 整理課件SB. Changjun. Senior Grade 2o First and foremost, to live in a big city can bring about a great deal of convenience. The reason is obvious. In the first place, the big city has develo

2、ped public transportation system. The best example to exemplified and illustrated this idea is that we do not have to worry about how to go to the destination if we do not have a car, (for, since, because) we can just take the subway, bus or taxi. All of them are convenient and save the time. 整理課件o

3、What is more, there are many shopping malls, super markets and restaurants in the big city. Lending credence to my position is the fact that when I do not want to prepare tedious and complicated meal, I can go outside and choose a fancy restaurant. The big city provides us with lots of (a variety of

4、) choices such as Mexican food, western food, barbecue, and fast food. Instead of worrying about how to change the favor and type of food at home, we can go outside and eat the food from all over the world if we live in a big city.整理課件o Another equally significant reason for my position lies in the

5、fact that the big city brings a variety of fun for our life. There is no denying the fact that many people are looking for a best way to spend their leisure time. To listen a live concert, to drink some beer in the bar, to have fun in the KTV are the choices people always makes. Countless surveys in

6、dicate that people in increasing numbers are willing to relief the pressure from work and study and therefore a big city is the best place to fulfill their requirements. Consequently, it is no exaggeration to say that living in a big city exerts an undeniable favorable impact on our life.整理課件o Apart

7、 from the two reasons mentioned above, there is another vital factor deserving some words here. We can first reach the top technological products in a big city. IN ADDITION, we have the best opportunity to meet our favorite movie star, both of which are readily accessible in a modern metropolis.整理課件

8、o Admittedly, this is not the whole story. The quiet and clean environment of the small town is readily discernible, such as beautiful field, lovely animals and amazing views of sunset. However, the benefits of living in a big city , as I mentioned above, outweigh that of the small town, and therefo

9、re I reinforce my standpoint that big city brings more benefits for us to live in.整理課件o 或：To sum up, living in a big city not only endows us with considerable convenience but also provides us with fun and high-technology. Therefore, I reinforce my standpoint that big city brings more benefits for us

10、 to live in. (把前面觀點(diǎn)總結(jié)下)整理課件o 層次+細(xì)節(jié)=成功o 清晰的框架o 到位的細(xì)節(jié)o 簡(jiǎn)單的開頭o 成熟的結(jié)尾整理課件綜合部分得分示意ReadingListeningRelationScore(Raw)Only Copy000改寫0/little01改寫1Omitted 2改寫2聯(lián)系有誤3改寫3但細(xì)節(jié)遺漏不全面4改寫3 完美細(xì)節(jié)全面5整理課件oA-R1oB-R2oC-R3oA-R1oB-R2oC-R3整理課件寫作的三大境界o 1.what to writeo 2.elaborate what to writeo 3.refine and polish it TOEFL?GR

11、E?整理課件Building Blockso P109o Complementary vocabulary:o run counter too Conflict with o Challenge o Object to o Contrast with o Deviate from 整理課件o 聽力材料聽力材料：1.the listening part/material/passage/-o 2. the lecture(r)o 3. the professoro 4. the speakero 閱讀材料：閱讀材料：o the reading part/material/passage/-整理課

12、件Template o Introduction:聽總+讀總（含兩者關(guān)系）+（再次點(diǎn)明關(guān)系）o P1:聽1+聽聽1細(xì)節(jié)細(xì)節(jié)+讀1o P2:聽2+聽聽2細(xì)節(jié)細(xì)節(jié)+讀2o P3:聽3+聽聽3細(xì)節(jié)細(xì)節(jié)+讀3o Conclusion (Omitted)整理課件Example:o Firstly, the speaker raises the issue that 聽1總 . According to him, 聽1的所有細(xì)節(jié). On the contrary, the passage, rather deviating from the speaker, demonstrates that 讀1總+讀

13、1細(xì)節(jié)（略）o Therefore, this point is contradicted by what the lecture contends. （不必要） 整理課件The Reading Parto 一.改寫的訓(xùn)練o 1. 同義詞 wayo 2. 同根詞 appreciate o 3. 短語 many o 4. 主動(dòng)被動(dòng)的替換o 5. 全新的表達(dá)法o Amazing changes in C.S took place over the past 50 years. 整理課件o The past 50 years (have) witnessed amazing changes in C

14、.S.o The past half century was accompanied by amazing changes in C.S. 整理課件o Example: A large company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near the community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Expla

15、in your position. 整理課件二.The Obstacles of Reading o 1. 單詞真空o 2. 從小到大整理課件三.WAY OUTo Purpose: obtain information effectively and efficiently o 1. Feel comfortable about the new words you encounter: ignore o 2. 從大到小: o a). Discover keywordso b) summarize the key words 整理課件Topic: Teamworko Reading: ado 1

16、. more knowledgeo 2. more quicklyo More 人/more Ro 3. creative o Risky decisiono Spreads responsibility to all o Listening: disad整理課件PRACTICE o o The Meerkats 整理課件The listening Parto Two Premises:o 1. Cantonese: 1000 hourso 2. English?整理課件The Way Outo 1. devote timeo o 2. effective listening 整理課件o Listen to long passages and write down key words. Then combine key words to sentences. And then orally summar