最新高中英語寫作專項(xiàng)提高訓(xùn)練：(17)建議信(一)

1、建議信一一、書面表達(dá)2021年山東青島考前適應(yīng)性測(cè)試假定你是李華,你的留學(xué)生朋友Peter發(fā)郵件說,他正在學(xué)漢語,但感覺很吃力,請(qǐng)求你給予幫助.請(qǐng)給他回封郵件,內(nèi)容包括：1 .舉例說明漢語學(xué)習(xí)的特點(diǎn)；2 .提供一些可行的建議.注意：1 .詞數(shù)100左右；2 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫._參考范文DearPeter,Hopethise-mailfindsyouwell!LasttimeyousaidyouwerelearningChinesebutencounteredsomedifficulties.It'sinevitablebecauseEnglishemphasizesthe

2、structure,whileChinesefocusesonthemeaning.Withregardtothematteryoumentionedinyourletter,mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,Iwouldrecommendyoutofindanativespeakerasalanguagepartner,andmeetwithhimonaregularbasis.Besides,watchingChinesemoviesandlisteningtoChinesesongscanmakethelearningprocessmuchmoreint

3、eresting.Thosearethetipsonmymindnow.Iwouldalwaysbepleasedtoofferyouhelp.Idohopeyouwillfindtheseproposalspractical.Yourssincerely,LiHua二、書面表達(dá)為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長,某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART專欄.假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie,收到一封署名為Worried的求助信.信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣,使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響.請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1 .表示理解并給予撫慰；2 .提出建議并說明理由.

4、注意：1 .詞數(shù)120左右；2 .信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3 .信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).參考詞匯：tempern.脾氣,情緒HiWorried.:I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.Yours,Jamie【范文】HiWorried:I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,

5、soyoudon'thavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.Herearethreeusefultips:First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfri

6、ends,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,Jamie三、書面表達(dá)隨著近年來城市開展速度的加快,很多反映城市歷史風(fēng)貌的古建筑屢遭破壞.就這個(gè)問題請(qǐng)彳以HowtoProtecttheAncientBuildings為

7、題向報(bào)社寫一封建議信.要點(diǎn)如下：1 .很多古建筑被拆；2 .呼吁拯救這些古建筑；3 .希望有合理的解決方法.注意：1 .詞數(shù)100左右；2 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.HowtoProtecttheAncientBuildings【范文HowtoProtecttheAncientBuildingsInrecentyears,asthecitydevelopsfasterandfaster,manyoldandhistoricbuildingsarebeingdamagedbypeople.Theywanttomakeroomforhousingorofficesinurbanconstru

8、ction.Doyouthinkweshouldtrytoprotectthoseoldbuildingsorreplacethemwiththemodernones?Ithinkweshouldtakemeasurestoprotectthoseancientbuildings,becausetheyreflectthehistoryandcultureofthecity.Andtheyoungwilllearnalotwhentheyvisitthehistoricalrelicsites.Thegovernmentandrelateddepartmentsshouldfindasuita

9、blesolutiontotheseproblems.Asacitizen,itismyandeveryone'sdutytosparenoeffortstotakeanywaytoprotectthehistoricalproperty.四、書面表達(dá)在緊張的高三備考階段,英語老師為了提升復(fù)習(xí)效率,廣泛征求學(xué)生意見.假設(shè)你叫張華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,給英語老師寫封信,表達(dá)你們的需求和建議. 適當(dāng)放慢進(jìn)度,留出思考時(shí)間 反復(fù)練習(xí)重要、易錯(cuò)知識(shí)點(diǎn) 指導(dǎo)方法 減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量 給予更多鼓勵(lì)注意：1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,不要逐句譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫.2 .要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯；使

10、用一定的句型、詞匯,清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思；3 .詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右.開頭已給出,不計(jì)詞數(shù).DearMr.Wang,Weresopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.參考范文DearMr.Wang,Weresopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.Asyouknow,we

11、didn'tlearnwellenoughinthefirsttwoyears,sopleaseslowdownandmakesurewehavereallymasteredsomething.Besides,weneedalittlemoretimetothinkforourselves.Asforthoseimportantpointswhichalsomakeusconfused,wouldyoupleasegiveusmorepracticeincaseweforget?Meanwhile,weneedyourinstruction,forexample,inhowtowrit

12、einnaturalEnglish.Istillhaveanotherrequest:assignuslesshomeworkinorderthatwecandoitmoreefficiently.Bytheway,weoftenfeelfrustrated,whichhasaverybadeffectonourstudy.Wewouldappreciateitifyouwouldgiveussomeencouragementfromtimetotime.五、書面表達(dá)假定你是中學(xué)生李華.在國外中學(xué)生貼吧上看到一位名叫Slowstudent的中學(xué)生的帖子,你看到如下內(nèi)容.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容、寫作要

13、點(diǎn)和要求跟帖.寫作要點(diǎn)：1 .說明自己的看法；2 .陳述自己的理由可舉例說明；3 .提出至少兩條建議.要求：1.短文須寫在做題卡的指定區(qū)域.2.短文詞數(shù)不少于100不含已寫好的局部.3.內(nèi)容充實(shí),結(jié)構(gòu)完整,語意連貫.4.書寫需清楚、工整.FaratsJnedngpanicsdowstndcntSlowstudantApviEs'muxdkgciahr町第gaawfiaiD*jnrctiogto.立eshwltM.Mypmlswill<x»lilawfatncwtheyumehiikfrumiLNmtheniid-tfniiKanisaiidatotiistiantAep

14、ametsr臂issmndHipnaitjwlihdo?BcComments工相膽iirior琳國lii輔*需tocunmentandiatEcomments.用Ipostsarefirenandmusloteyttiehtomi:瞳iMsDearStow5tllIsrTteEiBaflatauinMtQaadLlnmyqMKNIfbOTSnHna【參考范文】書面表達(dá)(總分值30分)(Onepossibleversion)Slowstudent,Thisisreallyatoughnuttocrack.Inmyopinion,youshouldnotbeafraidofaparents'

15、;meeting;instead,you'dbettertakeaproperattitudetoit.Infact,aparents'meetingisforthemostpartacommunicationmeeting,whereteachersandparentsexchangeinformationandopinionsaboutstudents'situationsatschoolandhome,whichisbeneficialtoimproveteachingquality.Asforyourproblem,Ithinkyoucanhaveagoodta

16、lkwithyourparentsandteachers.Whiletalkingwithyourparents,youcanfocusonhowhardyoustudy(ifitisthecase)andwhyyoufailedthistimeorevenaskthemtohelpanalyzeyourfailure.Whentalkingwithyourteachers,betteraskthemforthelawofeachsubjectandeffectivemethodsoflearningthem.Anyhow,improvingyourgradesisthekeytosolvin

17、gtheproblem.Yours,LiHua(Anotherpossibleversion)Slowstudent,Thisisreallyatoughnuttocrack.Inmyopinion,ifyouuseyourheadalittlebit,itiseasytodealwith.Letmeputitclearer.Nowthatparents'meetingsbringtroublesandunhappinesstoyou,thatwouldbeokayiftherewerenosuchkindofmeeting.Itisimpossibleforyoutoforbidyo

18、urschooloryourclasstoholdaparents'meeting,butyoucan“forbid"yourparentstoattendthemeeting.How?Onewayisnottellingyourparentstherewillbeaparents'meeting.Anotheristryingtosaysomethingbadaboutthemeeting(say,themeetingisintendedfornothingbuttocollectmoney)sothatyourparentshatetogotoit.Theseap

19、proachesproveeffective,forIamasslowastudentasyou.Yours,LiHua六、書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是李華.你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭吵.3月9日是Peter生日,Tom想送他一個(gè)禮物來緩和關(guān)系,修復(fù)友情,特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom回一封郵件：1 .禮物選擇：2 .你的理由；3 .其它和解建議.注意：1 .詞數(shù)100左右：2 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫：3 .開頭和結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).DearTom,I'mgladtohearthatyouareconsideringmakingupwithPeterBestwishes,LiHua【參考范文】