英語-必修一Unit-1-建議信課件

1、必修必修1必修一必修一Unit 1 FriendshipWriting如何寫建議信如何寫建議信how to write letters of advice如何寫建議信如何寫建議信how to write letters of advice寫作三步曲寫作三步曲說明寫信目的說明寫信目的提出建議以及改進(jìn)措施，提出建議以及改進(jìn)措施，忠告忠告表達(dá)希望采納建議，或者期盼回復(fù)。表達(dá)希望采納建議，或者期盼回復(fù)。注意！注意！語言要委婉、禮貌，顧語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對方感受。在提出缺及對方感受。在提出缺點(diǎn)之前，最好先肯定其點(diǎn)之前，最好先肯定其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。優(yōu)點(diǎn)。 建議信 三段式：第一段： 點(diǎn)明主題第二段： 陳述事實(shí)，提

2、出建議，給出理由 （是什么，為什么，怎么樣）第三段：總結(jié)全文，表明希望適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板 Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said+ 你碰到的問題你碰到的問題. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, _,because_. Secondly, you should_, because_. Thirdly, youd better _.Only in this way can you _.Whats m

3、ore,_. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx 建議信重點(diǎn)建議信重點(diǎn)第二段：第二段： 說明說明建議的內(nèi)容建議的內(nèi)容；（是什么）；（是什么） 提出具體建議的提出具體建議的原因原因；（為什么）；（為什么） 指出采納建議的指出采納建議的益處益處。（怎么樣）。（怎么樣）注意事項(xiàng)：語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對注意事項(xiàng)：語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對方感受。方感受。 Opening sentences 開頭句開頭句1. I am very glad to hear from you.2. Thank you

4、for your letter.3. You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some suggestions.4. I am writing in reply to 5. I am sorry to hear that表示建議的句子 You should/must Dont What/How about trying a new method? Why not find a new way? Youd better change your former plan. Id like to sug

5、gest you make a new plan. If I were you, I would Id like to suggest I strongly recommend You might as well 學(xué)會用not only but also表示并列含義 親愛的朋友們，去參加課外活動吧，這不但會使你的校園生活變得豐富多彩，還會改善你的學(xué)習(xí)。Dear friends, please take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school like colorful, but also impr

6、ove your learning.Closing sentences 結(jié)束語結(jié)束語1. I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/ useful.2. At last, I hope I will be your best friends forever! Good luck to you! 3. Lets keep in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you. Read Xiao Dongs letter on page 7 and answer: What is Xiao Don

7、gs problem? Read the instructions at the top of page 7 and find out what you are required to do.Hes not good at communicating with people. He finds it hard to make friends with his classmates.I Lead inTo ask people their likes and dislikesTo join in discussionsTo show interest in others ideasTo shar

8、e his feelings with othersII BrainstormingYour advice for Xiao DongHow to writea letter of adviceStepWhat should be writtenPart IPart IIPart IIIPresenting the problemProposing the solutionConclusionDear Xiaodong, Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to ch

9、ange if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you: First, why not? If you do this, Secondly, you should/can Then/ That way, Thirdly, it would be a good idea if By doing this, I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours, Miss WangOutlining建議信重點(diǎn)建議信重點(diǎn)第二段：第二段： 說明說明建議的內(nèi)容建議的內(nèi)容；（是什么）；（是什么） 提出具體

10、建議的提出具體建議的原因原因；（為什么）；（為什么） 指出采納建議的指出采納建議的益處益處。（怎么樣）。（怎么樣）注意事項(xiàng)：語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對注意事項(xiàng)：語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對方感受。方感受。 Firstly, why not go and talk to people standing alone. I agree that this is difficult but that student may be lonely too,If you do this,Im sure you will soon have new friends. Secondly, you should beg

11、in the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,That way,you will soon find people with the same interests,because that is a good way to find new friends. Thirdly,it would be a goos idea if you try to join in a discussion. You may feel that is right.By doing this,you are letting people

12、know how friendly you are.So there should be no problem.It should provide you with some new friends. 即時訓(xùn)練即時訓(xùn)練你是我們學(xué)校一名很熱心的學(xué)生，得知我們你是我們學(xué)校一名很熱心的學(xué)生，得知我們校要建設(shè)娛樂休閑中心，正在征求同學(xué)們的校要建設(shè)娛樂休閑中心，正在征求同學(xué)們的意見，請你根據(jù)以下幾個方面的提示給校長意見，請你根據(jù)以下幾個方面的提示給校長寫一封寫一封120120詞左右的建議信。詞左右的建議信。 1. 1. 娛樂休閑中心應(yīng)該包括乒乓球室娛樂休閑中心應(yīng)該包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。和羽毛球室。 2

13、. 2. 最好在學(xué)生的課余時間開放。最好在學(xué)生的課余時間開放。 3. 3. 盡量不要收費(fèi)。盡量不要收費(fèi)。 4. 4. 寫作分析：寫作分析：第一段：引出話題，得知要建娛樂中心，第一段：引出話題，得知要建娛樂中心，想提建議。想提建議。第二段：建議建乒乓球室和羽毛球場。第二段：建議建乒乓球室和羽毛球場。第三段：建議課余時間開放，能使其得到第三段：建議課余時間開放，能使其得到充分利用。充分利用。第四段：免費(fèi)開放，有些學(xué)生經(jīng)濟(jì)困難。第四段：免費(fèi)開放，有些學(xué)生經(jīng)濟(jì)困難。第五段：簡單總結(jié)。第五段：簡單總結(jié)。Dear Mr. President, Its come to my attention that o

14、ur school is going to build a new leisure center. Im writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions. Firstly, Id like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students

15、 who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. Secondly, could the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use of it. Thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense. Thank you fo

16、r reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. If the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus. Yours sincerely, Li Hua范文范文建議信模版建議信模版Dear _, You have asked me for my advice with regard to(關(guān)于關(guān)于) _, and I will try to make some conductive(建設(shè)性的建設(shè)性的) suggestions

17、 here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_(建議的內(nèi)容建議的內(nèi)容) . I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details. Good Luck with your_(祝愿祝愿) Yours sincerely 簽名簽名English/exams 假設(shè)你是某報(bào)社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的假設(shè)你是某報(bào)社編輯，最近收到讀

18、者李華的一封來信。一封來信。信中李華提到自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過信中李華提到自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。請根據(jù)以上請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇提示，寫一篇回給李華的建議信回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困，幫他解決困難，促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)。難，促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)。 建議內(nèi)容：建議內(nèi)容： 1. 1. 不要灰心，保持良好心態(tài)；不要灰心，保持良好心態(tài)； 2. 2. 掌握學(xué)習(xí)方法；掌握學(xué)習(xí)方法； 3. 3. 培養(yǎng)對英語的興趣愛好。培養(yǎng)對英語的興趣愛好。 第一步：審題第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}

19、：思考的問題思考的問題樣題分析樣題分析第幾人稱？（第幾人稱？（person）文章的題材是什么？文章的題材是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么要寫的文章主題是什么 (topic)怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？ (order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài)時態(tài)) (when)第一人稱第一人稱一封信一封信對英語學(xué)習(xí)給出建議對英語學(xué)習(xí)給出建議說理的邏輯性說理的邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時 假設(shè)你是某報(bào)社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封來假設(shè)你是某報(bào)社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封來信。信。信中李華提到自己是高一的學(xué)生，在學(xué)習(xí)英語的信中李華提到自己是高一的學(xué)生，在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到了

20、困難，這讓他很苦惱。過程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。請根據(jù)以上提示，請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困難，促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)寫一篇回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困難，促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)。建議：建議：1. 1. 保持良好心態(tài)；保持良好心態(tài)； 2. 2. 掌握學(xué)習(xí)方法：掌握學(xué)習(xí)方法： 如堅(jiān)持每天記單詞，讀英語課文；多如堅(jiān)持每天記單詞，讀英語課文；多 練、多問等。練、多問等。 3. 3. 培養(yǎng)對英語學(xué)習(xí)的興趣愛好。培養(yǎng)對英語學(xué)習(xí)的興趣愛好。 develop an interest in learning English 堅(jiān)持每天記單詞：堅(jiān)持每天記單詞： insist on/ persist in doing

21、 insist on/ persist in remembering words every day Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said you have some difficulties in learning English. This is a normal problem that every student could suffer, so I think I can give you some useful suggestion

22、s. My suggestions/ advice are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening a

23、nd speaking abilities. Whats more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class. 假定你是李華，你的英國朋友假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾蝸硇畔蚰阕稍內(nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信。才能學(xué)好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信。要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)： 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 看中文書刊、電視；看中文書刊、電視； 學(xué)唱中文歌曲；學(xué)唱中文歌曲； 交中國朋友。交中國朋友。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭語

24、已給出。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭語已給出。Dear Peter, Im glad to hear that you can ask for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Li HuaHomework:Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a

25、Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll lea

26、rn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li Hua 第二篇建議信：第二篇建議信： 對于我的朋友花大量時間上網(wǎng)，耽誤學(xué)對于我的朋友花大量時間上網(wǎng)，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)的建議信習(xí)的建議信建議內(nèi)容：建議內(nèi)容：1）和他面對面地交流、溝

27、通；）和他面對面地交流、溝通；2）給她發(fā)郵件或短信；）給她發(fā)郵件或短信；3）告訴他學(xué)習(xí)的重要性。）告訴他學(xué)習(xí)的重要性。Homework: Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said your friend spends most of his time chatting on the Internet and often goes to the Internet cafe instead of attending classes. You reall

28、y want to help him out but you dont know what to do with it/ how to help him. Well. I would like to give my advice for you. My advice are as follows. Firstly, I think you should have a talk with him sincerely. Because if your friend skips classes, he is not going to do well at school. Secondly, you

29、can e-mail him or leave a message. Thirdly, you should tell him the importance of study. Because every one of us just has one chance to go to high school, he should study hard and not waste time in indulging on the Internet. In a word, I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. / Best wishes. Yo

30、urs, Editor Homework 假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請用英語給出版社的編輯寫假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請用英語給出版社的編輯寫一封信，一封信，表達(dá)你對現(xiàn)在使用的英語教材的看法，表達(dá)你對現(xiàn)在使用的英語教材的看法，主要內(nèi)容主要內(nèi)容包括：包括： 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1.話題廣泛話題廣泛 : 2.圖片豐富圖片豐富 3.有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣 建議：適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度建議：適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度Dear Editor, As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by you

31、r house._常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞1. 表示并列的過渡詞或短語 as well; or; too; also; as well as; and ; not onlybut also. ; both and. either or ; neithernor First；Second; Third For one thing; For another (thing)2. 表示遞進(jìn)的過渡詞或短語 Moreover ; Whats more; Besides; Whats worse,3. 表表轉(zhuǎn)折轉(zhuǎn)折對比對比的過渡詞的過渡詞: instead of, but, however, on the contrar

32、y, although, different from, despite in spite of, Some ;Others On the one hand,;On the other hand, 4. 表原因原因的過渡詞: because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to（由于） 5.表結(jié)果結(jié)果的過渡詞: so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, 6.表?xiàng)l件條件的過渡詞: if, unless , as long as7.表時間時間的過渡詞: recently, finally, at the same time, at last, from now on, 8.表特定的順序順序關(guān)系的過渡詞:first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, th