漫畫作文之審題

1、Some Background Information2015江蘇高考說(shuō)明江蘇高考說(shuō)明書面表達(dá)：書面表達(dá)：要求考生根據(jù)所給情景用英語(yǔ)寫一篇要求考生根據(jù)所給情景用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150個(gè)單詞個(gè)單詞左右的短文。情景的形式包括左右的短文。情景的形式包括圖表、圖畫圖表、圖畫、提綱、提綱、信函、短文等。考生應(yīng)能：、信函、短文等。考生應(yīng)能：（1）根據(jù)特定的語(yǔ)境）根據(jù)特定的語(yǔ)境準(zhǔn)確使用英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確使用英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，選用，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯；（2）使用一定的句型、詞匯，）使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫清楚、連貫地傳地傳遞信息和表達(dá)思想。遞信息和表達(dá)思想。Some Background Information審題

2、，就是在寫作文之前，對(duì)給定的作文題審題，就是在寫作文之前，對(duì)給定的作文題目進(jìn)行分析和思考，以目進(jìn)行分析和思考，以準(zhǔn)確理解題意，明確準(zhǔn)確理解題意，明確題目要求題目要求，即，即弄清文章要求寫什么和怎樣寫弄清文章要求寫什么和怎樣寫，避免寫出偏離題意和文不對(duì)題的文章來(lái)。，避免寫出偏離題意和文不對(duì)題的文章來(lái)。審題是完成各類作文的關(guān)鍵性步驟審題是完成各類作文的關(guān)鍵性步驟。且審題。且審題不細(xì)，下筆千言，離題萬(wàn)里，文章就成了一不細(xì)，下筆千言，離題萬(wàn)里，文章就成了一頁(yè)廢紙。頁(yè)廢紙。Steps of developing a composition ：Step one：analyze the theme(審題審題

3、) Step two：list the outline(列提綱列提綱) Step three：choose words and make sentences(選詞組句選詞組句)Step four：form a composition(連句成篇連句成篇)Step five：review and correct(復(fù)查糾錯(cuò)復(fù)查糾錯(cuò)) Attention ：make your composition as neat as possibleQuestions:How to find out the theme?How many elements should we take into considera

4、tion?Analysis of an example請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)以下圖的理解，以“Playing a trick or working hard”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇作文。 你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容： 1. 簡(jiǎn)要描述該圖的內(nèi)容； 2. 概述你對(duì)該圖中做法的理解； 3. 舉例說(shuō)明該圖對(duì)你的啟示。 注意： 1. 可參照?qǐng)D畫適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2. 作文詞數(shù)150左右； 3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 headline/title picture exaggeration: association wordsinsideoutsidetricklife1.看標(biāo)題看標(biāo)題(the

5、headline)，標(biāo)題就是漫畫的眼睛。標(biāo)題就是漫畫的眼睛。 2.看畫面看畫面(the picture/cartoon)，注意畫面上的每一注意畫面上的每一個(gè)個(gè)“要素要素”。3.看夸張?zhí)幙纯鋸執(zhí)?the exaggeration)，夸張之處往往就是夸張之處往往就是寓意所在。寓意所在。4.看聯(lián)系看聯(lián)系(the association)，找準(zhǔn)分析角度與現(xiàn)實(shí)生找準(zhǔn)分析角度與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活聯(lián)系起來(lái)。活聯(lián)系起來(lái)。5.看文字看文字(some words)，圖中的文字說(shuō)明和要求可圖中的文字說(shuō)明和要求可以幫助提煉要點(diǎn)。以幫助提煉要點(diǎn)。How to find out the theme?How many element

6、s should we take into consideration?Attention: 1.Please examine all the details included in the picture.2.Sometimes we cannot find all the elements discussed above.Lets practisePlease find out the theme reflected in the following cartoons.Requirements: Use short but correct sentences to explain the

7、cartoon to reveal the theme.Picture1請(qǐng)認(rèn)真觀察下面的漫畫，簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫內(nèi)容，并根據(jù)你對(duì)該漫畫的理解，結(jié)合學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)際，談?wù)勛约旱乃伎己涂捶?。參考詞匯：參考詞匯：缸：缸：vat；漏出來(lái)：漏出來(lái)：leak out；漏洞：漏洞：loopholeWe should pay attention to the mistakes we have made and the holes we have in our study.Parents are desperate to help their children make academic achievements.Pictu

8、re2My dear son, you are bound to be the second Newton!Parents attitudes may influence childrens social values.Picture3Picture3Protect animals.No buying, no killing.Picture4Money cant buy everything.Health is the best wealth.Picutre5Consolidation: 大家拿到圖片漫畫類作文，首先 審題,判斷感情是褒義還是貶義,其次按照?qǐng)D片描述、聯(lián)系生活、個(gè)人見解三步來(lái)謀篇

9、。Presentation of some students compositionsPlease assess the three paragraphs.Requirements: Find out the writing problems concerning the theme.要求：讀上圖，聯(lián)系生活實(shí)際，發(fā)表自己的感想，寫一篇150字的作文。 (1) Each child wants to support parents by himself rather than share with other brothers or sisters. What causes this pheno

10、menon is their parents possession. They are eager to get more things from their parents without sharing with others. So there is no harmony in the family.要圍繞主題展開合理的想象，切忌游離要圍繞主題展開合理的想象，切忌游離于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想或感想。于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想或感想。偏題偏題Paragraph 2Paragraph 1(2) The picture shows that the young arent willing to

11、look after their parents so they are playing a football match about the question “who will look after their old father?”第一段描述漫畫時(shí)畫面中有助于主題的信息第一段描述漫畫時(shí)畫面中有助于主題的信息都要表達(dá)出來(lái)。不要過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，評(píng)論性的話都要表達(dá)出來(lái)。不要過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，評(píng)論性的話可以放在描述之后?？梢苑旁诿枋鲋?。描述圖片描述圖片太簡(jiǎn)單太簡(jiǎn)單（3）There is a common phenomenon in the society. The oldest son sends the

12、 old father to other brothers or sisters. However, what makes the father sad is that the second and third son dont accept him. At the same time, the little daughter also refuses to look after her father.表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)將重點(diǎn)放在所反映的主題上，表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)將重點(diǎn)放在所反映的主題上，不要想到什么就表達(dá)什么，要言簡(jiǎn)意不要想到什么就表達(dá)什么，要言簡(jiǎn)意賅，切忌羅嗦。賅，切忌羅嗦。太羅嗦太羅嗦一般來(lái)說(shuō)，漫畫的體裁多

13、為夾敘夾議，一般來(lái)說(shuō)，漫畫的體裁多為夾敘夾議，時(shí)態(tài)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。人時(shí)態(tài)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。人稱多為第三人稱。稱多為第三人稱。 一篇一篇好好的英語(yǔ)漫畫作文的英語(yǔ)漫畫作文 What should you pay attention to?仔細(xì)仔細(xì)審題審題準(zhǔn)確準(zhǔn)確立意立意規(guī)范規(guī)范行文行文整潔整潔書寫書寫生詞：生詞：hospital discharge出院出院 Study the following picture and write an essay entitled “Health Care”. In the essay you should 1)Describe the picture and interpret its meaning. 2)Give your opinions o