空巢老人作文

1、Teaching aims Students are able to analyze and expand the given information reasonably. Rewrite the passage. We have a dream今日事今日畢。今日事今日畢。 Today must borrow nothing of tomorrow. As for the first reason, what should you do? (We should) _what your gift is, and use it to _ and the lives of those around

2、 you. Take the first step and your dreams will come true. All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to _them. go for/pursuefigure out exactlybetter your life 某英文報(bào)社就某英文報(bào)社就“關(guān)愛空巢老人關(guān)愛空巢老人”這一話題這一話題進(jìn)行征文。請你根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英語進(jìn)行征文。請你根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英語短文投稿。內(nèi)容主要包括短文投稿。內(nèi)容主要包括: : 1. 1. 空巢老人越來越多的原因；空巢老人越來越多的原因； 2. 2

3、. 他們面臨的問題；他們面臨的問題； 3. 3. 如何幫助他們。如何幫助他們。 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：審題、分段、時(shí)態(tài)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：審題、分段、時(shí)態(tài) 缺點(diǎn)：缺點(diǎn)：書寫、卷面書寫、卷面 基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)基礎(chǔ)表達(dá) 展開短文要點(diǎn)（啰嗦，展開短文要點(diǎn)（啰嗦，Chinglish） 隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展 忙于忙于(做做)某事某事 是時(shí)候該做某事了是時(shí)候該做某事了 呼吁某人做某事呼吁某人做某事 拿出時(shí)間做某事拿出時(shí)間做某事 .Because with the development of economy be busy with sth. be busy (in) doing sth. Its time that sb. did/

4、should do sth. appeal to sb. to do sth. spare time to do sth. , because Zooming 1 Para.1 Para.1 空巢老人越來越多的原因；空巢老人越來越多的原因； With the development of economy, more and more people choose to leave their homeland to find the chance to have a better job. (李曉紅李曉紅) With the development of economy and society,

5、 the number of people who bury themselves in working and studying is on the increase. (姜麗姜麗) With the development of society, more and more adult have to make great efforts to earn money for the purpose of supporting the family. (門曉菲門曉菲) There are no alternative route open to them to pay all their a

6、ttention to both family and work.(宋曉松宋曉松) As a result, they have less time to accompany their elderly parents. (門曉菲門曉菲)外出務(wù)工背井離鄉(xiāng)外出務(wù)工背井離鄉(xiāng)Zooming 2 Para. 2 面臨的問題面臨的問題 總述總述 Its unavoidable to meet with difficulties facing loneliness. /These elderly are faced with many difficulties without their relative

7、s company.(張雅俊張雅俊) 具體問題：具體問題： The empty-nest elderly cant manage things that require much manual labor. The most important problem they face is that they are too old to care for themselves.(金迎迎金迎迎 孫忠源孫忠源) When they are ill, their family members cant appear in time. (張琳張琳) Because of long-term loneli

8、ness, they may have mental problems like depression. Its natural for them the empty-nest elderly to feel alone, so most of them are in thirst of their childrens company. (姜麗姜麗)生活無人幫助生活無人幫助生病無人照顧生病無人照顧缺少陪伴，感到孤缺少陪伴，感到孤獨(dú)獨(dú)Zooming 3 Para. 3 如何幫助他們?nèi)绾螏椭麄?We can help them clean the house, buy household ite

9、ms or carry heavy things upstairs. We may volunteer to visit the empty-nest elderly in vacations, during which we can bring joy to them and help them with housework. (包光琛包光琛) The government should spend more money providing places for the elderly to be entertained and communicate. Its a good choice

10、for them to be actively involved in community service (邢思田邢思田), which has much significance not only in enrich the life, but in keeping them healthy. (門曉菲門曉菲)做家務(wù)做家務(wù)提供機(jī)會多參加活動(dòng)提供機(jī)會多參加活動(dòng)結(jié)尾結(jié)尾( (總結(jié)性話語總結(jié)性話語) ) Its high time that we do our little part to provide help for them.(張琳張琳) Helping elderly is a traditional virtue of China. We sho