雛鷹文化大學(xué)英語六級作文范例

1、雛鷹文化 大學(xué)英語六級作文范例雛鷹文化培訓(xùn)中心 順德碧桂園業(yè)主論壇 1My View on Fake Commodities (1998.1)1. 假冒偽劣商品的危害。2. 怎樣杜絕假冒偽劣商品。My View on Fake Commodities Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market. Wherever you are, whatever you do, it seems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them. In other wor

2、ds, it is highly probable that you have bought some of those fake goods or products of inferior quality.Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society. On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market. On the

3、 other hand, the prevalence of such products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality. As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered peoples precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust.Then, what should be don

4、e to do away with fake commodities? To start with, the government needs to tighten its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies. Secondly, honest businessmen should modify some long-accepted practices at the protection of their intellectual property right. Most important of all, we

5、 consumers will have to do a better job of learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney and definitely say no to the fake ones. In one word, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fake commodities.2Changes in the Ownership of Houses (2003.6)要求：1、根據(jù)上圖描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)

6、的變化；2、分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因；3、說明這些變化對個人和社會產(chǎn)生的影響。Changes in the Ownership of HousesAs is shown in the chart, great changes have taken place in the ownership of houses in the city. There has been a steady decline in the percentage of state-owned houses from 75 in 1990 to 20 in 2000. On the contrary, the percent

7、age of private houses has been on the rise. Several factors may account for the trend. For one thing, owing to the policy of reform and opening to the outside world, the past decade witnessed significant improvement in peoples standard of living. In other words, they have had the means to purchase h

8、ouses of their own. For another, peoples ideas about consumption have undergone some radical changes. In the past, they were reluctant to spend, but now they are willing to buy. Anyway, it is much more comfortable to dwell in a house of ones own.These changes in the ownership have already had a posi

9、tive effect on both individuals and society. Individuals, young people in particular, will be motivated to work harder to purchase a nest of their own. As a result, the housing industry will be boosted and more revenues will be raised to cover other sectors of our national economy. 議論型作文1. Should Co

10、llege Students Live on Campusa. 有些人喜歡住在學(xué)校的宿舍，因為b. 有些人喜歡住在校外，因為c. 我的看法There are an increasing number of students who choose to live off campus. Parents and university administrations understandably reacted differently. They voiced concerns about security and the threat of off-campus lifestyles gettin

11、g out of control. However, college students have their own reasons for their choices.Some students prefer to live on campus for the following reasons. First, campus residents are closer to classes, the library, and other resources, so they are more likely to succeed in college and complete their bac

12、helors degree in four years. Furthermore, Living in a dorm is a great opportunity to meet all kinds of new people and develop relationships with them, so students living on campus are more sociable. Last but not the least, living on campus is cheaper and more convenient. Often times, off-campus hous

13、ing is more expensive than on-campus housing and while living on campus, you dont have to worry about monthly rent payments and utility bills.Some others choose to live off campus because they believe living off campus they are more independent, with more privacy and a lot more quiet time. Living of

14、f campus gives them freedom from those dorm rules and allow them to set their own. The extra space also means that one can probably find a quiet place to study in the convenience of his own home.As for me, Im a faithful supporter of the former group because I, living on campus myself, have witnessed

15、 and enjoyed all the convenience and happiness of doing so. To me, living on campus undoubtedly adds an important element to the complete college experience.2. Pursuit of A Masters Degreea. 根據(jù)下圖描述某校畢業(yè)生畢業(yè)意向的變化 b. 分析選擇讀研的畢業(yè)生數(shù)目增加的原因c. 說明選擇讀研對個人和社會產(chǎn)生的影響It is illustrated in the pie charts that graduates

16、choices after graduation have experienced much change. The number of students choosing to pursue a masters degree and study abroad grows several times over the decade.The reasons of the increasing number of students pursuing a masters degree are as follows. First, with the number of college graduate

17、s growing each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter. The public awareness of the situation has created a surge of interest in seeking a masters degree. Secondly, many cross-national companies set a much higher standard for new recruits than ever. It seems that the hig

18、her education you have, the higher salary you may receive.Choosing to study for masters degree will benefit the individuals and the whole society as well. The quality of Chinese intellectuals will be considerably enhanced, which in turn will boost the progress of the whole society.3 Directions: Supp

19、ose you are Wei Qiang and you will graduate from university. Write a letter of inquiry to the Department of Physics, University of Wisconsin, asking for admission as a graduate student.July, 2007Dear Sirs,I am very interested in undertaking graduate work in your university. I have read research pape

20、rs by two of your professors Dr. Thomas Bay and Mr. Sherry Haily. Id like to study under their guidance.In September of 2003 I was enrolled in the Computer School of the XYZ University as a computer major. Throughout the four years of study, I take this field as one of great potentials for my countr

21、y. I feel the need to study further in order to develop well in this area.I would appreciate receiving your materials such as departmental brochure or pamphlet, and a university catalog or bulletin.Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.Respectfully yours,Wei Qiang4. Di

22、rections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Say “Thank You” to Parents. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 很多的大學(xué)生從未跟父母道過謝 2. 請說明原因 3. 你的建議According to a recent survey involving over 3000 undergraduates, 35% of univer

23、sity students have never said “Thank you” to their parents. Their parents have done all they could to bring them up in the past score of years, but have never been rewarded with gratitude.The subjects claim such reasons as follows. First and foremost, a quarter of the interviewed students regard it

24、as parents duty to support them spiritually and financially. And it is not necessary to express appreciation to their parents. However, the majority of youngsters are aware of their parents tender love but are not accustomed to saying “Thank you”. Some even find a generation gap between themselves a

25、nd their parents, thus feeling reluctant to express their affection for their parents. In my opinion, extending thankfulness to our parents is a way of respecting them and their love. We should express our feelings directly and bravely, but whats more important is, we should do all that we can to re

26、ward them. （一）Fire Prevention on Campus1. 前段時間校園火災(zāi)頻發(fā)，造成生命和財產(chǎn)損失2. 分析火災(zāi)發(fā)生的原因3. 作為學(xué)生，如何預(yù)防校園火災(zāi)發(fā)生審題概述r這是一分析火災(zāi)原因和如何預(yù)防火災(zāi)為中心的文章，撰寫時重點(diǎn)即在于此。開篇綜述校園火災(zāi)頻發(fā)情形及造成的生命和財產(chǎn)損失，然后說明火災(zāi)原因，最后提出可能的火災(zāi)預(yù)防措施。第一段，主要概述；第二段，說明原因；第三段，詳細(xì)論述措施。【范文】l Fire Prevention on CampusPeople are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent

27、years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, “What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?”A brief survey of them reveals that human factor

28、s still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In othe

29、r cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular im

30、portance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm. 第一段思路點(diǎn)評：概述并引入下文語言點(diǎn)提示：（1）此句What on earth results in these

31、repeated tragedies??？勺鳛檫^渡句，引出下文（2）注意描述有關(guān)火災(zāi)客觀事實，多使用被動語態(tài)，如are alarmed by，were reported，were burned down，were damaged，F(xiàn)aced with。第二段思路點(diǎn)評：論述火災(zāi)的主要原因是使用電熱水器，還有造成火災(zāi)的次要原因是實用電爐、蠟燭和亂扔煙蒂，語言點(diǎn)提示：electric water-heaters電熱水器第三段思路點(diǎn)評：詳述預(yù)防火災(zāi)的三點(diǎn)措施，注意使用連接詞語first, second, lastly。語言點(diǎn)提示：take precautions采取預(yù)防措施fire extinguis

32、her滅火器（二）Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts1. 校園盜竊案件時有發(fā)生2. 物品被盜的原因3. 學(xué)生如何加強(qiáng)防盜意識審題概述r這是一篇論述校園物品被盜和加強(qiáng)防盜意識的文章。第一段，主要陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況。第二段，主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。第三段，主要闡述學(xué)生怎樣增強(qiáng)防盜意識?！痉段摹縧 Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts“If you dont want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you

33、d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-pa

34、id IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness,

35、the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, theyll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These

36、acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amoun

37、t of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, its advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms. 第一段思路點(diǎn)評：陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況語言點(diǎn)提示：it seems that此句型

38、表示一種可能性第二段思路點(diǎn)評：說明被盜原因語言點(diǎn)提示：（1）What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文（2）anti-theft alertness防盜意識（3）lack of alertness缺乏警惕（4）light-fingered小偷小摸的、慣行扒竊的第三段思路點(diǎn)評：闡述如何加強(qiáng)防盜意識語言點(diǎn)提示：注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞語in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。 （五）Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?1. 現(xiàn)在社會上有各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班2.

39、有些人認(rèn)為有必要參加課外培訓(xùn)班，有些人則認(rèn)為沒有必要3. 你的觀點(diǎn) 審題概述r這是一篇主要論述人們和你對社會上各類培訓(xùn)班看法的文章。第一段，概述各種各樣培訓(xùn)班的狀況。第二段，論述人們對參加課外培訓(xùn)班的不同看法。第三段，重點(diǎn)闡述你對此的看法。【范文】l Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning c

40、omputer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.Some consider it advisable to atten

41、d such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that its far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, he

42、nce, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than get knowledge into our head. As far a

43、s I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.第一段思路點(diǎn)評：第一句綜述社會上提

44、供知識、技能服務(wù)的各類培訓(xùn)班雨后春筍般興起，第二句例舉語言速成課程特別火爆。語言點(diǎn)提示：（1）a great diversity of各種各樣的（2）mushrooming迅速擴(kuò)散、增加（3）language crash courses語言速成課程第二段思路點(diǎn)評：先用一句對比式地擺出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，再分別詳述他們的看法。語言點(diǎn)提示：注意連接詞語while，The former，They，The latter group of people等的使用，強(qiáng)化了上下文之間的連貫性。第三段思路點(diǎn)評：辯證地論述你對參加各類培訓(xùn)班的看法。語言點(diǎn)提示：（1）as far as I am concerned我認(rèn)

45、為，就我而言（2）counter-productive適得其反的、事與愿違的（六）University Students Pursuit of Famous Brands1. 現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都追求穿名牌，用名牌2. 你對這種現(xiàn)象的看法 審題概述r這是一篇論述對大學(xué)生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，詳述大學(xué)生熱衷追求、使用名牌的情形以及人們的看法。第二段，重點(diǎn)談你對此的看法?！痉段摹縐niversity Students Pursuit of Famous Brands“What perfumes are you wearing?” “Arent your shoes Nikes latest

46、 release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?” Dont feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. Its quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the b

47、rands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. “Keeping up

48、 with the Joneses” is their conviction “If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?”About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. Theyll probably take it to be a reflection of the students vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them

49、on the virtue of being thrifty. However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. As such, they are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable. “The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb; therefore, theres nothing to blame about the pursuit of

50、famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mi

51、stakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isnt it?第一段思路點(diǎn)評：本段分為兩個部分，即詳細(xì)陳述大學(xué)生追求和使用名牌的情況，以及人們對此的看法。語言點(diǎn)提示：（1）keeping up with the Joneses要在地位和物質(zhì)上比得上周圍的人（2）conviction堅定的信仰、看法（3）vanity and superficiality虛榮心和面子觀（膚淺、表面、淺?。┑诙嗡悸伏c(diǎn)評：本段應(yīng)辯證地分析大學(xué)生追求、

52、使用名牌的現(xiàn)象，既有對此肯定的看法，也有否定的看法，即大學(xué)生在追求和使用名牌中汲取經(jīng)驗教訓(xùn)并學(xué)會管理。語言點(diǎn)提示：（1）abide by the consequences自食其果（2）ill-advised考慮不周的、不明智的（3）in moderation適度、不過分 （七）Knowledge and Diploma1. 目前社會上存在這樣一種說法：文憑越高越吃香2. 而有些人則認(rèn)為文憑不等于知識3. 你的觀點(diǎn) 審題概述r這是一篇論述高文憑與知識關(guān)系的文章。第一段，概述社會上文憑越高越吃香的看法。第二段，主要論述有些人文憑不等于知識的觀點(diǎn)。第三段，重點(diǎn)闡述你對此的看法。【范文】l Knowl

53、edge and DiplomaIt is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social r

54、eality the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesnt automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of ones educational experience rather than a guarantee of ones ability. Therefo

55、re, we can never measure the depth of ones knowledge by the grade of ones diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people dont have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the worlds most learned men. So I must say no one should eve

56、r equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs ones lifelong devotion.第一段思路點(diǎn)評：先陳述人們對高文憑高能力的看法，再點(diǎn)出這是一種社會現(xiàn)實。語言點(diǎn)提示：job candidate求職者、應(yīng)聘者第二段思路點(diǎn)評：詳細(xì)論述文憑并不等于能力。語言點(diǎn)提示：Acknowledgment承認(rèn)、致謝、感謝、答謝第三段思路點(diǎn)評：使用一個長句闡述了你對文憑與知識辯證關(guān)系的認(rèn)識。語言點(diǎn)

57、提示：（1）equate a diploma with knowledge 把文憑與知識劃等號（2）nothing but a proof of a short-term study只是短期學(xué)習(xí)的證明 （八）The Rise of Shanzhai Culture1. 最近興起了一股“山寨熱”2. 你如何看待山寨現(xiàn)象 審題概述r本文是一篇論述山寨現(xiàn)象以及人們和你對此看法的文章。第一段，概述方興未艾的山寨熱。第二段，闡述山寨產(chǎn)品的優(yōu)勢以及給人們帶來的好處。第三段，論述人們和你對山寨現(xiàn)象的反對立場和觀點(diǎn)，即山寨產(chǎn)品的非法性?！痉段摹縧 The Rise of Shanzhai CultureThe

58、 vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made “shanzhai” the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, use shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chin