2019高考英語真題滿分書面表達(dá)點評剖析

1、2019 高考英語真題滿分書面表達(dá)點評剖析1 .全國I卷【題目要求】假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1寫信目的：2個人優(yōu)勢：3能做的事情。注意：1詞數(shù) 100 左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3結(jié)束語已為你寫好?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a

2、Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I m writing to apply for the position.The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What s more, years of be

3、ing monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified vo

4、lunteer. I d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Yours,Li Hua【寫作解析】這篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文中的申請信類型，可以按照申請信的思路來寫，同時要注意電子郵件的寫作需要體現(xiàn)交際性。首先要進(jìn)行自我介紹，簡要交代寫作背景，闡明寫信目的。第二段是文章的主題，要把題干給到的提示完整地體現(xiàn)出來，文章用 First ofall， What s more, The most important factor is that 等過渡性結(jié)構(gòu)自然地串聯(lián)三個要點。同時要注意句式的多樣化與高級詞匯的應(yīng)

5、用。 最后需要使用求職信的常用套話及書信的常用套話結(jié)尾。2 .全國II卷【題目要求】假定你是校排球隊隊長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括：1. 比賽信息；2. 賽前準(zhǔn)備；3. 表達(dá)期待。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【滿分優(yōu)秀范文】Dear Chris,How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participa

6、te.As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most a

7、ttractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.So excited am I that I can t wait t

8、o join in it.How about you? Looking forward to your reply.3Yours, Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本題要求：作為排球隊隊長李華，給隊友Chris寫一封郵件告知他近期球隊將參加比賽，主要的要點包含三項，分別是：比賽信息、賽前準(zhǔn)備、表達(dá)期待。字?jǐn)?shù)要求100 左右，考生應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。作文的難度不大，可以靈活運用學(xué)過的高級短語和句型，例如定語從句；名詞性從句；非謂語動詞；倒裝句等等。另外要注意銜接詞匯的使用以使行文連貫；高級詞匯的使用以提升作品的檔次。3.全國田卷【題目要求】假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國

9、朋友Allen 參加，內(nèi)容包括：1. 時間；2. 活動安排；3. 歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I m writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmas

10、ter will deliver aspeech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented3students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】今年的書面表達(dá)要求考生寫郵件，告知英國朋友音樂節(jié)的情況。首先確定提綱。先介紹寫作目的

11、，之后介紹音樂節(jié)的時間、活動安排等具體信息，最后歡迎他表演節(jié)目。第二， 根據(jù)提綱，確定關(guān)鍵詞語，如：How is everything going? a music festiva， lin the school hall, The opening ceremony等。第三，注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點串聯(lián)起來?！军c評】本文內(nèi)容完整，詳略得當(dāng)。并使用了高級句式。如： You are definitely welcometo show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival. 定語從句。提升了文章檔次。4. 北京卷第一節(jié)

12、 （15 分 ）51.假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括1 .交通出行；2 .必備衣物。注意 :1 .詞數(shù)不少于50；2 .開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim，Yours,Li Hua【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Jim,I m pleased that you re coming to tour in China.I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I ll show you around. Tianjin will be your

13、next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.Looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華的英國好友Jim 打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來

14、郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。要求給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必備衣物。本文時態(tài)應(yīng)采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，用第一人稱和第二人稱來寫。文章可以分為三部分來寫：首先表達(dá)歡迎Jim 來中國；然后交代交通出行和必備衣物；最后盼望朋友的到來。注意使用高級詞匯和句式，為文章增添色彩；注意使用連接詞、銜接詞，使文章自然、流暢?！军c睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，語言表述流暢。文章使用了幾個高分句型。that you re coming to tour in China.和 that you begin from Beijing, and I' ll show you around.是賓語從 旬。 wher

15、e you can stay for a week.1非限制性定語從旬。第二節(jié) （20 分 ）52. 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次以“勞動最光榮”為主題的社會實踐活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個過程。注意:詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞:西瓜watermelon【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “ W

16、orking is most beautiful” . And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.When I came back home, I shared my ex

17、periences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.【寫作指導(dǎo)】假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你們班上周組織了一次以“勞動最光榮”寫一篇英文周記，記為主題的社會實踐活動。要求根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，述整個過程。圖畫作文內(nèi)容要點比較清晰，其中包括：老師宣布活動內(nèi)容和意義，我為活動準(zhǔn)備，在農(nóng)場的勞動過程，介紹活動感受。這樣有利于學(xué)生寫作時發(fā)揮與擴(kuò)展。全文可分成三部分，開頭段概括活動，中間段描述圖畫，結(jié)尾段總結(jié)收獲和意義。文章用第一人稱來寫，使用一般過去時?！军c睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，語言表述通順。使用了連接詞、銜接詞， 使文章自然、流暢。

18、文章使用了賓語從句how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun. 還使用了 At the class meeting, When I got home, On the farm, While working, When I came back home 等過渡詞。5. 浙江卷第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40 分 ）第一節(jié) 應(yīng)用文寫作（滿分15分 ）66.假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 表示感謝；2. 回顧Alex對你的幫助；3. 臨別祝愿。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 80 左右

19、；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【滿分優(yōu)秀范文】Dear Alex,Learning that you re leaving for the United States soon, I m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.Honestly speaking, it s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have m

20、ade such unbelievable progress in English. It s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. N

21、o words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.Yours,Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】1. 審題立意本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫感謝信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。2. 謀篇布局書信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫信的目的，中間段回顧Alex對你的幫助；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。3. 關(guān)鍵詞和句子根據(jù)寫作要點及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有：leaving for the United St

22、ates soon， express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress, cheer me up。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文 章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯誤。第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25 分 ）67. 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guideto Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says“, We ve gone t

23、o the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict. ” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they re building their children s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way tha t s insincere, make k

24、ids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parentspraise has put them.Still, don t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they re not good enough or that you do

25、n t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your chi

26、ld does something that deserves a verbal reward. “ We should especially recognize our children s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal, ” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters“. One thing to remember is that it s

27、the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing you

28、r child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate（相稱的）to the amount of effort your child has put into it.【參考答案】Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising thei

29、r kids. （ 要點一 ） Yet, both too much and too little praise can be equally damaging. （要點二 ） When giving praise, parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result. （要點三 ） Similarly, they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they re in

30、volved in. （要點四）【寫作指導(dǎo)】完成一篇概要寫作，需要經(jīng)過三個步驟，1. 讀懂原文，抓住段落主題句。在閱讀過程中，需要準(zhǔn)確把握文章的段落大意， 學(xué)會剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同體裁的文章的內(nèi)部邏輯關(guān)系以及文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。2. 組織語言，轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)。在找到主題句明確全文中心的基礎(chǔ)上，組織好語言， 注重語言表達(dá)的獨立性和準(zhǔn)確性以及高級性，不全盤照抄原文句子，盡量用自己的語言轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)，同時要注意篇幅的比例安排，用較多的文字去表達(dá)重要的內(nèi)容。3. 通讀全文，邏輯連貫。要牢記各段落要點之間的邏輯關(guān)系和自然銜接，用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞去連貫全文。6. 江蘇卷81. 請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇1

31、50 詞左右的文章。Li Jiang: Haveyou heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month.Su Hua: Yes,I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.Li Jiang: But it seems people have different opinions.Su Hua: What do you think

32、?Li Jiang: I think it s a good idea. It s an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.Su Hua: I agree. But we don t have to dress that way. Tha t s not our daily style. Besides, it s not very convenient.Li Jiang: You see, it s the Chinese culture that the Britis

33、h friends are coming for. Just the right occasion.Su Hua: I prefer the school uniform. It s nice. It s also a better display of our school culture.【寫作內(nèi)容】1. 用約 30 個詞概括上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；2. 在上述場合，你是否傾向于穿中國傳統(tǒng)服裝？請說明理由（不少于兩點）?！緦懽饕蟆?. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 不必寫標(biāo)題?！驹u分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文一

34、】Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is precisely what the British v

35、isitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our

36、 purpose is to share Chinese culture. It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the Bri

37、tish guests.【優(yōu)秀滿分范文二】Li Jiang and Su Hua don't agree on what to wear when greeting the British students. Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month.

38、Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. What's more, the traditional Chinese dress can't reflect the unique culture of our school. From the design and colour

39、 of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occa

40、sion.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是讀寫任務(wù)，今年的話題是關(guān)于中國傳統(tǒng)服裝的。讀寫任務(wù)首先要寫好概括。 概括短文的內(nèi)容要點實為客觀簡要地轉(zhuǎn)述作者的觀點、論據(jù)和結(jié)論，概括包括兩個部分：主題句和支撐句。概括注意要抓住要點，語言精練，不能添加自己的見解，但是要用自己的語言概括。第二段用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡語引出自己的觀點（反對或贊成）。過渡語起承上啟下的作用，要顯自然、連貫。提出自己的觀點后要具體論證自己的觀點。最后一段要總結(jié)觀點，提出具體做法或號召，升華文章的主題。7. 上海卷Directions: Write an English compositionin 120-150 words according to

41、the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館征集公眾意見，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：1 .簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇；2 .說明你的理由從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個場所進(jìn)行對比【優(yōu)秀范芬范文】To whom it may concern:I ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you re collecting suggestions on its location. I m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.On one hand, it is more convenient for people to