2019屆高三英語百所名校好題速遞分項解析匯編(第03期)：專題05短文改錯

1、2019屆高考模擬試題分類匯編（3）之短文改錯【廣西桂林市桂林中學(xué) 2019 屆高三 8 月月考】 短文改錯（滿分 10 分） 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共 有 10 處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（AJ并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改 10 處，多者 （從第 11 處起）不計分。It is MotherDsay today. Mom has a full-ti

2、me job, so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on MotherDsay. We get up early in themorning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. While he came back, I found a bunch offlowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting r

3、oom and I cooked dishes in kitchen. The dishes Icooked was Momsfavorite. At dinner, we said to her,“HappyMotherDsay!”Mom was grateful andmoving to tears.【答案】71.so-but72.houseworks-housework73.or-and74.get-got75.on 去掉；76. While-When77.her-his78.in 后面加 the79.were-was80.moving-moved【解析】考查連詞。句意：媽媽有一個全職工

4、作，但是她不得不做多數(shù)的家務(wù)。此處 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把 so-but。72.houseworks-housework 考查名詞。 “ housework 是不可數(shù)名詞，故把 houseworks-housework73.or and考查連詞both-and-，兩個都-。故把 or-and。74.getgot考查動詞的時態(tài)。句意：在母親節(jié)我們起床早。根據(jù)句意可知用一般過去時態(tài)，故把 get-got75.on 去掉；考查動詞短語。go shopping 去購物?？芍サ?on76.While When 考查連詞。句意：當(dāng)他回來時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)他手里有朵花。77. her his考查代詞。句意：在爸爸手里

5、。故把 her血78細后面加考查介詞句意我在廚房里做飯。在此表示特指，故用 th79. were-was考查主語一致 主語是 the dishes,故謂語動詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式*80.moved 考查形容詞.句意：媽馮即感激有感動。故把 movingtuoxed【湖北省部分重點中學(xué) 2019 屆高三上學(xué)期起點考試】 短文改錯（共 10 小題；每小題 1 分，滿分 10 分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。 文中共 有 10 處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（A），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除；把多余

6、的詞 用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。Dear editor,I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious in flue need peopledaily life and econo mic development. To sol

7、vethe problem, I Ide to put forward some advices.For one thing, more streets and roads should be built. In this way, we can speed up the flow of busesand cars. For other, the nu mber of bikes and cars can be limited, that can decrease the traffic flow. Butthe most important thing is what the number

8、of private cars should be put under the con trol. Mean while,buses should have its own special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore, un dergr71.so butound train and city train should be developed quickly.I do hope my suggesti ons will be take n.Yours,Li Hua【答案】71. complaining 后面

9、力口 about72. serious-seriously73. advices-advice74.other-a no ther75. that-which76. what-that77. under 后面的 the 去掉78.its-their79. us in g-used80. Therefore Besides/Moreover【解析】plaiiLing 后面加 about 考查動詞短語 complain about 抱怨 o72. serious- - seriously考查副詞。Seriously 用來修飾 influenoodj73.advicesadvice考查名詞。加 iv

10、iw是不可數(shù)名詞；74.otlieranother考查代詞* For another另外一方面；75.that-which考查定語從句；that 不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，which 可以引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句;76.what-that考查表語從句；句意：但最重要的是事情是私家車的數(shù)量應(yīng)該得到控制;77.under 后面的 the 去掉考查固定短語。79.us in g-used考查被動80.Therefore Besides/Moreover 考查副詞。句意：除此之后，地鐵發(fā)展也很迅速；【廣東省中山市第一中學(xué)2019屆高三上學(xué)期第一次統(tǒng)測】短文改錯（共 10 小題;每小題 1 分，滿分 10

11、分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每次錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。Su nny 31st , JulyIt was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of study ing or the no ise of c

12、ity life, I come to the ecology parkto enjoy scenery and get relax ing in the after noon.While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick gree n trees. The air was fresh. In addition, Icould clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers,

13、I felt with ease becauseall that I wan ted was peace in side.Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would n everforget such roma ntic experie nee, which was really bey ond descripti on.【答案】1.or-and2. come- came3. relax in g-relaxed4. W

14、hile-Whe n5.its-my6. grasses-grass7. with-at8. Therefore-However9. 去掉 back10.在 such 后面加 a【解析】試題分析：題目主要考查學(xué)生對名詞，代詞，動詞，連詞，形容詞，副詞以及時態(tài)等知識的拿握情況。l-Oi-W考查連詞，此處為順接意義的并列關(guān)系，故把oran心2.GOHK- came考查時態(tài)，該句I謂語應(yīng)用過去時態(tài)&故把come cameo3.relaxing- relaxed考查非謂語形式得到放松：get relaxed , relaxiiig通常描述對象罡物厲故把relating- ichxed 4. W

15、hile-When當(dāng)我到達公園的時候， 用連詞 when, while 跟從句時，謂語動詞必須是持續(xù)性的。故把 While-When。5.its-my考查代詞形式，此處指我看到的景象，代詞應(yīng)用my。6. grasses-grass考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，grass 為不可數(shù)名詞。故把 grasses-grass7. with-at考查介詞搭配，at ease 固定搭配，意為輕松地。故把with-at。8. Therefore-However考查連詞，此處有轉(zhuǎn)折意義，用however。9.去掉 back 考查動詞，return 返回，后面不再接 back,語意重復(fù)了。10. 在 such 后面加 a考查

16、冠詞，experienee 作 經(jīng)歷講時為可數(shù)名詞，such 后加 a?！局R拓展】1. 表示情感的現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞surprising 令人驚訝的，surprised 感到驚訝；frightening 令人害怕的，frightened 感到害怕；moving 令人感動的，moved 感動；exciting 令人興奮的，excited 感到興奮；boring 令人厭煩的，bored 感到厭煩；annoying 令人煩惱的-annoyed 感到煩惱的；relaxing 放松的-relaxed感到放松的。現(xiàn)在分詞的主語通常指事物；過去分詞的主語通常指人。2. return 禾口 back； re

17、peat 禾口 again； enter 禾口 into 不能在同一句中出現(xiàn)?？键c：考查短文改錯【重慶市第十一中學(xué) 2019 屆高三 9 月月考】短文改錯 洪 10 小題；每小題 1 分，滿分 10 分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分

18、。Stress is a state of being upset that happe n whe n we are un der pressure. We stude nts have all experie need stressover problems in our daily life, test results, or too many homework. Si nee stresscan make us sick, we have to learn what to deal with it. When you are stressful, don t forgehobbies.

19、 If you are fond music, just turn on the radio. Gen erally, people thi nk TV may in terfere withtheir children s studies. However, if you worry about that your English and don t know whayou can get help from En glish TV programs. It is also help to share your worries to your frien ds.They will surel

20、y give you some advices and help you out of trouble. As long as we treat stress proper,we can relax ourselves and keep away from its bad effects.【答案】1. happe n-happe ns2. ma ny- much3. what-how4. stressful-stressed5. fondAmusic of6. 去掉 that7. help-helpful8. to-with9. advices- advice10. proper- prope

21、rly【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇說明文，王要介紹了壓力對我們身心的影響，以及如何正確面對和減少壓力的方法。l_happcnbappeiussta檢罡先行詞，后面定語從句的謂語動詞用電數(shù)形式，故把happenhappenso2一many“ muchhomcwaric是不可數(shù)名詞# 故把many“ mudio3. what-how固定搭配:what to do with sth.,how to deal with sttr怎樣處理某事故把4. stressful-stressed句意：當(dāng)你感到有壓力的時候。故把stressful-stressed。5. fondAmusic of固定搭配： be

22、 fond of 喜愛-，故在 fondAmusic of。6. 去掉 that worry about 后面直接跟賓語，故去掉 that。7. help-helpfulbe 動詞后面用形容詞作表語，故把help-helpful。8. to-with固定搭配：share with sb.與某人分享。故把 to-with。9. advices- adviceadvice 是不可數(shù)名詞，故把advices- per- properly副詞修飾動詞，故把proper- properly ?！靖拭C省蘭州第一中學(xué) 2019 屆高三 9 月月考】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修

23、改作文， 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉 及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：把缺詞處加一個漏字符號（人），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。There is an old woman in our town calls Old Alice who said to be 108 years old. This cant be provedthough she d

24、oesnt have a birth certificate. All her personal papers are destroyed during World Warn.1dont know if she really is so old, and it doesnt matter. She certainly looks very old. Of course, she is oftenasked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Alice always answered them

25、likethis, “If you are offered cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper;and if you are asked foolish questi ons, never answer to them. ”【答案】1.calls 改為 called2. who 和 said 之間加 is3. though 改為 because/for/as4.are 改為 were5.and 改為 but6.question 改為 questions7.answere

26、d 改為 answers8.offered 和 cigarette 之間加 a9. his 改為 your10. 去掉 answer 后面的 to【解析】試題分析:本文介紹長壽老人OldAlice次及她的長壽秘訣 01.血改為called過去分詞作后置定語，故把傭lh改為calldol.nctiMtyactiviticE句意：不同的活動用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式/故把activityacti-ities o3.在without和blamed之間加bein呂without后面用動名詞，此處表示襁動關(guān)系 故在without和blamed之間加twin.4. me-myselfsay to on eself 自

27、言自語，故把 me-myself。5. the-a句意：我計劃為我父母做一頓飯。故把the-a。6. how-what句意：我盡力回憶我媽媽在廚房里為我所做的一切。故把how-what。7. arra nge-arra nged句意：我盡力回憶我媽媽在廚房里為我所做的一切，靠自己安排好每件事。掛脖 arrange-arranged。8. 去掉 it 句意：我感到非常高興。故去掉 it。9. cheerful-cheerfully副詞修飾動詞，故把 cheerful-cheerfully。10. say-say ing固定搭配：could nt help doi ng 情不自禁做某事，故把say

28、-sayi ng?！窘魇∮裆娇h第一中學(xué) 2019 屆高三上學(xué)期第一次月考】短文改錯（共 10 小題；每小題 1分，滿分 10 分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（人），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitat

29、ion to spendAweekend with you. Luckily I wastheamcompletely free then, so I II to say “ yes ” . I II arrive irirBFisdtayaeveoningd 8 pmonI am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend,hopeful a girl in her early twen ty, and with in terests similar to mine

30、. In my mind, she is some one in teresti ng in traveli ng,swim ming, and play ing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping that at homefor some time. With such a pen pal, I hope I can share her my experie nces in traveli ng, tak ing care of pets, or w

31、hichever wehave in com mon. I believe I would improve my En glish by doing so and lear ning more about her coun try. I am look ingforward to heari ng from you soon.【答案】1.去掉 for 此處 ask 的意思是 問”，故去掉 for。2. hopeful- hopefully3. twenty- twen ties4.i nteresti ng in terested5. BesideBesides6. that-one7. sh

32、are 后加 with8. Whichever whatever9. wouldwill10.learni ng-learn【解析】試題分析：本文講的是作者想交一個外國筆左，提高自己的英語，了解她的國家*L去掉for止匕處亞的意思是爭T故去掉for.2.hopefulhopefully副詞修飾整個句子；故把hopefulhopefully.3 twenty一twentieE in ones twenties在某人二十幾歲時r故把twenty一twenties4. mtereKtinginterestedbe interested in對感天趣，此處罡過去分詞作后適定語，故把iiitciesti

33、iigirterested *5. BesideBesidesBesides 在此處的意思是另外，此外”，故把 BesideBesides。6. that-one此處是指代前面的a pet dog，故把 that-。ne。7. share 后加 with 固定詞組：share with 與-分享，故在 share 后加 with。8. whichever whatever 句意：分享我們凡是有的共同點。此處指的范圍大，故把whichever whatever.9. would-will句意：我認為我將提高我的英語。根據(jù)句意可知此處用一般將來時態(tài)，故把would-will。10.learning

34、 learn此處的 learn 和前面的 improve 并列，故把 learning learn。【西藏自治區(qū)拉薩中學(xué) 2019 屆高三上學(xué)期第一次月考】短文改錯（共 10 小題；每小題 1 分，滿分 10 分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（AJ并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。Whe

35、 n I first lear ned to write in En glish, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that Ialways thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to10 great改為 greatly副詞修飾動詞,故把 great改為 greatly keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked.

36、 Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself onpaper as I was lear ning to express me in simple En glish. One day I wrote a short story and showedto my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Every one said the story was the good on e. I was great encouraged by their words.【答案】1. run

37、 改為 ran2去掉 in3. Chinese 改為 English4. advices 改成 advice5. talkTtalki ng6. meTmyself7. showed 后加 it8. very 改為 so9. the 改為 a10. great 改為 greatly【解析】試題分析：本文是關(guān)于學(xué)英語的故事。1.run 改為 ran 根據(jù)句意可知用一般過去時態(tài)，故把run 改為 ran。2.去掉 inin 不與 that 連用，that 引導(dǎo)表語從句。故去掉in。3.Chinese 改為 English 根據(jù)本句后半句：但是我盡力把一切翻譯成漢語。可知我總是用英語說。故把 Ch

38、in ese 改為 En glish。4.advices 改成 advice advice 是不可數(shù)名詞，故把advices 改成 advice。10 great改為 greatly副詞修飾動詞,故把 great改為 greatly 5. talk-stalking 應(yīng)是 enjoy doing故把 tallLtalki昭口6. nief myself漢語自己表達用英語是 express oneself o7 showed 后扣 it給某人看.應(yīng)用 show sth to sbo 代詞 it 放在 showed 和 to 中間。改為 so so- that,如此以致干引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句，故把倨專

39、改為 so。9 血七改為且句意：毎個人說這是一個好故事。故把驗改為氐【山東省棗莊市第三中學(xué)2019屆高三9月質(zhì)量檢測】短文改錯（共 10 小題；每小題1 分，滿分 10 分） 假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（人），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）戈胖。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意： 1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。2.只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。Dear Grace,H

40、ow is everything going with you?I ve been in Russia for two months. This is the first time that I ve been away my family foa long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I soon get used to live without my parents around. Katia, like many otherRussian girls, are nice and lively. We became friend shortly after we met each other. Although her Eng