初中的英語的看圖作文

1、初中的英語的看圖作文 中 考 作 文 的 評 分 標 準四檔文：內容不完整，語言表述錯誤很多，不能完整地 表達思想?？傻?-2分三檔文：內容完整，重點描述合理，但表述不充分，層次結構不合理，語言不夠流暢，字跡不夠工整，5-6處語法或拼寫錯誤；字數(shù)不足。可得3-5分二檔文：內容完整，重點描述比較充分，層次結構比較清晰，語言比較流暢，字跡工整，有3-4處語法或拼寫錯誤；字數(shù)符合要求。 可得6-8分一檔文：內容完整，重點描述清楚、合理，表達充分，層次結構清晰，字跡工整，可讀性強，語言流暢，僅有1-2處語法或拼寫錯誤；字數(shù)符合要求。 可得9-10分 看圖作文難度稍大，在寫作時它要根據(jù)圖畫呈現(xiàn)的內容與所

2、給的中英文提示相結合來表達其內在涵義，描述圖畫內容，使短文達意、正確、連貫。 看圖作文可采用以下幾個步驟：1、理解圖意，確立情景 2、注意所給的中英文提示3、明確時態(tài)，理順思路 4、連詞成句，然后再連句成文5、反復審核，修改錯誤假設下面五幅圖畫描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段親身經(jīng)歷。請你根據(jù)畫面內容，寫一篇80字左右的日記。 英文日記的格式 英文日記通常由書端和正文兩個部分組成。中、英文的日記格式大致一樣。 英語日記的書端是寫日記的日期、星期和天氣的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角寫上當天的天氣情況，如：Sunny，F(xiàn)ine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。 日記的正文是

3、日記的主要部分，寫在星期和日期的正下方，可以頂格寫，也可以內縮3至5個字母的空間。 文章的內容描述完整 表達充分今天下午我去看電影.go to a moviego to the cinema see a filmIts a fine day today.this afternoonI went to a movie happily this afternoon.在路上,我看到一個手提箱從一輛自行車上掉了下來.On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.on the wayfall down from / fall

4、offsee / find + 復合賓語我撿起箱子,并向騎車人大聲喊叫,但他卻沒聽見,走遠了.I picked up the case and shouted to the man, but he didnt hear me and rode away. pick up shout to ride away于是,我攔了一輛出租車去追趕失主.I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man.stop a taxicatch up with我終于追上了失主,并把箱子還給他.失主非常的感動,他拿出一些錢來感謝我,但被我拒絕了.I caught up with him

5、 at last and gave the case back to him.The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.give back / returnrefuse May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop. But he didnt hear me an

6、d rode away. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . 句子的種類I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.After picking up the case, I shouted to the ma

7、n loudly.把兩個或多個句子合并為簡單句1、把其中一句改為介詞短語I gave the case back to the man.The man took out some money to thank me. Getting the case back from me, the man took out some money to thank me.2、把其中一句改為分詞短語I went to see a film this afternoon.One the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I was on m

8、y way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.把兩個或多個句子合并成復合句But he didnt hear me and rode away.But he rode too fast to hear me.I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up with the man.適當選擇固定句型I wanted to catch up with him ,so I stopped a taxi q

9、uickly.文章結構May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .It was such an interesting movie that I couldnt wait to enjoy it.Although I missed the movie, I was very happy to help others.May 3rd,F

10、riday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. It was such an interesting movie that I couldnt wait to enjoy it. I was on my way to the cinema when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike. After picking up the case, I shouted to the man loudly. But he rode too fast to hear me. I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up wi