中考英語寫作話題2--經(jīng)歷與感受課件

1、話題2 經(jīng)歷與感受命題探索教材鏈接三階攻關(guān)目錄寫作練兵寫作技巧2巧用賓語從句分析宿遷、鹽城、淮安及江蘇其他地市近6年中考真題的書面表達(dá)可知，與“經(jīng)歷與感受”這一話題相關(guān)的書面表達(dá)有以下命題角度：自己的經(jīng)歷及感受，如2018宿遷、2015淮安、2014淮安。結(jié)合全國中考真題可知，此話題還有以下命題角度：他人的經(jīng)歷及對(duì)自己的影響。命題探索教材鏈接 (2019蘇州改編)假定你是蘇華，最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯(cuò)誤，倍感懊惱，寫了一封郵件向你訴說。為幫助他排解困惑，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下所給要點(diǎn)并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，寫一封英文郵件來開導(dǎo)他。 審主題：寫郵件開導(dǎo)犯錯(cuò)的筆友典例剖析審人稱：第一人稱審時(shí)態(tài)：一

2、般過去時(shí)審文體：應(yīng)用文審人稱：第二人稱一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句要點(diǎn)：1. 安慰對(duì)方不要擔(dān)心，每個(gè)人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)；2. 自己一次犯錯(cuò)經(jīng)歷：踢足球忘了做作業(yè)，向老師道歉，第二天完成了作業(yè)；3. 自己是怎么對(duì)待這次錯(cuò)誤的；4. 從這次錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)到了(自主發(fā)揮)。審要點(diǎn)：除以上3點(diǎn)外，還需自由發(fā)揮從這次錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)到了什么東西一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句注意事項(xiàng)：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。Dear Nathan，Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days._

3、Su Hua一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. I ever forgot to finish my homework because I spent too much time in playing computer games.2. It was at that time that I decided to help more people in need.3. My father told me a story on my way home and he helped me to plan my time properly.4. She encouraged me to be

4、kind to others and learn to communicate with others.5. The young man next to our table, talked and laughed loudly.介紹經(jīng)歷角度1好句范例一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. 我有次因?yàn)槌撩杂诳措娨暥ヒ娢业呐笥选?_ _2. 就是在那一刻我決定努力學(xué)習(xí)。 _3. 在去學(xué)校的路上，我發(fā)現(xiàn)地上有一個(gè)錢包。 _ I once forgot to meet my friend because I lost myself in watching TV.It was at that

5、time that I decided to study hard.On my way to school, I found a wallet on the ground.句 子 仿 寫一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句4. 我的老師鼓勵(lì)我積極參加課外活動(dòng)。 _ _5. 坐在我旁邊的女孩，大聲說話說了很長時(shí)間。 _ My teacher encouraged me to take an active part in afterclass activities.The girl next to me, talked loudly for a long time.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇

6、章二階寫好句6. I could hardly think clearly after the earthquake.(擴(kuò)寫感受)I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after the earthquake.7. I dont know how to remember new words quickly.(擴(kuò)寫感受)I often feel stressed because I dont know how to remember new words quickly.介紹感受角度2擴(kuò)寫范例一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句8.

7、 I won the first prize in the reading competition.(擴(kuò)寫感受)I won the first prize in the reading competition. I was really happy that day.角度一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句6. When he stood on the stage, he didnt know what to say. (擴(kuò)寫 感受) _ _7. I dont want to speak in front of so many people.(擴(kuò)寫感受) _ _ He was so ner

8、vous that he didnt know what to say when he stood on the stage.I feel so worried and afraid because I dont want to speak in front of so many people.句 子 擴(kuò) 寫一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句8. They were told there was no tickets left.(擴(kuò)寫感受) _ _When they were told there was no tickets left, they were very unhappy t

9、hat day.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句9. His story taught me not to give up my dream no matter what happens.10. From his experience, I realized that helping others can make the world more beautiful.11. His words touched my heart and I will remember them forever.他人經(jīng)歷對(duì)自己的影響角度3好句范例一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句9. 這次經(jīng)歷教會(huì)我不

10、要小瞧別人。 _10. 從她的經(jīng)歷中，我意識(shí)到了微笑在生活中的重要性。 _ _11. 他的話給了我勇氣和自信，我會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)記住他的支持。 _ _This experience taught me not to look down upon others.From her experience, I realized the importance of smiling in daily life.His words gave me courage and confidence and I will remember his support forever.句 子 仿 寫一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章

11、二階寫好句一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句練語段Last year, I met a difficult situation. I _(所經(jīng)歷的事情)I didnt know what I should do at first. And I felt _(對(duì)事情的感受). Then I _(應(yīng)對(duì)的辦法). Finally, I _(最后的結(jié)果). I _(對(duì)結(jié)果的感受) failed the exam/couldnt understand what the teacher said in class/.disappointed/stressed/. asked the teacher

12、for help/reviewed the lessons carefully/. got a high score in the final exam/made progress in English/.語 段 練 習(xí) 1介紹經(jīng)歷及感受was so satisfied/was excited/.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句_(簡(jiǎn)單描述他人的經(jīng)歷或事跡). As a student, Ive learned a lot from his story. We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life, but we shoul

13、d _(影響1). No matter how hard life is, _(影響2). Liu Wei lost his left arm by accident but he didnt give up his dream of being a painter/He failed many times to do the research, but he didnt give up/.語 段 練 習(xí) 2他人經(jīng)歷對(duì)自己的影響 believe that our dream will come true byworking hard/never lose confidence in ourse

14、lves/. we wont fail unless we give up our hope/we should keep on going/.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句成篇章Dear Nathan，Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You neednt worry too much. Its true that everyone makes mistakes.Take me for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my

15、friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句It doesnt matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct them and learn from them.

16、In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.I hope my experience can help you out.Su Hua(2019寧波改編)回顧初中三年，有許多事令人難忘。校英語報(bào)Have Your Say欄目正面向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，要求用英語寫一封信表達(dá)你對(duì)某個(gè)人的謝意，正好你對(duì)此很感興趣，想報(bào)名參加征文活動(dòng)?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下所給要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。要點(diǎn)：1. 引出要感謝的人：你的英語老師；2. 講述你的經(jīng)歷：不擅長英語，失去信心，在老師的鼓勵(lì)下，取得了很大進(jìn)步；3. 自己的感受

17、(自主發(fā)揮，至少一點(diǎn))；4. 表達(dá)謝意(自主發(fā)揮，至少一點(diǎn))。寫作練兵寫作練兵注意事項(xiàng)：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。寫作練兵寫作練兵Dear Alice，Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say thanks to you_寫作練兵寫作練兵for helping me with my English. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book an

18、d never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class._Yours，Li Hua寫作練兵寫作練兵Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student. Thanks agai

19、n. Best wishes to you!賓語從句是主從復(fù)合句的一種。其從句部分在整個(gè)句子中作賓語，從句的語序必須是陳述句語序，即“連接詞主語謂語其他部分”。常見的連接詞有：that, if/whether, what, when, where, how, who, why等。巧用賓語從句1. “Its delicious，” She said. She said (that)it was delicious.2. Does Kate get up early? Do you know？ Do you know if/whether Kate gets up early?3. When did you come her