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1、 1.5審題：練習(xí)例 3: 2012 年 12 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled EducationPays based on the sistics providedhe chart below (kly earnings in 2010). Please give a briefdescription of the chartand then make comments on it. You should writeeast 120 words but

2、no moren 180 words.例 4: Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should startyour essay wi importance ofbrief description of the picture and then express your views on the ng small things before undertaking something big. You should write atleast 120 words bu

3、t no moren 180 words.例5： 2014年12月真題解析Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a classmate whohas influenced you most in college. You should se the reasons and writeeast 120 words but nomoren 180 words.第二部分：寫作測試的特殊性2 / 19 首段：圖畫描述（引入圖畫）This is a simput thought

4、-provoking cartoon: (圖述：人/物+動(dòng)作+環(huán)境+文字) the youngster/ guy expresses his worries about “dising of the nuclear waste”; to hirprise,his father responds/answers: “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.”二段：圖畫主題+現(xiàn)象+意義(圖畫聯(lián)系主旨) Obviously, this picture can be naturally assoted with the import

5、ance ofng small things: (主題評(píng)論) if youngstersend to achieve sucs, it is advisable for them tobegin with little things. (現(xiàn)象概述) In contemporary society, it hase a trend for a host of teenagers to ignore tiny things in life: cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. (相關(guān)人+感受) Meanwhile, an i

6、ncreasing number of young people find it rather useless or unnesary todeal with thesethings.(舉例) A case in po is the boyhcture. However, (意義) it is thesesmall tasks As a matter o small things.t enable youngsters to build up adequate knowledge, ability and experience. (萬能總結(jié))ct,elligent people in larg

7、e numbers have come to realize the significance ofng（補(bǔ)充舉例 2）Taking a look around, we can notice a great many young people like the boy picture.he(意義句補(bǔ)充)ng small things brings usskills, arouses our enthusiasm/ pas for sucs,and helps us to make progress.尾段：觀點(diǎn)+建議+展望(觀點(diǎn)：尾段首句萬能) As a college student, I a

8、m convincedt it is of great nesity foryoungsters to enhance ourselves byng small things. (萬能建議) Thus, we should educate,advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaan to cultivate this awareness/habit.(展望 1:)Sparing no efforts to do so, we can witness a hopeful and promising future of ou

9、r life, workand study. (展望 2:) Do bearind: no small progress, no sucs. /small progresses lead to a bigsucs.日常復(fù)習(xí)方略1.2.3.仿寫：類似功能段落、表達(dá)和話題翻譯：英譯漢漢譯英對(duì)比背寫：思路+表達(dá)4 / 19 本課作業(yè)：仿寫 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. Youshould start your essay wibrief description of the

10、picture and then express your views on theimportance of reading literature. You should writeeast 120 words but no moren 180 words.(圖畫引出) This is a funny but enlightening drawing: the teacher gives/ hands/presents herstudent a book of literature andls/ encourages the girl: “Just think of it as if you

11、re reading a longtext-message.”; what surprises the teacher ist her student seems unwilling to accept it.(圖畫聯(lián)系主題) Apparently, such a scene can be easily linked to the importance of readingliterature: (圖畫評(píng)論) if studentsend to achieve sucs in study, it is advisable for them to read5 / 19 more literatu

12、re books. (現(xiàn)象概述)In contemporary society, it is a common phenomenon for a host of youngsters to ignore learningliterature. (相關(guān)人+感受) Meanwhile, an increasing number of teenagers find it rather difficult andboring to understand literature. (舉例)A typical exle is the girl in picture. Nonetheless, (意義)it

13、isstudying literaturet helps students to build up/accumulate adequate cultural knowledge and writingskills. (萬能總結(jié))As a matter o significance of reading literature.ct, teenagersounting numbers have not come to realize the(觀點(diǎn)) As a college student, I am convincedt it is exceedingly nesary for youngste

14、rs tostrengthen ourselves by reading novels, poems and essays. (展望) If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our study will be hopeful and promising.實(shí)例2：2013-12 網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)人際交流的影響Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on thcturebelow. You should start your ess

15、ay wibrief account of the impact of theernet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.You should writeeast 120 words but no moren 180 words.文字信息：“Dear Andy, -How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you

16、 are ng well. We look forward to seeing you aga he next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat Love, Mom and Dad.首段：圖畫聯(lián)系主題Apparently, this cartoon can be naturally assoted with the impact of theernet on the waypeople communicate:ernet makes our communication conveni

17、ent, but if individualsend to keep/maain close and harmonious relationship with others, it is not advisable for them to chat only/merely by theernet.二段：現(xiàn)象+危害In contemporary society, ise a trend for a host of youngsters to spend much time inplaying PC games,and Wechat. Meanwhile, an increasing number

18、 of parents find it ratherdifficult to have opportunities to chat with teenagers face to face, because ofernet. A case in pois the guy and his parents: he seldom sees his parents, and when his computer crashes, he will comedownstairs to see his parents. It isernett does not enable teenagers to spend

19、 adequate time incaring about parents and significant things. As a matter oct,elligent people in large numbershave come to realize the negative influen補(bǔ)充表達(dá)：ofernet: cold or indifferent relationship.舉例補(bǔ)充 Taking a look around, we can notice a great many exles like the family in picture.意義補(bǔ)充 It is face

20、-to-face contactt enables humans to feel the true love, care and trust in communication.尾段：觀點(diǎn)+結(jié)論As a college student, I am convincedt it is of great nesity for youngsters to strengthen ourcommunication in real life. Do bearcontact. (200 詞)ind: electronic communication can never replace face-to-face段

21、落思路：一個(gè)中心，四個(gè)基本點(diǎn)1. 孩子家長家庭社會(huì)素質(zhì)意識(shí)法規(guī)6 / 19 2. 學(xué)生老師學(xué)校社會(huì)素質(zhì)意識(shí)法規(guī)3.話題相關(guān)人相關(guān)物社會(huì)素質(zhì)意識(shí)法規(guī)本課作業(yè):仿寫2013 年 12 月四級(jí)寫作真題解析之“手機(jī)過度使用”Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on thcture above.You should start your essay wibrief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peo

22、pleslife and then expla n 180 words.he consequence of overusing it. You should writeeast 120 words but no more實(shí)例3: 2012-12 教育回報(bào)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Paysbased on the sistics provided in the chart below (kly earnings in 2010).

23、Please give a briefdescription of the chartand then make comments on it. You should writeeast 120 words but7 / 19 no moren 180 words.首段：圖表(引出圖 )This is a simput enlightening chart by US Bureau of Labor: (圖表描述萬能) in2010, ide a trend for doctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in ak in US-$1

24、551, $1272 and $1038. Meanwhile, other individuals could not enjoy satisfactory earnings, if they did not receive better education.+現(xiàn)象+意義題)Obviously, this chart can be naturally assoted with the importance of二段：主題( 圖表聯(lián)education: （圖表內(nèi)容評(píng)論）if individualsend to acquire/ get better earnings, it is advisa

25、ble forthem to gain higher degrees.（現(xiàn)象）In contemporary America, it is a common phenomenon for a hostof companies/ firms/ corporations/anizations to hire/ employ/ recruit doctors and masters and paythem better salaries.(相關(guān)人+感受) And an increasing number of youngsters find it rather difficultto get bet

26、ter jobs, if they do not get better education. (意義) It is educationt enables them to buildup adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important tasks. (總結(jié))As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.尾段：觀點(diǎn)+號(hào)召（觀點(diǎn)）As a

27、 college student, I am convincedt it is of great nesity for youngsters toenhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. （號(hào)召）Do bear is/means a worthy investment.ind: education本課作業(yè)：仿寫Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Paysba

28、sed on the sistics providedhe chart below (Unemployment Rate in 2010). Please give a briefdescription of the chartand then make comments on it. You should writeeast 120 words butno moren 180 words.8 / 19 實(shí)例4：2011年12月（成功與堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志力）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short ess

29、ay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thinghe world. Ive done it 180 words.dreds of times.” You should writeeast 120 words but no moren首段(話語引入)This is a humorous but enlightening remark by smokers: “Quitting smoking is the easiestthing in the world. Ive done itdreds of times.” (話語聯(lián)系主題)Obviously, this saying can be9 / 19 o 四級(jí)保命班 新浪微博： 石雷鵬老師 尹延 尚龍老師 微信公眾號(hào)：石雷鵬老師 暑期：考研/四六級(jí)高分課程震撼上線 必備翻譯練習(xí) ：中國這片古老神秘而又美