英語基礎寫作課件

1、Basic Writing- How to describe a person?DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的開頭和結尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (結構合理,行文流暢) Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯誤)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence

2、patterns (詞語的準確運用和句式的富于變化) Brief Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)ConclusionThe outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph: Introduction paragraph: Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 21.認真審題，明確要求。 1)確定短文的主題和格式。 2)確定短文的人稱和時態(tài)。 3)短文必須包括全部信息內容

3、，不能遺漏任何一點。 4)寫出的短文必須有不同的句式。2.劃分信息塊，列出寫作要點，明確寫作的先后次序。3.確定可能用到的短語、主要句型。4.擴展成句，連句成篇。基礎寫作基本步驟寫作內容 人物介紹：(老師范例)1. 李莎,英語老師，女，22歲, 1.65米, 身材苗條, 裝扮入時。2. 性格活潑，愛唱愛跳，愛開玩笑。3. 她的課生動活潑，我們常在課堂上做游戲。4. 與學生關系融洽，深受同學歡迎。寫作要求1. 題目：My Favorite Teacher2. 必須使用4個句子介紹全部所給的內容.3. 將4個句子組織成連貫的短文. 步驟一：（1）審題構思 ： a、主題 ：My Favorite T

4、eacher b、人稱 ：第三人稱 c、時態(tài) ：一般現(xiàn)在時（2）列出要點： 1) 李莎,英語老師, 女，22歲, 1.65米, 身材苗條, 裝扮入時。 2) 性格活潑，愛唱愛跳，愛開玩笑。 3) 她的課生動活潑，我們常在課堂上做游戲。 4) 與學生關系融洽，深受同學歡迎。 2. activelikesplay jokes 3. be lively and interestingplay games4. get on well with,be popular with步驟二：句子所步需的詞匯，短語和句型。李莎， 女，英語老師, 22歲，1.65米，身材苗條, 裝扮入時。性格活潑， 愛唱愛跳， 愛

5、開玩笑。她的課生動活潑，我們常在課堂上做游戲。與學生關系融洽，深受同學歡迎；1. be slim and fashionable步驟三：連詞成句。 (1)、Lisa is our English teacher. She is a young lady. She is 22 years old and she is 1.65 meters tall. She is slim and fashionable.(2)、She is active. she likes singing and dancing. She plays jokes with us.(3)、Her lessons are l

6、ively and interesting. We often play games in class.(4)、Miss Li gets on well with us and she is very popular. 學會連句成文(1). Lisa is our English teacher.(2). She is a young lady.(3). She is 22 years old.(4). She is 1.65 meters tall. (5). She is slim and fashionable. Lisa, our English teacher(同位語）, is a

7、fashionable and slim young lady, who is 22 years old, and1.65 meters tall（定語從句）.用一句話表達性格活潑，愛唱愛跳，愛開玩笑。學會連句成文第一步：拆分成幾個簡單句(1)She is active .(2)She likes singing and dancing .(3)She plays jokes with us.第二步：合并這幾個簡單句The active teacher likes singing, dancing and joking. ：My Favorite Teacher Lisa, our Engli

8、sh teacher, is a fashionable and slim young lady, who is 22 years old, and1.65 meters tall. The active teacher likes singing, dancing and she plays jokes with us. Besides, her lessons are interesting and lively, and we often play games in class. Miss Li gets on well with us and she is very popular. 范文:步驟四：連句成篇。步驟五: 檢查1.時態(tài)2. 主謂一致3.名詞單復數(shù)4.單詞拼寫5.動詞的過去式, 過去分詞6.句子是否完整語法詞匯,句型 （高級）和多樣化（較復雜） 1.覆蓋了所有的要點 2. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊要點全連接詞Summary:如何算是一篇好文章？Homework:請根據(jù)下述內容,以“Our Monitor”為題,用英語寫一篇短文. 在班里吳東個子最高,樂于助人,他是班長. 幾個月前,我因病耽誤了兩周的課,他幫助我趕上了.他擅長數(shù)學和物理, 他也喜歡英語, 老師和同學們都認為他的發(fā)音最好.他愛踢足球,