qcbony大學(xué)-英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文

1、.：.；| You have to believe, there is a way. The ancients said: the kingdom of heaven is trying to enter. Only when the reluctant step by step to go to it s time, must be managed to get one step down, only have struggled to achieve it. - Guo Ge Tech2021年英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文范文:創(chuàng)建綠色校園Create a Green CampusIt is of gre

2、at importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college. Obviously， a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days， since the concept of “a green world has become the focus of the society.The idea of “a green campus is be

3、yond a green environment. To begin with， the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable. Some of the authorities budget should be on how to reduce of the waste. Whats more， wed better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us. Thus the idea of environmental protection may

4、 become a common occurrence in our daily life.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution， and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Certainly， there is little doubt that further considerati

5、on must be paid to our green campuses.2021年英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文范文:免費(fèi)觀賞博物館Free Admission to Museums？Nowadays, a lot of museums open to the public for free, and a lot of people are attracted to go there. However, it also brought some unexpected problems.At present, people can get knowledge from many ways like libra

6、ries, internet, and other sources. However, there is also much information that people cannot get from the above ways. Free admission museums supply more chances for the public to get knowledge that cannot be easily accessed. People can learn more things about history, art, science and so on. Althou

7、gh, this kind of policy brought much convenience to the public, it also caused some problems. For example, beggars and shabby-dressed people may enter the museums and cause bad reputation among the public; along with the increasing number of people getting into museums, there will be no enough servi

8、ce establishments to meet the requirements; besides, under the policy of free admission, the cultural relics displayed there may be inevitably broken or damaged by the crowds. Moreover, the crowds in the museums may also cause security problems.In my opinion, free admission is a good policy for the

9、public, and it brings the public much convenience. But, we should also take possible measures to protect the cultural relics and maintain the order of spot. Besides, we can also take the policy of giving free admission first to children, then to the retired person, and last to the public. I think, t

10、his may help to solve the problems.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)有的人喜歡單獨(dú)游覽，有的人喜歡與他人結(jié)伴而行2)兩種游覽方

11、式的益處3)他更喜歡哪種游覽方式，為什么?Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?_行文思緒此題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出兩種不同的游覽方式，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分別論述兩種游覽方式的益處，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求闡明“我的傾向，由此可判別本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出人們對(duì)游覽方式的不同偏好：有人喜歡單獨(dú)游覽，有人喜歡結(jié)伴游覽;對(duì)比論述單獨(dú)游覽和結(jié)伴游覽各自的益處;闡明“我更喜歡于哪種游覽方式，并闡明理由。高分范文Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?1When it comes to

12、traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. 2Some people like to travel alone, 2while others prefer to travel with a companion. 3Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference.4Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishe

13、s without the trouble of humoring others. 3Moreover, traveling alone 5tend to bring the traveler 6unexpected surprise, 7such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. 8Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. 3For one thing, the group members

14、can help and look after each other in the journey. 3For another, 4traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them.9As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. 3Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. 3Second

15、ly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. 3In sum, 10both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)1“當(dāng)涉及到或談到時(shí)。2用于提出兩種不同的觀念、態(tài)度或喜好。3過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理明晰、銜接嚴(yán)密。4如今分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。5“傾向，趨于。6“不測(cè)的驚喜。7表示列舉。8“和相比。9用于引出本人的觀念或選

16、擇。10“或者，或者。佳句臨摩1.佳句：When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions.臨摩：當(dāng)談到能否應(yīng)該取消“黃金周假期時(shí)，人們的看法各不一樣。_.2.佳句：Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages.臨摩：和城市相比，鄉(xiāng)村的經(jīng)濟(jì)相對(duì)落后。3_.3.佳句：Both traveling alone and traveling with a companion hav

17、e their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.臨摩：網(wǎng)絡(luò)教學(xué)和傳統(tǒng)教學(xué)都有其各自的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，因此，我們應(yīng)該將二者相結(jié)合。_.KEY:1. When it comes to whether we should cancel the “golden week holiday, different people will offer different opinions.2. Compared with the cities, the countryside is relatively backward in eco

18、nomy.3. Both network teaching and traditional school teaching have their advantages. Therefore, we should combine these two teaching ways.預(yù)測(cè)一For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the

19、outline given below in Chinese.1. 如今大學(xué)校園里，遲到、早退、曠課是常見(jiàn)的景象2. 保證學(xué)生的出勤率對(duì)大學(xué)教育的重要性3. 作為一個(gè)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做Attend Your Classes RegularlyNowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom befo

20、re the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers.In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to

21、do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly

22、will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day well benefit from it.點(diǎn)評(píng)：2021年元月三日，中山大學(xué)博士發(fā)帖稱遭導(dǎo)師虐待；2021年

23、元月四日，中國(guó)政法大學(xué)爆“楊帆門(mén)事件；近幾年，中小學(xué)教師或打?qū)W生或猥褻學(xué)生、體罰學(xué)生等各類(lèi)新聞不斷曝光，進(jìn)而引發(fā)了師生關(guān)系的大討論。本預(yù)測(cè)題為四級(jí)考試傳統(tǒng)的問(wèn)題處理型的寫(xiě)作，與校園生活親密相關(guān)。預(yù)測(cè)二For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1. 學(xué)生給

24、教師打分曾經(jīng)普遍2. 人們對(duì)其持不同態(tài)度3. 我的看法Students Rating of Their TeachersNowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.T

25、his, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is muc

26、h more to teaching than what is shown on students rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers colleagues.I thi

27、nk students rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers performance. Instead of rating the teachers knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, and to report on suc

28、h things as a teachers ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students interest in the subject.點(diǎn)評(píng)：越來(lái)越多的高校采取讓學(xué)生給教師打分的方式來(lái)了解教學(xué)反響，并以此作為促進(jìn)教學(xué)質(zhì)量的有效手段。對(duì)此做法，管理部門(mén)及教學(xué)雙方褒貶不一，看法迥異。本預(yù)測(cè)題為校園生活熱議話題，值得關(guān)注。預(yù)測(cè)三Directions: For this part, you are allow

29、ed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 宿舍生活有時(shí)會(huì)出現(xiàn)不調(diào)和的情況;2. 一個(gè)調(diào)和宿舍生活的必要性;3. 如何發(fā)明調(diào)和的宿舍生活。On a Harmonious Dormitory LifeDormitory life is an indispensable part of college life.

30、But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory can be disturbed in one way or another.As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good m

31、ood and enjoy being together.There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, youll just have to learn to tolerate each othe

32、r and co-exist. Thirdly, youll have to share with each other and make good friends.In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.點(diǎn)評(píng)：“調(diào)和成為我們當(dāng)今社會(huì)詞頻概率最高用詞，就社會(huì)而言，倡導(dǎo)建立調(diào)和社會(huì)；就家庭而言，提倡建立調(diào)和家庭；就校園來(lái)講，那么要建立調(diào)和校園；調(diào)和兩字似乎無(wú)所不在，大學(xué)生宿舍生活同樣需求調(diào)和。本預(yù)測(cè)題與四級(jí)

33、考試熱點(diǎn)親密相關(guān)，又為典型的校園生活主題，值得關(guān)注。預(yù)測(cè)四 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Brief Introduction to the University. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:假設(shè)他是一名學(xué)生志愿者，要給來(lái)他們學(xué)校觀賞的外國(guó)朋友引見(jiàn)學(xué)校情況。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括學(xué)校歷史、規(guī)模、教學(xué)現(xiàn)狀以及未來(lái)目的等。A Brief Introduction to the Univers

34、ityDistinguished guests,Welcome to our university. Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account of the school.Founded in 1927, our university is one of this citys earliest universities of liberal arts. It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of ov

35、er 10,000 students. In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life.Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an overall healthy development. N

36、ot only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to expose them to the up-to-date knowledge. Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent

37、.Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the direction of a first-rate university. Thank you.點(diǎn)評(píng)：近幾年，隨著我國(guó)順利參與世貿(mào)組織以及經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化步伐的加快，許多國(guó)內(nèi)高校紛紛與國(guó)外大學(xué)協(xié)作辦學(xué)，教育走向國(guó)際化成為人們關(guān)注的熱點(diǎn)，也是大學(xué)生門(mén)比較關(guān)懷的熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題。本預(yù)測(cè)題為熱議校園生活話題，與2004年旅游景點(diǎn)引見(jiàn)2006年調(diào)查的名校校園開(kāi)放如出一轍。預(yù)測(cè)五Directio

38、ns: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a friend who will come to your city to see you. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:假設(shè)他是李明, 他的一個(gè)朋友張偉預(yù)備到他所在的城市來(lái)旅游，但他有事不能接待。寫(xiě)封信給他，解釋他不能接待的緣由，并闡明他所做的安排。A Letter to a FriendDear Zhang Wei,Im g

39、lad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vacation.However, Im afraid theres some bad news. Im planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit. All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference. More imp

40、ortantly, Im lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference. I really cant miss it.I understand that itll be your first time to this city and Im your only friend here. Ive asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room.

41、He is a very nice person and he will show you around the city. Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday!Yours,Li Ming點(diǎn)評(píng)：本預(yù)測(cè)題與2001年6月調(diào)查的A Letter to a Schoolmate 類(lèi)似，所不同是寫(xiě)作提示有所不同，2001年6月作文題是寫(xiě)信對(duì)校友來(lái)度假表示歡迎并在信中提出建議和本卷須知，而本預(yù)測(cè)題是對(duì)朋友來(lái)訪不能接待，同時(shí)在信中闡明緣由及詳細(xì)安排，內(nèi)容不一，但話題相仿，寫(xiě)作思緒類(lèi)似，值得關(guān)注。預(yù)測(cè)六For this part, yo

42、u are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Living alone or Living with Roommates? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1 有人以為大學(xué)里應(yīng)單獨(dú)生活2 另一些以為大學(xué)里應(yīng)與他人同住3 他的看法Living alone or Living with RoommatesNowadays, there has appeared a heated discuss

43、ion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students dormitory. Opinions are divided over the matter.Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves. They can enjo

44、y absolute freedom in a room of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others. They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own. With several

45、 students sharing the same room, each persons experiences can be greatly enriched. They can learn a lot from talking to one another. By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.As far as Im concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the fee

46、ling of belonging. Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent a apartment outside the campus.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文與校園生活親密相關(guān)，也是近年來(lái)出現(xiàn)的景象，人們對(duì)此的看法各異，2003年后，四級(jí)作文調(diào)查加大了學(xué)校生活類(lèi)標(biāo)題的調(diào)查，由于這類(lèi)題材不存在地域的差別，不同地域的同窗都有話可說(shuō)。本預(yù)測(cè)題即為校園生活類(lèi)話題，與剛考完的四級(jí)作文話題類(lèi)似，符合命題者出題思緒，值得引起注重。預(yù)測(cè)七Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes

47、 to write a composition on the topic :Cell Phones .You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1. 描畫(huà)上圖所示的手機(jī)用戶數(shù)的變化情況2. 出現(xiàn)這種情況的緣由3. 對(duì)此景象作出評(píng)價(jià)Cell PhonesAs is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of

48、 cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phon

49、e is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.The wide use of cell phones has make them

50、more and more indispensable in peoples daily life. The many functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.點(diǎn)評(píng)：隨著我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速開(kāi)展，人民的生活程度不斷改善，通訊業(yè)的日新月異的開(kāi)展，使得手機(jī)運(yùn)用普及化，成為人們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹谋匦杵?，?duì)此的利弊人們看法各異。本預(yù)測(cè)題為熱點(diǎn)話題，同樣是年輕人較熟習(xí)和經(jīng)常討論的話題，值得關(guān)注。預(yù)測(cè)八Directions: For this p

51、art, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topicAdvertisement. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 廣告的作用2. 廣告的方式多樣3. 廣告的夸張性AdvertisementAdvertisements are forcing their way into peoples lives. People refer to advertisements in their

52、daily lives because they are consumers. The advertisers are usually manufacturers, retailers and salesmen. Their merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus nearly every product is advertised in some way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success

53、 while bad advertising can mean failure.There are many ways to advertise and ads come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience. Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big industry no

54、w and many agencies have been set up to furnish a variety of forms.However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresents the truth. The consumer falls victim to such advertis

55、ing. Millions of people have bought advertised products and have been dissatisfied with them。點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇闡明文，用闡明的表達(dá)方式來(lái)講解事物，闡明事理。寫(xiě)好闡明文，不僅要抓住特征，留意條理，而且要巧妙運(yùn)用闡明方法，像下定義、舉例子、作比較、分類(lèi)別、列數(shù)字、打比如等預(yù)測(cè)九Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President o

56、f the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus. You should write no more than 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:假設(shè)他是李明，請(qǐng)他寫(xiě)一封信給校長(zhǎng)，建議改善本校體育設(shè)備情況，內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及體育設(shè)備對(duì)大學(xué)生的重要性，對(duì)目前學(xué)校體育設(shè)備的情況可以表?yè)P(yáng)，可以提出批判建議，也可以兼而有之。A Letter to the President of the UniversityDear

57、 Mr. President,I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities on campus. I have noticed that our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given that the number of students on campus is increasing every yea

58、r.As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young people. If they have access to quality sports facilities, young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence, and to build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.My proposal is to

59、build a new sports area. It should be designed with soccer players, basketball players, and ping-pong players in mind. It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year round. I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.Thank you for your reading t

60、his letter.Yours faithfully,Li Ming點(diǎn)評(píng)：本預(yù)測(cè)題仿真度頗高，為校園生活話題，與在校大學(xué)生日常生活親密相關(guān)，是最近幾年偏重調(diào)查的題材。2002年1月調(diào)查了就本校食堂情況給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信.預(yù)測(cè)十Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Blog. You should write at least 120 words based on the chart and outline given below:以下圖是2007年1-10月中國(guó)博