2013年英語中考書面表達預測

1、PAGE PAGE 182013年英語中考書面表達指導 一、河南省中招考試英語卷作文評分標準考生應根據(jù)題目要求，采用適當?shù)臅r態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語，完整準確地表達所提示的內(nèi)容。分四檔評分：第一檔：符合題目要求，內(nèi)容完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達清楚，語言無誤。13-15分。第二檔：基本符合題目要求，內(nèi)容較完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)較清晰，表達較清楚，語言有少量錯誤。9-12分。第三檔：部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，內(nèi)容不夠完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)不夠清晰，表達不夠清楚，語言有較多錯誤。4- 8分。第四檔：不符合題目要求，整篇表達不清楚，或只照抄、拼湊幾個詞語。0-3分。二、注意問題：1.一要點齊全，二表達準確、清楚、地道，三通順；

2、發(fā)揮適度，杜絕中文式的句子。2.一人一句，聯(lián)句成段，書寫規(guī)范。3.句子是靈魂，謂語是關鍵。4.常見的寫作弊病：（1）書寫不規(guī)范，卷面涂改嚴重，直接影響了得分。（2）不按要求寫作，無關主題的內(nèi)容偏多，該表達的要點沒說清楚。（3）對試卷中提供的要點生硬翻譯，不懂得將提供的信息進行加工處理。（4）詞匯貧乏，遣詞造句的基本功不夠扎實，對常用詞和詞組掌握不夠（拼寫、以及短語、詞組的搭配出現(xiàn)錯誤較多，詞義混淆，詞性不分） 三、中考評分標準：作文一律按檔給分，與錯誤個數(shù)無直接關系。各有其實用性的一面。影響作文分數(shù)的因素：1 題目要求、內(nèi)容要點；2 句子準確、通順；3 層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；4 拼寫、語法等錯誤；5

3、卷面整潔度；四、做題步驟：1 審題：審清作文體裁（類型）時態(tài)、人稱等細節(jié)；2 列提綱（文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架）：分幾段，以及每段大體內(nèi)容；3 寫作：在提綱的基礎上補充要點；4 復查：2遍1遍看查拼寫、語法、標點等問題；2遍不出聲讀查，靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等；5 謄抄：不允許做任何的更改。*總之做到三審：體裁、時態(tài)、人稱；三思：詞匯短語句式；三查：要點、拼寫和語法、連貫五、作文一般框架： 文章分3段：（1）綜述：概括性強，最多2句話引入主題；（2）正文主要內(nèi)容：層次性強，一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個方面，每個方面最多2句話；（3）結(jié)尾：緊扣主題，2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，盡量升華。六、如何列提綱：例1：

4、利弊型作文Microblog的利與弊Para1: （綜述）with the development of internet more and more popularPara2: （利）First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share with; Last, express views free, money-freePara3: （弊）However, one coin has two faces. On the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; On the other hand, not

5、safestolen, hurt feelingsPara4: （個人）As a student, make good use of it.七、如何列提綱：例2：計劃安排型作文談假期安排Para1: （綜述）graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holidayPara2: （正文）Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first senior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least,

6、do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)八、常見的作文類型模板：1 書信Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter Best wishes! Yours, Lucy a書信開頭常用語 I am very glad to receive your letter (hear for

7、m you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to . b 書信結(jié)尾常用語 Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good l

8、uck. (I am) looking forward to hearing from you.2 圖表、數(shù)字比例型（提出討論或調(diào)查的事實）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. （表達出不同看法或觀點）Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表達個人看法） As a student, I agree to3 說明利弊型Now

9、adays is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages . First, 優(yōu)點1 Besides, 優(yōu)點2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺點1 On the other hand, 缺點2 In my opinion,個人觀點 4 不同觀點型We made a survey about whether we should 提出矛盾問題. Different people hold

10、different ideas. Some believe 正方觀點. First, 原因1 Besides, 原因2 While others dont agree. They think反方觀點. On the one hand, 原因1 On the other hand, 原因2 As for me,個人觀點 5 解決問題型 Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly, 方法1 Secondly, 方法2 Finally, 方法3 I am

11、sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better. 九、常用過渡性詞語1、敘事文常用的句子間連接詞：At first; at last; in the endthen/next/after thatwhen/while/as soon as/not untilat the same time; at times; once in a while;so thatTo ones surprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyi

12、n a word/in all2、議論文常用連接詞表示并列：eitheror; neithernor; bothand; not onlybut also; 表示遞進的：besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); 表示原因的：because; for; because of; thanks to; (for the reason that);表示結(jié)果的：so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的：so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示對比的：while;

13、 on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;表示轉(zhuǎn)折的：however; but; 表示舉例的：for example; for instance; such as; like; that is to say表示總結(jié)的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; d

14、o harm to sb.; have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜愛的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;表達個人想法的：I think/believe; (as)

15、for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他：in general; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; 范文預測如下（30個寫作項目）：雅安蘆山縣大地震4月20日，四川省雅安地區(qū)蘆山縣發(fā)生了罕見的7級大地震，那里的人們痛失親人和家園。全國人民眾志成城，抗震救災。作為一名中學生，請你談談你的做法和感受。要求：文章語言流暢，邏輯清晰，用詞準確，80100字左右;詞匯參考

16、：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感動be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth參考范文： April 20th, a big earthquake happened in Lu Shang Town, YaAn ,Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow. A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some

17、 people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand. Im deeply moved by these people. So Ill use my pocket money

18、to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.雪災去年春節(jié)期間，我國大部分地區(qū)遭受雪災，特別是南方，幾十年未遇。公路、鐵路、機場都被迫關閉，電網(wǎng)癱瘓，數(shù)百萬人不能回家過年。部分山區(qū)人民生活異常困難，在各級政府的帶領下，人民群眾、解放軍戰(zhàn)士英勇抗擊雪災，涌現(xiàn)出大批可歌可泣的英雄事跡。作為一名中學生，你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改變這種狀態(tài)?As we kn

19、ow, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldnt go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight ag

20、ainst heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.3. “4.20”雅安市蘆山縣大地震后，某校將開展“人人為災區(qū)孩子獻愛心”的主題班會活動，現(xiàn)在請你以學生會的名義寫一份倡議書，內(nèi)容要點如下：1）許多孩子地震后不能上學 2）沒有足夠的學習用品和衣物 3）每個孩子

21、都應該有上學的權利4）我們應該作一些力所能及的事情去幫助、他們，比如 5）希望他們能盡快重返校園注意：1）可根據(jù)要點，適當發(fā)揮，(參考詞匯：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can)2）詞數(shù)：70詞左右參考作文：Dear students，After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless. Their schools and houses h

22、ave destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They dont have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can al

23、so write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.Students Union4. 甲型H7N9流感從電視上看到我國上海，江蘇，浙江等省份正流行甲型H7N9流感(A/H7NI9 flu), 學校應該引起高度重視，你為你正在上海上學的筆友Mike的健康與安全擔心。請立即給他寫一封email詢問他的情況，并給他提出防護建議。要點：1）詢問：他的健康狀況;他們學校有無甲型H7N9流感病例(A/H7N9 flu cases);他們是否還上學。2）

24、建議：盡量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;勤洗手;講衛(wèi)生；多開窗，保持空氣新鮮;多吃水果蔬菜。范文：Dear Mike,From the TV, I know many A/7IN9 I flu cases are reported recently in some provences of China and many schools pay more attention to it as a result. Im so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/H7N9 flu cases in your school? Do you

25、 still have to school everyday?To stay away from the disease, youd better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep you

26、rself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and youll be OK.5. 衛(wèi)生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關注的問題我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為題的主題班會,請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容談談你的看法,寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。(1)保持健康的重要性(2)保持健康的方法(3)保持健康的結(jié)論(4) 你的看法:1)多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2)多鍛煉健身強體;3)鄙棄不良習慣范文1）:Dear boys and girls,Here i

27、s my advice about how to keep health / fit.As a middle school student , first youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(繩子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Dont eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit. Third you

28、need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger. Last you mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health.That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thank you, bye!范文2）:Dear boys and girls,Im talking about how to keep healt

29、hy/fit. Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise, eat more junk food, and they usually do not have enough time to sleep. If we wish to keep fit, my advices are as follow:Firstly, we must keep taking exercises every day , and eat lots of fruit and vegetables . Secondly, try to

30、 sleep for about 8 hours a night, and remember to “early to bed early to rise”. Finally, stay away from cigarettes / smoking / drugs毒品. Besides(除此之外), dont forget to breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air .Keep happy every day.That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.6. 有寫學生不

31、愛吃學校的午飯，常到校外去吃他們所喜歡吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他們的身體健康。“英語角”打算針對這個問題展開討論。請你準備一篇討論稿，談談你的看法和建議。參考詞匯：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer范文：We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isnt delicious. So they often go out of school to buy some

32、thing which they like to eat. But Im afraid that its bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school, because some of the food they buy isnt healthy enough.In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they

33、 should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.7. 人們對于學生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關于學生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點，并表達自己的看法。贊成的理由 反對的理由1)廣交朋友 但浪費時間2)可自由表達思想 但影響學習3)有利于外語學習 但可能上當受騙你的看法是【參考范文】Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting on line,

34、 students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even get help for their foreign language studies。Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on

35、line。 It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us。8. 許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力，為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學們中存在的心理壓力問題，你們班特意開展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life為主題的英語演講比賽，請你準備發(fā)言稿，談談你的一些緩解壓

36、力的好辦法，與同學分享，內(nèi)容包括：1）同學們中普遍存在的壓力是什么；2）我的壓力是什么；3）我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。注意：1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。 2）詞數(shù)80100；短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。參考范文：Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their

37、 classmates, while others may worry about their exams。Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends。Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I nee

38、ded time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem。Thats all. Thank you!9. 李紅是某校九年級（1）班一名新轉(zhuǎn)入的外地學生。幾個星期來，老師和同學們對她的關心和幫助讓她倍感溫暖，使她逐漸適應了新的學習和生活環(huán)境。假如你是李紅，請你根據(jù)下面表中的提示語寫一則日記，敘述這幾個星期以來他們對你各方面的關心、幫助以及你的感受和愿望。生活方面： 1）同學們從家中帶來當?shù)乜煽诘氖澄锝o我吃

39、；2）同學們帶我參觀校園，周末邀請我到他們家做客；3）下午放學后，同學們經(jīng)常帶我去操場跑步、打排球。思想方面： 老師、同學們找我談心，和我交朋友。學習方面： 感受和愿望： 范文：6th June My teachers and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here. They brought me local food from their homes. They were very delicious. My classmates showed me around our school. They even invited me

40、to their homes, watching TV and enjoying dinner. After school they often ran and played volleyball with me in the playground. They came to talk with me when we were free. We have been good friends. They helped me with my lessons. When I had problems, I went to them for help. I feel very happy here.

41、I hope to make more friends and make progress in my studies. 10. 初中的學習生涯即將結(jié)束了。三年來，在你獲取知識的同時，你的外貌，興趣愛好，習慣都有了一定的改變吧！請你一定以(How I Change)為題，寫一篇短文，告訴我們你的變化好嗎？字數(shù)在80詞左右。溫馨提示：1.短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學校名稱。2.這些詞匯也許對你有幫助:hobby, habit, used to, enjoy oneself3.短文開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好（字數(shù)不計入總數(shù)），請你接著往下寫。 How I ChangeMy life has chan

42、ged a lot in the past three years. 范文兩篇：How I Change（一）My life has changed a lot in the past three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was a short and shy girl with long hair. I often listen to music at home. But now I like to make friends and take part in all kinds of activities. I prefer running with

43、my classmates. So Im becoming much healthier than before. Not only my parents but also my teachers are satisfied with me. How I Change（二）My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spen

44、t most of time on it. My parents were worried about me.Now, I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and k

45、eep healthier. 11. 假如你叫張蒙，班主任李老師想了解班級同學的狀況，以便有針對性地對學生進行考前心理疏導。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容要求，給班主任李老師寫封e-mail，說明自己的情況，并請她給你提一些建議。內(nèi)容要求：1）學習任務重,睡眠不足,缺少體育活動。同學間缺乏溝通和交流。2）在家不允許看電視、上網(wǎng)、聽音樂等。3）詞數(shù)80左右。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名、姓名。4）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。不計入總詞數(shù)。參考范文:Dear Ms Li,Im very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days. Every day I

46、 have a lot of homework to do at school. I dont enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk, or play together. When I get back home from school, Im not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favourite music. I feel worried a

47、bout them. I dont know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions?Best wishes. 12. 假定你是李華，最近你們班就“低碳”生活方式進行了討論，你的美國朋友Jack來信向你詢問討論情況，請你用英語寫封回信，簡單參照作文地帶介紹的以下討論結(jié)果：1）節(jié)水節(jié)電；2）垃圾分類；3）少用紙巾，重拾手帕；4）步行，騎自行車或乘坐公交車。參考詞匯：低碳low carbon 紙巾tissue參考范文：Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about ou

48、r discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it。We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, wed better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should

49、sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be

50、our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world。13. 節(jié)約水是我們每個人的責任, 我們知道，水對人類來說是非常的重要。沒有水我們就不能生存。適合人類喝的水是越來越少了。但是有些人卻不關心或不在意。日常生活中他們浪費很多水。更糟糕的是他們排放污水到河流里。他們還到處亂扔垃圾。很多河流湖泊已經(jīng)受到嚴重污染。人類必須采取一些措施來制止污染。只有這樣，我們才過得幸福開心。如果我們不節(jié)約水，那么最后一滴水也許會是我們?nèi)祟惖难蹨I。 Its our duty to save waterAs we know, water is very impo

51、rtant to man, we cant live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people dont care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers. They throw rubbish everywhere, too. Many rivers and lakes are

52、seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. Only in this way can we live happily. If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.14. 今春宜賓市部分地區(qū)發(fā)生干旱，水資源嚴重短缺。請你以Saving Water為題用英語寫一篇短文。(參考詞 tap 水龍頭 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循環(huán) drought 干旱)內(nèi)容包括：1.水的重要性 2.人們浪費水的不良現(xiàn)象

53、3.提出幾條建議 要求：1）詞數(shù)：80100詞（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）2）字跡工整，語言流暢，表達正確，邏輯清晰。 范文： Saving WaterAs we all know, water is important to us all. People cant live without water. Plants and ani mals will die if there is no water in the world.But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often for

54、get to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, wed better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.Water is really important to man. Lets

55、save water from now on.15.今年我們政府號召，啟動了“文明餐桌行動，又叫光盤行動”，號召全體市民“文明用餐，節(jié)儉惜?！?。請結(jié)合圖片，聯(lián)系實際，適當發(fā)揮，以“Save(節(jié)約) Food and Eat Healthily”為題，寫一篇60-80詞的英語短文。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。waste too much eat up all the food eat junk food eat a balanced diet范文： Save Food And Eat Healthilyour government has called on the citizens to s

56、ave food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.To save food, we shouldnt waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldnt order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world dont

57、 have enough to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldnt eat junk food but healthy food. Its good for our health to eat a balanced diet. Wed better not eat in small restaurants. The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. Wed better eat at school or at home if we have time. 16. 某一權威機構(gòu)公布

58、的2012年學生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。請根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點。 現(xiàn) 狀大約70%學生眼睛近視 主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦、看電視等 預防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進行體育活動2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習慣 你的觀點 .（至少一條）注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)； 2）內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點，可作必要的發(fā)揮； 3）條理清楚、語句連貫； 4）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名等信息。 （參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted）One possible version（范文

59、）:The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes. Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some stude

60、nts even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time. In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes