書(shū)面表達(dá)有效訓(xùn)練和提高

1、 書(shū)面表達(dá)的訓(xùn)練與提高 中考英語(yǔ)指導(dǎo)Correct errors1.There are many visitors go to the zoo.2. They are looking forward to visit the zoo.3. They were all went to the zoo last Sunday. 4. Ellen is 16-year-old. 5. Many animals in the zoo may dead during the project of moving. 16 years olddievisitingM6. He said he will buy

2、 a new car. 7. The Beijing Zoo were built in 1906. 8. It will influence the capitals normal develop. 9. The traffic jam is a big problems. 10. He gets school very early every day.Correct errorswouldwastodevelopment一書(shū)面表達(dá)題 在日常生活中，因特網(wǎng)起到越來(lái)越重要的作用。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所給提示為某英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇題為On the Internet的征文稿。因特網(wǎng)的主要用途信息看國(guó)內(nèi)外新聞、獲取

3、其它信息通訊發(fā)e-mail、打電話學(xué)習(xí)上網(wǎng)上學(xué)校、閱讀各種書(shū)籍、自學(xué)外語(yǔ)娛樂(lè)欣賞音樂(lè)、觀看體育比賽、玩棋牌游戲生活購(gòu)物注意：1 征文稿必須包括表內(nèi)所有信息，行文連貫通順。 2 詞數(shù)80左右。 3 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 4 參考詞匯： play an important part in send messages by go to net school besides On the InternetThe Internet is playingOne possible versionOn the Internet The Internet is playing a more and mo

4、re important part in our daily life. On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad, and we can know all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. Besides,

5、we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them. In a word, the Internet has made our life more colorful. 中考對(duì)書(shū)面表達(dá)的要求 要求考生根據(jù)所給提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80-100個(gè)單詞左右的短文。提供情景的形式有圖畫(huà)、圖表、提綱、英文提示等。 本部分滿分15分，所需時(shí)間約為15分鐘。中

6、考書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則1)、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定檔次。第五檔. 1315分第四檔. 1012分第三檔. 79分第二檔. 46分第一檔. 03分 語(yǔ)言地道，規(guī)范覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2)、主要內(nèi)容： 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 詞匯和語(yǔ)法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性； 上下文的連貫； 語(yǔ)言的得體性應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分3)、拼寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。4)、詞數(shù)過(guò)少或過(guò)多的，從總分中減去一定分?jǐn)?shù)。一般詞數(shù)不可少于規(guī)定詞數(shù)，并在規(guī)定詞數(shù)以上20詞以內(nèi)。5)、如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。詞匯,句型 （高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜） 1.

7、覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊要點(diǎn)全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？1. 次重點(diǎn)：“內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)” 中涵蓋的內(nèi)容2. 大錯(cuò)：句子結(jié)構(gòu)謂語(yǔ)構(gòu)成詞序語(yǔ)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)補(bǔ)充解釋：返回3、小錯(cuò)：名詞單復(fù)數(shù)第三人稱單數(shù)拼寫(xiě)標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)字母大小寫(xiě)返回少量錯(cuò)誤：1個(gè)大錯(cuò)或34個(gè)小錯(cuò)一些錯(cuò)誤：2個(gè)大錯(cuò)或56個(gè)小錯(cuò)較多錯(cuò)誤：3個(gè)大錯(cuò)或78個(gè)小錯(cuò)錯(cuò)誤多： 4個(gè)大錯(cuò)或910個(gè)小錯(cuò)錯(cuò)誤很多 5個(gè)大錯(cuò)或10個(gè)小錯(cuò)大錯(cuò)小錯(cuò)錯(cuò)誤的界定：書(shū)面表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤一. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)使用不準(zhǔn)1.“ ,”的使用誤:Turn right, there is a building ahead.正:Tur

8、n right,and there is a building ahead.It rained yesterday,he didnt come.It rained yesterday, so he didnt come.She failed in the exam,it made her sad.She failed in the exam, and it made her sad.She failed in the exam, which made her sad.2.寫(xiě)信稱呼語(yǔ)和結(jié)束祝愿語(yǔ)中的標(biāo)點(diǎn)Dear Sir Madam: Yours Sincerely Mary,3.英語(yǔ)中一般不用“

9、、”She likes dancing、skating、surfing、boating and swimming.She likes dancing, skating, surfing, boating and swimming.4.英文的省略號(hào) “”，而不是He said he could play volleyball, basketball He said he could play volleyball, basketball 5.每個(gè)句號(hào)后面的句子的第一個(gè)單詞首字母要大寫(xiě)In came a girl in a red dress. the whole class fixed thei

10、r eyes on her. In came a girl in a red dress. The whole Class fixed their eyes on her. In came a girl in a red dress, and the whole class fixed their eyes on her.二. 時(shí)態(tài)混淆不清He said he is going to come tomorrow.He is very clever, so he thought of a good idea.wasthinks三. 書(shū)寫(xiě)不規(guī)范1. 字母書(shū)寫(xiě) “四不象”o-u, l-e, r-v2

11、. 字母書(shū)寫(xiě)不到位3. 書(shū)寫(xiě)了草、不認(rèn)真，既非斜體，又非圓體 4. 排版能力較差，卷面涂抹太臟策略1.平時(shí)多寫(xiě)，并注意養(yǎng)成規(guī)范書(shū)寫(xiě)的習(xí)慣；2.及時(shí)更正錯(cuò)誤，避免再犯；3.注重積累單詞、詞組、固定短語(yǔ)、常用句型；4.多背誦模仿；5.把平時(shí)練習(xí)作為考試，培養(yǎng)沉穩(wěn)的應(yīng)試心理。提醒注意：1. 初中要求的“書(shū)面表達(dá)” 還不是真正意義上的寫(xiě)作，只是用文字基本表達(dá)出要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。2.看懂圖畫(huà)或文字說(shuō)明，其次是找出要點(diǎn)。People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.(公園是公眾休閑的地方）應(yīng)用較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯3.要用所學(xué)過(guò)的語(yǔ)言知

12、識(shí)來(lái)構(gòu)思,避免使用沒(méi)有把握的詞What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls.（需建大門(mén)、圍墻。）4.要盡量用所學(xué)過(guò)的句型來(lái)表達(dá)。(我們所學(xué)過(guò)的句型足以表達(dá)這些內(nèi)容。)People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.It will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance.5.在很有把握的情況下，用一兩句復(fù)合句(如使用狀語(yǔ)從句或定

13、語(yǔ)從句,或賓語(yǔ)從句) 如做不到這一點(diǎn)，還不如簡(jiǎn)單句 They had to ride bikes to school. What is worse, people lived in a small houses. But now.6.有效地使用連接詞 And we can go to school by car. What is more, people live in big apartments now.常用連接詞表示轉(zhuǎn)折：but , yet, however, 表示因果：for, so表示時(shí)間：when, while, as, after, before, until, as soon

14、as表示原因：because, as, since, now that表示條件：if , even if, unless , suppose, , as long as, 其他：although, than, so that, in order that, in order to, in order not to掌握必要的詞匯開(kāi)場(chǎng)白：to tell the truth, first of all, now,岔開(kāi)：by the way, could I just point out, 展開(kāi)：besides, another thing,轉(zhuǎn)折：however, even so, on the ot

15、her hand解釋：that is to say, in other words, that is , for example列舉：first(ly), second(ly), in the third place, 總結(jié)：in a word , in conclusion, at last, we hope that 如故事性的文章，一般應(yīng)使用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，且前后一致。說(shuō)明性的文章，大體應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。7.要注意時(shí)態(tài)的用法 為深入教學(xué)改革，英語(yǔ)組的李平老師將給你們做一次專題報(bào)告。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)口頭通知。通知應(yīng)包括表內(nèi)全部?jī)?nèi)容。題例：主講李平老師內(nèi)容信息與中考沖刺時(shí)間星期五下午3點(diǎn)半地點(diǎn)206教

16、室要求準(zhǔn)時(shí)參加會(huì)后討論注意：1 詞數(shù)60左右。 2 不可直譯、內(nèi)容連貫。 3 開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好。4 參考詞匯 English departmentInformation and English studyImprove ones EnglishBoys and girls, May I have your attention, please? There will be a lecture Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? There will be a lecture at half past three on Friday af

17、ternoon. Its about “Information and English Study”. And it will be given by Mr Li Ping, who is a famous teacher from the English Department. 返回Theres sure to be something instructive and interesting. We can get some information from it, I think. And it will improve our English studies to a new stage

18、. Anyone who wants to attend it can come to Room 206. Take notes and have a discussion after it.Please come here on time. Dont be late.Thats all.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表中提供的信息， 以Kate的名義給旅行社寫(xiě)封信，讓旅行社為他們史密斯一家安排一次旅行。Family membersRequirementsGrandparentsPeaceful; not too farFather(Mr Smith)Thrilling; like trekking; have

19、a two-week holidayMother(Mrs Smith)Dislike flying; like playing with her son/daughterSon, JohnDaughter, KateEducational; history and animals; summer vacationDear Light Travel, My family and I want to take a trip this summer, _Dear Light Travel, My family and I want to take a trip this summer, so I w

20、ant to get some information about travelling from your agency. First, we cant go somewhere too far, because my grandparents are old and cant stand long journey. They love peaceful places. But my father prefers to do something thrilling, such as trekking. Then my brother and I hope that we can learn

21、more knowledge from some educational sites. We both enjoy history and animals. Well my mother just wants to play with us, but she dislikes flying. On the other hand, my father has only a two-week holiday, and my brother and I can enjoy this trip in our summer vacation.Could you tell us the best place and give us the best plan about this trip? Thank you very much. Yours, Kate 假定你是李教授的