托福寫(xiě)作五段式介紹

1、第 PAGE9 頁(yè) 共 NUMPAGES9 頁(yè)托福寫(xiě)作五段式介紹托福寫(xiě)作五段式介紹1.托福寫(xiě)作就是英文的“八股”，有套路，所以模板用得上。2.詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)要識(shí)記，主要是3類: 環(huán)境的，經(jīng)濟(jì)的，社會(huì)進(jìn)步等題目經(jīng)常涉及的名詞或者名詞短語(yǔ);表示程度等的形容詞和可以恰當(dāng)修飾動(dòng)詞的副詞;起承轉(zhuǎn)合作用的連接詞和短語(yǔ)。3.在正確，易懂的根底上，力求句型的變化多端，插入語(yǔ)，從句，倒裝，虛擬等。4.看清題目要求寫(xiě)什么，有比擬的，要寫(xiě)出兩者的不同，不要只說(shuō)你支持的。5.不同的reason不要糅合到一塊去，每段中心要明確，且reason段落，要用英文寫(xiě)作的方式，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山的在段落開(kāi)頭指出;既然要成段，那么你所選擇的

2、reason一定要能擴(kuò)展，也就是有東西好寫(xiě)，不要為賦新辭強(qiáng)說(shuō)愁;所以雖然一個(gè)論點(diǎn)你可能有N個(gè)理由，但那些很有道理，但是你用英文無(wú)法表達(dá)清楚的，就不用寫(xiě)了，這不是上萬(wàn)字的論文。6.reason一出就要有exle，兩三個(gè)case足以,并且事例邏輯上可以支持原因。7.整篇文章不要出現(xiàn)第二人稱you，your，這是enjoy life等前輩的指點(diǎn)(指點(diǎn)了pumpkin，然后她又“數(shù)落”我的)，多用people;你想，you就是閱卷人，你憑什么張口就用人家的書(shū)面語(yǔ)言教誨人家呢?8.個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn):盡可能的防止單獨(dú)使用he/she，考慮到性別歧視問(wèn)題。但是，假如你要頂字?jǐn)?shù)的話，也請(qǐng)用 he or she.9.

3、口語(yǔ)化是初級(jí)者的大問(wèn)題之一，寫(xiě)作文的時(shí)候往往是先想中文改怎么說(shuō)，然后做個(gè)翻譯工作;本來(lái)對(duì)非母語(yǔ)就很能駕馭，這樣一來(lái)，說(shuō)大白話，就直接導(dǎo)致句式的單一;所以還是要看看真題閱讀文章的文法。文章的套路，我推薦“五段錦”。第一段，對(duì)題目改寫(xiě)，再用模板的套話扯一下，常用的手法是正反一提。第二段，最大的reason，事例論據(jù)支持。第三段，次大的reason，事例論據(jù)支持。第四段，一個(gè)小的reason，外加一個(gè)不礙大事的however的對(duì)立。第五段，對(duì)各段reason改寫(xiě)總結(jié)，也可以再加展望，但是不要號(hào)召托福寫(xiě)作高分總分值范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：名人的看法值得注意嗎?托福寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)話題一覽Should we pay

4、 attention to the opinions of famous people?When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and exles to support your answer.寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)構(gòu)造分析p 觀點(diǎn)：大多數(shù)時(shí)候，沒(méi)必要聽(tīng)這些人的話。因?yàn)樗麄兺皇菍＜?。然而也?/p>

5、能走向絕對(duì)，這些人的意見(jiàn)在某些時(shí)候也是對(duì)的，或者值得關(guān)注的。比方在一些場(chǎng)合中：慈善演出(charities; charitable institution;charitable performance)。本話題高分范文賞析It is only in the last hundred years that the “star” phenomenon was born. Prior to 1900, there were no famous entertainers in todays sense. Fame was held for political officers. However, to

6、day, the people who appear before us either on a court, a stage, a field or a screen, are in fact more famous than many political officers. Many people listen to these famous people and act as if their word was gospel. However, I do not think this is correct behavior. Stars should be treated with re

7、spect, but their opinions should not count for any more than a regular persons opinion. Being a star does not automatically endow a person with limitless knowledge. Stars must do research to form their opinions, just like the rest of us. It is no more or less likely that a star will have a valid opi

8、nion on a subject than a friend from school.In many cases, when stars state their opinions, they are not telling the world how they truly feel. Many famous people will only make announcements that their publicists have approved. Therefore, in many cases, it is not the stars opinions that we are hear

9、ing at all, but in fact, that of the corporations that they work for. I believe that the only time that we should really value the opinion of what a star has to say more than we value others opinions is when the star is talking about a subject that he/she specializes in. For exle, if a basketball pl

10、ayer is giving his/her opinion on how his/her team will do in the play-offs, then one should probably take the opinion to heart. Everyone has his/her own field of expertise. If stars, or regular persons for that matter, are talking about their professions, they are bound to have extensive knowledge

11、on the subject.In conclusion, I do not think that we should listen to the opinions of stars unless they are speaking on a matter that they specialize in. “Regular people” have just as well thought out knowledgeable opinions as the stars, sometimes even more so. Unfortunately, many young adults idoli

12、ze these stars and believe everything they say.Because of this, it is important for stars to be careful about passing on inaccurate information.托福寫(xiě)作高分總分值范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：寫(xiě)信投訴還是當(dāng)面反應(yīng)?托福寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)話題一覽plain in writing or in person?When people need to plain about a product or poor service, some prefer to plain in wri

13、ting and others prefer to plain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and exles to support your answer.寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)構(gòu)造分析p 可以采取it depends的策略，要看是什么樣的問(wèn)題。也可以先比擬，后選擇。書(shū)信投訴：有條理;防止沖動(dòng)、更加理性;可以直接與高層溝通;也可以向媒體投訴;但是可能石沉大海(like a stone dropped sank into the sea no echo當(dāng)面投訴：可能是最快解決問(wèn)題的方式;相比文字，有更多的表達(dá)方式，比方

14、appeal to emotion; appeal to pity等等;但是假如缺乏控制，可能會(huì)引起爭(zhēng)吵，反倒使情況惡化。本話題高分范文賞析When we finally find out a service or a product that failed to satisfy us, we have to plain. Occasionally, we can choose whether to make an argument face-to-face or in writing, but usually we have no choice. We have to make our ca

15、se in person if we need a personal touch or have no time to write; we have to write if we cant meet the right person to plain.Writing has its advantages: when we write, we can better control the flow of our ideas, explain plex issues patiently, and convey our feeling of troubles that the poor produc

16、ts have brought explicitly and accurately. On the other hand, writing also has disadvantages: we may lack of a sense of what the readers are likeamiable or prickly, generous or difficultand we cant respond immediately to their doubts, questions, or misunderstandings.When we write, we also lose one w

17、ay to get the reader to take our argument seriously: face-to-face, we can draw others into it with our body language, the passion in our voice, even the look in our eyes. If, for exle, I ran into a dean after a bad experience at the student health service, I could visibly municate my frustration right there, and the dean would probably respond more intently than if he/she were in his/her office reading an angry letter.For mon trivial problems, Id prefer to plain in person, which is more direct than in writing. To a large extent, to plain in a right way is