托福獨立寫作高分作文技巧解析

1、第 PAGE8 頁 共 NUMPAGES8 頁托福獨立寫作高分作文技巧解析托福獨立寫作高分作文既要有合理構造也要有獨特觀點文章構造決定獨立寫作分數(shù)根本盤對于托福寫作來說，合理且標準的文章布局還是必不可少的，甚至可以說是一篇高分作文的根底所在。標準化的開頭加中間段3加結(jié)尾段的五段式文章構造一直都是最為經(jīng)典且實用的構造，考生無需花費太多心思在文章布局構造上多動腦筋，這樣的五段寫法足以保證大家的托福獨立寫作主線脈絡得到充分表達。然后詳細說說中間段。中間段落的文章構造就是T過渡詞ransitional words + 中心句topic sentence + 詳細展開闡述development。假如考生

2、在平時能純熟運用這樣的文章構造來展開托福獨立作文，那么考場上就會憑借這份思維套路來幫助自己保持住根本的得分。說到過渡詞Transitional words，一般主要有以下三種類型，即表順序：firstly, secondly, finally(last but not least 表并列：besides, in addition; 表比照：in contrast, in parison。這些過渡詞會讓文章看起來脈絡明晰，組織嚴密，也就做到了評分標準中的“well-organized”一條。當然，有過渡詞的文章讀起來也會讓人覺得更加通順流暢，給考官更好的閱讀體驗。樹立文章觀點讓文章有新意有吸引力

3、結(jié)合優(yōu)質(zhì)論據(jù)素材提升文章整體評分在托福寫作過程中，想要完美充實的布局并表達出觀點的獨特新意都離不開例證內(nèi)容的詮釋。相信很多同學在備考托福寫作的過程中，也會不斷的累積各式各樣的例證資料。但是，托福寫作中對例子論證的要求并不在其新意，而是在于考生你如何用論據(jù)來解釋觀點，或者說你的例子論據(jù)需要能和觀點想匹配才會具有說服力。另外，有些同學喜歡使用高分范文里面的例子論據(jù)，這種做法本身是沒有任何問題的，但使用時假如直接整個照搬例子的話就有可能因為完全一樣或者相似度太高的句式而引起被斷定為雷同的風險，這是考生需要特別注意防止的，所以大家不妨學習一下改寫語句中的內(nèi)容的方法技巧，即便不會改寫，也可以嘗試換掉一些

4、【關鍵詞】：p 來防止雷同問題。托福寫作題目：Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and exles to support your opinion.參考分析p ：先討論一下儲蓄的必要性以及及時享樂的好處，然后可以采取it 范文：存錢比擬好：(1)存錢可以防范不時之需，如生病等等。(2)存錢可以買非常貴重的商品，如房子、汽車等等。(3)存錢放到將來花，可以更好的享

5、受生活，如去歐洲、美洲旅游等等。Some people say that it is better to enjoy your money as soon as you earn it while others prefer to save the money for later. Its a difficult choice faced by lots of people because of the different attitudes they hold towards money. As far as I am concerned, I vote for the former cho

6、ice, which is that it money as soon as possible is my preference because of three reasons as follows.First, we can observe easily in the modern society that the dominant philosophy nowadays is enjoy your life when you are still young. Most young adults like to work for a period of time and then go o

7、n for a trip to visit some places they have never been to. Those trips not only help them to keep in shape but also provide them different kinds of knowledge and new perspective in which helps them to relax and go back to work with enough energy.In the old days, it is said that people who save money

8、 in a bank understand the philosophy of thrift. Actually, economists say that in the modern world saving money in a bank is the quickest way to lose it. Moreover, none of the rich people became rich by getting interests from the bank. Living in a constantly changing world, we should adjust ourselves

9、 to accept the new ways of investing our money to different areas in order to get the most of it. That is probably the reason why most of the people nowadays put their money into business to get a better payback.them is that it is part of the contribution for the economic growth in our country. If n

10、obody has the needs to buy stuff from others and the market, nobody will think about how to produce useful products and sell them to make the most profits. Some countries continue to lower the interests in order to force people them.well as people around us. Its also important for kids to know how t

11、o save money our lives enjoyable and worthwhile.托福寫作解析:Change about your school托福寫作題目：change would you make? Use reasons and specific exles to support your answer.參考分析p ：改變學校的計算機交流(1)進步效率(2)促進學生學習(3)更好的教師和學生的交流參考范文：Change about your schoolTalking of making an important change in my school, Id like t

12、o suggest that our education system put more emphasis on the development of learning skills and applications of theories into practice instead of simply learning knowledge from books. The proposal is based on the reasons as follows.For one thing, overemphasis on academic learning poses a threat beca

13、use of confusing the purpose of learning. As school credit is usually considered the major criteria of academic learning, in a credit-driven school, one may try hard blindly cram their brains with numerous texts and formulas while do not have a clear idea of what they really want to learn, why they

14、need to learn, not to mention how the things they are learning are useful to the reality. An exle reciting grammar rules, but can hardly utter an English word in front of a foreigner.Another reason that causes me to make the suggestion is the requirement of todays ever-changing knowledge economy tim

15、e. With the increasingly accelerated that he or she has learned at school. Mastering learning skills and knowing how to apply the skills into practice are being indispensable than ever before. A recent survey conducted by educators shows that most students in our country lack the ability of using tools and solving problems pared with their counterparts in the United States. This informs us to take a serious look at our b