河北省高考英語一輪復習指導 書面表達寫作技巧課件

1、書面表達寫作技巧詞匯,句型 （高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜） 要點 2. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊 4. 語言得體要點全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？語言地道，規(guī)范a compositiontopic sentence （主題句）supporting sentences （擴展句）ending （結尾句 ）過渡詞：first, second, finally , and, besides, also, but, however, whats more Writing a composition is just like making a sand

2、wich.一 改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首.The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.Hungry, the boy hurried home.The boy, hungry, hurried home.二. Transformation of sentences in writing(寫作中的句型轉換)A. 合并為簡單句把其中一句改為分詞短語He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.Having finished

3、 supper, he went out to have a walk.二. Transformation of sentences in writing(寫作中的句型轉換)2. 把其中一句改為介詞短語He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back. B. 合并為復合句The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of

4、 us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. which In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives conven

5、ient, pleasant C. 把復合句改為簡單句1. 把從句改為分詞短語 She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies. Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.2.把從句改為介詞短語I insisted that he should go.I insisted on him going.三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用以下結構：倒裝句強調句主從復合句分詞狀語With 復合結構Though he is wealthy

6、, he works hard.Wealthy as he is, he works hard.In spite of /Despite his wealth,he works hard.He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.I came up with a good idea.注意使用詞組、習語諺

7、語、表強調的詞來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。 四.use “ complicated / advanced words” A. Second, twenty years ago, teenagers listened to music with tape recorders. Differently, today we use mp3, mp4 and even mp5 which are easy to take.B. Another change is in communication. Instead of writing letters, teenagers nowadays prefe

8、r writing e-mails or calling to keep in touch with friends.C. First, teenagers of twenty years ago learn from Lei Feng and Zhang Haidi, while now we consider Bill Gates and as our role models. D. What great changes they are!E. Great changes have taken place in teenagers life during the past twenty y

9、ears. Correct Order : _E C A B D一，改變句子的開頭方式二，句型轉換A.合并為簡單句把其中一句改為分詞短語把其中一句改為介詞短語B.合并為復合句C.把復合句改為簡單句把從句改為分詞短語把從句改為介詞短語三，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調句、主從復合句、分詞狀語、with 復合結構等. 四，注意使用高級詞匯代替一些單詞，以增加文采。五.有效使用連接詞，過渡自然，連貫通順，使文章結構緊湊。 1 漢式英語 2 句式單一 平鋪直敘 3 基礎詞匯掌握不牢 4 書寫不規(guī)范Common mistakes9分6分24分make sentences 3 deter

10、mine what to write1copy6check 5Writing steps:4 edit2 think out the key wordsAttention1. 格式 2. 人稱3.時態(tài) 4. 要點5.語法 6. 字數 7. 書寫書面表達（滿分30分） 你校學生會準備辦一期英語墻報， 主題為： 保護環(huán)境從我做起。 請你根據下圖所示寫一篇英語短文。注意：1. 詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environme

11、nt.save electricityturn off the lightsprotect our forestsuse paper wiselynot use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticksuse both sides of paperDo youinclude enough information?use proper linking words?make any spelling or grammar errors?Is your handwriting clear enough to read?checkour show

12、timeWhat can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. To love the environment is to love ourselves. As to me, I will try to save electricity in my daily life by remembering to turn off the lights when I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. It is both sides of paper that should be used whenever it is possible. Whats more, never will I use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. In a wor