初中英語人教版九年級Section B 3a-3b Selfcheck 33 課件

1、Learn to Be Grateful課型：話題寫作課授課教師：東莞市望牛墩中學(xué) 李小麗九年級寫作研討1. Learn to describe one event;2. Learn to express gratitude (感恩之情);3. Enable to write a passage and grade it with the standard;4. Learn to be grateful and keep positive (樂觀);Learning Objectpre-writingWarm upan eventWhen : Last Sunday morningWhere:

2、 a supermarket Who: I; a boy What: lost my wallet; gave back Feeling: ThankfulLast Sunday morning, I went shopping in a _. Unluckily, I lost my _. I felt worried. Later, a boy came to me and _ my wallet. I was very _ to him. Warm upan eventWhen : Last Monday evening; rainy Where: in the classroomWho

3、: I; my classmate Lucy What: had to stay in the classroom; lent me an umbrellaFeeling: warm and movedLast Monday evening, it was _ when the class was over. I had to _ because I had no umbrella. suddenly, my classmate Lucy _. At that time, I felt _. SummaryHow to describe an event?WhenWhowhereWhatFee

4、ling重點(diǎn)Key 1: 抓住“W+F”要點(diǎn)Key 2: 敘述事件使用_時態(tài)一般過去Tell Your storyWhenWhowhereWhatFeelingPair work請描述一件你得到幫助的事件素材庫Last month, I failed my math exam and cried. After seeing this, my math teacher encouraged me and helped me with my study after school every day. With his help, I did well in the next exam. I fel

5、t very happy. 2. Last Friday, I fell down from stairs when I went up. My legs hurt badly. Luckily, my friend Tony came by and sent me to the hospital at once. I felt thankful.In everyday life, we often get help from other people. What can you do to express your gratitude (感恩之情)?1. Discuss and finish

6、 the mind-map with key words; 2. Write at least 3 ways each group;(格式：ways + reason/result)Ways to express my gratitudeExample: I can, because/so that I should / I mayBrainstormGroup workLets reportYou can report like this:To express my gratitude, I can do something. Firstly, I can Secondly, Thirdly

7、,素材庫I can make a card for him and write on the card: Thank you, my dear teacher!2. I should write a thank-you letter to her and tell her how much I want to thank her.3. I think the best way is to study harder and make progress every day. 4. Why not be ready to help people in need?SummaryTo express m

8、y gratitude, I can do something. Firstly, I can Secondly, Thirdly,Ways to express my gratitudewrite a thank-you letterstudy harder and get good gradesbuy a giftKey 1: How to express your gratitude:SummaryI can do something to express my gratitude. Firstly, I can Secondly, Thirdly,Key 2:合理使用連接詞，表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)更

9、清晰:第一,第二,第三一方面另一方面此外,而且, 還有總而言之First, Second, ThirdOn the one hand; on the other handWhats more; BesidesAll in all; In a wordwhile-writing 我們每個人在生活、學(xué)習(xí)或各種活動中得到過周邊人的幫助，我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會感恩。我校文學(xué)社正在舉辦主題為“用行動表達(dá)感恩”的征文活動，請你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.你最想感謝誰？描述一件你得到幫助的事件；2.你想如何用行動表達(dá)感恩？(至少兩點(diǎn))；3.呼吁大家學(xué)會感恩，讓世界充滿愛。Writin

10、g Task內(nèi)容包括：1.你最想感謝誰？描述一件你得到幫助的事件；2.你想如何用行動表達(dá)感恩？(至少兩點(diǎn))；3.呼吁大家學(xué)會感恩，讓世界充滿愛。感謝誰？描寫一件事(when, who, where, what, feeling) (一般過去時)2. 如何表達(dá)感恩(兩點(diǎn))？3. 呼吁1圈要點(diǎn)+2列提綱+3定分?jǐn)?shù)15分=內(nèi)容8分+語言6分+字?jǐn)?shù)1分1分3分3分1分在A、B、C中，選擇自己想挑戰(zhàn)的一篇寫作，并把它完成。10 min4 寫 初 稿記得分段哦！檢查：1. 內(nèi)容是否寫全；2. 連詞是否合理使用；3. 單詞拼寫；4. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)；5 修 錯 誤post-writingsample Here I

11、 would like to express my thanks to my math teacher. (感恩誰 :1分) Last month, I failed my math exam and cried. After seeing this, my math teacher encouraged me and helped me with my study after school every day. With his help, I did well in the next exam. I felt very happy. (一件事:3分) To express my grati

12、tude, I can do something. Firstly, I can make a card for him and write on the card: Thank you, my dear teacher! Secondly, I think the best way to express my gratitude is to study harder and make progress every day. (如何表達(dá):3分) In a word, lets learn to be grateful in life and make the world full of lov

13、e. (呼吁:1分)寫作高分技巧：1.合理使用主題句，讓層次更分明； 2.恰當(dāng)使用過渡詞(So, But, However, In a word)和連接詞(Firstly, Secondly, And, Then, Finally)； 內(nèi)容(8)語言邏輯(6)字?jǐn)?shù)/書面(1)1.最想感謝誰 (1分)錯誤扣分不夠40詞扣1分40-60詞扣0.5分2.描寫一件你得到幫助的事件(3分)3個0-14-10個1.5-33.如何用行動表達(dá)感恩的?(至少兩點(diǎn)) (3分)11-16個3.5-54.呼吁大家學(xué)會感恩，讓世界充滿愛 (1分)16以上5.5-6得分： Total(總分15)：15Grading st

14、andard(評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn))Mark the writing15分=內(nèi)容8分 +語言6分 +字?jǐn)?shù)/書面1分 Here I would like to express my thanks to. Last Monday evening, it was rainy when the class was over. I have to stay in the classroom because I had no umbrella. suddenly, my classmate Lucy lend me an umbrella. At that time, I felt warm and moving.

15、To express my gratitude, I can do something. Firstly, I can write a thank-you letter to Lucy. Secondly, I should help people in need, just like Lucy helped me. In a word, lets learn to be grateful in life and make the world full of love. 少感恩誰: -1語法錯誤: -113Mark the writing15分=內(nèi)容8分 +語言6分 +字?jǐn)?shù)/書面1分 Here

16、 I would like to express my thanks to. Last Monday night, I have a fever. My mother is worried. She take me to see a doctor and look after me all the night. I feel warm. To express my gratitude, I can buy some flowers and say thank you. All in all, lets learn to be grateful in life and make the worl

17、d full of love. 少1個做法: -1.5語法錯誤: -2字?jǐn)?shù): -0.510少感恩誰: -1Peer AssessmentPair workExchange your writing with your partner (同伴互評)Lets sum up1. How to describe one event:WhenWhowhereWhatFeeling重點(diǎn)Key 1: 抓住“W+F”要點(diǎn)Key 2: 敘述事件使用_時態(tài)一般過去Key1: 合理使用連接詞，表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)更清晰;Key2: 寫作高分技巧：1.合理使用主題句,讓層次更分明； 2.恰當(dāng)使用過渡詞(So, But, However, In a word)和連接詞(Firstly, Secondly, And, Then, Finally)；Lets sum up2. How to express your opinion:Lets sum up3. How to write a good article:a) Steps 寫作五步曲：圈要點(diǎn)列提綱 定分?jǐn)?shù)寫初稿修錯誤1圈2列3分4寫5修15分=內(nèi)容8分 +語言6分 +字?jǐn)?shù)/書面1分b) Structure 作文結(jié)構(gòu): event (事件) opinion (觀點(diǎn))hope (總結(jié))讓