應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作練習(xí)提升賞析-高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作備考

1、應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作練習(xí)提升賞析 講義書(shū)面表達(dá)假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂(lè)部（photography club）將舉辦國(guó)際中學(xué)生攝影展。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Peter寫(xiě)封信，請(qǐng)他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括：1. 主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)；2. 展覽時(shí)間；3. 投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【思路點(diǎn)撥】本題要求考生寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信，邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)朋友Peter參加一個(gè)以環(huán)境保護(hù)為主題的國(guó)際中學(xué)生攝影展?？忌鷮?duì)這個(gè)寫(xiě)作情境比較熟悉，而且，寫(xiě)作的話題與考生的日常生活息息相關(guān)，具有鮮明的時(shí)代特征。根據(jù)寫(xiě)作情境，邀請(qǐng)信應(yīng)包括以下三項(xiàng)內(nèi)容：（1）告訴Peter你校將舉辦

2、一個(gè)國(guó)際中學(xué)生攝影展，主題是環(huán)境保護(hù)，并邀請(qǐng)他參加這個(gè)活動(dòng)；（2）說(shuō)明舉辦這項(xiàng)展覽的意義和有關(guān)事項(xiàng)，包括展覽的時(shí)間、提交作品的方式和提交作品的時(shí)間等；（3）提醒他注意交稿日期，以免錯(cuò)過(guò)；（4）期待他參加。邀請(qǐng)信通常用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)，由于這個(gè)活動(dòng)尚未舉辦，因此寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。陳述這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的意義時(shí)，可穿插使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意事項(xiàng)：（1）由于寫(xiě)作提綱列出的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容比較籠統(tǒng)，可適當(dāng)增加一些細(xì)節(jié)，使短文內(nèi)容言之有物。（2）寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)緊緊圍繞主題來(lái)組織材料，做到主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。（3）盡量使用學(xué)過(guò)的常用短語(yǔ)和句式，以使語(yǔ)言表達(dá)地道，行文流暢?！究忌魑摹緿ear Peter，How are you

3、doing？ As the International Photo Show is approaching， Id like to invite you to take part in this activity.The photography club of my school will hold a photo exhibition for international middle students from June 18 to June 30. Ive heard that you are quite skilled in taking photographs， so I hope y

4、ou can offer some photos for this exhibition. The theme of this show is about environmentally protection. If you can join this activity， I believe you must win the first prize. You can send your works to intlphotoshow. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua【點(diǎn)評(píng)】短文基本上包括了全部的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。第一段告訴學(xué)生攝影展即將舉

5、辦，向?qū)Ψ桨l(fā)出邀請(qǐng)；第二段介紹學(xué)校的攝影俱樂(lè)部即將舉辦這次攝影展、攝影展的主題、提交作品的方式等。最后一段是客套話，期待收到回信?？忌鷮?duì)時(shí)態(tài)的把握比較準(zhǔn)確，短文中以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，穿插使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，偶爾使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。由于考生駕馭句子的能力比較強(qiáng)，文中語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較少。文中需要提高的地方如下：本句沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，但是語(yǔ)言顯得不太地道。如果改為被動(dòng)句“The photo exhibition for international middle students will be held in my school from June 18 to June 30.”，可以提升語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)效果。句中的介詞ab

6、out 多余，應(yīng)去掉。本句明顯帶有漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)的痕跡?？筛臑椋篒f you join this activity， I believe you will probably win the first prize. / If you join this activity， you can put your talent to good use.【滿分作文】Dear Peter，I havent seen you for a long time. How is everything going？ Im writing to invite you to join the International St

7、udents Photography Show held by the Photography Club of our school.When I saw your photo album last time， I knew you were good at taking photos. Now the International Students Photography Show is a chance for you to show your talent. The theme is environmental protection， aiming to attract peoples a

8、ttention to do what they can to protect the environment. The show will last from 8 June to 12 June.If you want to join the show， please send your photos to intlphotoshowgmschool.Com before 31 May. Dont hesitate to ask me for help if you have any question.Yours，Li Hua【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，思路清晰，邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，恰當(dāng)使用一些常

9、用短語(yǔ)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、名詞性從句、狀語(yǔ)從句，體現(xiàn)了較高的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力。本文的亮點(diǎn)有：1. be good at， show your talent， your photo album， taking photos ， attract peoples attention， ask me for help等短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用為短文增光添彩，使語(yǔ)言地道，表達(dá)流暢。2. Im writing to invite you to join the International Students Photography Show held by the Photography Club of our school. 本句用“ Im writing to.”句式，表明寫(xiě)信的目的，直奔主題；“held by.”是過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ)，表達(dá)的難度較高。3. When I saw your photo album last time， I knew you were good at taking photos. 用when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和knew后的賓語(yǔ)從句，提升了寫(xiě)作的檔次。4. The theme is environmental protection， aiming t